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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

EXCELLENT!!!! story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here with us ;D

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

sweet tale. i enjoyed it a lot and 7 kids? wow

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

You did a great job with this story. I really liked that Tanya was nice and she and Edward were happy. Your first story was definitely a success. I also loved all of the kids.

Reviewer: christinamarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

I really enjoyed your story. please inform me when you have more

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

okay there has to be something that doesn't go easy.. it all seems too sweet and easy..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

like i said this seems all too easy when are the bumps going to show?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

seems like it is all too easy for me.... i wouldn't trust anyone....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

hum interesting... someone definately put the screws on them...again jake has never been my favorite and will never be

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh boy!!! literally too!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

well at least bella has charlie.. charlie  i have a feeling ed doesn't know.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

wow.. didn't see all that coming....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

oh boy... i wonder what is going to bring her back to jake?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

why whould she stay with jake if he took advantage of her like that?  i never liked him in the saga and i really don't like him here.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

i didn't want to see her dead, but i am glad you were right to tell me it wasn't about cheating!  i can read and deal with a lot of stuff, but i just can't deal with cheating.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

not good...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter2

okay not sure i like.. he cheats and she cheats... i don't like but i will keep reading and see.  no one deserves that... you should just leave the person first..



Author's Response:

I hope you continue it, you have a few chapters before it's all explained, but again it isnt a cheating fic.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh man don't tell me she cheated on him... i don't like that..



Author's Response:

Nope, it's not a cheating story. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:34 PM Title: Prologue

oh boy was she married to jake?  tell more!!!



Author's Response:

All I'll say is be patient this is an E/B story and NOT a cheating story, but you have a few chapters to get through before all is explained. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

This was great for ur first story. I read it completely in two days. It was a little unorthodox at first, but you wrote it in way that made it a real possibilty of happening. I hope you come back and write another story thats just as good if not better. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

Bella telling her plan to Charlie ... That ought to be a nice scene lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

loved it!!



Author's Response:

So glad. Thanks for reading and for the review.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

I loved this story. I really loved how you ended it. I feel like I had closure. I don't feel sad, because it was perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you liked how I ended it. I was sad to let them go, but it was time.

 

Thanks for the review,

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

that was a cute ending



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

oooh, I hate to see this story go!! I enjoyed it... All the characters were just wonderful!! I am so happy that Tanya and Jacob weren't made to be the bad guys... they need love to at times. Always love Daddy Edward!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

This has been such a journey for this couple and this wonderful Family... How wonderful and scary to have first the age difference then to have a child so late in life, but what a awesome wonder and blessing...

 

Happiness abounds!!!!  Thanks for this wonderful story   Enjoy your RL and have a wonderful summer with your family and friends and hopefully you will be inspired to write more....  TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and leaving all of your lovely reviews. It's sad that this is over. I already have a couple of idea bouncing around, but probably wont post it until the fall when my kids are back in school.

Have a good summer.

 

 

~Susan

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

Awsome job wrapping it all. Through the laughs-tears. All around great story. I can't wait for you next one but in the mean time enjoy your summer.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. It was bittersweet to end it, but it was time.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

This was a great story and I am sorry to see it end, but I loved it from the get go.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I've loved writing these characters and am sad to let it go.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

This is the first story that I've read that I've actually liked Tanya. Thank you for that. This has been a wonderful journey. I'm sorry to see it end.



Author's Response:

Yes, for some reason Tanya has become the 'Girl to hate' in fics. I like to make her the girl you like. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 31 Epilogue

That brought tears to my eyes well done...

 

hugs



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it. I cried myself when I posted it, I didnt think I'd get emotional ending it...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 30

cute chapter excited for the epilogue



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it. enjoy the summer and if you decide to write something else drop me a note and I will read.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'll be sad to let this one go. I'll write again, just not sure when. the epilogue will be up in a week.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

loved it loved it loved it.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

So glad. I just posted the final chapter. Epilogue will be up before Wednesday. Perhaps this weekend.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love this story!! i think bella was too forgiving with Irina, but i love the mature way she handled things. so it's bitter sweet for me! I think everything was handled well, except for when she asked to see riley. Off top i would've said no lmao!! She would've had to go to a few therapy sessions before getting any where near my baby lmao!! j/k great chpater sweets



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 29

well im excited to see what happens next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. The next chapter is a small jump in time.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 28 Here Comes the Bride...

