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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 8:14 AM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!

I was going to leave a smiley face but that just felt wrong. Like I was happy those things happened to her.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 7:25 AM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 6:27 AM Title: Surprise! Or not.

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:45 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

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Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:38 AM Title: A brand new world of kink

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 8:28 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Rec'd by JustGinger

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

oh wow,   what kind of screwed up thing is renee

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 19

My last questions about Bella getting out of the car was more of a rhetorical question.  I mean, I know that it is part of the storyline. *smile*

Wow Jacob's emotions are swinging back and forth so much that he is giving me whiplash.

Ohhhhhhh....so she doesn't know that Charlie is her dad?  Interesting...wonder why her mom told her that her father was a druggie?

Billy is an ass!

Wow...big day for Bella...found her dad, was introduced to her step-brother, found out that Billy and Jacob were even worse people than she thought and that mother of hers?  Geez....I cannot even think what to write about her!

A wedding planned in a week?  By Alice?  Gotta read about that!  LOL!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 18

The Village People huh?  Wow....talk about a blast from the past!

Hmmmm.....she couldn't get out of the car when he went around to the driver's side?

*runs to next chapter*

Keye

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am enjoying this story.  I like how I can't predict what is going to happen.  I am pulling for Bella and her babies.

I also found it funny that at the bottom of my computer screen there is an online add with Taylor Lautner advertising his movie Abduction, as I am reading this chapter!

I look forward to reading more

CM

Reviewer: carebearconnor Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

If I didn't know better, I would think you are vying for the "Queen of the Cliffy" title.

Once again, you are wicked, leaving us hanging on the edge of our seats.

Looking forward to your next update...hoping that it is very soon!

Carolyn

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

She better talk fast before Jacob knows she is on the phone. Get the police there fast. Then try to call Edward.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

I actually think it will do Bella good to see Jacob in a submissive role. She won't see him as powerful anymore. Why would a straight guy have scenes with men?



Author's Response:

From my understanding of the world of BDSM it is not necessarily about sexual orientation, but  more about sexual gratification. Edward and Bella love each other on a romantic level in the everyday world, but in the BDSM side of their relationship Bella might be willing to be with a woman if that's what would make her Master happy. Or Edward with a man if it would make Bella happy. It's not about preference, really, it's about pleasure. I see BDSM as no boundaries. Not gay, straight, right, or wrong as long as the people have an agreement it's all about feeling good and pressing yourself to be more. Hope that makes sense. :) I'm not implying that ExB will have scenes with another person, just using that as an example.

 

Thanks for reading the story.

 

B

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

ok so did hey figure out what cauased her miscarriages.  I figured he would be a lot mroe careful with erh tahn this chapter showed.  Also, why would he subject her to seeing Jacob when that could potentially add more stress to her.  I would rather he saw Jacob himself and then told Bella about it later.  I would hate for something to happen to the babies.  now if I ignore the miscarriage potential, then I would have to say your lemons are extremely HOT.  Great chapter besides my obsessive worry.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. 

 

No, Carlisle is waiting on her records. Bella doesn't remember because she was so distraught, and the Doctors mainly dealt with Jacob. Edward always keeps her pregnancy in the forefront of his mind. I think in future chapters it will be more clear. Bella wants to talk everything out with Jacob even if she is apprehensive. I think you'll also see her convey that more clearly later. Just so you don't worry she will not miscary, but that's not to say that there won't be other problems. :) 

 

B

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bella sounds beautiful in her club outfit.  Can't wait to read what Jacob's reaction will be.  Great job!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

Hmmmm... I think Edward may be right about Jacob having alterior motives.  Jacob had seemed so disgusted by what "the Cullen's" did before.  And, really, how did Jacob just happen to meet Tanya? Bella & Claire's therapist.  Too much hinkiness happening here.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

hmmm, wonder if tanya and jacob are up to something,  is Tanya all good in this story?   Great update !!

