Date: 21 Feb 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok I laughed cried screamed and went omg all in this story. I am glad you did continue it. GREAT JOB. I hope you continue the third wife soon.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Uhm... that was different, I'm not sure what to say. I was happy to see an update, tho. XoXo
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Girl Please send the lemons!!! it is Rather Hot here in Tennessee and I need those lemons for lemonade!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Dammm please send me the lemon.......LOL Thanks :)
Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
I was hoping for a lemon, but this was good too..... I know u probably had ur hands full doing a book, doing an original story for the contest, plus someone using ur work as their own. I hope evrything goes well for you and thanks for doing this little story.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Lemons love lemons hate bitches that still other peoples stories. You should take it as a complement that your story is that good that someone wants it as there own but it still doesnt make it right. :(
I am so glad that Edward greeted Bella the way he did the man says all the right words.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hey Darlin' ~ loved the little chappy update. Of course I would have LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED the lemon but I gotta say; I laughed my ass off when I read "insert lemon here" that was CLASSIC!!! Bwuahahahaha!!!
Sorry that there a bitch on FFN that's stealin' your stories. Won't FFN revoke their membership? Seems like they wouldn't want that crap goin' on but who am I to say?
I will wait patiently for the next update and check out your recommendations. I promised myself I wouldn't read anything else until I get my chapters updated, though... so I think I've found my motivation.
Love ya, babes!
XoXoXo ~ Fangs
Author's Response:
Lemon being wriiten for my besties will get it out as soon as it gets the once over! Thanks hun, its awful that she's litterally copying and pasting my story and ff isn't taking it down. she's hit mac_214 and 22blu, too. Thats what i do too! for every chapter i write i get to read one. :) Luv ya babe!
Nails233
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well I don't hate it but wow... you really jumped ahead. LOL ... will there be more chapters or is this it... I forgot to look to see if you said 'yes' or 'no' as to whether the story was completed... guess I'll go look now...
Muah ~ Fangs
P.S. I miss your other stories... Third Wife is awesome and I love Be My Sub too... I miss those stories... *sigh*
Date: 25 Jun 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Why was Edwards dad such a dick he knew he loved Bella??? I am so happy that they made sure the little boy knew who his daddy is. where is Bella????
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
More please......
Date: 07 May 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow this was sooo good!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome... you totally need to expand this. I can see all sorts of wild and wonderful things to cum... oops... I meant, COME... LOL
XoXo ~ Tracy
Author's Response:
There is another chapter already for this one. the beta has it. as soon as i get it back, i will post it. nails233 xoxox
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh NO! This needs to be much, much, MUCH more than a one-shot. You just amaze the heck outta me. I am going to have to read ALL your stories now :)
XoXoXo ~ Tracy
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
congrats on the book!
this chapter was so cute in it's awkward sexiness. eddie is just too... overwelmed i guess? he finally got what he has wanted and dreamed about, pair that with only ever having self love and he is just waiting to explode! heehee
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow eddie that sure is a hell of a way to get a girls attention! nails can you let me know hen the next car wash is? i definately need to make an appointment, my 'car' is so dirty! heehee
Date: 15 Apr 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
very funny first time
Date: 15 Apr 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
hey you should make a story out of this like a full on story because this shit is sexy
Date: 14 Apr 2011 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
More?
Author's Response:
yes, i have one more almost ready. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am sorry you are Blue I wish I could help but I dont know how to do much other than read and review. I want you to know that I look forward to every update you do. I enjoyed the second chapter her I think you could go on with this story it is full of love and hot naked men I love it LOL. I hope that someone does some banners for you you deserve that you are a great author thanks for your effort.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your sweet words. You have always been one of my best fans. It's okay, things will get better. I am going back to my original beliefs that I am just going to write for the love of the story. thosa who enjoy my work will let me know if they so choose to, and if they don't i will live without it. as for banners the only thing they really do is attract new readers, so i can live without them too. now enough whinny stuff from me.
i do have another chapter almost ready. and i will add that one too. this story will be a short one, but i hope you enjoy it.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice.... So u going to continue this little drabble? or did u do this to kinda tie up the loose ends?
Author's Response:
I've started this reply 3 times, unsure if this was meant insulting or if it just came out that way. either way, i needed a way to writeout some issues i was having and this was the only one i could do it with. as for will it continue, i do have another chapter just wrapping up. the story will be a short one maybe 5 chapters.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for sharing this really interesting chapter. It would be really nice if you continue to work on it :) . Please?
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
So frat boy forgot the golden rule about wrapping his shit....... I wonder if there will be a little frat baby, because as much as the timing would suck it would serve them right getting knocked up the first time out. It could make for a really funny story.... Frat boys changing a diaper..... What a great way to torment new pledges...
Date: 07 Mar 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
You are a awsome writer. I love all your stories I have read so far. More please.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my! what a predickiment! HA! That's funny! I just wish they had nude car washes when I was in college! That would have been awesome!
Hugs, Stephanie
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
more please!!! Loved this!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
more, please.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this a lot..Hmm a naked car wash with those 3, I would so be there. :) I would love to see where you would take this story. It could be very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Take the 3 day pill! Yeah i didn't think of that while reading. And what happens next?
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it. Would love to read more!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Um, yeah, so I am going to need the address to that frat house.....pretty please? *bats eyelashes*
LOL!
Keye
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
So sweet- I love it when they're both virgins. And the naked car wash- mmm! Thanks! :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whew, hot! Where can I find that kind of car wash....lol
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved these:"My eyes zeroed in on the one thing I desired more than my degree, Edward's cock." and "my coochie started doing the 'I'm dying tend to me first cha cha."
Priceless! Fun and sweet lemony goodness.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
The pic alone should get you a ton of reviews LOL. I would love to hear more.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, damn, where is this car wash??? Love naked Edward! Had to laugh when Bella asked about the condom! Would love to have more!
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
totally liked this one shot would love if you contiued
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
that was great, humor and suprise. lol loved it and would enjoy more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
HOLY HELL, I'd throw mud on my car just so I could get it washed by these guys.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, i'd take my truck 4 wheeling for that wash!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Adorable little drabble, could have the potential to be something more......
Author's Response:
That's exactly what it was. And if it does continue, which i am still unsure of, I would make it like all my stories, much more complete. But for now it's just a fun little story for a freind. Thank you for reading and reviewing! Have a great weekend! nails233