Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Death By . . .
bella just cant keep away can she, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:35 AM Title: Phantom Desire
oh yeah he's getting in deep, bella is under his skin, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:20 AM Title: Fallen Angel
edward bluring the lines and something tells me he wont be killing her, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 3:03 AM Title: Devil in Disguise
in a few short moments bella has got edward attention big time, thanks tracy
Date: 24 Jun 2010 2:46 AM Title: Sinful Pleasure
this story, well not sure what to say harsh and very different but i like it, thanks tracy
Date: 23 Jun 2010 8:52 PM Title: Prologue
blimy hard hitting first chapter, but i'm eager to read more thanks tracy
Date: 12 Jun 2010 4:55 PM Title: Killer Sentiments
Wow, that was so sad. I take it that he's going to have to kill Jacob now. Of course, I don't see the why Jacob is even there. He gave him the money, even more money he would have made by the hit on Bella. Mike took it into his own hands when he got into the car with a gun and was going to do who knows what. Unless he's just pissed that Bella now knows, that's the only thing I can think about. Ugh, it's times like this that I wish I wouldn't start a damn story until it's complete. It's like being w/o your drug for weeks!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:06 AM Title: Killer Sentiments
How is it possible to feel bad for a serial killer? This whole situation just sucks monkey balls. How is Edward supposed to be true to himself and keep Bella in his life? There doesn't seem to be a balance that can be found. And fuck Jacob Black that greedy bastard! He already has one million of Edward's money. WTF could he want now???
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:47 AM Title: Killer Sentiments
Well there writers, you've got me wondering what will happen now!!!!
That was a tough one to read. Edward & Bella are both going through their own personal hell!!!
Looking forward to reading more!!!!
Cory
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Killer Sentiments
Goodness I feel like crying. Poor Edward. I can't see how this is going to work, Bella's never going to be able to live with that & Alice is freaking harsh...I can't believe she would kill Jasper if she need to *siffles & gives a small sigh*
Thanks for the chapter ladies!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 9:56 PM Title: Reality Check
I don't understand the Teaser on Facebook? Why does he have a gun when he is with Bella?
Date: 23 May 2010 6:33 PM Title: Reality Check
well shit eddie is just seriously fucked up right now! and em is right he needs to seriously get his shit together! boy is in a hobo, drunken oh poor me slump and sexy edward or not ain't no one gonna wanna get with that shit. he needs to pull himself up and deal with his shit. plus he still needs to go see jake and make the deal complete, dispite everything he needs to make sure bella is taken care of.
now a few problems/questions about this chapter...
1- eddie told em and alice to burn mike's body, how the fuck are they gonna explain that shit? and how does no one bring up the fact that the body is gone? or did em and a just get rid of the evidence? and if mike's body is still around how are they gonna explain the damage and cuts and burns?
2- how did carlilse and esme not hear the comotion down in the torture room? you guys made it sound like they lived upstairs. we had mike screaming probably for hours while eddie had his fun, bella freaking out, and eddie's little holy shit episode with both bella and then with alice and em. how they fuck did no one hear any of that shit?
3- if daddy c knows about the affair does anyone else or was it just because of how eddie acted when bella was there?
4- i get that bella had the insurance policy for her and now we find out there was a matching one for mike but why did she never bring it up before? and will the insurance company want a body? won't the missing body cause questions to come up that no one wants to deal with?
and damn it all to hell i am all caught up now and have to wait for updates! SHIT!!!this was getting seriously good and it seems that things are getting ready to start winding down.
wow this is one hell of a review/bitch fest i got going on here. hope real life treats you all good and good luck on the book release! hope to see an update soon.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:50 PM Title: Torture
well that was all kinds of fucked up, now wasn't it? but hey did anyone expect anything else from our little eddie-boy? glad to see mike got what was comming to him. heehee and bella! wow i so did not see her comming in and finishing the job! but hey the girl had her reasons for offing that bastard! but it looks like the cat is outta the bag and eddie is gonna have to tell bella everything sooner rather than later.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:09 PM Title: Dark Abyss
so what the fuck?!? mike figures he can just off bella all by his lonesome?!? on what planet does that make any sense? he is a complete and total idiot! and he is one dead mother fucker! eddie is gonna kill him and enjoy every single second! now jake, hmmm, what can we say about jake? he is a greedy son of a bitch, that's for sure. but will he be ok with calling everything off? will he try to use bella against edward? will eddie have to take him out too? oh boy the questions! every chapter you guys answer one or two but leave me with like 5 new ones!
