Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 01 Apr 2024 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love this story. I just had to read it again.
Date: 16 Mar 2023 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 46
Great epilogue
Date: 16 Mar 2023 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 16 Mar 2023 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it! Poor Sam! I don't like Edward!
Date: 24 Oct 2022 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!
Date: 24 Oct 2022 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hilarious chapter! I absolutely love Aro!
Date: 23 Oct 2022 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 23 Oct 2022 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Esme!
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
I have truly loved reading this story. So far I'm only on chapter 12 and I have never laughed as much as I have while reading some others. The way that you have written these characters is absolutely fantastic and I love it. Great job and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. You are a great writer.
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
I have truly loved reading this story. So far I'm only on chapter 12 and I have never laughed as much as I have while reading some others. The way that you have written these characters is absolutely fantastic and I love it. Great job and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. You are a great writer.
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
I have truly loved reading this story. So far I'm only on chapter 12 and I have never laughed as much as I have while reading some others. The way that you have written these characters is absolutely fantastic and I love it. Great job and I look forward to reading the rest of this story. You are a great writer.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! I don't like Carlisle, Alice, Charlotte, or Edward!
Date: 31 Jan 2020 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! I don't like Carlisle, Alice, Charlotte, or Edward!
Date: 03 Jan 2020 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
Terrific!
Date: 31 Dec 2019 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Peter!
Date: 31 Dec 2019 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Peter!
Date: 18 Jul 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
This story is hilarious. How do you keep all the names straight??
Date: 15 May 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Poor Esme!
Date: 14 May 2018 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter!
Date: 03 Apr 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 46
sweet ending. Glad they all got a HEA. Ty for writing and sharing with us all.
Date: 03 Apr 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 45
aww for them meeting. It is nice that she is just Bella back home.
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 44
B doesn't see herself clearly does she. Nice that she has family to help her find her passion in life
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 43
Nice seeing them all having family time.
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 42
Well well well. Nice that the kids are all having normal lives
Date: 03 Apr 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 41
Just cruel to make B suffer more
Date: 17 Mar 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 46
I have waited for this ending for a very long time. Excellent and well worth it!
Wado, Mama, Wado. (Thank you.)
Date: 14 Mar 2018 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 46
I absolutely loved this story. You are an amazing story teller.
Thank you for all your hard work and for finishing Peter and
Bellas story.
Date: 12 Mar 2018 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am so sad to see this story end. Thank you for the many hours of escapism.
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 46
Oh my word! I did not know this had so many updates! I like how it ended, and thank you for writing it!
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 46
I always hate for a great story to end.
Date: 12 Mar 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 45
I didn’t know that Christmas also came in March. Loved all the updates.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 41
that was just mean to leave us hanging lol
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
I know you love HEA but I'm still mad
Ridiculous that Bella has to continue to suffer for everyone else.
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 40
Charlie is too funny. Wow, the spirit world is getting crowded. LOL
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow everyone is on the Use Bella train. Jeez. Can she catch a break anywhere?
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 38
Glad Bella was able to get through to the Psycho at the end at least. Vlad got off easy
Date: 13 Dec 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 37
Gotta Love Aunt Molly. She's gonna be badass.
Date: 23 Sep 2017 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
I cannot believe how much I am loving this story!!! At first I thought that I wouldn't because I have always preferred bella/edward but I am loving peter...and I love how you are able to tie everyone else in as your story progresses...and I absolutely love all of the Wal-Mart interactions!!! Plus it has been awhile since I laughed out loud while reading facfiction but you are just great at bringing out the humor!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 41
....why!!!!!!
Omg how can you rip my heart in two...
Please.. please.... please get them back to each other...
The feels....
Date: 20 Sep 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
So far...this is just crazy!!!! I love it!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
So far...this is just crazy!!!! I love it!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
in all the months that i have been waiting for you to start updating this story i did not see you going this way with the story please tell me that bella and peter find there way back to each and they find the rest of there vampire family i think bella is thinking of everyone else and is going to regret making peter forget about her looing forward to seeing where you go from hear with this story so please update soon
sincerly
reneesmay
Date: 20 Sep 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Reguardless they still need one.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 41
WTFH I really want to bitch slap those fuckers they are now the top of my fictional bitch slap list.
Author's Response:
Ah...but spirit warriors can't go back on their word--they have to be creative about things.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 41
OMG.....I am bawling now. Why can't Peter and Bella just live as vamps together for eternity? My HEA is definitely ruined now. I am so sad. Peter forgets Bella even existed??? I hate that.
You better duck. Here comes a tomato. Big meanie.... :( LOL
Author's Response:
Don't worry. This is not the last chapter (far from it) and I'm a firm believer in HEA's.
Date: 20 Sep 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
Jerks
Author's Response:
Hmm...you might change your mind about them in a later chapter.