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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 3:52 PM Title: Author's Note!

i'm glad you are going to rewrite this story because there were a few confusing parts in some chapters ;) but i hope you don't change the fact that they have 2 sets of twins ;) and that they fall in love so quickly ;D

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 10:23 PM Title: Epilogue

So sweet!

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:42 PM Title: Author's Note!

All in all Big Green Tractor 1 has great potential!  The storyline was very unique and it has so many good aspects to really extend into a great suspense filled story!  I never discourage an author about their stories and I haven't put any of mine on here cause I just don't deem them worthy yet, but I know you probably know exactly what needs to be done on this (which are little things mostly like timelines, and wording mistakes here and there, like whether he is Cullen or Masen & Id go with Cullen since his real parents were so mean!).  I know a story is hard to begin with to get all the exact points to where they need to be.  I can come up with the concept and what I want to happen but can't write alot of what I call 'the meat' of the story...the fillers or slow burn so to speak.  So I just want to say take your time, write her heart out and when you are finished I would really love to read the new version.  I think you will even find out that the more you write the longer, the sexier, and more suspense filled this story will become and that will be fine and give us readers more fun.   Please, by no means take this as criticism...just encouragement from one reader who wished she had the courage to put her stories on here too!!

Hugs, Stephanie

Author's Response:

First, I would just like to take the time to thank you for reading my wonderfully craptastic story!! I know that I made many a mistake throughout. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me such a wonderful review. I always love to hear constructive criticism, it really does make a difference when a reviewer is nice and not hateful. Thank you so much for your kind words.



Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 5:01 PM Title: Author's Note!

I think if you are going to rewrite then do so. The story is nice and so was the ending. It was not intense only in a few places. Resolved quickly so I would say nice short story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chance Encounter

Okay this story is moving fast. Edward is rather unbelievable. A doctor that will work on a farm. This stuff is hard work. I am not sure about falling in love and marriage in a weeks time.  I know it happens.

Nice story though. Country life is different more natural and not fake.

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