Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:09 AM Title: Wicked Angel
looking forward to the epilogue thanks tarcy
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:52 AM Title: Consumed
great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:39 AM Title: Faith
great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:51 AM Title: Wicked Angel
yes, I was crying. That was such a sad ending that I didn't expect. I hope you all are planning another little story.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Wicked Angel
:) grate story hate to se it end.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Wicked Angel
Well that just sucks! Not the writing, but the fact that he couldn't save her. I guess the bright side was that neither had to live without the other.
I did like the little twist of Jacob being in love with Edward. Did not see that coming at all.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Wicked Angel
Wow, I didn't see any of this coming. I can't wait for the epilogue. Great chapter.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 4:38 PM Title: Wicked Angel
i keep thinking it has to do with charlie and his connection to edward....
Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:42 PM Title: Wicked Angel
This chapter was absolutely heartbreaking. I cant stop the tears. This story is a one of kind fanfiction and I just wanted to congratulate you for achieving that. Please update the epilogue for us very soon.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:24 PM Title: Consumed
that was great cant wait for an up date!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 12:58 AM Title: Consumed
OK now.. enough on the CLIFF HANGER...
Good story.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:47 AM Title: Consumed
oh you girls are so mean. You leave it there. Oh god, I can't wait for the next update. This gets better and better.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:42 AM Title: Consumed
Oh man, if Jacob was so stupid and actually hurt Bella in some way, he has to know that it's on like Donkey Kong! I'm crossing my fingers that everything turns out okay and that Edward rescues her in time!! *hugs*
Date: 18 Sep 2010 9:04 PM Title: Consumed
Holy frickin crap.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:38 AM Title: Consumed
UGH!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
I can not stand this! Your story keeps making me think there is a chance for a happy ending and then this?!? Please tell me that Bella reached Charlie and traced her cell phone and he is the one who killed Jake or Emmett or Alice?!? Please don't let it be Bella???
Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:43 AM Title: Consumed
Devilish & Crew
You left us hanging there!!!!! Thud!!!! I'm down!!!!
Fabulous chapter. Please tell me you have the next chapter almost ready!!!!!
Cory
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:05 PM Title: Consumed
Yes Kill Jake!!! I just hope that was Alice or someone killing him already!!! please please post again soon!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 5:46 PM Title: Consumed
NO FUCKING WAY did they go through all this that you would allow Jake to kill Bella? NOOOOO!~ Okay, I'm calm...deep breaths....OMG!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:38 AM Title: Consumed
Emotionally wrecked here.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 12:35 AM Title: Faith
aww i hate it that edward is going to leave her.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:50 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
this is going to be interesting how edward is going to deal with his feelings
Date: 08 Sep 2010 3:13 PM Title: Faith
Lateness not a problem, I understand. I just really feel like Edward's at a crossroad here. He's got to make a decision and make it now, he can't just keep going on like this. His emotions are involved and he's pissing people off and he's just going to get himself in a place he doesn't want to be. I have a feeling that the shit's about to hit the fan and soon.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 12:41 AM Title: Faith
Thanks for the a great chapter.
Date: 31 Aug 2010 3:34 PM Title: Faith
I love this story. I'm trying to figure out where it is going to go... Like maybe Jake has set Edward up. Jake and Bella have been together since the begining and are using Edward. She did have a $2 million life insurance policy on Mike... But wouldn't Alice see this, hmm. Maybe she is in on it too!
I can't wait to see how it actually plays out!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 4:51 AM Title: Faith
Oooooooh I love the last line and the quote is perfect too. Excited to see where this is all going to go. It's all so up in the air right now!! Great job ladies and it was so wonderful to meet/see most of you in NJ at Twitour!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:17 AM Title: Faith
was there chappy cause i didnt see it
Date: 30 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: Faith
Thanks for the a great chapter.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 4:59 AM Title: Faith
Poor Edward...always at war with himself!
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:26 AM Title: Faith
Sorry to hear about the loss. You are so right rl always comes first.
I have a real bad feeling that Edward is going to get set up by Jake. I hope he doesn't leave Bella thinking its for her best.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 9:30 PM Title: Faith
OH please tell me he is not going to leave her!!! She will be devistated!! :( and i pray Jake dont try and mess with her...
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:44 PM Title: Faith
I have to admit I miss the bloody bastard. Having him fake deaths is just not the same. I want to see him happy with Bella but can he really give up the killing? And I have a strange feeling that whole Alistar thing was a test Jake gave him and he knows Edward isn't killing anymore.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:13 PM Title: Faith
Devilish
Poor Edward & Bella. They were just about to have some real "us time" and of course some one stops the process!!!! Damn that Rosalie!!!!
