[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2017 9:11 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Edward's instincts are spot on
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:09 AM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
So good
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2017 11:51 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
Wonderful and pretty true to life without the 'E' factor.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2017 5:27 AM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
Yep. I was so wrong Charlie was behind the threat to Bella. Really good chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2017 3:36 AM Title: Bad Taffy
Wow. Still think it's Charlie and the Russian is coincidence. I know I'm so totally wrong. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2017 1:38 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Excellent chapter. I reckon it's Charlie. Glad Emmett and Edward are trying to make their relationship work. Thanks Really having a hard time trying to get my reviews through to you. Just the reviews. Nothing else. :(. ???
Date: 18 Oct 2017 11:19 PM Title: Light my Fire
Wonderful. Thanks
Date: 18 Oct 2017 2:17 AM Title: Round Two
Their lives will never be mundane. Lol.
Date: 18 Oct 2017 2:16 AM Title: Round Two
Their lives will never be mundane. Lol.
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:20 AM Title: Round One
really enjoyable chapter. Love Nanny. Thanks
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:20 AM Title: Round One
really enjoyable chapter. Love Nanny. Thanks
Date: 17 Oct 2017 9:50 PM Title: The Game
So very enjoyable. Thanks
Date: 17 Oct 2017 9:49 PM Title: The Game
So very enjoyable. Thanks
Date: 30 Aug 2017 4:12 PM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Oh shit, Edward killed Charlie.
Now I'm affraid what he will do to Jane.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 2:45 PM Title: Bebella
I am about to start rereading this series once again. Just wanted to tell you that this series is amazing, by far my favorite fanfic... I can see it as a movie. So much better than 50 Shades lol!
Date: 02 Aug 2017 10:01 PM Title: Epilogue
I truly enjoyed this story. Your description detail and dialogue were incredible. Great job!
Date: 30 Jul 2017 5:36 PM Title: Decision/Draw
Loved it!
Date: 30 Jul 2017 3:16 PM Title: Round Three
Loved it!
Date: 30 Jul 2017 12:43 AM Title: Round Two
Loved it!
Date: 18 May 2017 2:34 AM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
Great edition!
Date: 16 May 2017 4:03 AM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
Great edition!
Date: 16 May 2017 3:32 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake
Great great insight into Bella's state of mind while Edward was away!
Date: 16 May 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV
I loved read about their first time from Edward's POV!
Date: 15 May 2017 6:43 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
Loved this!
Date: 15 May 2017 6:42 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
Loved this!
Date: 10 May 2017 12:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Love this chapter and how they manage the kids. I hope u plan to finish After the Storm. I love Sonny and Maggie.
Date: 09 May 2017 10:16 PM Title: Icing on the Cake
These two are just adorable!
Date: 09 May 2017 3:23 PM Title: Under Pressure
I loved every reading this again!
Date: 05 May 2017 9:07 AM Title: Under Pressure
R&E AREN'T the godparents yet...after everything, C&E SHOULD be Sonny's godparents. Sadly, Bella just isn't as close to her old life like Rose, Alice, Leah... As much as Esme bugs me 90% of the time, Carlisle is amazing and has proven to be the best brother B could have asked for, even if he gets creepy and has bad judgment sometimes. I guess the PERFECT pairing would be Aro and Leah....Bella and Edward's BFFs but I'm old fashioned and get choosing a married catholic couple...not sure of Leah's religion but I digress. I was hoping that Bella had a natural birth. C-Sections may be convenient but they have a much larger risk to the mother. I knew a girl who died after a c-section...the incision became infected and...she died...it was horrible.
Date: 04 May 2017 11:25 PM Title: Helluva Day
I know you wrote this a while ago (my second time reading but it's been a while) and I know QS is not on FanFic anymore but some of the sequels are??? What's up with that? I have read MUCH worse than your lemonades and the sequels are just as bad in a good way? For example Dirty South Drug Wars? Great fiction but just as dirty and violent. I had one author tell me if your not in the in crowd, you are looked at with a fine tooth comb and picked on which is total bull shit!!! A good story, is a good story. I almost exclusively read here now because I get sick of the "editing" on the other site. Love everything you have written!!!
Date: 04 May 2017 7:09 AM Title: Oobotz
I don't think Edward's feelings are ridiculous. In a way, Bella is having an emotional affair. The only one in this chapter that is ridiculous is Bella. I can't stand when women use their pregnancy as an excuse for bad behavior and she has been playing that card since she got the "good news". Fuck Esme too! Unlike Esme, Bella does have siblings and technically they picked Carlisle's brother and his wife. I just wonder how Bella would feel if Aro was Arlene...she would go crazy so being a raging bitch, Edward sending Jacob home, and then her calling him? Ya, passive aggressive much? Plus, Edward constantly tells her how beautiful she looks so her "I'm fat and disgusting" is getting old too...I would hate for her to be appreciative of anything in her life. You would think SHE grew up in Esme's shoes...how quickly one forgets where they came from and everything they should be grateful for...Edward should feel unbalanced...who can blame him!!!