Oh, now I am all caught up. I love this story. Hate that is going to end soon, but I have enjoyed reading the trials of E & B. I am so happy for the kids!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you've enjoyed reading the story. The last regular chapter should be up by Wednesday and the epilogue by the next Monday. Thanks so much for reading and for all the reviews.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh, I hope the lil cullen is a definite! I love a prego Bella and Daddy Edward.



Author's Response:

We wont go much into pregnant Bella as the story is coming to an end, but maybe you'll get a taste in the Epi

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

I am so happy the girls are ok with everything!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 24

OMG! She really named the baby after Bella. That must have been an awesome lunch! ha



Author's Response:

Hey, Nutella is all kinds of awesome! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh, I knew Jake wasn't that bad. And I am so happy for Billy. Even though he probably will still miss Riley, he has a grandchild of is own.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well, it is kinda hard to not feel sorry for Jake. He was/is in love with Bella. Edward even said that he would do about anything for her to-- although i doubt he would use a child, that probably was more Chelsea. I do hope Jacob finds a love of his own.



Author's Response:

J&B just werent meant to be together.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

haha! poor Chelsea... not!!



Author's Response:

She got what she deserved. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 28 Here Comes the Bride...

I am so happy that they are finally married like they should be. Live is good. I hope Bella feels better soon. All day sickness is no fun. I hate that the jouney is almost over.



Author's Response:

Yeah they really shouldnt call it morning sickness, it's morning , noon, night sickness... They've reached their HEA, and it's sad letting them go. The next chapter will cover a little loving that was missing from the last chapter, and the family's first Christmas together.

 

The epi will wrap them all up nicely and it's a look into their future.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved Charlie's warning! Can't wait till they tell Chelsea off!



Author's Response:

I love my Charlie. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 28 Here Comes the Bride...

That was just perfect! I loved it and will hate to see it end!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thanks so much for continuing to read and review.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

So it seems Rini still had a problem with Bella.

What a way to find out you're a daddy!



Author's Response:

Rini has her reasons....Time for E&B to talk. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

poor Bella, that was a terrible way for Edward to end it. I figured one of the kids were going to find them, I was wondering how she ended up married to Jake if her and Edward did start a relationship before college...



Author's Response:

He was rather harsh. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

sad



Author's Response:

It get's better, not so sad soon. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 28 Here Comes the Bride...

well im glad taht they are hitched and they told everyone they are preggo i hope that their honeymoon is fulfilling! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

i knew it! So what happen with Tanya??? I know if I read on I will find out but I want to know now! OH my goodness, I am so glad that I didn't find this story until it was about done.. otherwise I don't know what I would have done waiting forupdates



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. The only thing I will say is that this is not a cheating fic. I cant stand cheatwards and cheatellas.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

oh my



Author's Response:

There is a lot to get through, but luckily you wont have to wait long for an update.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

hhmm, so is Jake Riley's father?



Author's Response:

Well by now you know. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 28 Here Comes the Bride...

I loved it and Redmond is an awesome place... I spent most of my summers of my childhood around there. I have family in Culver and my brother lived in Redmond for a few years....

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

That resort is gorgeous, I told my husband the next time we are on the west coast I want to go there. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

sounds like Chelsea and Jake are coordinating their efforts

I'd like to take Charlie up on his offer...



Author's Response:

Chelsea and Jake are quite the pair.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

I am glad that the girls didn't wake up to find them playing in the back of the new SUV. They do have teenage daughter. They wouldn't want to give them any ideas.



Author's Response:

yeah...that's not the image they need to project to teenage daughters, but parents are also ppl too...we have to get creative at having 'adult' time.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter up Wednesday.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

I thought  good right hook would have been better, but yup, she wasn't worth breaking a hand over..now Jake is another story.   I'd love to see Charlie take the lead on that one....:)



Author's Response:

I've decided that there will be a Charlie vs Jake outtake once the last chapter has posted. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 18

I meant to mention this before, but refering to the comment about Bella and Jacob having O Possitive blood and the baby having AB Negative as a sign that the baby wasn't Jacob's. That is no sign at all. My husband and I both have A Possitive, our Daughter is O Negative and there is no doubt in my mind who her father is, absolutely no doubt, I never cheated on my husband. I asked the doctors about it and was told that it happens, and is not uncommon, too many things determine blood type.

