Date: 27 Jul 2016 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 47
First this story was so good. You really didn't pull any punches & git to the heart of the abuse. Very much like you did in Wisp. I also liked how you made the characters more real than cannon.
Loved how you ended it. Can't wait to read the epilogues.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
now i have to say, i always hate when a woman says "my body, my choice" it took two to make the baby, the father should be able to have a say about the matter. i know lots of guys that had they been given the chance they would of gladly raised their baby alone versus the girl having an abortion. now in cases of rape..i completely see that it's the woman's choice.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 49
Dear Cris, I really want to thank you for the gift of nine chapters at once, and a finish to this story! From what you said in your author's notes, you have had a rough time of it, between injuries, and clinical depression! Lord, girl it's a wonder you were able to write this last part! I never considered giving up on you and my faith in you was justified! This was one of the best stories I ever read, even with such an evil Charlie in it! Through the awful parts, I just gritted my teeth and knew you would make it come out all right! Thanks so much!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 48
Didn't bother me a bit when Bella took her revenge on Frank, something he so richly deserved! I'm sure Ellie's slow growth is a joy for all the family, since they get to enjoy her childhood for a long, long time! As for Jacob Black, he can fend for himself! That was such a sweet scene where Bella talked to Ellie on the phone and Edward played her lullaby !
Date: 03 Apr 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 47
No worries here about Bella becoming a vampire, I know she will when the time is right. The gift of this place that means so much to her, and to Edwrd was a truly wonderful gesture on Carlisle's part! I think Bella has everything about the way she wants it and not much else to ask for!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 45
This chapter makes me want to dance around singing,"Ding dong, the with is dead!" I am so grateful that you killed him off! Now, providing she has no repercussions from this flu, Bella never has to worry about her rotten father ever again!
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 43
Nothing with this girl is as easy as it might be! Thank God Alice saw that Jasper needed to guard Bella and protect her from Charlie's wrath! I wish they would throw the book at him, attempted murder at least, but who can say?It may have scared Edward and the rest for Bella to di this, but it was good for her to try it on her own. What she told Edward is the simple truth, she has to stand up for herself and her child!
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 42
Please tell me you're not letting Bella anywhere near that psycho bastard father of her's? He could do anything to hurt her, and if, God forbid she harms him, what then happens to her child and her family, especially Edward? She couldn't have thought this through, or she wouldn't be risking this!
Date: 02 Apr 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 41
It is so good to see you again! I'm really happy you found time and inspiration to finish this story! Can't wait for the results of the tests Carlisle did! It was so sweet for Bella to hear her babie's heartbeat and see her in the sonogram! The session with Esme was cathartic, I'm sure and very necessary for Bella's emotional well-being! Last of all, I'm kind of glad that they won't try Charlie, while still wanting him to pay some sort of price for the horrors he visited on Bella!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 40
I have read this story all the way through and I must say I couldn't stop! I started it yesturday and couldn't stop like I said. I just now finished it lol. I LOVE THIS STORY and can't wait to find out what happens next.
I must say I yelled Hell yeah when the judge gave her verdict. Great job with this story its great. :)
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading all 40 chapters, when I noticed the story had not been updated since July. It's Nov.1. Please tell me you have not abandoned this story. It is very well written and deserves an ending. Thanks for writing!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow Heidi sure has a sucky job, a truly needed one, but a sucky one none the less. Poor Bella. Hope she can stay strong. Hope everything goes ok. Ya never know with these psycho court systems. Too bad charlie doesnt get drunk and fall down the stairs and break his neck