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 17

cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hmmmm....well this ought to be interesting.  Bella and Jacob seeing each other?  Can't wait to read all about it!

Keye

Reviewer: carebearconnor Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

AAAHHHHH!!! You are wicked, leaving us hanging like that.  I am really looking forward to your next update.

Reviewer: AnthousaVamplover9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

Please write soon..Please..
AnthousaVamplover9,
xo xo

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!!!  I hope she doesn't forget

to tell Edward about Jacob and Tanya!! 

Update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

I have to say I let this story go, so I could enjoy more of it... I should have let it go longer, I just want more of these two.  I really hope that Bella and the babies are okay till the end of her term.  It really would be a shame for anything to happen.

I really hope that Jacob is not doing anything deciving by hooking up with Tanya, and I am really curious how they met.  

I hope all works out for this family.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ugh....just don' understand how the judge could allow her mother to see Claire with what she did to her.  I mean, it was borderline sexual assault for goodness sake...but if they are supervised then that would make me feel better.  But it does all lend to the story.

Oh good news about Carmen signing over parental rights and visiting on Edward's turf.....sooooooo much better!  As you can see, I type reviews while reading.  Well, of course, you don't know that since this is my first review.  *ducks tomatos*  Sorry about that.

She really got Edward's goat with the Jacob thing, didn't she?  That was funny.

Yes, I just bet the color drained from his face:

Edward swallowed thickly, all the color slowly drained from his face as a tear dripped from the corner of his eye, splashing on the photo or our children. I wiped his eyes.

Edward's reaction to the news of the twins was sweet....after he caught his breath that is!  LOL!!

Jacob was an ass to Bella at Starbucks.  And I am wondering WTH is up with Tanya and Jacob....I can see all kinds of ethical questions coming to light!  LOL!!

Keye

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am excited about the twins, but I worry about Bella. She will need to take it eacy with her history. This will  be a very high risk pregnancy. Did Bella ever tell Edward about Tanya and Jacob?

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 9:47 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Wow that was wonderful..  So much emotions..  My heart broke for Bella..  But the love and care from Edward was unbelievable... 

He is only dream..  But I wish I had a man to come into my life that will love me for who I was....  MMMM>. 

<3 Leona :)

I can't wait to read the other chapter to catch up..  I will leave a review at the end of the last chapter.. 

It was recmend by  peoplelikeus.  I 'm so happy that I took a look..  I will finish reading soon..  bye.. 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16

I HOPE SHE DON'T FORGET ABOUT TANYA!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 16

whew,   that was nice, i love when you end with lemons !!!!!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Always so good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bella could use some therapy to work on self esteem. Jacob really tore her up. She has no faith in herself.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:42 AM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

I love BDSM stories!  I'm reading your Mr. Cullen story as well and I love how in both of them there isn't a lot of pissy farting around between the two of them before they get together.  We get to jump to the meat and potatoes of the story! :)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

thanks good chapters

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

omg, so Carlise has seen the goods, like up close, too funny.  That will make for an akward family dinner.   loved this chapter

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great drama scary, but funny too,.  Nice job!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 9:46 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!

Just started reading this fic... I wasn't going to review until after I was caught up, but Carmen's behavior needed reviewing.

Off her rocker doesn't begin to explain Carmen.  She's a fuckin wackadoodle!  And I think she's always been that way- who uses a 15 year old boy to get you pregnant?  I hope it doesn't take long for Edward to gain full custody of Claire.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

depends on what kind of razor, i guess. i am just glad the baby is ok. they deserve happiness and a baby!!!!!   glad bella accepted the proposal!!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 14

This is the second time I've read your story....I am SOOOOOO looking forward to updates.  I hope you will post some soon.

Thank you for sharing this story!

Catherine

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

Poor things...so much going on, its a wonder they function at all.

Excellent story, well told.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

good update

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

It is time for Edward to ask Bella. They are in a good place now.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love the update!