After the Rosalie sppech at the end, you have me a tad bit scared now as to what Edward is actually going to do in regards to loving Bella!!!
Gret chapter!!!!
Please give Lola my best thoughts and tell her I'll say a few special words for her friend today!!!
Cory
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:58 PM Title: Faith
we are 20 chapter in .... bella knows.... they are back together... are we going to have a resolution or are we going to come up against another road block that takes 20 more chapters to work out.... will there be more agnst between these two?
Author's Response:
We promise there will NOT be 20 more chapters. We're thinking less than five. HOPEFULLY.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 7:24 PM Title: Blazing Suns
Simply amazing chapter! I hope that Bella will be able to present Edward. I believe it. But it seems all is not so simple. Sincere thanks for this fantastically interesting history. I really love her!
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: Dismal World
Just started reading this fantastic story! What a twisted thriller! All of you are terrific writers! I can't help but wonder though if Bella is as innocent as she seems. I wonder if maybe the catch is her knowing about Mike's plan all along and she's trying to turn the tables OR Mike and her are in a plan of their own together and trying to catch these killers in the act????!!!!! OR maybe I'm just reading things that aren't there. Oooo keep up the good work!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:58 PM Title: Blazing Suns
Awww I LOVED this chapter (*grin* I'm a total fluff hoor)
Lol, I should be totally creeped out by his stalking, but it's kinda cool. I'm so glad she sort of understood where he was coming from when he told her about his past. Loved the picnic & how he couldn't even do the "man thing" & grill the chicken for it. I'm very impressed with him for turning down sex, that has to be a first. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 11:26 PM Title: Deadly Silent
Eek. I can't see a way out of this. He needs to get rid of Jacob, I don't trust him as far as I can throw him.
I liked how worried Eward was about Bella being in hospital, I love when that side of him shows.
Alice knows to much too. Argg, the suspense is killing me...
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:27 AM Title: Blazing Suns
Great chapter. I'm glad they are back together. i can't wait to see what happens next.
I was worried that Bella was wired or something to turn Edward in. That would have killed me.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:39 PM Title: Blazing Suns
I am so glad they are back together, but I can not believe Edward threw up the cock block. Ugh! I see his point, but you know Bella wanted to be with him and have that comfort of reconnecting on that level.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:48 PM Title: Dark Abyss
I really hope that Jacob isn't lying and that the hit on Bella is finished as will her husband be shortly.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:34 PM Title: Dismal World
Well I am glad that Mike is going to get what he deserves now!!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 8:30 AM Title: Quicksand
Wow I didn't think that it would have been Lauren but I am kinna glad that it was but now Mike is going to be even more ready for her to die.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:45 AM Title: Shaken to the Core
OMG!! Bella killed Mike didn't she? I really hope that is the case and maybe they can say that he came after her and it was self defense!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:25 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
Well finally she says that she is going to get out of her marriage that is a joke! I am glad that Alice and Emmett have found love but can't they realize that by continuing to have a hit on Bella is robbing Edward of his chance too?
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:02 AM Title: Soulful Brown Eyes
Well I guess that Bella isn't dumb as to what Mike is doing. I hope that she leaves him because then Edward wouldn't have to kill her because she would be divorced from him.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Passion and Fury
What a sad person who can't even pay to take his wife out to eat!! I hate that she is still with him and that Edward is still going to have to kill her. I just hope that he can get out of that even if it is for a lot of money.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:56 AM Title: Angel of Death
Well at least he told her the truth about the spark. How lucky was it that Bella wasn't hurt more than that when she fell down the stairs.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Blazing Suns
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Death By . . .
Well I guess they are going to keep this one closer to them than the rest of them aren't they?
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:03 AM Title: Blazing Suns
Good chapter; I'm glad that Edward was there at the gas station when Bella had her little meltdown. And they finally talked and got a lot of things out in the open. I'm looking forward to seeing what Edward does to get all this mess taken care of so he can move forward with his life.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:01 AM Title: Phantom Desire
It is so sad that Bella is clueless as to what is going to happen to her. I really hope that she at least knows that Mike isn't being faithful to her.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 1:29 AM Title: Fallen Angel
Well so much for Edward thinking that Alice didn't know about his meeting Bella. I really hope that they all think about what they are doing before they follow through with this.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:54 AM Title: Devil in Disguise
What a sorry excuse for wanting to off your wife. I can't believe that. Now I wonder what Alice is going to see in Edward's future with Bella.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:34 PM Title: Sinful Pleasure
Wow they are all pretty good at keeping from getting caught.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:08 PM Title: Prologue
Wow I can't wit to see what hapens with all of them. I can't believe that they have gotten away with two murders.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:41 PM Title: Blazing Suns
Devilish
Commented over at FF but just wanted to leave a small one here too!!!
