Date: 04 Sep 2011 8:14 AM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!
I was going to leave a smiley face but that just felt wrong. Like I was happy those things happened to her.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 7:25 AM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
:)
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:45 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.
;)
Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:28 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
Rec'd by JustGinger
Date: 03 Sep 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh wow, what kind of screwed up thing is renee
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
My last questions about Bella getting out of the car was more of a rhetorical question. I mean, I know that it is part of the storyline. *smile*
Wow Jacob's emotions are swinging back and forth so much that he is giving me whiplash.
Ohhhhhhh....so she doesn't know that Charlie is her dad? Interesting...wonder why her mom told her that her father was a druggie?
Billy is an ass!
Wow...big day for Bella...found her dad, was introduced to her step-brother, found out that Billy and Jacob were even worse people than she thought and that mother of hers? Geez....I cannot even think what to write about her!
A wedding planned in a week? By Alice? Gotta read about that! LOL!
Keye
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
The Village People huh? Wow....talk about a blast from the past!
Hmmmm.....she couldn't get out of the car when he went around to the driver's side?
*runs to next chapter*
Keye
Date: 02 Sep 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am enjoying this story. I like how I can't predict what is going to happen. I am pulling for Bella and her babies.
I also found it funny that at the bottom of my computer screen there is an online add with Taylor Lautner advertising his movie Abduction, as I am reading this chapter!
I look forward to reading more
CM
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
If I didn't know better, I would think you are vying for the "Queen of the Cliffy" title.
Once again, you are wicked, leaving us hanging on the edge of our seats.
Looking forward to your next update...hoping that it is very soon!
Carolyn
Date: 01 Sep 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
She better talk fast before Jacob knows she is on the phone. Get the police there fast. Then try to call Edward.
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Aug 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
I actually think it will do Bella good to see Jacob in a submissive role. She won't see him as powerful anymore. Why would a straight guy have scenes with men?
Author's Response:
From my understanding of the world of BDSM it is not necessarily about sexual orientation, but more about sexual gratification. Edward and Bella love each other on a romantic level in the everyday world, but in the BDSM side of their relationship Bella might be willing to be with a woman if that's what would make her Master happy. Or Edward with a man if it would make Bella happy. It's not about preference, really, it's about pleasure. I see BDSM as no boundaries. Not gay, straight, right, or wrong as long as the people have an agreement it's all about feeling good and pressing yourself to be more. Hope that makes sense. :) I'm not implying that ExB will have scenes with another person, just using that as an example.
Thanks for reading the story.
B
Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 17
ok so did hey figure out what cauased her miscarriages. I figured he would be a lot mroe careful with erh tahn this chapter showed. Also, why would he subject her to seeing Jacob when that could potentially add more stress to her. I would rather he saw Jacob himself and then told Bella about it later. I would hate for something to happen to the babies. now if I ignore the miscarriage potential, then I would have to say your lemons are extremely HOT. Great chapter besides my obsessive worry.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
No, Carlisle is waiting on her records. Bella doesn't remember because she was so distraught, and the Doctors mainly dealt with Jacob. Edward always keeps her pregnancy in the forefront of his mind. I think in future chapters it will be more clear. Bella wants to talk everything out with Jacob even if she is apprehensive. I think you'll also see her convey that more clearly later. Just so you don't worry she will not miscary, but that's not to say that there won't be other problems. :)
B
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella sounds beautiful in her club outfit. Can't wait to read what Jacob's reaction will be. Great job!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hmmmm... I think Edward may be right about Jacob having alterior motives. Jacob had seemed so disgusted by what "the Cullen's" did before. And, really, how did Jacob just happen to meet Tanya? Bella & Claire's therapist. Too much hinkiness happening here.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
hmmm, wonder if tanya and jacob are up to something, is Tanya all good in this story? Great update !!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hmmmm....well this ought to be interesting. Bella and Jacob seeing each other? Can't wait to read all about it!
Keye
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
AAAHHHHH!!! You are wicked, leaving us hanging like that. I am really looking forward to your next update.
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please write soon..Please..
AnthousaVamplover9,
xo xo
Date: 25 Aug 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
thanks good chapter
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!!! I hope she doesn't forget
to tell Edward about Jacob and Tanya!!
Update soon!!!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have to say I let this story go, so I could enjoy more of it... I should have let it go longer, I just want more of these two. I really hope that Bella and the babies are okay till the end of her term. It really would be a shame for anything to happen.
I really hope that Jacob is not doing anything deciving by hooking up with Tanya, and I am really curious how they met.
I hope all works out for this family.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ugh....just don' understand how the judge could allow her mother to see Claire with what she did to her. I mean, it was borderline sexual assault for goodness sake...but if they are supervised then that would make me feel better. But it does all lend to the story.
Oh good news about Carmen signing over parental rights and visiting on Edward's turf.....sooooooo much better! As you can see, I type reviews while reading. Well, of course, you don't know that since this is my first review. *ducks tomatos* Sorry about that.
She really got Edward's goat with the Jacob thing, didn't she? That was funny.
