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Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 6:36 AM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

Holy shit that last part was hot! I could see Edward yelling that stuff, i would be laughing just hard as Bella did.

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 4:31 AM Title: Wrapped Around my Finger

Lol ok this chapter made me laught so hard. Boy Bella sure is acting more and more like Edward.

Reviewer: Sophiasophia Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 12:07 PM Title: Bebella

Just wanted to say how much I love the storm series! I find myself thinking about the characters during my day - sign for me of a great, compelling story! Thanks & congrats

Reviewer: DarkBitterSea Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2014 4:05 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots

I didn't understand Bella's nicknames for Aro and Felix.

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 10:56 PM Title: Hot

Its Hindi not Hindu. Hindu is a religion, Hindi is a language

 

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 8:16 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two

I can't even tell you how many times I have read this story but I love it every time!

Reviewer: VenRobsessed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:18 AM Title: Bebella

Re reading again. This story never get old for me :')

Reviewer: Tami101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:38 AM Title: Checks and Balances

I am very upset with you lexi. I need to know what was Marcus's beef with Edward. It literally came out of no where. I love your story and cant wait to finish this one and move to the next in the series :D

~Love T

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 5:16 PM Title: Bebella

Read this series on FFN and am reading it again here. Love this series. So much fun!

Reviewer: QueenSpicy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 2:21 AM Title: Aruba

I loved this chapter. It reminded me of my brother when he had his first serious girl. I haven't laughed this hard in a while.

Reviewer: LesleyLunaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 2:04 AM Title: Something in the Water

This is my 2nd time reading QS and I am so bothered by this chapter. Honestly, there's a lot of stories where I can't stand Bella, and in general I like her in this story but since I have read all 4 parts, I now see that Bella really is never truly there or understanding of Edward, she regularly hits him, gets in his face but he's the villain in this chapter. The examples of her self centeredness go from Sonny's shooting, defending Aro (constantly), her need to be friend his associates, and then turning into a victim when her actions have adverse reactions from Edward. She is so damn judgmental of every female yet she chooses to form extremely strong bonds with men instead of women. The story begins with her having a grand total of 3 friends, 2 being relatives, yet she exudes this self centered pity party about friends? Basically, it really bugs me that she never tells Edward in this chapter that she's sorry for objectifing him, nor asks him how he feels about everyone being pregnant, and she somehow makes Lexi getting pregnant about her, she doesn't even ask him how he feels about his Dad having a love child when she knows he has a ton of issues about his father. I really feel sorry for Edward in this chapter and yes,what he did was wrong but for his one sin which he gets punched for, she commits a dozen and without any ramifications, just pisses me off. 

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2014 3:27 PM Title: Bebella

loved it!

Reviewer: gopi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 6:08 PM Title: Bebella

i have read this story 10 times . its awesome

 

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 10:50 AM Title: The Game

This is the 4th time of reading this story. I think this chapter is one of my favourite the emotion is so intense. I feel for Bella for the realisation that she is in fact all alone. It's hard to imagine been in that position.

So well written you have captioned the intense feeling they both have for each other and in Edward's case trying to deny it.

Reviewer: egwynne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2013 9:07 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh my goodness I forgot how adorable little Damion is! I'm done reading Quiet Storm for the third time! On to Weather the Storm! LOVE THESE! I could read the, over and over again!

Reviewer: bittersweetleo Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 4:28 PM Title: Round Two

Oh, my! I rarely review, but this chapter ... is one of the most refreshing pieces I've read in a while. And the tampon was pure genius, I loved it!

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 8:02 PM Title: Poker Face

I had to say, YES!!!! Born This Way actually IS Express Yourself. Nobody ever agrees with me when I say it.

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 5:36 AM Title: Round Two

Just gotta say I am loving this story so far. Someone in Sarge's Girls group over on facebook pimped it.

Reviewer: sweet 18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:00 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma

okay if I were glad that I held onto that story, it would be next to nothing compared to how I feel now. The story is a jem and keeps getting brighter and more beautiful. My favourite seen is the one where Ed Sr and Marcus is bickering , especially when imagining them with characters you put... Thank you for entertaining me

Reviewer: sweet 18 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 4:58 PM Title: Aruba

okay the story is interesting to say the least and mobward is always a great plot, butt that's the problem, I don'T know what the plot is the characters are all contradicting, they say one thing and they do another, they do something and then the next it is the complete opposite, I tried reading the series before because it got a huge number of reviews but I got so confused that i dropped it, I don't mean to be mean or hurtful in any way, because the story must be something great to get so much attention and recs. So if you can clear anything up, that eould be great...

