Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:15 AM Title: Epilogue
Part of me all the way throught this was OMG, they are dead, then another part of me esp at the end, it saying they are in witness protection or something.
But never guessed that Rose and Jasper were FBI.
Fab story, loved every second of it, Thanks.
Date: 04 Aug 2011 7:07 PM Title: Phantom Desire
I'm loving this whole story line, very unique. Besides that it's really making me laugh. I also love the fact that the grammer and spelling are correct for the most part as I find it very distracting to read when it isn't correct. One question I do have is how in the hell do so many people write one story? I understand collaboration but you all must have similar devious minds. I look forward to reading the rest. Last thought is that it is refreshing to not be begged for reviews. I find it very disconcerting to find those little notes at the end promising sooner updates and/or teasers if you review that is one reason that I usually only read fiction that is complete. I know authors need feeback but some get ridiculous.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 4:03 AM Title: Reality Check
Oh, when I read the first part of this chapter all I could think of is that Bella set him up to perform the murder she really wanted. She would have made off with the money and he would have been the loser! Oh well, maybe I've been watching to many movies. It would have made a great flic, I love when the bad guy gets away!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 7:55 AM Title: Epilogue
Surprising end, hell yeah! Edward and Bella are not dead, smirk. Poor Jazz didn't get his happily ever after, but I think the others did. Wicked Angel, Wicked Story, and Wicked Me to Death, Loved It from start to finish...Thanks for the brilliant story gurlz!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:29 PM Title: Epilogue
Nicely done ladies. Interesting story with some great plot twists. I always have a hard time reading stories where Edward has sex with other people but thank you for not writing a lot about that. Not a big fan of Jake's so offing him was cool. I love Alice as canon but I do get a kick out of evil Alice. I will hold onto the belief that Edward and Bella are still alive somewhere loving each other and the funerals were for show....is that considered denial? So be it. Again ladies, excellent story.
Date: 26 Dec 2010 3:14 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow...I sure as hell did NOT see that coming. At. All. Good Job.
I'll betcha those were empty boxes over them holes. A clean break & a new life. At least that is what I choose to think.
Here's hoping for a sequel. Hope ya'll had a Wonderful Christmas & I wish for you a Safe, Healthy & Happy New Year!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Holy shit! I didn't see that one coming. But what is up with Rose and Jasper at the end? Are Bella and Edward really alive in some sort of witness protection? Are you ever going to tell us or leave us hanging forever?
Excellent story! It was sick and twisted and a hell of a lot of fun to read!!!
Date: 22 Dec 2010 9:11 PM Title: Epilogue
What an evil put freaking perfect ending to this awesome story.
I would like to believe that Edward and Bella survived but as far as anyone other than Em, Rose, and Jasper are concerned they are dead. Of course that is for their own protection against Alice.
You ladies did an awesome job putting together this deliciously dark and evil story.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:21 AM Title: Prologue
I loved this, this was soo captivating and unpredictable, but it made me cry and i love happy endings, please dont kill the both of them though, suprise me, please, dont make me break down and cry and wish i never readed this, i hate sad ending, But never mind my babbling,, THIS IS AWESOME!!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:44 AM Title: Wicked Angel
How in the world could ANYONE have guessed that ending?!? Of course no one did! I feel like my mouth was hanging open in shock through most of this chapter. Jake in love with Edward?! Alice seeing it all go down awhile ago?! Stunned!! I'm finally making it back to review after devouring all the chapters in 2 days and now I feel like I need to read it all again - especially before this crucial (and probably epic) epilogue gets posted. Can't wait to see what you have in store. Thanks for writing!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Wicked Angel
Yes, to all the above. I am crying and i don't think it's very nice of you to make me do that! I cannot believe you killed them! I am in such shock right now! Of course I'm in even bigger shock that jake was in love with Edward, that's crazy and I never guessed that! Oh, and Alice, are you kidding me, that took me for a loop! But, given her character it doesn't surprise me. I can't wait for the epi! This has been one hell of a story!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Wicked Angel
Well that just sucks! Not the writing, but the fact that he couldn't save her. I guess the bright side was that neither had to live without the other.
