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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:16 AM Title: What Are We Gonna Do

ok after all the crap you are going to make it sooo civil huh and just keeping up that high moral standards with everyone not telling the truth and thinking it is ok... whatever... i should have stopped reading along time ago but i guess i am a glutton for punishment

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:12 AM Title: I Will Be

just in time to see em with rose!! because he has no idea you wiill be there!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:03 AM Title: Open Arms/ Realize/ On Bended Knee

oh after he buys you gifts and tells you how much money he is worth you decide to leave em.... yeah right!  i am with ya on that one  NOT

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:50 AM Title: Shameless

need i remind you you are not broken up and you are a cheater and a liar and have no right to judge em or ed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:47 AM Title: Sweet Dreams

this is STUPID!! bell is f-ing ed and em is f-ing rose...they all are a buch of a-holes and this story has no morals what so ever!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:44 AM Title: Ring The Alarm/ Don't Take Your Love Away

you shouldn't be worried about getting proof from him you should be breaking up with em you bitch!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:39 AM Title: Emotional Rollercoaster

you are shitty and wothless.... it is BS bella what you did yeah i would bel pissed at ed too he lied but you are a liar too

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:35 AM Title: What's A Man To Do

ok you both are sluts i am beginning to not like this story....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:31 AM Title: My Little Secret

if you love someone you don't go behind their backs a f-ing f someone else how stupid do you sound,  STUPID SLUT!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:28 AM Title: Do You Want To

bella you are a SLUT... break it off damn you get jealous but he isn't f-ing anyone else you are!! SLUT break it off

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:18 AM Title: A Beautiful Lie

ok that was really slutty!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:54 AM Title: Twisted

you go girl

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:30 AM Title: Make It Work

bell you need to ditch the crap!

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:39 PM Title: Dirty Dancing

Wow, dirty dancing with Edward! :) Yummy!

Reviewer: arwen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:27 PM Title: Make It Work

This story seems to be great, I hope she'll meet Edward soon!

Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: My Little Secret

So what are all the Letters in their IM for? BGP? EMGD?



Author's Response:

Ummm, BGP=Bella Good Pussy; EMD=Edward Mr. Good Dick <-------I feel dirty just saying it. Lol

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 6:36 PM Title: Epilogue

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:46 AM Title: Epilogue

Definitely enjoyed the story.  It's sad they couldn't have children of their own but they still got their happily ever after.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 6:03 PM Title: Epilogue

Sweet story. And I always love a hea.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:48 PM Title: What Are We Gonna Do

I understand we got this from B's pov and she's hurt, but I hope eventually she will remember all the lying she did for months to be w E.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:26 PM Title: I Will Be

Of course she's seeing Em! Why else would she have been so distant.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:47 PM Title: Open Arms/ Realize/ On Bended Knee

Man, B can't just say that she's leaving Em because he's cheating. So very uncool. She has to at least let him know she met someone else too.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:00 PM Title: Ring The Alarm/ Don't Take Your Love Away

Ugh! That feeling sucks. When you want someone so much and you're willing to forgive everything but you're scared shitless. Also dying to know about Em.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: Emotional Rollercoaster

Oh B. Oh E.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:26 PM Title: What's A Man To Do

Wow. He has some fucking nerve. At least B has been honest w him. At least he recognizes that he's a dick.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 6:10 AM Title: My Little Secret

Months? She needs to just end it w Em. Give it a few months and then start seeing E (well more publicly).

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:28 AM Title: Nobody Knows

What was he supposed to do?

