[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
omg!!! they were all over the place ! well bella more than edward ;) i hope the sequel comes soon ;D
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2013 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
is it already up for us to read
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
I LOVE YOUR STORY BUT IT DOESN'T FEEL FINISHED TO ME I GUESS I WAS WAITING TO FIND OUT WHAT THE BABY WAS AND EDWARD RETURNING HOME AFTER THERE TOUR. THANKS FOR THE STORY.
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there is a sequel.. its called on the road
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
YOU KNOW WHAT I FEEL SO BAD FOR EDWARD ALL THE BITCHING BELLA DOES ALL THE TIME ALWAYS SAYING SHE'S SO FAT HE DOESN'T WANT HER SHE UGLY HE WANT TOUCH HER ALL KINDS SO SHIT IT ALL BULLSHIT SHE ACTS LIKE A CRAZY PERSON AND BEING PREGNANT IS NOT A GOOD ENOUGH REASON TO ALWAYS BE TREATING EDWARD THE WAY SHE DOES HE IS DOING ALL HE CAN FOR HER AND AS FOR THE KISS WILL I'D BE PISSED ABOUT THAT TO BUT SHE DOES KEEP TELLING HIM HE CHREATS ON HIM WHEN HE DIDN'T I JUST YOUR BELLA IS A BIG BABY.HOW OLD IS SHE ANY WAYS?
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
IS THAT REALLY TRUE ABOUT THE MAN CUMMING IN THE WOMAN CAN MAKE HER GO INTO LABOR? I NEVER HEARD THAT BEFORE AND I HAVE BEEN PREGNANT 15 TIMES I LOSE 12 OUT OF THAT 15 BUT I DID GET THREE LIVE CHILDREN AND I ADOPTED ONE LATER IN LIFE. I'M NOW 68 AND THANK GOD ALL MY KIDS ARE STILL WITH ME I MEAN THEY LIVE NEAR ME NOT IN MY HOME WITH ME.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
I DON'T GET IT WHEN A CHILD IS KIDDNAPPED THE FBI IS ALWAYS CALLED WHY DIDN'T YOU IS IT YOU DIDN'T THINK OF IT? I KNOW CHARLIE IS A COP BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER IN CASES LIKE THIS ONE. I AM REALLY LOVING YOUR STORY.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'M ON BELLA'S SIDE ON THIS ONE EDWARD SHOULD HAVE PUT A STOP TO THE GIRLS BEING UP THERE AND TOUCHING HIM WAS OUT OF LINE HE STOPPED THE GIRL FROM KISSING HIM BUT IT WAS OK FOR THEM TO TOUCH HIS DICK NO WAY WAS THAT RIGHT.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
does bella need an operation on her head?
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY AND I'M ALSO LOVING THE LONG CHAPTERS.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like a really good story...unfortunately, it is really hard to read. You don't have quote marks where people are speaking, so it all runs together. I really liked what I could read, but I couldn't get very far, it was hard to follow. I hope you can fix this little problem, so more people can read it :) I love "Across the Lines" and am working on reading it now.
Date: 19 Nov 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh boy why do I think that Edward is in for alot of fights on the road with Bella????
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Date: 19 Nov 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well I guess that Edward is having to pay for that mistake that he made.
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Date: 19 Nov 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow!! Edward really messed up didn't he? I really hope that he sees what he did was wrong and that he doens't ever try to do that again.
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Date: 19 Nov 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good job!!! I wonder if Emmett is going to try to help his brother out with his wife or if he is going to just let Edward fend for himself.
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Date: 18 Nov 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
It is good that she is getting to go home lets just hope that the little one doesn't want to make an appearance too soon.
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Date: 18 Nov 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
It is good that she is listening to her Dr. and staying in the hospital. I have to wonder where Edward and Emmett's parents are because they haven't been mentioned any in this story.
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Date: 18 Nov 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well Clumsy Bella strikes again doesn't she??
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Date: 18 Nov 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
It is good that they got Sean back from Lauren because who knows what she would have done to him.
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Date: 18 Nov 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Lauren better hope that the police find her first....
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Date: 17 Nov 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well I think that Edward messed up but I think that Bella is a little emotional so she is taking it a little far....