Yes, I just bet the color drained from his face:
Edward swallowed thickly, all the color slowly drained from his face as a tear dripped from the corner of his eye, splashing on the photo or our children. I wiped his eyes.
Edward's reaction to the news of the twins was sweet....after he caught his breath that is! LOL!!
Jacob was an ass to Bella at Starbucks. And I am wondering WTH is up with Tanya and Jacob....I can see all kinds of ethical questions coming to light! LOL!!
Keye
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am excited about the twins, but I worry about Bella. She will need to take it eacy with her history. This will be a very high risk pregnancy. Did Bella ever tell Edward about Tanya and Jacob?
Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:47 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
Wow that was wonderful.. So much emotions.. My heart broke for Bella.. But the love and care from Edward was unbelievable...
He is only dream.. But I wish I had a man to come into my life that will love me for who I was.... MMMM>.
<3 Leona :)
I can't wait to read the other chapter to catch up.. I will leave a review at the end of the last chapter..
It was recmend by peoplelikeus. I 'm so happy that I took a look.. I will finish reading soon.. bye..
Date: 17 Aug 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
I HOPE SHE DON'T FORGET ABOUT TANYA!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
whew, that was nice, i love when you end with lemons !!!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella could use some therapy to work on self esteem. Jacob really tore her up. She has no faith in herself.
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:42 AM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
I love BDSM stories! I'm reading your Mr. Cullen story as well and I love how in both of them there isn't a lot of pissy farting around between the two of them before they get together. We get to jump to the meat and potatoes of the story! :)
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
thanks good chapters
Date: 14 Aug 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
omg, so Carlise has seen the goods, like up close, too funny. That will make for an akward family dinner. loved this chapter
Date: 14 Aug 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great drama scary, but funny too,. Nice job!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 9:46 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!
Just started reading this fic... I wasn't going to review until after I was caught up, but Carmen's behavior needed reviewing.
Off her rocker doesn't begin to explain Carmen. She's a fuckin wackadoodle! And I think she's always been that way- who uses a 15 year old boy to get you pregnant? I hope it doesn't take long for Edward to gain full custody of Claire.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
depends on what kind of razor, i guess. i am just glad the baby is ok. they deserve happiness and a baby!!!!! glad bella accepted the proposal!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
This is the second time I've read your story....I am SOOOOOO looking forward to updates. I hope you will post some soon.
Thank you for sharing this story!
Catherine
Date: 14 Aug 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor things...so much going on, its a wonder they function at all.
Excellent story, well told.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
It is time for Edward to ask Bella. They are in a good place now.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love the update!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can not tell you how much I enjoyed that chapter! It was amazing!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was interesting. I like how Bella was firm, but loving. I hate stories where Bella is a Dom and she is mean and cruel. When Edward is a Dom he is firm, but still loving.
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
huh, didn't see that one coming, very surprised !!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter, love the way they are attentive to each others needs.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
nice job bella:)
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
I REALLY HOPE BELLA IS ABLE TO CARRY THIS BABY....MAYBE SHE WAS JUST UNDER TOO MUCH STRESS BEFORE WITH THE OTHER MISCARRIAGES. AND I HOPE THEY GET CLAIRE, SURELY THEY WILL. GREAT STORY!!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
thanks good chapters
Date: 30 Jul 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
too funny about the monitors and the intercom. great chapter.
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah, I can say as someone who has had an appendectomy, I doubt a blow job would have been very comfortable just then ;-)
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yeah you pushed it. Little Edward would not be working right after surgery, especially with the anathesia. It would take a couple of days for it to get out of his system all the way and his abdomenal will be compromised. It would hurt to contract the muscles for an orgasm.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:42 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
i really liked this chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:20 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.
some ones in trouble
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:57 PM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.
loved it
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:02 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
wow tha was fast. but i do love them together.
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for updatign again so soon. Really enjoyed this chapter especially the doctor's visit, Bella wanting to switch cracked me up. Can't wait to find out the results, though i'm not sure whether i want a positive or not lol.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is such a refreshlying new story line, I am really enjoying it and now it is getting really exciting. Thank you!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
That's just a really mean place to stop!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! I totally think that they should switch so Edward can walk or "sit" a mile in her shoes.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
PREGNANCY, YES, A SERIOUS ILLNESS NO PLEASE!!!! MAYBE BELLA HAS THAT PROBEM WHERE HER BLOOD CLOTS QUICKLY, THEREFORE CUTTING OFF NUTRIENTS TO THE PLACENTA. TAKING A SHOT DAILY PREVENTS THE CLOTTING!! YES, EDWARD MAY NEED A DOSE OF HIS OWN MEDICINE, DOM VS SUB!! BUT BELLA MUST KNOW HOW EXCITED HE IS AND WHATS TO SHOUT IT FROM THE ROOFTOPS "BELLA IS MY FIANCE"!!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
I liked the butt plug scene, however i do wish it hadn't happened during a punishment. Maybe then Bella would have been more relaxed.
Also poor Bella, i wanted to give Edwards sexy ass the leather strap for walking out of the room leaving her to sleep in there alone. To me that's a harsh punishment because i would take that personally even in d/s mode, especially when they had just made up after a fight.