Fabulous chapter!!!!
More when it's ready please!!!!!
Cory
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:34 PM Title: Blazing Suns
oh i love that they are giving it another go despite edward seeing problems everywhere they are doing this, i hope they survive, thanks tracy
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:43 PM Title: Blazing Suns
Loved the chapter, =) love the reunion, the fluff and his progress,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:23 PM Title: Blazing Suns
Crazy lovesick fool! He was so sweet to Bella and trying to do everything right. Just hope that dealing with Jacob, Alice and Emmett isn't going to destroy everything he wants with Bella.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 4:29 AM Title: Deadly Silent
Now why would Charlie not want Bella to be with Edward? I thought Edward was "supposed" to be an upstanding guy in the community? I have a feeling that Jacob isn't done with Bella.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:43 AM Title: Deadly Silent
Edward should kill Jacob and Paul for pulling that shit. And I almost want to add Alice and Emmett to the list. WTF is their problem not backing up Edward at the wake? Some fucking friends.
I really hope Bella can forgive Edward. They soooo need each other.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:52 AM Title: Deadly Silent
eddie get back in there man!!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:26 PM Title: Reality Check
i can't believe she found out like that! It was great!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 11:14 PM Title: Torture
Damn--didn't think Bella had it in her
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:43 PM Title: Dismal World
Loved Carlisle's advice!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 10:20 PM Title: Quicksand
I don't even know what to say about this chapter...WOW!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:37 PM Title: Deadly Silent
jacob is a god damn idiot, he shot bella!!!!! edward should get rid of him, i hope bella and edward start to talk again soon, great chapter thanks tracy
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:46 PM Title: Shaken to the Core
One hell of a cliffie!!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:20 PM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
Jakob is such a sleaze!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:43 PM Title: Deadly Silent
so its chalie who asks him to go back to bella...huh
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:40 PM Title: Soulful Brown Eyes
Wow! So...that didn't really go the way I thought!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:47 PM Title: Passion and Fury
Please kill off Mike NOW! He's such a d*ck!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 5:02 PM Title: Angel of Death
Awww! Great chapter!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:56 PM Title: Deadly Silent
Devilish
No need to worry about the delay. I'm just glad you are all committed to finishing this amazing story!!!!
Charlie must really think Bella is in trouble if he wants Edward to go and talk with her.
Get that Edward over there!!!! STAT!!!!
Great chapter!!!! More when you can please!!!
Cory
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:02 PM Title: Phantom Desire
Loved the interaction! Awww--poor Edward getting a conscience!!!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:40 PM Title: Fallen Angel
I love the interaction between Alice and Edward!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:02 PM Title: Devil in Disguise
The first meeting was great! Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:29 PM Title: Sinful Pleasure
Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:11 PM Title: Prologue
This story sort of creeps me out but I'm intrigued!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:50 AM Title: Deadly Silent
great chapter.....eagerly waiting for more....
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:05 AM Title: Deadly Silent
Oh I hope Bella takes him back. He really is trying to change. I feel bad for Edward.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 12:06 AM Title: Killer Sentiments
really miss this story please update soon
Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:37 AM Title: Killer Sentiments
Wow, I feel kind of bad for Edward. He wants to be good and change for Bella, but will he get the chance?
Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:58 PM Title: Killer Sentiments
so is that it he's walking away? but is he going to shoot jacob? did alice see something and realised he would need a gun? i'm wondering if bella will come round and forgive but heck it's a huge ask even with the love, i'll wait patiently for more, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:41 PM Title: Reality Check
poor edward not doing so well i know he's a murderer but he's so in love with bella and wants her back, question is does she or can she forgive and accept, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 9:13 PM Title: Torture
bloody hell that was nasty, but bella took his final breath just as he had with lauren, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:03 PM Title: Dark Abyss
crap, crap this is not good mike on the back seat but then again he is a total dickhead and they are very accomplished assaisins so they will get the better of him, they had better, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 7:25 AM Title: Dismal World
oh dear mike is in trouble now, but glad that bella got away, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:58 AM Title: Quicksand
wow that was a very intense ending to a messed up evening so it was lauren she killed not the husband she should divorce him leave him pennyless and alone, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 6:12 AM Title: Shaken to the Core
oh has bella killed mike? this could be a way forward for them and of course he'll help with the clean up, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:52 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
great chapter and nice to know bella is making plans to leave mike, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 5:31 AM Title: Soulful Brown Eyes
woooo what went wrong there, if bella knows her husband is a cheat why is she still there???? leave i say thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:21 AM Title: Passion and Fury
this thing between them cannot be ignored any longer, edward certainly cant, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 4:05 AM Title: Angel of Death
cool chapter their first kiss, thanks tracy