off to 15 to see edward kick mike's ass and probably make him beg like a little pussy bitch! heehee! kinda sad that i only have 2 more chapters and i am all caught up and having to wait for updates. :(
Date: 23 May 2010 3:57 PM Title: Dismal World
well it is about time eddie maned up and realized he had to kill mike and make all of this shit just go away. i wonder howhe plans on keeping alice in the dark if he is planning it and not just going spur of the moment? and bella how will she take the news about eddie? what will she think? do?
Date: 23 May 2010 6:24 AM Title: Quicksand
well bella took care of one side of the problem but not the most important side. mike needs to go! maybe jake too if he's gonna be an ass. that was so sick and sweet and sad and joyfull all rolled into one!
Date: 23 May 2010 5:37 AM Title: Shaken to the Core
well maybe bella has taken matters into her own hands and solved the mike problem. heehee wouldn't that be awesome! then they could be done with all of the hitman shit and try to find a happily ever after, but alas that would make for a pretty short story, so my guess is the hea is still a ways away.
Date: 23 May 2010 4:19 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
well if bella gets the divorce or makes it known that she has changed the life insurance policy maybe jake and the others will tell eddie (and mike) the hit is off, because without the insurance mike can't pay...
Date: 23 May 2010 2:55 AM Title: Soulful Brown Eyes
well i gotta say i loved the mental side road eddie took while talking to rose at the bar! that shit was too funny!
i wonder what happened to bella from last night to today that she completely did a 180 on what was going on with eddie. maybe it is just the guilt of cheating or maybe someone had a little chat with her...?
Date: 23 May 2010 1:54 AM Title: Passion and Fury
wow would have loved to see the street meeting through mike's eyes! i bet eddie's right he probably needed a change of pants after that. heehee.
now edward and bella what to do about those two? they are getting into some pretty deep shit and this is not gonna end well for either of them. i still don't get why eddie can't just call it off and run away with bella.
Date: 23 May 2010 12:36 AM Title: Angel of Death
i agree with edward was alice being true in her concern for bella or was it all a show? has our little bella added a freind to her list or just another person out to use her and then kill her?
and poor eddie at least he is realizing that he is feeling things for her and now he knows she feels something for him. oh boy what is he gonna do?
Date: 22 May 2010 11:22 PM Title: Death By . . .
wow eddie seems to have a big problem in staying away from our girl! but at least now alice will have some real time with bella so maybe she will see it too.
the game was seriously funny in a creepy these-people-really-kill-people kind of way. but seriously bunnies?!?!
Date: 22 May 2010 10:57 PM Title: Phantom Desire
well itlooks like alice has yet to be wowed and won over by our little bella. but eddie sure is in deep! i wonder how everything is gonna play out from here? is the fact of helping kids like them gonna play a huge part in this? it sure seems to be what will get her foot in the door with the group...
Date: 22 May 2010 10:36 PM Title: Fallen Angel
well it looks like alice is on to eddie and his playing with fire. wonder what she'll think when she gets to meet bella? cause the whole group is gonna have to meet her and fall in love with her each in their own way. if not eddie is gonna have a hell of a time talking them outta this...
Date: 22 May 2010 10:11 PM Title: Devil in Disguise
staying away from the target would definately make it easier to do the job. looks like eddie is gonna have a tough road to walk with this one. i wonder what the gang is gonna think?
Date: 22 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Sinful Pleasure
ok so jake is the contact/money man, alice is the future seer, em is the planner, and eddie is the exocutioner. they are a team that works together, cool.
wonder who the new hit is on...?