Author's Response:

That's true, but Bella already knew about the baby's paternity, and she knew it wasnt Jacob's she used it as the launching point to tell him, not knowing he already knew.

 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 27

Awww..... I´m gonna miss them, could we maybe have a sequel??  I´m just saying!  Lol!  I´m glad that Irina came around and that there was no more drama for these two.  Riley is adorable and his birthday was perfect.  Can´t wait for the wedding!  Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

no sequel but there will be a long Epilogue to tie things up. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

Woooo Hoooooo!  I knew it!  I knew it!  I knew it!  She´s pregnant!  Squeeee!  Loved it all and the proposal was perfect!!  I can´t wait until everyone else finds out about the new addition to the family!  Charlie get your gun!  Lol!  Greqat chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 27

awesome update I look forward to the next.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, next update by Wednesday. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 27

im excited for them! cant wait till they tell the whole family they are expection



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review,

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it; I'm happy that Bella is pregnant after all.   She and Edward were really hoping it would come to be.   Geesh, Riley is a year old.    My how the time does fly.  



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

I'm really hoping that Bella is pregnant.   This way Edward and Bella will be able to experience the pregnanty together this time.   And it was so sweet how he proposed to her.   I'm just happy she is finally through with Jake.  



Author's Response:

It's time Bella and Edward get to have peace and happiness, they've had enough sorrow and pain to last several lifetimes. 

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 26

well im excited that shes preggo ! and in the end its about time they get married! they should just elope! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. The next chapter will be up before Wednesday, 4 total chapters left including the Epilogue.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 26

loved it and so look forward to the next chapter.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. Glad you liked it. Next chapter will be up before Wednesday.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

I can see them with a total of 5 kids. They have 2 older ones and 3 little ones. They are so cute together. They just can't help, but make beautiful babies.



Author's Response:

We'll see what kind of baby makers E&B turn out to be. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well, I love this story so how could I not love this chapter??? I love the fact that the divorce is final, they are engaged, finally!!! And a new baby, huh......maybe twins??? I hate the fact the stoy is coming to a close, I was thinking of reading all about thier marriage, the kids growing, Edward & Bella groweing old together, no one ever does that!!! SEQUEL!! Come on everyone, start a campaign for a SEQUEL!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I dont think I'm doind a sequel, but someone did mention a possible outtake that I'll consider- a Jake/Charlie confrontation...

 

The Epi will cover a lot of ground and tie up a lot of loose ends- it's mostly finished and over 7K words now.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

well that was very interesting  love that she is free and ready to grow the family  yay! Riley gets to be big brother



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

im glad that she got rid of jake but i havea feeling that its not over with him yet



Author's Response:

We've seen the last of Jake. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 25

Yay!!! Divorce is over!!!  Rini and Kate are so cute!



Author's Response:

It's HEA time. They have truly blended into a family. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome update and I am so sad to see this story coming to an end, but as they say all good things need to come to an end.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read and review. Yes, I'll be sad when it's over, but these two deserve their HEA and it's time

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yeah! She is free to be with her family.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Happy times to come.

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 24

I just found this story via the nominee list for the Sunflower award.  I have enjoyed it and I am looking forward to the next chapter.  I was a little disappointed in the Bella/Jake "conversation" - really - he got all angry that Edward was there but he was planning to dump Bella anyway



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story. Next chapter will be up this week.

 

As for Jake-even though he'd already moved on- he was confronted with the reason his marriage to Bella fell apart. Her true love. He always knew he was her second choice, so yeah he was upset, but then it was a Fubar of a situation too.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

I love this story. It is time for some happiness. That is one big baby girl. I am glad I did not have to push that one out.  Carlisle and Esme need to move to Forks soon. Carlisle can work part time at the Forks hospital and Esme can spoil all the babies.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes its time for some happiness. Carlisle and Esme are coming.

 

 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Excellent chapter;  I love how Bella is so involved in the girls' life now, and they feel the same way.   Bella played the whole incident with Kate perfectly with Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

loved this chapter.



