Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:14 AM Title: Saving Grace
I loved this story couldn't stop reading !
Date: 06 Apr 2016 6:43 PM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
I think bella is getting what she deserves she is sooo stupid that is boring
Date: 12 May 2015 7:36 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
what a tease
Date: 12 May 2015 2:30 PM Title: Monster
this is familar I might have read before but am still enjoying it
Date: 14 Aug 2014 7:29 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
JFC.........YOU ARE TOTALLY A WICKED SICK INDIVIDUAL !!!!!!!!! LOL
THIS CRAP HAS HAD ME NAUSEOUS AS HELL !!!!!!!
THEY COULD HAVE USED YOU AT GUANTANAMO !!!!!!!
I'M ALMOST HESITANT TO GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER........EXCEPT I FEEL
SOMETHING IS GOING TO TURN IN FAVOR FOR THE VAMPIRES.....
ON MY WAY TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 14 Aug 2014 5:06 AM Title: Doomed
She was a virgin, right????? Does Edward, or his monster know this ?????
Hopefully Edward will make love to her now....
On to the next chapter.........
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 14 Aug 2014 12:08 AM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
I am loving this 'Evil Edward'.....most every story I read he is either loving, romantic, & I have read a few evil Edward's.....but, I do believe you have written one of the most mean evil one's so far.
There is still the mating thing he is fighting here, or I'm assuming. I can hardly wait to see where you take these two.
Thanks muches for sharing your story with me.....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Date: 30 Mar 2013 3:19 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Yum yum.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 10:48 PM Title: Manipulations
Yes I liked the not today comment indeed its quite promising.
Date: 28 Mar 2013 12:31 AM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
I'm glad Edward has been letting his guard down with Bella its good for the both of them.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 4:56 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Love it, great chapter.
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:54 PM Title: Ultimatum
Poor Charlie will be frantic with worry wondering where Bella is and if she's okay.
Date: 26 Mar 2013 3:14 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
Yes I enjoyed the first chapter and looking forward to the rest of the story.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:36 PM Title: Trust
This chapter does Bella no favor.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:21 PM Title: Notes
I think now, Bella's stupidity has no limits. The original Bella had at least a personal relationship to the original Jacob, but this Bella... Sorry, but she doesn't choose very wise.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:44 AM Title: Kitchen Confessions
This Bella is too much a matyr, so she is so hard to read.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:25 AM Title: Saving Grace
and so begins the happily ever after! the cullen family were the only ones left to pick up the pieces and move towards forever, together.
congrats on finishing your story! sounds like it was a growing, learning and mostly good experience for you.
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:42 PM Title: Saving Grace
Great story have you decided if you are going to do a sequel yet?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:01 PM Title: Oblivion
Looks like bella had to take care of buisness! Holy shit! Now she just needs to finish the change and wake up to the happily ev er after forever and ever
Date: 26 Jul 2011 10:16 PM Title: Final Piece
Nice to see eddie and bella got a little alone time to reconnect. With everyone so tense and on guard this little coup will be a sinch!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 1:50 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
Well the wheels have been set in motion. Eddie is gonna raise hell! Aro was warned but hey men can be stupid right?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:37 PM Title: Isabella's Ball
can't believe aro brought her parents into this! time for bella's true gifts to come to light.
and was that em on the wall outside her window?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:12 PM Title: Gratitude
well at least aro is allowing some contact between bella and hrt family. still unsure as to how long they have been at the castle for.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:50 AM Title: Mute
so bella is a powerful shield and it would seem a weapon if pushed too hard. she is gonna be the key to them escaping. glad to hear that jake has not forced anything physical on bella, other than snuggle buddies in bed.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:14 AM Title: The Voluri
heehee surprise! it is bella. she is tougher than she looks and very powerful. how long have they been at the castle? how long has it been since the girls were taken? where the hell are rose and em?!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 5:45 AM Title: New Home
so was the torture sesion all in their heads? or was bella passed out for 6 plus weeks? how is she ok? and what is eddie and the monster gonna do when they find jake and bella? will eddie get there in time?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 5:22 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
well they have been saved? i think? at least now the boys and alice are not tied up, that we know of. maybe this is the break the boys need to come back and kick some ass and save bella?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:52 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
wow bella is really taking the punishment. eddie will have to change her when this is all done or she won't survive. funny to see carlisle all protective of her, it is because she reminds him of esme. still not sure how they are gonna get out of this. and what is up with eddie's eyes...?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:27 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
tanya? gotta have her pop up at some point right/ ans as the baddie heehee! wonder how they will get out of this? will rose and em come to save the day or will someonee else step up to be the hero of the day?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:35 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
wow bella ya think?!?!? why would it be a good idea to listen to the people you know and love and trust over a stranger? for having a cop for a dad she is way too gulible and nieve(?) so glad that everyone will have the chance to scream a great big i told ya so at her.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:04 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic
i really do understand bella's point on this why is eddie being a dumbass? if she wants to change he should either help or let someone else do it.
who are they running from? will the boys get there in time to save them?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 2:48 AM Title: Fighting the Monster Within
well they fought she ran away and he brought her back with love and understanding. bella really does have a mortality issue. it s all about i'm gonna die for her.