Reviewer: Buffy_16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 5:32 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved Loved Loved this fanfiction! So excited you made sequels. Salute to Quiet Storm, the first fanfic I actually got through in it's entirety and loved every minute of it ;)

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:59 AM Title: Epilogue

This epilogue would make a wonderful first chapter for the sequel. It was very thorough and complete. I really liked it. I hate the thoughts of Edward smacking his son across the face everytime Sonny talks back to his mother though, since this kid has quite an attitude and he isn't even a teenager yet. Sounds like a lot of smacking is ahead for this kid to me. Oh boy. I know, it is like you said... not perfect parenting. (Oh and FYI it was in Stars and Sky outtake where Bella refers to the Prison visits being 1 hour long, rather than the 2 hours mentioned in this chapter and the Coming Home outtake. Just saying in case you care about that kind of thing and want to fix it.)

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 8:53 PM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake

Edward is tougher, and Bella seems more submissive. I didn't like that Edward, in his thoughts didn't care if he hurt Bella who was already very sore from too much sex with him, wanted to get off and wanted to get her pregnant more. I wonder how long he will be out this time, a year, two? Nothing has changed. Oh and FYI, you mentioned in this outtake that family visits in prison were two hours long, but in the other outtake it was mentioned that they were one hour long. Just mentioning this in case you would like to make them the same. Great story. Great outtake of course.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 6:08 PM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake

Great chapter. Sad that Edward won't even talk to Sonny and Damion on the phone. He can be selfish sometimes even with his family apparently. Maybe that is too harsh? It would do so much for them to just hear a few words from him. I started reading the Epilogue and then realized that most of these outakes happen before the Epilogue so I am reading them first. I gather there will not be any inclusion in any of these final chapters/outtakes the lead up to the arrest of Edward. That's a shame. I really would have liked to read that. I had hoped that would be in the Epilogue but it begins after Edward has returned home from incarceration. Maybe it gets mentioned later in that chapter? I'll find out soon enough. If it is not there, maybe it could be another outtake? Anyway, take care.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 5:23 PM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake

I think this may be my favorite chapter of this story, very exciting and touched my heart. So I gather Edward took care of Windsor...in his usual way. Thanks. I hope you are doing well and that you have access to the reviews people leave at this site. You deserve to know...

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 6:13 PM Title: Icing on the Cake

In this chapter and in the previous I noticed that you have set up the next story - the sequel - with a little foreshadowing. I must confess I looked ahead a little and I realize Edward and Bella will be spending some time apart, unfortunately. (Not that he doesn't deserve it or anything, but still.)

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 6:37 AM Title: Under Pressure

Very touching and vivid. It made me tear up in places. I usually hate reading about someone giving birth, but I I got quite emotional reading this one. Beautiful. This was my favorite chapter so far. Thanks.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 8:39 PM Title: Parts of life

Can't believe I'm saying this but poor Jacob. Poor Bella too... she has lost another friend.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:42 PM Title: Helluva Day

I really liked this chapter, very exciting,and a wild ride, that's for sure. I'm glad all Edward's jealousy over Jacob is out in the open now and put to bed...pun intended. I don't think they will be so out of sorts with each other anymore after this. It can happen so fast when two people are not communicating with each other about their problems. I think Bella finally believes him, that he still finds her beautiful. I wonder how many real life husbands with pregnant wives would feel the same way? I guess that's one of the reasons why we love Edward...he's beyond reality...he's our Edward.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:19 AM Title: Skip's Day Off

What a sweetheart. Who am I talking about? I think its obvious, hmm?

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:49 PM Title: Baby Blues

Great chapter. It feels like the end is nigh.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:41 PM Title: Checks and Balances

He should have sent a lower man to Virginia so he could take him out, or no that wouldn't work if the guy they meet usually meets with only guys he knows. So Edward should go to Virginia now so he has a cover story, otherwise Felix will know he was the one behind Marcus' murder and Aro's shooting. I really wasn't sure if Edward killed Aro or not. I really hoped all his talk of making Aro is second wasn't bullshit. He could have at least warned Aro that he would be shooting him to make the shooting look more plausible.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 2:02 PM Title: Par for the Course

Great chapter, very exciting. I am surprised Edward didn't have Caius at the house before he left, to watch over Bella, and drive her to Emmett's house. Marcus seemed pretty clear in his intentions. I also think he is not stupid where Aro is concerned... he knows how close Edward and Aro are, and Aro's number is up too... I hope he is ready for what ever Marcus has planned for him, since Edward didn't seem to be.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 12:45 PM Title: This is it

The Plot thickens...
I love it!