Reviewer: Molz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

I can not tell you how much I enjoyed that chapter! It was amazing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was interesting. I like how Bella was firm, but loving. I hate stories where Bella is a Dom and she is mean and cruel. When Edward is a Dom he is firm, but still loving.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

huh, didn't see that one coming, very surprised !!!!

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter, love the way they are attentive to each others needs.

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

nice job bella:)

 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

I REALLY HOPE BELLA IS ABLE TO CARRY THIS BABY....MAYBE SHE WAS JUST UNDER TOO MUCH STRESS BEFORE WITH THE OTHER MISCARRIAGES. AND I  HOPE THEY GET CLAIRE, SURELY THEY WILL. GREAT STORY!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

thanks good chapters

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

too funny about the monitors and the intercom.  great chapter.

Reviewer: JessieRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yeah, I can say as someone who has had an appendectomy, I doubt a blow job would have been very comfortable just then ;-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yeah you pushed it. Little Edward would not be working right after surgery, especially with the anathesia. It would take a couple of days for it to get out of his system all the way and his abdomenal will be compromised. It would hurt to contract the muscles for an orgasm.

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:42 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

i really liked this chapter.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

loved it

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:20 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

some ones in trouble

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:57 PM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

loved it

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:02 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

wow tha was fast. but i do love them together.

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for updatign again so soon. Really enjoyed this chapter especially the doctor's visit, Bella wanting to switch cracked me up. Can't wait to find out the results, though i'm not sure whether i want a positive or not lol.

Reviewer: farsidelady Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

This is such a refreshlying new story line, I am really enjoying it and now it is getting really exciting.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

That's just a really mean place to stop!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter!  I totally think that they should switch so Edward can walk or "sit" a mile in her shoes.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

PREGNANCY, YES, A SERIOUS ILLNESS NO PLEASE!!!! MAYBE BELLA HAS THAT PROBEM WHERE HER BLOOD CLOTS QUICKLY, THEREFORE CUTTING OFF NUTRIENTS TO THE PLACENTA. TAKING A SHOT DAILY PREVENTS THE CLOTTING!!  YES, EDWARD MAY NEED A DOSE OF HIS OWN MEDICINE, DOM VS SUB!!  BUT BELLA MUST KNOW HOW EXCITED HE IS AND WHATS TO SHOUT IT FROM THE ROOFTOPS "BELLA IS MY FIANCE"!!!!

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 10

I liked the butt plug scene, however i do wish it hadn't happened during a punishment. Maybe then Bella would have been more relaxed.

Also poor Bella, i wanted to give Edwards sexy ass the leather strap for walking out of the room leaving her to sleep in there alone. To me that's a harsh punishment because i would take that personally even in d/s mode, especially when they had just made up after a fight.

I'm glad there taking abit of a break from the BDSM side because he isn't in a fit state to take care of her right now, i am looking forward to them getting back to it though.

And finally what the hell is Bella thinking wanting to be friends with Jake? She needs to get rid of the douche.

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Such an emo chapter.  I'm glad there going to be just Edward and Bella for awhile.  I'm addicted to Monkey Blast because Angry Birds makes me too angry!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

have nto tried angry birds, butmy son has lol.   great update.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

I think the break will do them good. They need to get there life settled. She needs to get divorced. They need to work on the Edward and Bella side of the relationship. They can play and learn about each other. Bella is new to it so she has to learn what she likes. Once things have settled, they can make a new Dom/sub contract. They will know what will work for them because they will know how they work as a couple.

Reviewer: mtaz4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

I really love this story!!! :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am glad that Tanya was there to show Edward that he made some mistakes. He should have talked to Bella outside the playroom when she could have free speech. They should have been dressed as well. He also should not have just blurted it out. He should have explained his thought process. Bella should have not yelled and run out on Edward. They were both disrespectful of each other.

I have a hard time thinking of Carlisle as a sub. It is kind of funny, that the boys never figured it out.