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: linelia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

wow the dog was brought to heal bt bella good for her.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

I hate that dog.......

awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Lots of people do. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

that was way cool loved it   ready ffor more



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Awesome update.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read and review.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow.. I´m really glad that´s over.  I don´t think she was too easy on him.  She just wanted closure and I think they both got it.  I really thought when Jake brought up their first time that Edward was gonna sock him.  Can´t wait until little Riley is officially a Cullen and Edward proposes.  Don´t think I forgot about that little slip up at the party... you remember the bareback sex E&B had.  

Can´t wait for the outcome of thatª!

Great chapter!

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Lol, no I havent forgotten the forgotten condom scene. We'll have to wait a little for that outcome. Edward and Bella will get to work filing for the change asap, but it will take time, especially in California. 

 

Bella got to say what she wanted to Jake, and did get some closure, but she wont forgive him for involving Irina, so they wont have any form of a relationship after the divorce. She and Edward are just ready to put it all behind them and move forward.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

No this chapter was perfect. Everything coming together, as it should be. Will Bella become pregnant from the "no condom" encounter??? Exciting!! A wedding in the near future?? I look forward to the next chapter(s)!!!



Author's Response:

We'l have to see about that. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

well nope that wasnt nearly as bad as i thought it would be with Jake   great chapter   now our lovebirds can get on with their happy little family



Author's Response:

I tried to do the explosive chapter but it didnt really ring true for Bella. Everything was said that needed to be said, but there will still be somethings to go over in the next chapter.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

well i hope that she askes someone to be with her when she talks to jake! keep the updates comming im excited to see what happens nex t



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Next chapter will be up in a week with a teaser posted Monday on the Fictionators website.

Reviewer: lissagirl26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

WOW This should be interesting!! Hopefully Edward gets to kick his ass!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. The next chapter will be up within a week and a teaser will be posted Monday at the Fictionators blog.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

I´m crazy to see that!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Next chapter will be up within the week. Look for a teaser on Monday at the fictionators.com blog

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

I wonder what it is that Jake just has to tell Bella.    And I hope that Bella really lays into him for all the lies that he told.    That boy deserves whatever she dishes out.



Author's Response:

It's going to be interesting.. that's all I'm saying. Thanks for reading and reviewing. The next chapter will be up in a week and I will post a teaser on Monday's Fictionators blog.

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awesome update... I so look forward the the Jake/Bella talk.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. Glad you liked it. Jake and Bella should be up by Tuesday, with a teaser posted on Monday at the Fictionators blog.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh that was good!  I love this story and how much Edward Loves Bella



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it. I love when Edward is unashamed of how much he loves his Bella.  Next chapter will be up in a week and I will post teasers on Fictionators.com's blog on Monday.

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Awesome chapter! Cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, next chapter should be up by Monday.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

What in the world is Jake doing at that party?   Well, it seems as though the confrontation will come sooner rather than later.   He sure has a lot of explaining to do.  I'm just glad that Edward is there with Bella when it all goes down.   I almost feel bad for Jake - NOT!!!!    He deserves whatever he gets for the mess he's caused.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Taking care of Jake wont be fun, wont be quick...but it will be done, hopefully by the next update, which if RL cooperates will be by Monday.

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh dear you are so evil!! take the lemons and give a cliffy like that!!! just kidding I loved the chapter, all was so sweet!!!



Author's Response:

just a little cliffy. The next chapter should be up by next Monday. Thank you for your review.

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

~Susan~**A Big High Five**  OMGoodness this chapter was fantastic!  Loved the confrontation with Mike and how Bella handled it, then for Edward to just happen in on it too!  Well that was per-fec-to!!!!!    The discussion with Mrs. Webber was really nice as well! I really liked that!  The family counceling session with Maggie was even good.  I like how Bella and Mrs Cope discussed a routine and schedule in the house, and even how showing that Bella can still feel insecure where Riley is concerned might be "silly" as she calls it, but blending with his new surroundings is a good thing, yet at the same time for Bella to understand that she is still so very vital to her little boy is very important for her to know-You did a great job in having Edward explain that to her... Kudos~ good job~~~

Edward dealing with teenage daughters and how he would like to take "intemidation" lessons from Chief Swan was pretty cute in my opinion, loved that.  Loved how the date went and the openess that the girls shared with their dad and Bella too the next morning...  