I did like the little twist of Jacob being in love with Edward. Did not see that coming at all.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:42 AM Title: Consumed
Oh man, if Jacob was so stupid and actually hurt Bella in some way, he has to know that it's on like Donkey Kong! I'm crossing my fingers that everything turns out okay and that Edward rescues her in time!! *hugs*
Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:38 AM Title: Consumed
I can not stand this! Your story keeps making me think there is a chance for a happy ending and then this?!? Please tell me that Bella reached Charlie and traced her cell phone and he is the one who killed Jake or Emmett or Alice?!? Please don't let it be Bella???
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:13 PM Title: Faith
Lateness not a problem, I understand. I just really feel like Edward's at a crossroad here. He's got to make a decision and make it now, he can't just keep going on like this. His emotions are involved and he's pissing people off and he's just going to get himself in a place he doesn't want to be. I have a feeling that the shit's about to hit the fan and soon.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:34 PM Title: Faith
I love this story. I'm trying to figure out where it is going to go... Like maybe Jake has set Edward up. Jake and Bella have been together since the begining and are using Edward. She did have a $2 million life insurance policy on Mike... But wouldn't Alice see this, hmm. Maybe she is in on it too!
I can't wait to see how it actually plays out!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:51 AM Title: Faith
Oooooooh I love the last line and the quote is perfect too. Excited to see where this is all going to go. It's all so up in the air right now!! Great job ladies and it was so wonderful to meet/see most of you in NJ at Twitour!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:44 PM Title: Faith
I have to admit I miss the bloody bastard. Having him fake deaths is just not the same. I want to see him happy with Bella but can he really give up the killing? And I have a strange feeling that whole Alistar thing was a test Jake gave him and he knows Edward isn't killing anymore.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:13 PM Title: Faith
Poor Edward & Bella. They were just about to have some real "us time" and of course some one stops the process!!!! Damn that Rosalie!!!!
After the Rosalie sppech at the end, you have me a tad bit scared now as to what Edward is actually going to do in regards to loving Bella!!!
Please give Lola my best thoughts and tell her I'll say a few special words for her friend today!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:58 PM Title: Faith
we are 20 chapter in .... bella knows.... they are back together... are we going to have a resolution or are we going to come up against another road block that takes 20 more chapters to work out.... will there be more agnst between these two?
We promise there will NOT be 20 more chapters. We're thinking less than five. HOPEFULLY.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: Dismal World
Just started reading this fantastic story! What a twisted thriller! All of you are terrific writers! I can't help but wonder though if Bella is as innocent as she seems. I wonder if maybe the catch is her knowing about Mike's plan all along and she's trying to turn the tables OR Mike and her are in a plan of their own together and trying to catch these killers in the act????!!!!! OR maybe I'm just reading things that aren't there. Oooo keep up the good work!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:58 PM Title: Blazing Suns
Awww I LOVED this chapter (*grin* I'm a total fluff hoor)
Lol, I should be totally creeped out by his stalking, but it's kinda cool. I'm so glad she sort of understood where he was coming from when he told her about his past. Loved the picnic & how he couldn't even do the "man thing" & grill the chicken for it. I'm very impressed with him for turning down sex, that has to be a first. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: Deadly Silent
Eek. I can't see a way out of this. He needs to get rid of Jacob, I don't trust him as far as I can throw him.
I liked how worried Eward was about Bella being in hospital, I love when that side of him shows.
Alice knows to much too. Argg, the suspense is killing me...
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:25 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
Well finally she says that she is going to get out of her marriage that is a joke! I am glad that Alice and Emmett have found love but can't they realize that by continuing to have a hit on Bella is robbing Edward of his chance too?
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Passion and Fury
What a sad person who can't even pay to take his wife out to eat!! I hate that she is still with him and that Edward is still going to have to kill her. I just hope that he can get out of that even if it is for a lot of money.