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:57 AM Title: SunSational Day

That really is not nice, Edward conducting business - a meeting or two, is one thing, but killing some guy at Bella's and Esme's legit business is another. Just my opinion of his actions, still a great chapter, and really realistic, I think.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 4:04 AM Title: Every Dog Has Its Day

I liked the combination of drama, humor, and love.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:59 PM Title: Something in the Water

Love how they made up, and that what happened at Twilight is not a secret to anyone right now.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:05 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity

I am glad that Bella told Edward the truth about what Carlisle did, at least part of it anyway. I really hate how Edward treats his brother though; he almost killed him. Carlisle could have brain damage now.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:20 AM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13

This entire story is amazing!  I'm very excited to read the sequels. The counterfeit red coupons, Bella toilet pictures, him wanting her to pass gas in front of him, checking out her tampon, freaking out on the doctor about her goods has been hilarious!  There are so many great parts of this story!  It has kept me smiling and laughing outloud!

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:58 AM Title: Quick Like A Cat

Bella is 100% right about what to do about Gail. Edward could get her a job at Bella Itallia or something... or even Twilight, but get her the f^^^ away from him and Carlisle. Damit!. Great Chapter. I don't think you read any reviews of this story anymore which is too bad. I would sure like to get even one review reply to know you are out there still and checking in. Oh well... great story.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:06 AM Title: Olde E

I really, really hated that Edward was so interested in that girl Gail. He actually imagined what it would be like to f*** her, and felt protective of her and I'm worried that you will have him do something stupid. I mean he was more than just attracted to her. I really like what he said to Aro about cheating not being worth hurting the one you love, etc. I am also so relieved that he spared Aro. I would like to know more about how that decision came about.Incidentally I am suspicious of Gail too, Gail who has red hair like maybe could she be Victoria and James could be the new bartender?

Reviewer: katied8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:49 AM Title: This is it

Best chapter yet! This is one of my favorites! This and the one....oooh wait SPOILERS! I won't ruin it for anyone new! 

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 4:55 PM Title: Boxed In

Great chapter. I liked the interaction with Lamont, and Bella.

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Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:43 AM Title: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

Got to say that I loved most of this chapter except the fight Bella started with Edward. It seems to me that he is way more understanding than anyone I can imagine in his situation and given who the guy is, well I don't get why he doesn't just blow his top and call her out on being the unreasonable, seemingly spoiled, ungrateful adolescent she acts like sometimes. I can't imagine how he can remain calm during these times and then she kept pushing him away. Well she got her way and the chapter ended well with both of them happy with each other which is good. I sure hope when they go home that it is not too late to figure out that Jane and Aro are behind everything. God knows what they have done while no one is watching them, and Edward and his Bella could be coming home to all kinds of dangerous plots to kill them and Aro. I hope Brutus is ok.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:06 PM Title: Stages

So Edward has promised Little Odessa to Aro and Markus said no. Will Edward respect his wishes, and possibly piss off Aro, or will Edward give the territory to Aro and piss off Markus and probably Caius too who likely Markus wants to give the area to instead? Calm before the storm... internal beefs, Russian beefs,family beefs, any or all of the above could be the shit that hits the fan to come. I wonder if Jasper really did a good job with body disposal? Love how supportive Edward is with his wife.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 1:45 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma

Watch your six, means to watch your back...I guess that is what you meant by ass? This chapter was really sad...been there and done that. I don't get why Edward punches his brother so much, or Aro for that matter. I guess because he knows they won't hit him back. So unfair. I'm surprised Carlisle and Edward are so close, since Edward is so volatile. Carlisle pushes so hard though; not the best time to push Edward I would say.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:07 AM Title: Antipasto

Great chapter. Love how Edward takes care of Bella, stands up for her, protects her, worships her. She is pretty cool, although sometimes she really does push things too far...acts like a teenager sometimes.

Reviewer: katied8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 9:15 PM Title: Diplomatic Immunity

Just a reminder lol I love your stories! This series is amazing to me! Hehe have a great day and thank you for writing this so that the skip can help me through tooth extraction lol!