Date: 22 May 2010 6:37 PM Title: Prologue
ok that was all kinds of fucked up! is it wrong that i liked it? heehee
Date: 22 May 2010 11:49 AM Title: Reality Check
Wow, i wasn't expecting Bella's reaction. Edward having a a blast with Mike was gruesome, yet kinda funny. The details were gross, but hey that's what reading fiction is about, hoping this doesn't really happen in the real world. But, having heard many stories from law enforcement friends and family, shit like this happens, maybe not the same scenerio here, but similar crimes that are just as crazy. It just doesn't make the news because people would go into hysteria. Just like Y2K, etc. Swear half the population is crazy in one way or another in this world. Damn that was very creative, Mrs. S. King, lol!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2010 8:16 AM Title: Reality Check
Didn't realize how kinky I was until I started reading this and enjoying it, well, most of it. Will she ever forgive him? Hmmmm. I know I would !
Date: 19 May 2010 8:53 AM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
hmmm who is dead this time?
Date: 19 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Reality Check
I think Bella should take Edward back. Emmett is right; Bella loves him, I just think she freaked out with what she saw happened with Mike and from what Edward told her about his life. But he was totally serious when he said that he changed when he met her; that she changed him. And if it wasn't for her, she'd be dead by now, because he's the one who stopped the hit on her. That alone has gotta tell her that he's kind of sorta changed his ways.
Date: 19 May 2010 12:48 AM Title: Reality Check
Holy Cow! This is some fucking amazing shit! Can't believe Bella walked in on that! Also, can't imagine what is going thru her mind right now. I must be alittle fucked up myself, because I'm thinking....please don't make Edward wait too long!!LOL Too much went on in this chapter to point out all the good parts. Just know that you all are fucking amazing writers and story tellers. Your words are never dull or boring! WOW!
Date: 18 May 2010 4:02 PM Title: Reality Check
Devilish
WOW!!! That was beyond great!!!
More when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Date: 17 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Fallen Angel
wow Alice is hard core...
Date: 17 May 2010 3:40 PM Title: Reality Check
Great Chapter!! Cant wait for the next one!!
Date: 17 May 2010 2:10 PM Title: Reality Check
This chapter killed me. I totally get Bella freaking out, but it hurts so much to see Edward struggle like that. Unless I totally missed it when I was reading earlier chapters, it was interesting to learn that Lauren came at Bella with the knife and Bella defended herself. That answered a few questions for me.
*sigh* I want Darkward to live a happy life with his Bella. My fingers are crossed for that :)
Date: 17 May 2010 8:00 AM Title: Sinful Pleasure
LOL okay the Jane Doe line had me laughing..
It is like Dexter but better.. LOL
Date: 17 May 2010 4:33 AM Title: Reality Check
I loved this passage..
*My heart was broken. It wasn't a clean break—nothing ever broke evenly—and hearts, I just learned, broke in jagged pieces and jabbed you repeatedly to remind you of how badly you were broken inside.*
Gosh it was heartbreaking to watch Edward fall apart like this. I hope Bella at least talks to him at the funeral.
Thanks for the chapter ♥
Date: 16 May 2010 6:07 AM Title: Prologue
Wow.. this is different.. I am shocked at little Mary Alice.. LOL
Date: 12 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: Torture
Mike's torture was a thing of beauty. Edward was an artist :) Bella's first reaction to Mike really had me worried. I thought for sure she was going to freak out and Edward was going to have to kill her. I was like hell yeah when she actually finished him off. Your Bella never ceases to surprise me. Can't wait for the aftermath :)
Date: 12 May 2010 10:29 PM Title: Dark Abyss
Yeah, I still think there is a sadistic side buried inside Bella. I think if she was given a shot at Mike it would come out :)
I have a feeling the cash will seal the deal with Jake. He's too freaking greedy to turn it down.
Jasper obviously has PTSD issues from Iraq. You've got me thinking Mike might get quite a surprise from Jasper. Of course I still see Edward getting there before Jasper can do any major damage so he can carry out his torture.
Date: 12 May 2010 9:42 PM Title: Dismal World
I haven't quite figured out what Bella is thinking and feeling about Lauren's death.
Mike you are dead. I have a feeling his death is going to be long and very painful.
