Date: 22 Oct 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wonderful story!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 35
I am so happy that Jasper and Bella are both so at peace with themselves and each other. :) I loved this story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
That sounds like a sexy and wonderful honeymoon. I am officially jealous of fictional characters. LOL
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 33
I'm glad that Bella got to go make peace with her dad, family and the wolves. That was really sweet of Jasper.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 32
Aro is almost like a creepy stalker in trying to wrangle out Jasper and Bella's phone number and where abouts.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
I would love not to have to go through any planning bull crap. LOL
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Dam! It sounds like a week was way too long to agree to. LOL
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 29
I definitely agree with all of Bella's worries and her hurry to get Jasper alone away from the crazy.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well it sounded really tough on Alice and Edward, but their dumb asses CHOSE it. All of the others who had a rough life didn't have a choice. sigh......
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
I don't know if I could have been as mature as Bella. I would probably be like Garrett, ready to kick some ass. And what the hell is up Tanya's ass? That hussy has no pony in this race, so to speak. ugh..........
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
The olturi kings are being very thoughtful and nice. Carlisle's attitude about Edward and Alice is kind of annoying.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved how they dealt with Vicki, the body swapper and the hordes. Aro better play nice. They won't fall for his bull shit.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love that Bella and Garrett knew how to support the 3 through their shock of becoming free for the first time in their lives.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love that Bella and Garrett knew how to support the 3 through their shock of becoming free for the first time in their lives.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love their tricky confuse and disable plan. ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love that they are so great together as a group and that they realize their great luck and are so appreciative of it...... That's just so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad they are sharing more with Garrett. Hopefully soon, he'll get the full story. I have good feelings about him. Jasper and Bella keeping each other calm is pretty swoony.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
It sounds like Garrett fits right in with the whole group.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Even Peter's accidents seem to work out. I am so thrilled that Bella could comfort and talk to Jasper again so easily.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
I loved their funny training time and also Bella and Jasper's quiet talking time. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that they are keeping the new information from Carlisle for right now. He would be all over that. Jasper being all worried about Bella and sheepish to bother her is too cute.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
I laughed at Bella sighing at the Cullens retreat. hahaha
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
I KNEW Bella would be great for Jasper. I hope that discussion helped him as much as it seems. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor Jasper.... It's so sad that he has doubted himself for so long. Bella will be good for him.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love that Jasper and the 'official' tour guide just left the Culens alone at the house. LOL
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella sure is more mature or more thinking about changes that eeryone else is for sure.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
It sounds like the Cullens are getting more truth than they expected. But they seem to be accepting it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
It sounds like Bella is more pissed or angry about why they ignored Jasper than her own situation. hmmmm.........
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Since Bella was changing and adapting for 6 dam years, I don't think it's that weird really that she is calm and used to blood lust etc....
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Those 4 Cullens sure as hell don't deserve any forgiveness freebies. Carlisle at least should have known some of the shit Bella went through or would have had to go through.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
This reads like a sciense text and is fascinating. You have a brilliant imagination.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad that Charlie was allowed to know and be in on things.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
It sounded like een though Bella was hurting and coping;....she was so confused.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
So vamps are like drugs ....... literally in Bella's or any human's case.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is really going into detail with Pete, Char and Jasper, huh?
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well holy fuck...going through the vampire change for four dam years??? That is awful!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella sure is a determined survivor and feisty in this chapter.
Date: 22 Nov 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
I really enjoyed reading this story thankyou
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 35
Nice ending. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter. I really appreciate hearing what you thought.
So pleased you enjoyed the story.
:)-J
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
woo hoo yummmy honeymoon. Happy lemon dance.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
wonderfully sweet reunion
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 32
Aro is sneaky but very smart. Glad they have something formal for the wolves too.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow jasper is so sweet
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
glad they stayed tp help, but stayed firm with Aro
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 29
Kinda weak on Eddie's part. Surprised the family didnt jump on the bandwagon with him lying to them all. Glad B got her say though. Skankya is pathetic. Happy for Garrett
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
hmm Weak on alice's story but understandable to a point. Cant wait to see what pusssyward has to say.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
I knew Skankya would be a biatch. Pussyward appears. Wonder what lies they will concoct?
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Was wondering when someone would bring up e and A's bonds. Aro is cool in your story. I like that
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 25
Bad Ass Team Whitlock (I count B and g as Whitlocks too.... swan-whitlocks if you prefer).
Aro is a trip.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
Agree with keeping B away from the V. Aro would be greedy I'm sure. Go bad Ass Team Whitlock!!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Hope someone was keeping the V informed so they dont come after Jasper and crew.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
Go bad ass Vamp team
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
Road trip!!! Garrett seems like a great guy. hope hes on the up and up. Wonder who they'll meet up with first.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
aww poor garrett. Glad he got away. Cool with new shield fighting.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter. They are so cute with the hugs and kisses.
training will come in handy I expect. hmmm guessing Tricky Vicky is behind all the nomad killings and such?
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
wonderufl chapter. Great first kiss and conversation. Cool how she is learning about her shield and all.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
ooh her shield appears. Love it.
Awww lying in bed together....its a start.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
em is so funny. Glad they came up with a reasonable story.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad bella is so supportive. Guess Alice never told him she didnt blame him either. Eddie was such a pussy.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
aww poor jasper. Everyone picking on him
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Never really believed Laurant was truly mated to Irina, but ah well. No one wants Skankya around either I bet.
Aww J and B seems to be getting closer.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
wow so smart and rational. Peter is hilarious.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOl for arguing over arguing. Glad B is getting one on one time with Jasper. Wonder if Malice is watching the family and freaking out right now.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow she is strong and so smart.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Go kick ass Bella
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
ah the family is coming. Wonder how Rose will react to her now?
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow so creative you are.
Ummm How does Sam keep it from the other wolves with the hive mind and all I wonder?
Bella's been a busy beaver.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ah That explains where Alice went. Pussyward is a moron.
ok off too bed. Read more tomorrow.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Jake is a wanker. Glad the rest of the pack was on her side.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Always thought Jake squirmed his way back into her life to easily in the books.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Id be a bit pissed at alice too
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
oooh So Jasper changes her without knowing who she is. interesting. Wow guess the disguise was really good.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
oooh liking the start to this.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 35
Aww love it
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
okay that was confusing why would he just jump her like that?
Author's Response:
It feels an age since I wrote this. I hope I explain it in the next chapter.
If not he was in a vamp war where torture was common place. Her emotions were emitting severe pain from the small amount of venom in her system, a plausible torture method?
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
hum intersting i guess this is peter and charlotte right?
Author's Response:
The next chapter will fill you in!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love your story, it is so different from alot of ones with jasper & bella, I love the whole changing theory.
I love that Aro was grateful for their help, it's nice to see he has a good side in your story..I hope you get jasper and bella mated soon....
Author's Response:
They have a family reunion to deal with first but... they will get together.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
:)-J
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
I decided to give this a read and I'm glad I did. I have thoroughly enjoyed it so far. I love the idea of the venom not being able to be totally sucked out of a bite. Looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
:)-J
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Intresting start.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)-J
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm loving this! I should be working and yet I am consumed with your story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :)-J