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 7:30 PM Title: Bad Taffy

You don't review reply, so I have no idea if you read the reviews that are left for this story anymore. Too bad...it would have been nice. Anyway, the suspense in this chapter, even though I already knew Bella would be o.k., was palpable. Loved it. I also really liked that Edward did not shut Bella out while they were figuring out what to do about the Russian. So Bella and Aro are closer now; he has a hot voice to go with the face. I bet Edward will take him off protecting Bella now.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 7:06 AM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots

what a great chapter, the shooting was very exciting. I was surprised that Emmett has so much disdain for Edward. I do get it though why Emmett was offended when Edward bought better game tickets, and also why Edward didn't get why Emmett would be offended by that. I really respect Edward for his self control both with being calm and trying to work things out with Emmett, and for allowing Aro to take care of things in Jersey. Really great chapter. Thanks.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 4:57 AM Title: Light my Fire

I hate when they have those childish fights. I thought there were some beautiful moments of tenderness between them, trust and adoration in this chapter. I sure hope she doesn't lie to him about where she is going. She will ruin the trust he has in her. She has to remember that trust is difficult for him and he met her more than half way with the telling her the truth about where he is and as much as he can about what he is doing. She has to remember that Esme and Carlisle's relationship is theirs and Carlisle lies to her about women. She and Edward can set different rules for themselves, and it would not be right for her to disregard them.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 6:00 AM Title: Round Three

So he is a sweetheart and a made man too. I really hope he doesn't do the hit himself... just to get money for a house. Bella wouldn't want the house if she knew what he had to do to get it. Carlisle scared me; I'm glad Edward knows most of what went down and Edward put him in his place. I'm glad there was not any major fall out over his visit. I really like that the angst that happens gets sorted in the same chapter. Thanks.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:24 AM Title: Bella

I love his accent! 

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 2:45 AM Title: Round Two

They have these horendous fights, but maybe getting through this last one taught them something, like that they can get through it and end up letting the other in just a little more. It is like they are each other's drug of choice.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 8:21 PM Title: Aruba

Carlisle and Ed really are...friends, as well as brothers.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 6:38 PM Title: The Game

Made me cry...and smile.

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Date: 01 Oct 2013 8:18 AM Title: The Wedding Part Two

Perfection.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 6:39 AM Title: The Wedding Part One

So glad they have honesty between them, and that Bella is standing up for herself. I have to admit I am really liking this Edward and Bella; and really enjoying this story. I get the feeling Edward really has no idea how hard he is falling for our lovely Bella. He's going to fall so hard, a concussion is sure to follow. I for one am going to enjoy watching it unfold.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 5:14 AM Title: Bella

Glad, so glad that Bella showed she has a backbone, demanded some answers, and I think she will not lower herself to doing anything beneath her. Edward was respectful once again and so he should be.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:46 AM Title: Edward

Alice is a real piece of work. She has a twisted sense of what it means to take care of someone you love. Bella had no idea what Alice had planned for her, poor girl. Bella is going to College because she wants to better herself, she wants out of this life... she sure as shit deserves to be loved, not to be treated as whore. Alice and Carlisle are both a couple of white trash low lifes. I hope Edward treats Bella right, and if not I hope Bella kicks him, his brother and her cousin to the curb.

Reviewer: Shakespeare101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:27 PM Title: Bebella

I was reading CaraNo's story, Grand Finale and she mentioned yours, and as you know some of your characters made their introduction to me in her story. I just had to find them in your story and I wasn't disappointed. Very interesting first chapter and I really love how respectful Edward is with Bella. Protective too. The fart dialogue had me in stitches with laughter. Thanks

Reviewer: katied8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 3:04 PM Title: Round One

Started the series over! I just had to get my skip fix! Thanks again for this amazing series!

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 5:31 PM Title: Round One

Oh I think I love your Nanny. But I do wonder if she just played Edward.  Either way she is smart old lady.

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Date: 25 Sep 2013 10:56 PM Title: Edward

I find slightly amusing that Alice wanted Bella to be Carlise's goomah, but had a  thing against Edward giving her money. If was Bella I would be upset with Alice getting me into a set up like that with Carlilse behind my back. It will be interesting what Bella thinks. Especially when she shows up at the wedding.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 4:05 AM Title: Epilogue

I think I stopped reading here because I was so afraid the sequel would show the years when Edward was away, and I'm such a wuss, I didn't think I could deal with it.