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Date: 17 Nov 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
It is so sad that he is now trying to hurt Bella and Edward's baby.
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Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
It is good that she is going to be ok.
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Date: 16 Nov 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well I wonder what Psycho-ex is going to do now? Maybe he will think before he acts.
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Date: 16 Nov 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well I guess that he isn't very happy about what she is doing... Jealous maybe??
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[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
SOMETHING TELLS ME NOTHING GOOD CAN COME OF EDWARD GOING ON TOUR. AND SHE BEING PREGNANT AND SO EMOTIONAL, AND HIM GOING FOUR MONTHS WITH JUST HIS HAND TO KEEP HIM COMPANY, RIGGGGHHHHHTTTTT!!!! AND COMING HOME TO ANOTHER 6 WEEKS WITHOUT, GOOD LUCK WITH THAT. I FEEL FOR BELLA.
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Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 20
They are always hot. how is she going to make it with the hornyness.
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Date: 21 Jul 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
A baby a contract wow life is going to get really interesting.
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Date: 03 Jul 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is lucky he is not 6 feet under. So happy Natalie made it in to the world without anymore problems.
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Date: 29 Jun 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
OK I am going to have to kick Edwards ass. I cant believe he did it first kiss the blond and then slap Bella how dare he ya Im pissed. He better kiss Bella's ass and anything else she wants.
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Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is in deep shit he should of went with she feel down.
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Date: 15 Jun 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank goodness the baby is ok they have been through enough.
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Date: 08 Jun 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am amazed that she has not lost her mind with all the thing that have happened to her. I hope Lauran gets what she deserves in prison and I hope she gets it alot what a bitch.
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Date: 01 Jun 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hormones are the shits
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Date: 27 May 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
You know, reading sentences which someone said, without quotes is killing the mood. They sound in my head like listening to a veeery bad narator, there are no modulations in voice, no thril in acting,... just.... plain straight line.
Shame. Looks like a good story. Are you just lazy to put the quotes?
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Date: 25 May 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
At least he didnt knock when they were in the middle of it lol. I hope they send Lauran away forever and I am amazed that Edward didnt beat the shit out of her.
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thanks reading, we appreciate your comments. Stick with us there's much more to come.
Date: 25 May 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMFG how much can she take before she loses her mind???? Didnt Renee and Charlie know she was having a baby???
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Date: 18 May 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
i hope they will get sean from that bitch
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Date: 11 May 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
What the hell was he thinking???? Bella is on hormon overload poor thing. What is that creep going to get Lauran to do to Bella?????
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[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good for Bella, she should give Edward hell. He has had months to think and know what his "responsibilities" to Bella are. He knew that he should have got those girls away somehow, but he love the attention and missed it, I think!! I love this story, MORE PLEASE!!!!
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Date: 07 May 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow Alec is nuts and needs to be put away forever and have his perental rights taken away. So glad the baby is ok.
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Date: 21 Apr 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella can never be alone and I guess Edward is not safe either how did Lauran get in the house??? I am happy Bella did not flip out and blame Edward for the skank being on him.
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Date: 21 Apr 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hunt that bitch down and beat her to death with a bat or stick anything just kill the bitch. How much can Bella take.???
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Date: 21 Apr 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
So Lauran can shove it up her ass she didnt break them up because they are in love. A baby glad they are happy about it.
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Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella she must be beat to shit by now but she can still do the nasty. Sorry I keep messing up and putting Alex instead of Alec but no matter his name that prick needs to burn.
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Date: 20 Apr 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMFG I am so happy Edward wanted to follow her. Alex needs to burn in hell.
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Date: 20 Apr 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Alex is a freak and dangerus.
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Date: 20 Apr 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Where oh Where did Edward go?????
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[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, I for one LOVE this story. Drama around every corner, but I do want a HEA with Bella and Edward. Lauren and Alec need to stay together and back off a little. I can't wait for more. I always love a Bad Boy Edward!!!
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Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter:)
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Thanks for the review. I'm glad you are liking it. BBC
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
I loved it, great details:)
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Thank you some much BBC. Hopefully you will like the rest of the story. Thanks again :)
Date: 25 Mar 2011 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter, girls:)
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Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter!
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Thank you BB. I hope you will like the rest. Thanks for the support.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, looking forward to more.
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Than you some much!