Which brings us to the BBQ portion  - Awwwwhhhh the way he announced Bella's return to them was so endearing and then of course the Awh Factor went up 100 fold when he announced there son...along with his name...

Okay seriously I was sort of expecting Jake to show up, but hate the ending... but I do love your wicked mind in leaving us hanging like that.... Your so wonderfully evil... I think I can now call you a "little vixen cliffee author"  hehehehe!!!! Seriously that is a cute compliment from me.... Have a good week and will honestly look forward to your next chapter, next week I presume!!!!  and hope!!!

Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxoxoxo

 



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you for your lovely review. Glad you enjoyed it all. Jake was bound to show up, though he's a week early. It's time to deal with him, though it will not be as quick as it was with Chelsea. I hope to have the chapter up by next Monday, but I will have to see how I cope doped up on more pain meds after more oral surgery tomorrow.

 

If chapter isnt up Monday, look for teasers on the fictionators blog.

 

Til next week~

Susan

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

Awesome update and you left us in a cliffy.... hmmmmmmmmm  I hope to see the next chapter soon.

 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Just a little cliffy, though. Thanks for the review. I will have an update next Monday. 

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

is so romantic!!! I just found it now and I loved everything here, My favorite part is when Bella punch Chelsia lol

hope have more soon!?!?

xoxo and sorry my bad English



Author's Response:

So happy that you like it. There should be an update Friday or Satirday. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well that is working out just perfectly, really happy with what they are deciding to do, or shall we say what Bella finally came to the realization of!  Her talking with the girls was wonderful in my opinion.  of course that is just my opinion!

You rock and look forward to the remainder of the chapters and what you have in store for this wonderful lovely family!

Oh, I also hope that we get to see what happens with the girls at the dance and what DaddyWard thinks of the attire! 

So next up is the BBQ and Jake coming to town, hummmm can't wait!

I am offically all caught up now.  Hey and thanks so much for all of your responses that is really nice of you.  Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Yay you're all caught up. I was planning to take a week off to go back and fix the mistakes in spelling and what autocorrect messed up, but I'm almost finished going over the chapters so there should be a new chapter up by Friday or Saturday and it will be the BBQ.

 

Thanks for all the great reviews, you brightened my day.

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

Well Hot Damn that was good!!! Yes, Chels could have gotten worse but she did get told.. Edward being Christened by Riley was pretty cute!  I was just surprised it didn't happen sooner, but the comic relief at that point was wonderful.

I love how they are coming quickly to the realization that they can't get enough of each other....  ***really slow there***  ***evil snickers***



Author's Response:

yeah they threw that concept out the window. hehe

 

the 'christening' incident happened with my son Ryley, when he was 6 months old. My husband had changed his diapers from the start but one day of not paying attention and Ry got him.

 

Thanks for your review.

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

awh!  Well Alice took that pretty good... Loved the **Flashbacks** I think that they give a much clearer picture



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for leaving all your great reviews.

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

Damn this is getting good, see hanging in and perservering do pay off when reading stories... I do have faith in you and thanks again for writing such a good FF.  I forgot to mention earlier that I really enjoyed the scene in the nursery with Rini and Ry.. that was really sweet and special and loved the talk Charlie had with Edward...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Irina was manipulated terribly, and it messed her up, but she's got a heart of gold buried under her anger and she loves her little brother.

 

Thanks for reading and leaving the lovely reviews.

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well that was funny!!!  "me, the baby daddy"  l really love that slang, sad that it has to be that way, but it's still a cute slang. 

I had been wondering what Bella put on the birth certificate and what Riley's last name was, so with him having the Swan last name I can see that was Bella's way of making sure to EXCLUDE Jacob from being a true father, regardless of the fact she was scared and did not want to be alone... she never had intentions of remaining married to Jacob longer than necessary!  Thanks for covering that for me, without my even having to ask about the birth certificate...  Your rock, but I'm also sure that your wonderful Beta's and other reviewers bring those wonderful points out too!!!!

Have a good one, hope to get at least one more chapter in this afternoon, and then will finish off after work today...  You rock!

Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

We'll be getting into the birth certificate a little later, but yes, Bella didnt list Jake as the father.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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