Date: 26 Jul 2011 2:07 AM Title: Trust
oh shit looks like bella is falling for jake's shit hook line and sinker. what will ed and the others do?
Date: 26 Jul 2011 1:47 AM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
Shame on Edward teasing Isabella like that!!! He really is a monster lol
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:07 AM Title: Notes
holy shit bella is playing with fire. but it is good that she knows how to call up the monster quickly, that may come in handy
Date: 25 Jul 2011 11:29 PM Title: Doomed
i can see what carlisle is talking about that really would make having bella around that much worse. it seems that everybody is questioning what is so special about bella. and why she has made it through not only time with eddie but time with the monster as well.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 10:28 PM Title: Monster
is it just Jasper and Edward or are the rrest of the Cullens around somewhere?
Date: 25 Jul 2011 4:52 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Awww she has not only changed eddie and made him love she has changed the monster too. So sweet in a fucked up kinda way. Heehee wonder what jake is up to?
Date: 25 Jul 2011 12:29 PM Title: Waffles
how long until bella finds out the truth about eddie's last girlfriend? from who? and did she even exist or is carlisle just fucking with bella?
Date: 25 Jul 2011 11:36 AM Title: Killing the Corrupt
stillno clue on who the spy is.i don't really think it is rose but that only leave alice and bella and it can't be either of them. unless bella is blocking without knowing....
it should be interesting to see the final confrontation between jake and ed....
Date: 25 Jul 2011 5:32 AM Title: Manipulations
so rose has brung home a pet too. and jasper and bella have had a good talk even if jasper needed to trick her into it.and eddie has given in to the fact for now that they will eventually have sex.
oh and we seriously need to get carlisle lais it might help dislodge the pole up his ass! lol
Date: 25 Jul 2011 4:53 AM Title: Peeping Tom
so is the spy rose? or is there another female vamp in the house? rose is bringing em home!!!!! yay!!!!
and eddie is not wanting to corrupt bella even though it would be best.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 4:21 AM Title: Bitter Heart
so that's what happened to carlisle. so sad. and i guess that means we won't be seeing esme in this fic. now the only one left of the original crew is em and you better not make him a bad guy!!! i wonder who was outside the window?
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:00 AM Title: Kitchen Confessions
well that really took the fire outta both of them didn't it?
Date: 24 Jul 2011 9:19 PM Title: Taking Control
a little bit of lost control! such a good thing at times! poor bella taking everything on her own shoulders.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:11 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
that was cute how he was playing around with her. and he finally kissed her but obviously he got a little carried away with it. they are gonna have to take things slowly so he doesn't hurt her.
and we have now met eddie, human bella, jasper, human alice, carlisle, and rose. i wonder where em and esme are? will they be joining our little family too?
Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:38 PM Title: Mr Nice Guy
so the wolves are bad too. and now jake is wanting bella and edie will have to fight tokeep her safe. i wonder whothe vamps working with the wolves are?
Date: 24 Jul 2011 1:08 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
wow bella that was pretty ballsy! b ut the gamble seems to have paid off so far.
Date: 24 Jul 2011 6:34 AM Title: Magic Eight Ball
wonder what got eddie's panties in a bunch and made him pull bella out of her visit with alice? worried about something alice would say? or bella? and they shared a moment! ed liked it while in the moment but then as always got pissy and stomped off.
Date: 22 Jul 2011 10:44 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
So ed is split in 2 he wants to be with bella but he also wants to be the monster. I see change coming in his future..
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:27 PM Title: Hopeless
Wow that was fucked up and ed ! To trick her like that!? Mean!
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:42 PM Title: New Surroundings
So we have met carlisle and he is not the sweet doctor here! Who did ed bring to bella? And what is he gonna do with them?
Date: 22 Jul 2011 12:11 PM Title: Monster
looks like ed didn't like her answer. i wonder who he will use as an example to prove how monsterous he is?
Date: 22 Jul 2011 11:56 AM Title: Ultimatum
will we see the rest of the family? no way they would be ok with this.
bella is staying but what next?
Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:32 AM Title: Trapped
so he took her and has her locked away. wonder how he is gonna react to her hitting him with the rock. his reaction tells me he knew what she was planning to do...
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:00 AM Title: Beautiful Stranger
looks like miss bella's life is about to get exciting.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:38 PM Title: Saving Grace
Well this turned out so difernt than it started but I am glad you did not leave us hanging.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 9:36 PM Title: Saving Grace
good story overall, ending seemed a bit rushed though x
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:31 PM Title: Saving Grace
I loved this story and I will miss reading updates. Do you plan to include an epilogue of Bella and Edward after the newborn year?:)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 11:12 AM Title: Saving Grace
OMG!! I loved it! at first i thought i wouldn't like it but it was awesome!!!
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Saving Grace
Loved your story, =) love the ending and i´m glad you got a happy progress, too <3 Sorry to hear about your Scoliosis but i´m glad you´ve found something that helps.
All the best, hope to read more from you,
Linda xoxoxo
Date: 08 Jun 2011 8:18 PM Title: Oblivion
Wow that was a twist i didn´t see coming, =) Love the chapter and Bella´s surprise,
best wishes, Linda xoxo
Date: 08 Jun 2011 7:56 PM Title: Final Piece
Love the chapter, the planning and what will come, =)
best wishes, Linda xoxo
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:16 PM Title: Saving Grace
Excellent story! Thanks!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 9:56 PM Title: Saving Grace
This story was amazing, thank you so much for writing it :)
Date: 03 Jun 2011 6:20 PM Title: Ultimatum
I enjoy a dark Edward. Like this story so far!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 10:21 PM Title: Unleashing the Monster
Did not see that coming, talk about a mix of emotions going down in that chapter :L
Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:52 PM Title: Peeping Tom
Ooo the plot thickens. This is an amazing story :)
Date: 31 May 2011 3:37 AM Title: Saving Grace
I'm glad to see the story finished but it all just seemed really rushed. They went through so much and then suddenly BAM, it's just done in one chapter. Their master plan to get away seemed really poorly planned as well. I don't know what exactly they thought would happen to a human in the middle of an all out supernatural brawl. Of course the china doll is going to get smashed to bits. I dunno, all that torture, manipulation, trickery and then in one paragraph Bella just makes them all explode and it's over. It was all very deus ex machina. Not to mention didn't Rosalie betray them and help Jacob/Aro? Didn't she hate Bella? Then suddenly she and Emmett just show up and Rose is all smiley at Bella and no one says anything about her betrayal and no one finds out? That's pretty fucked up.
After all Jacob did to Edward, both in regards to Bella and the women he took before Bella, Edward didn't even get to have his vengeance? I mean, Jacob was the main bad guys and he didn't even say anything in the last few chapters. Not only did the hero and the villain not get to have their face off, they didn't even interact. He pretty much disappeared after Aro showed up as it was. With this ending, all the time they spend wandering around the castle seems pointless. As does the torture because Aro just decided 'okay, no more Jacob we are going to be nice now'. I mean, it was pretty obvious that the vamps didn't need the wolves and there was no reason for them to be there. Tanya just flitted away and didn't even have to answer for the torture/shit she did? Who was the guy on the wall? What exactly was Bella's power again? What happened to the really powerful vamp that was messing with their powers? What was up with her exactly? How did Emmett and Rose know that Edward had a plan? They jumped right into the fight like they knew what was going on. What made Rose have a change of heart after betraying them? So many unanswered questions. :(
Sorry, but it all just seemed rather unsatisfying and anticlimactic. Like I said, I'm glad their was an ending but it feels like you were trying to just hurry and get it over with and magicked all their problems away with Bella's unnamed, undefined, overly super strong power in one wave of her wand. 30+ chapters of torture, manipulating, fear and fighting for all their problems to go away in 3 paragraphs or less.
Side from the ending, I really did like the rest of the story. I really enjoyed what you did with Edward and the Monster. I like how they were almost two separate entities that are so tied together they are the same person, and both love Bella. Even if in their different ways. They'd both give their lives to love and protect her. I really enjoyed it when the Monster came out. I always love a dark, possessive, dominant Edward.
But yeah, those are my suggestions for when you write your next story. The main one being that the end is just as important as the beginning and middle of a story. It should have a flow to it and shouldn't just drop off. That can happen when you take a character and make them too powerful. No one can beat them so there is no struggle or worry so there is no fun in the victory.
I'm glad your back is feeling better and I look forward to your next story.