Date: 12 May 2010 8:04 PM Title: Quicksand
Ding dong the witch is dead :) And Bella almost killed her. That was awesome. I know, I'm a sick bitch. Oh well. It seemed like Bella got pretty turned on by Edward coming in and taking control. And of course being covered in blood in his bathroom didn't repulse her (or at least it seemed that way). That was a perfect way for the two of them to come together. I'm dying to know if Bella can handle what happened and maybe even enjoyed it just a little. Maybe that's the part that horrified her. The fact that she enjoyed watching Edward finish her off.
Date: 12 May 2010 6:49 PM Title: Shaken to the Core
Edward is one messed up dude. He loves Bella and doesn't want anyone else to touch her or hurt her, but he get gets off on the though of killing her. God I love him!
Thank god I don't have to wait for an update. That ending has me wondering WTF Bella did. Did she kill Mike or Lauren or both? Pretty please :)
Date: 12 May 2010 6:19 PM Title: Visions of Duct Tape
Once again, I love the evil little pixie. She knew exactly what she was doing with the Tanya bit. Now you've got me wondering exactly what Alice is up to.
Jake is a freaking idiot. I get the feeling that Edward has more loyalty to Em and Alice than Jake.
It's about damn time Bella woke up and latched on to Edward and started planning to get rid of Mike :)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:24 PM Title: Soulful Brown Eyes
Of course Alice would see comforting Jasper over Bella's death as a total win for her. She's such an evil pixie. God I love her.
Hmm, does Bella think Mike caught her and Edward sneaking glances and smiles to each other during the funeral? Was that part of the sudden change? Or was it because he was so sweet to her one moment and then is gone the next?
It's killing me to see Edward fall so hard for Bella, battle with himself over having to kill her, and then to see her do that to him. This story is so freaking addictive.
Date: 12 May 2010 4:31 PM Title: Passion and Fury
I love that Edward had no desire to visit Tanya. Bella has completely taken over his heart and mind.
Mike the douche needs to die. He's lucky Edward hasn't snapped and done it yet.
Date: 12 May 2010 4:09 PM Title: Angel of Death
Holy shit! WTF is Edward going to do? If it wasn't for Jacob being involved I would say that Em and Alice would happily help him plan Mike's murder. I think Jacob is the big snag in everything.
So, Bella is okay around dead people. I still think it would be awesome if Bella could fit right into their morbid lives of death and mayham.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:40 PM Title: Death By . . .
Edward is really screwing up. I can already see Jake wonder WTF is up with him since he caved and let him have a shot at his play thing Leah.
Bella obviously wants Edward. That could definitely work to Edward's advantage or could ruin it all. I'm so loving this twisted little story. Thanks for coming up with it ladies.
Date: 12 May 2010 3:10 PM Title: Phantom Desire
Bella is really getting to our Eddie. I knew ignoring Alice's call was going to be a mistake. Wonder if Bella will get to Alice like she has gotten to Edward. I still think they need to turn the tables on Mike. So is there a life insurance policy on Mike too? *evil grin*
Date: 12 May 2010 2:49 PM Title: Fallen Angel
Of course the pixie knows all. Edward won't get anything past her. Wonder how things will change when Rose and Jasper enter the picture.
I'm really surprised Charlie didn't insist on him being the beneficiary of Bella's life insurance. I'm sure he doesn't trust Newton as far as he could throw him.
Date: 12 May 2010 2:20 PM Title: Devil in Disguise
You know what, I say new plan. Take Mike's money and kill him instead of Bella. Yeah that sounds good. He's a douche.
Edward's a goner. I don't know if he'll be able to kill Bella. I wonder how Bella would react to the real Edward. Would she be repulsed or could she be as screwed up as him and his friends and get off on killing too?
Date: 12 May 2010 1:47 PM Title: Sinful Pleasure
I'm so loving this evil gang. So unlike what I've read lately. Very nice for a change.
Date: 12 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Prologue
Damn they are fucked up! I love it. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 12 May 2010 5:45 AM Title: Torture
wow!! This is a great story! Really twisted but so well written! :) Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 02 May 2010 9:24 AM Title: Fallen Angel
Cant Alice see that this needs to go a different way and kill Mike. I think I want Mike dead LOL
Date: 02 May 2010 8:52 AM Title: Devil in Disguise
Just blow Mikes brains out sounds good???