So now, I'm much stronger, I can handle anything and I'm going to read the sequel now, but I'm still crossing my fingers on the angst.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 6:17 PM Title: Under Pressure

Baby!

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:00 PM Title: Par for the Course

OMG! That was awesome!  She was so getting on my nerves this chapter.  She redeemed herself though. I wanna be like her (minus the whining) when I grow up.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:29 AM Title: Prove It

Poor girl...never a dull moment in her life.

Reviewer: Browns Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 2:02 AM Title: Something in the Water

I'm still reading, and I said it before and I'll say it again...Carlisle is an asshole.

Reviewer: Browns Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 2:19 PM Title: Hot

I can't believe I forgot all this stuff.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 6:56 PM Title: Bad Taffy

I love it...she's more than the typical mobster wife.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 5:33 PM Title: Lousy Day at the Slots

Your mob speak is excellent. I figured out most of it without the glossary.  Not so impressive sice this is my second time reading the story. Lol.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 5:22 AM Title: Decision/Draw

I don't care how nice he was this chapter...I still think he's an asshole.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:57 AM Title: Round Three

Carlisle is an asshole.

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:46 AM Title: Round Two

It did lighten the mood.  Boy is he possesive. 

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Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:49 AM Title: Round One

They're both so stubborn and delusional it's hilarious. 

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 11:50 PM Title: Aruba

Bwahahaha he hung up on him.

I strongly dislike Carlisle.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:03 PM Title: The Game

Lol...this chapter was awesome.  I forgot how posessive he was...that's the difference between this Edward and the one in BG.  The possesiveness is more obvious, it was implied, okay heavily implied, but here it's more blatant and oh so good.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 5:14 AM Title: The Wedding Part One

I like that Bella has her wit here.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:23 AM Title: Bella

Alice was a little mean in this chapter.  Actually she was a downright bitch.  Great chapter.

By the way, I'm noticing a location theme in your stories.

Reviewer: Browns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 3:35 AM Title: Edward

Great chapter...like being in Edward's head.

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Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:40 AM Title: Bebella

I needed another, Mobward to read while I wait for BG to update, so I thought why not read the original. 

I forgot how funny this was...

Reviewer: Birdde Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:52 AM Title: Round Two

This is crazy... I wouldn't have said yes... He put his hands on her... Like i would need a day or two to think about this....

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Date: 20 Jul 2013 8:36 AM Title: Epilogue

I really liked this story. And I have to admit that at first I didn't like it becaus the first chapter is so ghetto but in the end I ended up loving it! Great job! It even managed to crack me up! :) 

Reviewer: JessTwilightMatrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 4:35 AM Title: Get It

Oh man! This story cracks me up! I can't wait to finish reading it! 

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Date: 05 Jul 2013 8:30 AM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13

Loved it!

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Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:40 AM Title: Stars in the Sky Outtake

Loved it! Poor Bella!

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Date: 05 Jul 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter One in Edward's POV

Loved it!

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Date: 26 Jun 2013 8:43 AM Title: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake

Loved it!

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Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:17 AM Title: Coming Home An Edward Outtake

Loved it!

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 9:44 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 6:44 PM Title: Icing on the Cake

Loved it!

Reviewer: vipeers Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:54 AM Title: Leaving Plattsburgh Outtake of CH13

Loved this story.  Now it's on to WTS.  Thanks for sharing your imagination with the rest of us.

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:39 AM Title: Under Pressure

Loved it!

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 12:52 AM Title: Par for the Course

HOLY POOP! This is amazing!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:46 AM Title: Parts of life

Loved it!

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Date: 06 Jun 2013 8:56 PM Title: The Wedding Part Two

rereading the series for the 8th time.  Still the best!  Can't get enough of Mr. Fuckhot and Bebella!

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 12:03 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you so much for writing such a great story!  I loved it and can't wait to start the sequel!  This story had everything!  Gah!  So good!  Mwah!

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Date: 30 May 2013 7:31 PM Title: Olde E

I know Edward didn't actually do anything about Gail but he thought about it.  And it made my heart clench and hurt cause I didn't know which direction you were gonna take it.  But I'm glad he realized that it wouldn't be worth it to risk hurting or losing Bella. Thanks so much for writing such an awesome story!  Mwah!

Reviewer: zacharypay1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 1:29 PM Title: A Bitch Named Karma

Wow!  Edward is great!  Never heard of a guy taking care of tampons and pads and stuff and not freaking the fuck out!  Thanks so much for writing!  Mwah!

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