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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2016 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

OMG!!! awesome 3shot ;) but how come alice and carlisle added their venom? i really hope you would come back to this with some o/t or f/t ;) thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2016 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

excelent but should have been more

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

would love to read more from this!! that jacob needs his butt kicked

Reviewer: milinpink Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Uggg. I so did not want this one to end. Great story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, wonderful story!  You never cease to amaze me with your talent!  Thank you, thank you!  - Cheri

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a coincidence, to end your story just as Bill Condon did Breaking Dawn I, with Bella opening her eyes after the change! There the similarity ends, thiough. I can't believe Jacob killed her, or as near as killed. You  would think Bella had suffered more than enough in her short life, but evidently Fate wasn't through with her. At least she has Edward and the rest of the family, and Aro can't bitch that she's still human! I see  that nearly all your reviewers want this story continued, and that may happen some day. It would be great if you found someone who could write this Bella and this Edward as well as you did. Good luck with that, you did a fabulous job with this story. I didn't even cry when Bella was being abused, I just wanted to get something painful and nasty and kill James and Victoria with it! Guess that makes me an evil old woman, but they deserved awful retribution, maybe worse than what Jacob did to them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

I had a bad feeling we couldn't let Edward get Bella home without some confrontation with the wolf! Good Grief! Like the poor kid hasn't had enough horror in the last few years! It's really kind of mean to drag her through any more! At least now she has a champion and protector in Edward. Hope it's enough to save her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank God Edward got himself and Bella out of that Hell! The real animals weren't even in the cages. I'm happy as can be that Jemes and Victoria got what they deserved. The only problem is, I'm afraid that wolf is going to hunt Bella, again. Edward better hunt fast!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

Beautiful!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awesome!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a scary one.

Reviewer: sevanderslice Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

I very much enjoyed every word of this story.  You have a gift with words.

I only wish you'd written an epilogue.

Reviewer: ILoveVamps2Much Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

... You are jokeing right? I love it but what happens now?! Your a great writer!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

With everything going on I'm not surprised I missed a review so I'm going back and catching up thanks for sharing this with us I really loved this story I just wish there were more.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

You have got to be kidding me thats how it end come on please give us more will there be a sequal I really hope so PLEASE Loved it thanks for sharing this with us.....

Reviewer: texbratt67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Brilliant plot bunny!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved your tale of vampires & werewolves! Beautifully written with a happy ending!  

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow, so much happened in this chapter and in the end Edward had to change Bella. This end is really cruel, because the question remains, how will Bella take her "after-human-life".


Will there be a sequel? Because if yes, it will probably also great, because the story-telling was exquisite and also your style kept me (and probably the other reader) hooked.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review! I'm actually in talks with someone right now who is interested in writing a sequel for this fic, and if it happens I'll let everyone know.  Thanks again for the kind words, and for reading!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great job with this story.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

awww damn Jacob, but at least he made it so the wolves couldn't deny it was life or death...I really wish there were more to the story tho, I would love to see her as a vampire.  Thank you for this story enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review! I'm in talks with someone right now who is interested in writing a sequel for this story.  If it happens, I'll let you know!

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

Somehow I knew Jacob was the wolf at the Midnight Carnival. Thanks for completing the story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: adoxography Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really hope that this story becomes somthing more than just three posts. There is so much that could be done with the story line. Please think about expanding the story to something a bit longer.

Great chapters though; please keep up the good work. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review! This is all I'm planning on writing for now, but I'm in talks with someone else who has asked if she could write a sequel.  If it pans out I'll let everyone know.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward took such great care of Bella. It was really very lofing and he came prepared for anything, when he went shopping.

I hope that the (free) werewolf will not make any trouble for the happy couple.

I am looking forward to the last chapter.



Author's Response:

THanks for the sweet review! Unfortunately the werewolf did make another appearance, as I'm sure you know by now! Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

After just strumbling in this story, I am hooked from the beginning. It is a really interesting story and plot. It was a great idea, that Edward was captured in an electric cage, but still fought agains his blood-lust.

Poor Bella, she has suffered in this chapter/story really much from James and Victoria. But it is good to see, that althogh such horrible things happened to her, she is still strong (and also fighting against her fears).

I also really liked, your writing. Nothing was too rushed or too long with extended explainations. It had a nice flow, when reading.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the amazing review! This plot bunny just popped into my head and I wrote it very quickly. I'm happy it resulted in "good flow"!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 2

You've done a great job with this short story.  The scenes with James were difficult to read but you did a great job with such challenging subject matter.  I love the relationship that is building between Edward and Bella and I really look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Writing the abuse scenes is really difficult, but in hurt/comfort stories you need the hurt to get to the comfort.  Otherwise it's all just fluff.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am loving this story so much!  Very original approach. 

 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Estou amando este capítulo, o carinho dele que se transforma em amor por uma Bella que se arriscou em sua vida para salva-lo, espero que não demore a uma nova atualização. Tchau



Author's Response:

::claps hands:: My first review in Portugese! 

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it very much and I can't wait to see what will happen next update when you can and I think he is so good to her thanks for sharing this with us.....



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks Bammers! It's great to see a familiar face around here!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

This was a really good chapter.  Edward stepped up in his care for Bella; he will do anything and everything for her and I'm so happy things are progressing well with their relationship.  



Author's Response:

The comfort part of hurt/comfort stories is my absolute favorite to write! I love the warm fuzzies, but it's different than just pure fluff.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, James and Victoria were sick freaks.  Sick and disturbed to the core.   What they did to Bella was just inhumane and horrible.  And they met both met with the end they deserved to get - a grisly horrifying death.    How fitting was that!!    But I'm glad that Edward was able to get Bella away and out of there and I can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks for the very sweet review! It's hard to write the abuse parts, but it has to be there in order to get to the sweet parts afterward.

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

very interesting!! cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

love it!!

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderfully interesting. It reminded me just a little of the Cirque du Freak: The Vampire's Assistant. At least the part of having a circus full of the wierd and strange. ;)

Can wait to see how it all wraps up! Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I haven't read the book you mentioned, but I will reiterate that the Midnight Carnival came from Peter S. Beagle's The Last Unicorn.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excellant story! So well written & I loved all the details!  James & Victoria got the ending they deserved! Can't wait for the next chapter in Edward & Bella's life!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the long chapter. Well written. I do have to wonder how James and Victoria came across their supernatural knowledge. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! How James and Victoria got their knowledge is one of the loose ends that may never be answered.  I thought it would probably be difficult for anyone, even the Volturi, to figure it out once James and Victoria were dead.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Killer chapter! So glad J and V got what they deserved! I'm hoping B is safe !



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I hope the second chapter with Bella safe with Edward was what you expected.

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