Date: 02 May 2017 8:03 AM Title: SunSational Day
Why is Esme still drawing a salary when she can't work and Rose makes &100 an hour under the table? Idk know why that whole money break down bugs me but Esme is such a controlling person kindly of driving me crazy!!!! I hope C keeps his word because she is going to bitch which is ALL she even does ...nice having a break from her
Date: 01 May 2017 1:17 PM Title: Parts of life
I knew no of liked this Jacob. Too bad he had to die. Bella warned him though to,stay away from Nicole.
Date: 01 May 2017 12:10 PM Title: Helluva Day
Love how they fight and then make-up!
Date: 30 Apr 2017 5:54 AM Title: Get It
I realize, beside the shit with Carlisle, that you are going for a happy E&B after all the drama but, since Bella is always wanting answers I don't get the last lemon? I think that's the first time he has said he needed to talk and she gets naked? I was kind of hoping to see a true softer, more open Edward when he finally told her the truth about his Mom's death. When Bella had the panic attack in Florida, that was all in BPOV so to me, yes, Edward was concerned but we didn't get the range of emotions that were evident in this chapter. I felt like this moment was a real turning point in his emotional availability and willingness to be open with her. This story is definitely "M" but it's so much deeper than some soft porn TwiFic. You are an awesome writer and I love your style, but with this chapter I feel like you sold yourself short. I feel like these two are onions and you've done a masterful job peeling back the layers...just feel like you missed an opportunity to peel back another layer of Edward. Also, fuck Esme...I am so tired of that pretentious bitch!!! She sure likes spending money, wanted a tanning salon, wants to throw her mafia weight around but kicks C out for getting made? She is a whiny, bitchy, entitled idiot and I don't blame C for cheating on her. The apple juice part in FL summed up her whole character....mine mine mine... But, C was an idiot for marrying her too. It's like they are strangers who pretend to know each other
Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:26 PM Title: Quick Like A Cat
Esme is an idiot and I can't blame Carlisle that bitch would drive me nuts too and I give Bella credit for attempting to handle her but it's like she's bipolar and pregnancy is no excuse
Date: 24 Apr 2017 1:39 AM Title: Par for the Course
Love this!
Date: 23 Apr 2017 11:46 PM Title: This is it
Marcus' days are numbered! Love it!
Date: 23 Apr 2017 7:36 PM Title: SunSational Day
That potatoe and egg sandwich made me nauseous and I'm not pregnant!
Date: 23 Apr 2017 3:59 PM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day
I love that they are so happy!
Date: 23 Apr 2017 1:30 PM Title: Prove It
Seems as though they waited until there was a houseful of people before serving the warrant
Date: 13 Apr 2017 1:09 PM Title: Something in the Water
Hate it when they fight, but u write it so realistically.
Date: 13 Apr 2017 3:16 AM Title: Quick Like A Cat
Boy, Carlisle is trouble!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2017 3:03 AM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince
I'm glad Edward liked the pirates! Ha! That scene was funny.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 3:37 AM Title: The Game
I'm totally digging your complicated ( and hot) Edward! I love how they both fuck up and say whatever ( or whateva) they are thinking. It seems pretty realistic and I love it. Thanks for the great read! You are very talented!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 2:05 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow! What a ride. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2017 2:02 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow! That was an amazing story. I really enjoyed it
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:31 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Just love these two!
Date: 23 Mar 2017 2:47 AM Title: Hot
Well, it was a nice thought too bad it went sour!
Date: 07 Mar 2017 11:58 PM Title: Round Two
Thisis the 4th time I'm rereading the series and still loving it.. Always!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 2:13 PM Title: Stages
This has to be one of the best Mafia stories ever written!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 4:39 AM Title: When Shit Rolls Downhill
Hmmm, makes u wonder if Edwa d had anything to do with Charlie being shot!
Date: 04 Mar 2017 3:54 AM Title: Edward
I'm reading through this again. Can't remember if this is the second or third time, but I still love it the same.
Date: 04 Mar 2017 1:29 AM Title: A Bitch Named Karma
I'd forgotten about this part of the story. So glad to be re-reading!
Date: 03 Mar 2017 7:45 PM Title: Antipasto
Poor Bella, they just won't let up on the baby!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 11:08 PM Title: The Trouble in Little Odessa
This is so great!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 9:50 PM Title: Bad Taffy
I love this Bella!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 7:56 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
This was one of my favorite chapters!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:34 PM Title: Light my Fire
I feel like I say this every review, but each chapter is just as good if not better the second time.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:33 PM Title: Light my Fire
I feel like I say this every review, but each chapter is just as good if not better the second time.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:32 PM Title: Light my Fire
I feel like I say this every review, but each chapter is just as good if not better the second time.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:31 PM Title: Light my Fire
I feel like I say this every review, but each chapter is just as good if not better the second time.