Date: 02 May 2010 8:23 AM Title: Sinful Pleasure
He is an evil prick isnt he. Tanya is a ho nothing new there LOL
Date: 02 May 2010 7:59 AM Title: Prologue
That is a very interesting start to a story I cant wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 5:01 AM Title: Torture
Wow, that was intense. I sure hope Bella forgives Edward for his past deeds. Is that wrong that I want her with him.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:51 AM Title: Torture
OMG, she killed him!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 9:54 PM Title: Torture
Yyeeaahh!!! Good job Eddie boy!!! Ugh man if Bella didn't show up there would have been more torture....but what is done is done...and I loved it!!b
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:55 PM Title: Torture
So I battled with this, thinking how could she still love him knowing Edward was capable of torturing Mike, so I put myself in her shoes. If my hubby tortured someone for doing the same to me, I'd be shocked, but I know I'd understand.
However, if I then went to find out that he had a past like Edward, I know her heart and career choice, but I'm not sure I could accept someone as twisted as him. For the sake of fanfic though, Edward's a babe and it doesn't matter what he does. ;P
x x
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:15 PM Title: Torture
Wow that was great
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:14 PM Title: Torture
Holy Shit! that was... wow... I don't even know what that was lol... can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:55 AM Title: Torture
Yikes sorry ladies had to skip the torture bit.Glad Mike is dead, & Bella didn't run screaming from Edward, though I think there's going to be big repercussions from this.
Thanks for the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Torture
Holy shit!!!!! I was blown away by the torture, but nothing prepared me for Bella finishing off Mike. That was poetic and sadistically beautiful. I fully believe in karma and Mike got exactly what he put out into the world..he just happened to get his all at once.
Beautifully sick and twisted chapter!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:07 AM Title: Torture
You know I have had some sick fanatasies of torturing people. Not that I have followed through with them but a girl could dream. I am pretty sure you are sicker then I am and I love it. I so loved this chapter. Thanks for the update and I can't wait to hear what Bella is thinking about after this,
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:28 AM Title: Torture
Holy fucking shit.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:27 AM Title: Torture
I admit that I got a perverse pleasure from the torture but for some reason the tongue thing was almost too much.... almost. Where do they go from here? Great chapter!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:24 AM Title: Torture
Devilish
I loved it!!! Oh god that's bad of me to say!!! But, I f**king loved it!!!!
Next chapter should be very interesting!!!! So much looking forward to it!!!
Post away when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:10 AM Title: Torture
FUCK- that shit is crazy!!! I might as well have been watching an episode of freaking Dexter. I can't even express how fucking twisted E is; but the best part was Bella suffocating him at the end. They are like a sadistic Bonnie and Clyde. Great chapter.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:16 AM Title: Torture
YAY!!! Love this, will Bella do what Edward does now?? That would be an awsome chapter
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:30 PM Title: Dark Abyss
please update soon
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:06 AM Title: Dark Abyss
Damn i love Edward...i love it how he can be loving one minute and then the next ready kill somebody
cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 9:52 PM Title: Dark Abyss
Wow what a story and chapter. I'm glad that Jake loves money so much, but now Edward needs to save Bella from Mike.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:11 AM Title: Passion and Fury
Well Edward will need to start changing his plans because he is falling for her badly.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 8:58 AM Title: Phantom Desire
Great chapter, interesting that Bella seemed to be at the library just at the same time that Edward was.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:44 PM Title: Dark Abyss
Loved the chapter, biting my nails as I wait for next chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:07 AM Title: Dark Abyss
After reading the preview of the next chapter, I can't wait to see what Edward does to Mike ... and if Bella ends up joining in!!! *hugs* Love you girls!!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:40 AM Title: Dark Abyss
"your glass is always half full when you look at others . . . why is it half empty when you look at yourself?" - this really stood out to me. Arg the end is FREAKY...hope we find out soon what happens...
Thanks for the chapter :)
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:51 AM Title: Dark Abyss
Devilish
Read this chapter earlier this afternoon over at FF.
But I still want to leave a positive note for you here!!!!
