Date: 20 May 2015 6:52 AM Title: Outtake 2: Jacob & Victoria
Jacob was rewarded for his patience and caring, that's for sure! Victoria deserved such a great guy, just to make up for the hell James made her live in for so long. I had to admit it made sense for Jake to want to beat him to a pulp, as I felt the same way, even though the guy was dead!
Date: 19 May 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
You did such a good job with this sorrowful event, I had to wipe away a few tears! It's a part of life, but you just hate for that kind of sadness to happen! I don't blame Bella for having nightmares and Edward for his fears! After all, they may be medical professionals, but they are also just a couple having a baby!
Date: 19 May 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
It's okay with me for Edward to deliver his own sister, it made for a really nice scenario! Now that Alice and Jasper have a daughter, I'm hoping Edward and Bella have a son. Since it could be their only child, it would be so special to give them a boy to carry on the name!
Date: 19 May 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wonderful wedding, heartfelt vows, everything just as it should be! The spark between Victoria and Jake is interesting, Charlie is really into Kara, romance is in the air! I live it! Especially the lovemaking at the Fairmont, that was fabulous! I'm so happy for the way this turned out, just beautifully!
Date: 19 May 2015 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
I can tell, this is going to be a busy spring and summer, what with the wedding, Alice and Jasper's baby, then a Thanksgiving child for Bella and Edward! It's going to be such a wonderful time for everyone, even with a little morning sickness!
Date: 19 May 2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
Those are the nicest, kindest most generous people and Victoria is lucky to find them! I hope Charlie makes sure James bumps into a lot of things, especially with his face! Bella really needs to get away with Edward. The trip to the concert and to see her mom will be so good for her, and probably Edward also!
Date: 19 May 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
That sounded like the greatest New Years celebration! Makes me wish I could have been there! It's so nice to read about these two falling more and more in love with each other! I did have a thought, though. Edward needs to have checkup in case his sperm have gradually come back to life. With them not usung condoms, there could be quite a surprise coming in this new year! Wouldn't that be something?
Date: 19 May 2015 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'll just bet they will find ways to occupy their enforced stay in the Emerald City! It must be such a hardship but they are both brave and resourceful! If you must be stranded by a snowstorm, it helps to be with the man you adore at a fabulous hotel !
Date: 19 May 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Such a lovely holiday, even if they will be seperated for a few days! Too bad Jacob hasn't met Edward yet, but Charlie seems to like him well enough.These two are so dedicated to their profession and it's fun to read about all the moms and babies. That was great about Mrs. Johnson and Marcus! Couls have turned out much, much worse!
Date: 18 May 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Practically tragic about the Johnson girl, so young and foolish and easily persuaded. Thirteen is too young for such adult experiences! Bella, on the other hand, at twice that age is more than aware of what she wants to happen between her and Edward, and soon!
Date: 18 May 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
It's really nice that Charlie will go to Canada with Billy and Jaco to ice-fish. It's even better that he will spend what will probably be Billy's last Christmas with him. Looking forward to Friday night's date with Bella and Edward!
Date: 18 May 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
It's a shame about Billy and I'm sure Charlie is taking the news almost as hard as Jacob. I get a sense of Alice maybe doing a bit of matchmaking for her brother, but Bella should just relax and enjoy dinner. It always irks me that she automatically assumes a guy like Edward wouldn't be interested in her! My attitude is, why not?
Date: 18 May 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
If your experience with miwifives was anything like this one, I can see why you think so highly of them! Looks like Bella and Edward both are feeling a tug of attraction and think they can just ignore it! I'll bet that doesn't happen!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:09 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow what an awesome. Story! I finished it yesterday and read the Alice and jasper o/t and Robbie and Alyssa are like them a bit ;) I loved the epilogue so much information I had to read it again thank for completing it ;D
Date: 02 Dec 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, there is so much going on in your story already! I love it. I mean, I'm not happy about Billy, or anyone's sadness, but I love a story with lots going on.
I just love Edward and Bella in your story. I can't wait to see how long these two will keep thinking they can keep it professional. I also can't wait to see how dinner goes over at Alice's house on Saturday. =) Kelly
Date: 02 Dec 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying your story. I wasn't sure I would understand everything that goes on, because I've never had a baby, but you wrote it in such a way that it's easy to follow. I really love the storyline, and of course your Edward and Bella. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's a shame few go into obstectrics anymore because of the malpractice insurance. I've seen some really good doctors retire or change fields because of this. My midwife did her training in the Appalacian mountains(very poor, poverty conditions).
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
Do you think any woman that has had a natural childbirth hasn't wanted to be a midwife? I coached 4 births. Think if I was ever in a situation I could probably deliver. What really upsets me is how women lately consider this a medical condition and opt for needless intervention. Having a baby can be almost a sensual experience.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
If I remember correctly Forks Hospital is one story. Have the upmost respect for midwives. Have several friends both lay and state licensed. My sons godmother is my midwife. My niece is a neonatal special care nurse. The size of some premies is unbelievable.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the story so far, it's solid and has characters with feelings, I'm just having a hard time with the "person" this story was written in...It's a little hard to follow. Like it should be present tense from the perspective of each character at the time, instead of past tense except for dialog... I am not criticizing, I'm just commenting on something I have noticed. Still enjoy the story!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:30 AM Title: Outtake 1: Alice and Jasper
Wow, This story has been incredible, like a drink of water in the desert. Or maybe, a better analogy would be like a safe dry place in a storm. I love that it was angst free. so many angsty stories just seem to have problem after problem, to the point where I become too stressed reading something that I use to escape. so, I need stories like this to keep me calm and give me that happy warmth I need. This was sweet and beautiful. I love the setting and all the details you put in of the different births. I laughed and cried over many things. It's definitely a very special piece of writing art.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just wanted to tell you that I found your story today and I'm absolutely hooked...line and sinker!!!! I love it and just cannot stop reading it! I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed before now but I couldn't keep myself from hitting the "Next" button so I could read the next chapter!!!
Now I'm off to read more :)