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:28 PM Title: Light my Fire
I feel like I say this every review, but each chapter is just as good if not better the second time.
Date: 07 Feb 2017 12:06 AM Title: TKO
I love this. Can't say it enough.
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:00 PM Title: Decision/Draw
I can't tell u how much I love this story!
Date: 06 Feb 2017 6:23 PM Title: Round Three
I love how she handled Carlisle and that she told Edward about his visit.
Date: 06 Feb 2017 4:19 PM Title: Round Two
I love that she squashed the Vegas thing. Nanny needs to be there.
Date: 06 Feb 2017 3:31 PM Title: Round One
I would think Nanny would want all the bells and whistles.
Date: 29 Jan 2017 6:41 PM Title: Aruba
Once again another great one.
Date: 25 Jan 2017 4:29 AM Title: The Game
I think this is more fun to read the second time than it was the first!
Date: 24 Jan 2017 10:35 PM Title: The Game
I think this is more fun to read the second time than it was the first!
Date: 15 Jan 2017 6:01 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two
Just as great as I remember it!
Date: 14 Jan 2017 5:08 PM Title: The Wedding Part One
I love Bella's attitude and how sweet she was with Edward's grandmother.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 3:17 PM Title: Bella
I love that they are talking to each each.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 6:54 AM Title: Edward
It's been a while since I read this! Love remembering how Edward and Bella got together.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 5:46 AM Title: Bebella
Just as luscious the second time as it was the first!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2017 5:43 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Not sure if you're still active on this website, but in the off chance you ever peek back at your stories, I wanted to let you know this one goes down as one of my favorites. I'm reading it for the 3rd or 4th time I believe. I was hysterically giggling and laughing while reading the banter of Edward, his father and Marcus in this chapter, and other times I'm crying along with the characters. You do a beautiful job getting emotion into your stories, and I'm grateful you've provided them here for us. I can't even imagine how these scenarios end up in your mind, but they are sheer brilliance. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2017 5:42 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Not sure if you're still active on this website, but in the off chance you ever peek back at your stories, I wanted to let you know this one goes down as one of my favorites. I'm reading it for the 3rd or 4th time I believe. I was hysterically giggling and laughing while reading the banter of Edward, his father and Marcus in this chapter, and other times I'm crying along with the characters. You do a beautiful job getting emotion into your stories, and I'm grateful you've provided them here for us. I can't even imagine how these scenarios end up in your mind, but they are sheer brilliance. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2017 5:41 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger
Not sure if you're still active on this website, but in the off chance you ever peek back at your stories, I wanted to let you know this one goes down as one of my favorites. I'm reading it for the 3rd or 4th time I believe. I was hysterically giggling and laughing while reading the banter of Edward, his father and Marcus in this chapter, and other times I'm crying along with the characters. You do a beautiful job getting emotion into your stories, and I'm grateful you've provided them here for us. I can't even imagine how these scenarios end up in your mind, but they are sheer brilliance. Thank you!
Date: 20 Oct 2016 10:13 AM Title: Olde E
Loved the previous chapters but this is just bull
Date: 20 Oct 2016 10:06 AM Title: Bebella
What the fuck? Im not liking this fucking chapter at all is edward gonna cheat im really not sure if i wanna keep reading i do not tolerate cheating
Date: 19 Oct 2016 11:35 PM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13
Loved it all!
Date: 18 Oct 2016 2:52 AM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake
I'd be trying to bring a lawsuit to the feds!
Oh and....you called the firearm in the salon a "rifle" and then called it a "shotgun"......those are two completely different types of firearms and shouldn't be used interchangeably.....just in case you didn't know.
:)
Date: 14 Oct 2016 10:29 PM Title: Par for the Course
Way to go Bella!
Date: 14 Oct 2016 9:16 PM Title: This is it
Turning point....love it!
Date: 12 Oct 2016 4:07 AM Title: Get It
I received like three calls in a row from a strange number from NY. I looked it up on line and it said "Fleischmanns".
I looked that up and it said it was in Middleton,NY...upstate in Delaware county.
I was like.....I know where that is...kinda!
How cool is that!?
Date: 09 Oct 2016 5:15 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots
Loved the chapter!
Date: 07 Oct 2016 4:07 AM Title: Round Two
Loved it!
Date: 05 Oct 2016 4:29 AM Title: Edward
Liking it so far !
Date: 05 Oct 2016 3:49 AM Title: Bebella
Loved that you wrote her being real. ..passing gas and all......so darn funny!
Date: 10 Sep 2016 7:38 PM Title: Bebella
Seriously my fourth time rereading this book!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:45 AM Title: Stages
I laughed so hard at the had sanitizer sentence that i cried!!!!
Date: 18 Jul 2016 2:32 AM Title: TKO
Part of this chapter cracked me up!!! lollol