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

great story! I can't wait for more

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

VERY INFORMATIVE CHAPTER, I THINK CLAIRE IN THERAPY IS A GIVEN, I STILL DON'T KNOW IF TANYA IS THE RIGHT ONE SOMETHING FEELS OFF THERE. MAYBE NOT....EDWARD NEEDS TO LIGHTEN UP WITH BELLA AND BE MORE OPEN, SAME FOR BELLA. SHE NEEDS TO COME CLEAN REGARDING JACOB, EVERYTHING!! ED AND BEL NEED TO LEAVE CLAIRE AT LEAST 2 TIMES A MONTH SO THEY CAN PLAY, THEY BOTH NEED THAT. BUT, THEY NEED TO DISCUSS DOM/SUB VS FIANCEE(S) ISSUES. GREAT STORY, HOT TOO!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

good update , glad you straightened up this tanya in the story.  i almost left because she came in last chapter.  I think Edward shoudl notice the bruises, and apologize, she shouldn't have bruises. I mean if Jake saw them then Edward shoudl too

Reviewer: jess2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

best chapter yet!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wonderful story, loving it, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

thanks good chapters

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Haha...love that Esme is the Domme in this....cracked me up.

I hope Edward figures out his issues...ugh for Tanya...

Update soon! :)

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

uh oh!!!! should have seen this coming... tanya the oppotunistic bitch

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 12:25 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!

Edward better get custody or their is not justice in Alaska. Carmen was just creapy. I am glad that they got her out of there.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:30 AM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!

they need to call the police that is sexual abuse. 

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 11:44 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!

Carmen has lost her mind.  The horrible things she did to her daughter.  She whipped her 50 times.  Hell, at 15 strokes I am crying.  I have not had to endure 50.  I can't believe that Claire did not pass out from the pain.  Then Carmen sexually abused Claire by touching her vagina to see if she was wet twice!!!  She deserves some jail time and psychotherapy!!!  I really hope that Edward receives full custody of Claire.  At Claire's age, the judge will take whom she wants to live with in great consideration when making his decision.  I am sure that Bella will be a great role model for Claire.  

Thank you for the chapter, but now I am dying for the next chapter.  You need to have a special offer for the next chapter like HBO is offering with True Blood on HBOGO :p

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 9:08 PM Title: I Want My Daughter Back!

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:44 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Wow poor Claire and from her own mother, I can't wait to hear Edward and Bella's thoughts and see how they deal with Claire's abuse.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:44 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

I don't blame Edward for being so upset that Calire has heard of this lifestyle even though what she has been told is not true.  I wam worried that she has not come back to see Edward.  I hope he can get her away from her mother.  She deserves to be with people that will love and protect her and I am not sure she always gets this from her mother.

I love the end of this one.  They have come so far.  Great job...thanks!!!

 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:14 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

great first chapter

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:03 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

Wow...I didn't see this coming!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 7:22 PM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

He gets what he wants when he wants it, doesn't he???  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 6:38 PM Title: A brand new world of kink

So Esme knows the secret.   I am guessing now much gets by her. 

Bella has been through so much!  The lose all those babies and then have Jacob say what he is say is terrible.  I hope he gets what is coming to him. 

Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 4:41 PM Title: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Very interesting.  I can't wait to get caught up.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 5:13 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

Carmen should have been in jail for what she did to Edward. Why did Esme and Carlisle put up with what happened. Both of their children were abused by adult women. They had proof with Edward. They could have kept the child away from that crazy women. I am surprized that she hasn't found someone for her. She is fifteen. The same age Edward was when she took his virginity. It is probably a matter of time in her book.

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 8:14 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

good overall chapter (although some typos could do with cleaning up) but I felt the playroom scene was a bit rushed, given the delay between sessions.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 1:09 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 12:45 PM Title: Surprise! Or not.

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:57 AM Title: Old friends and a sexy dance.

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:27 AM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

well she took that well im excited to see what happens next 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:07 PM Title: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

loved it, great update.  I was worried when she found out about Claire.

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