I'm glad there taking abit of a break from the BDSM side because he isn't in a fit state to take care of her right now, i am looking forward to them getting back to it though.
And finally what the hell is Bella thinking wanting to be friends with Jake? She needs to get rid of the douche.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
Such an emo chapter. I'm glad there going to be just Edward and Bella for awhile. I'm addicted to Monkey Blast because Angry Birds makes me too angry!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
have nto tried angry birds, butmy son has lol. great update.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think the break will do them good. They need to get there life settled. She needs to get divorced. They need to work on the Edward and Bella side of the relationship. They can play and learn about each other. Bella is new to it so she has to learn what she likes. Once things have settled, they can make a new Dom/sub contract. They will know what will work for them because they will know how they work as a couple.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really love this story!!! :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad that Tanya was there to show Edward that he made some mistakes. He should have talked to Bella outside the playroom when she could have free speech. They should have been dressed as well. He also should not have just blurted it out. He should have explained his thought process. Bella should have not yelled and run out on Edward. They were both disrespectful of each other.
I have a hard time thinking of Carlisle as a sub. It is kind of funny, that the boys never figured it out.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9
great story! I can't wait for more
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
VERY INFORMATIVE CHAPTER, I THINK CLAIRE IN THERAPY IS A GIVEN, I STILL DON'T KNOW IF TANYA IS THE RIGHT ONE SOMETHING FEELS OFF THERE. MAYBE NOT....EDWARD NEEDS TO LIGHTEN UP WITH BELLA AND BE MORE OPEN, SAME FOR BELLA. SHE NEEDS TO COME CLEAN REGARDING JACOB, EVERYTHING!! ED AND BEL NEED TO LEAVE CLAIRE AT LEAST 2 TIMES A MONTH SO THEY CAN PLAY, THEY BOTH NEED THAT. BUT, THEY NEED TO DISCUSS DOM/SUB VS FIANCEE(S) ISSUES. GREAT STORY, HOT TOO!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
good update , glad you straightened up this tanya in the story. i almost left because she came in last chapter. I think Edward shoudl notice the bruises, and apologize, she shouldn't have bruises. I mean if Jake saw them then Edward shoudl too
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
best chapter yet!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful story, loving it, keep up the good work!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
thanks good chapters
Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Haha...love that Esme is the Domme in this....cracked me up.
I hope Edward figures out his issues...ugh for Tanya...
Update soon! :)
Date: 17 Jul 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
uh oh!!!! should have seen this coming... tanya the oppotunistic bitch
Date: 30 Jun 2011 12:25 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!
Edward better get custody or their is not justice in Alaska. Carmen was just creapy. I am glad that they got her out of there.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:30 AM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!
they need to call the police that is sexual abuse.
Date: 23 Jun 2011 11:44 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!
Carmen has lost her mind. The horrible things she did to her daughter. She whipped her 50 times. Hell, at 15 strokes I am crying. I have not had to endure 50. I can't believe that Claire did not pass out from the pain. Then Carmen sexually abused Claire by touching her vagina to see if she was wet twice!!! She deserves some jail time and psychotherapy!!! I really hope that Edward receives full custody of Claire. At Claire's age, the judge will take whom she wants to live with in great consideration when making his decision. I am sure that Bella will be a great role model for Claire.
Thank you for the chapter, but now I am dying for the next chapter. You need to have a special offer for the next chapter like HBO is offering with True Blood on HBOGO :p
Date: 23 Jun 2011 9:08 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!
thanks good chapter
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:44 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
Wow poor Claire and from her own mother, I can't wait to hear Edward and Bella's thoughts and see how they deal with Claire's abuse.
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:44 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
I don't blame Edward for being so upset that Calire has heard of this lifestyle even though what she has been told is not true. I wam worried that she has not come back to see Edward. I hope he can get her away from her mother. She deserves to be with people that will love and protect her and I am not sure she always gets this from her mother.
I love the end of this one. They have come so far. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:14 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
great first chapter
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:03 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.
Wow...I didn't see this coming! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 7:22 PM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.
He gets what he wants when he wants it, doesn't he??? Great job...thanks!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 6:38 PM Title: A brand new world of kink
So Esme knows the secret. I am guessing now much gets by her.
Bella has been through so much! The lose all those babies and then have Jacob say what he is say is terrible. I hope he gets what is coming to him.
Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 4:41 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon
Very interesting. I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 02 May 2011 5:13 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
Carmen should have been in jail for what she did to Edward. Why did Esme and Carlisle put up with what happened. Both of their children were abused by adult women. They had proof with Edward. They could have kept the child away from that crazy women. I am surprized that she hasn't found someone for her. She is fifteen. The same age Edward was when she took his virginity. It is probably a matter of time in her book.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:14 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
good overall chapter (although some typos could do with cleaning up) but I felt the playroom scene was a bit rushed, given the delay between sessions.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 1:09 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
:)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:57 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.
:)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:27 AM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
well she took that well im excited to see what happens next
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:07 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom
loved it, great update. I was worried when she found out about Claire.