This is one of my favorite stories and I look forward to each new chapter!!!
Bring on more ASAP!!!!!
Cory
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:05 PM Title: Dark Abyss
OMG so they don't even know Mike is there. I hope Bella never finds out about Edward was hired to kill her. Update soon. Love the story.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 10:31 PM Title: Dark Abyss
Holy Shit! What a cliffe!! I should have known with all of you that it wouldn't be as easy as paying Jake off!LOL I wouldn't want to be Mike right now, I know that Edward is seeing nothing but RED! I'm afraid that Bella is going to find out the truth behind why she and Edward met. I know that Edward will do everything he can to protect her. I'm wondering if Alice is seeing all of this play out? These characters are twisted and fucked up and I LOVE them. Good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 10:09 PM Title: Dark Abyss
Fuck me! Where the hell is Alice and why didn't she see Mike in the back of the car?!?
Excellent chapter! I am glad that Edward thought of paying off Jacob. Now he just needs to do some very bad things to Mikey and have Bella ride him into the sunset. ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 10:08 PM Title: Dark Abyss
I can't believe you stopped there!!! Evil, evil biatches. <3
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:49 PM Title: Dark Abyss
:) i alredy reviewed on FF . But i have to show my eprisiation for a fantastik story.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:47 PM Title: Dismal World
Wow, Edward's showing a softer side than I thought he had. He's taking such good care of Bella. He really ought to tell her though, cos that shit is just going to come back & bite him in the ass.
Hmm I wonder if Emmett & Alice would actually ever turn on him, I think Alice might, but not sure about Emmett. Well if Alice tells Bella what they wanted to do to her, Bella can tell Jasper, so that will come back & bite Alice's butt.
I kinda think Mike deserves to be tortured & killed (lol, although liquidizing his dick & making him drink it seems quite excessive)
Thanks for the chapter ladies, it was very good. :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 9:14 PM Title: Dismal World
God I love this story absolutly fantastic!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter Mikey boy is going DOWN!!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:16 PM Title: Dismal World
Wonderful Chapter and can not wait for the rest. Just love the evil wicked thoughs going threw Edwards head bc mine would be the same lol
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:45 PM Title: Quicksand
Great Chapter Hun Keep up the great work!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:29 PM Title: Dismal World
this is really good cant wait to see what edward does to mike
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:53 AM Title: Dismal World
Loved the chapter, as always, =)
can´t wait to see what he´s going to do to Mike.
best wishes, Linda
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:58 AM Title: Dismal World
Mike needs to die. And now.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Dismal World
Hell yes!! Go get that mother f....!!! Awesome chapter!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:21 AM Title: Dismal World
WOW! I wouldn't want to be Mike right now!LOL Carlisle surprised me this chapter! I'm wondering just how much he knows about everyone else's shit! I'm not really worried about what Emmett and Alice is going to think about Edward's feelings for Bella, but Jacob is another story! He will want his money and the job finished! Edward is going to have to tell Bella about everything, but I have a feeling that she is going to love him regardless. Love can be a nasty fucked up thing! Great chapter! (aka:tbonemom0512)
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 12:50 AM Title: Dismal World
I think Eddie is going a little soft...actually, I know he is. For a stone cold killer, he's sure beating around the bush up until now...surely, he has figured out that he needed to off Mike and let Bella collect the insurance (you know there is not just one policy, no way...). Then again, maybe Bella has a stone cold side to her that no one has really ever seen. Maybe she is manipulating Eddie because she already knows what he does and about the gang and how they work. Why would Mike all of the sudden put his hands on her? I get that he's pissed because he can't get a hold of Lauren (good luck with that one, buddy boy) and that Jacob's has told him he has to make a public apology, but what about the work staff who witnessed his barging into the wife's office? Anyway, my mind is working this one over and as always I gotta think of the alternative scenarios. Good writing as per usual and absolutely can't wait to see what Edward does to him.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:56 PM Title: Dismal World
oh man...just foung this story anf this is so goood! i really think if edward tells emmett and alice that he is in love with bella they may lay off and help...its not fair that they can love and he can't! screw the money...they are friends and he helped them all before with their own problems.