Date: 30 May 2011 2:51 AM Title: Saving Grace
I have enjoyed your story very much!! We have something in common, I have scoliosis Ihad a 40 degree curve, and have had a rod in my back sinceI was 14 which was about 30 years ago. I had bone taken from my hip to help fuse the rod to my spine and it was agonizing for about a year, and have had no trouble since and have given birth to 2 children with no complications. I am sorry for all the trouble you have had and hope that it gets better for you. Take care and thankyou for your story and hope to ready more stories from you.
Date: 29 May 2011 1:38 PM Title: Final Piece
I was a little dissapointed in the lemon. There was no mention of Edward having a release or if he simply wanted to give her pleasure. So yeah that was a little disspointing because it went so fast. I am so glad that he finally has a plan though.
Date: 29 May 2011 11:21 AM Title: Saving Grace
It was awesome! Thank you for sharing
Date: 29 May 2011 5:38 AM Title: Saving Grace
short but sweet ending. Thanks for taking the time to write and share.
Date: 29 May 2011 5:37 AM Title: Oblivion
go bad ass bella.
Date: 29 May 2011 5:29 AM Title: Final Piece
Glad they got back together again. Die jake die.
Date: 29 May 2011 2:27 AM Title: Saving Grace
A very good story. I enjoyed it and was so relieved and thrilled when after a very long dry spell (I thought it was abandoned and was very disappointed) you came back and finished it. Thank you
Date: 29 May 2011 1:51 AM Title: Saving Grace
Writing is always the best way to get how you feel out in the universe especially when you do not want anyone else to know how you feel. It is very cathartic.
Yes, I am sure that we all have questions that will never be answered, but isn't that always the case regardless if your are reading a published book or a story in fanfiaction.
I am happy things have started to work out for you.
Can't wait to see what you do next....
Date: 29 May 2011 1:25 AM Title: Saving Grace
Thank you for this story, I will always remember it :)
Date: 29 May 2011 12:42 AM Title: Saving Grace
it was a great story but somehow the ending seems incomplete and rushed in order for you to end it. I hope you got out of writing it what you needed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 11:00 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
I'M EXPECTING EXCITEMENT NEXT WEEK.
Author's Response:
hehe and your going to get it xx
Date: 25 Mar 2011 6:32 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
OH I think they pissed off the wrong Vampire and now I think its time for him to kick some ass Please thanks for sharing this and update when you can......
Author's Response:
Wow thanks sweetie! I'm glad you liked it :] the update will not take long, I promise xx
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:35 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
:)
Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:20 AM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
go eddie. scheme away
Author's Response:
hehe there is more sheming to come :] xx
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:36 AM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
Well I say rip off Tanya's head. Burn her to ashes.. first thing!
Author's Response:
:] she will die! but not yet hehe xx
Date: 22 Mar 2011 1:56 AM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
thanks good chapter
Date: 21 Mar 2011 9:12 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
loving it :)
Author's Response:
thanks sweetie :] xx
Date: 21 Mar 2011 7:03 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
Great story so far! Can I have more please?!
Author's Response:
more coming very very soon sweetie :] xx
Date: 21 Mar 2011 6:43 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
Oh, wow! A turn for Carlisle! hmm....
Edward has his work cut out for him, but he has started the wheels turning on this one already! :)
Author's Response:
Yup! Carlisle is a little less of a dick haha :]
The wheels are definitely turning :] xx
Date: 21 Mar 2011 5:48 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
There are many of us who love this story and wait anxiously for your new post. Don't let anyone or anything discourage you from doing something you obviously love and are so very good at. Most likely they are just jealous angry mean spirited people.
Author's Response:
Wow thank you very much for the wonderful compliment :] I'm not going to let anyone stop me from finishing this story, its like my baby, and it needs to grow up :] hehe Thank you very much, it means the world knowing that I have such wonderful people like you supporting me :] xx
Date: 21 Mar 2011 5:14 PM Title: Like a Moth to the Flame
Love the chapter, =) the update and the progress,
glad Edward has a plan,
best wishes, Linda xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie :] xx
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:21 AM Title: Peeping Tom
jake yuk please don't let him get her and do the nasty with her...please... ed wake up and change her for heaven sakes. rose is coming with em and charlisle will change him have him change bella you dope!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Bitter Heart
yeah bite me please!!!! just like bella but she is always right and there wouldn't be the drama if they would just change her the dumb asses!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:51 PM Title: Kitchen Confessions
safe is relative bella it's all relative... hum can't wait to see where this is going.
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:42 PM Title: Taking Control
Ed is hot hot hot!!!! poor bells always in danger...
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:31 AM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Intriguing
Date: 08 Mar 2011 8:57 PM Title: Cruelty & Kindness
strange... ed is strange...
Author's Response:
Yeah he can be a little wierd hehe But I do love him! xx