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:34 AM Title: That's What It's Made For

So hot and so naughty. My stomach is a bundle of nerves- I can't imagine how B feels!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Twisted

Dun dun dun

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:47 AM Title: Hypothetically

Deep breath! Not innocent, but not exactly erotica and my pulse is racing from those texts!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:38 AM Title: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Oh the hotness! Sweet pic btw.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:28 AM Title: Dirty Dancing

Heart racing. Le sigh. I want to dance w E.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:20 AM Title: When I Saw You

OME! Love that hot automatic attraction. We all know who belongs together anyway;)

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: You're Not Sorry

At least they both agreed to work on it.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:41 AM Title: The Way We Are

Ok, that's so weird.  I was positive there were no hidden cameras in my apt but apparently there are.  This is (or was) my freakin' life!!!!!  Um, seriously, I could have written this; I've thought about writing it!

My gf's and I always joke that no matter what man you are with or marry, no matter where he comes from, what his family is like, what he does for a living... they are all pretty much the effing same!!!!  Hahahahaha

Oh, and Em's bs about turning it around on B?  When he asks her if this is what she wants?  Classic male behavior!  Deflect, Deny, Denounce!  Lol  Her thoughts, his behavior, perfect!  Who hasn't been there before?

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2010 1:46 AM Title: Epilogue

EXCELLENT STORY!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2010 1:16 AM Title: I Will Be

hmmmm I get the feeling Em is seeing Rose!! I guess we will see!! hehehe

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2010 12:50 AM Title: Open Arms/ Realize/ On Bended Knee

YAY!!! Wow now she has to tell Em she is moving out!!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:33 PM Title: What's A Man To Do

Ok i figured out EDWARD IS STUPID!! OMG he just makes me want to smack him!! hehehehe and Bella needs to pull her head out of her ass and leave Em!!! I have a feeling things are really going to blow up in both of there faces!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:42 AM Title: My Little Secret

Yeah, I'm enjoying this story, I think. I find the whole unfaithful thing rather noxious. I don't get how you retain any self respect after the 1st time. I can imagine it happening once, but then to continue with it, it just is lying to yourself & everyone else.

So, what seems even more disturbing is to imagine that Edward still has Tanya there living with him, so he's cheating on Bella & on Tanya. ughh

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:44 AM Title: Epilogue

o no the end

bravo!

Reviewer: parrotchic Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:50 AM Title: Make It Work

wow, i can't believe she just left him in the car! lol

Reviewer: Punky Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 8:15 PM Title: Emotional Rollercoaster

wow this story is crazy I LOVE IT!! LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's a bit crazy but I think it's worth it!

Reviewer: lil brown eyed girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 4:03 AM Title: Epilogue

What a fabulous ride this has been!  It is a rare snow day here in the south, and what a great way to spend it reading this treasure! 



Author's Response:

AWWWWW THANK YOU!

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2010 7:55 PM Title: Make It Work

Making it work... When people say this phrase about their relationship it always makes me think they are forcing a relationship that doesn't work.  Our relationship isn't working for either of us but let's make it work.  I know every relationship has trials and you shouldn't run when it hits a bump but if it's always the same issue you keep coming back to, it clearly isn't meant to be.  Emmett, if he was truly happy with Bella and their life together, wouldn't need to drink so much.  A little self medicating perhaps? 

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2010 7:44 PM Title: The Way We Are

I've read the whole story and now have come back to review...sorry, I was too caught up in it to stop and review.  I can totally relate to Bella in this story.  Living with someone who drinks night after night.  Passing out or on the rare occasion sex does happen, it's completely unsatisfying.  I don't even think drunks realize just how horrible they are in bed. I'm glad you had Bella voice what was bothering her instead of suffering in silence. 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2010 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed the story.  Thank you so much!  Great job....Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!!!!! I am very happy you liked it!!!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2010 12:16 AM Title: Unpredictable

No you can't put Edward and Tanya back together!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 11:04 PM Title: That's What It's Made For

That was hot but I can't believe they cheated on Em.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 10:39 PM Title: Twisted

So does Emmett have a thing for Rose and that is why he gets so ticked when she asks about another guy?

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 10:00 PM Title: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun

Oh you evil thing.  You are setting Edward up to be with Rose just to torture Bella more.  Mean, Mean, mean....lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading honey! Just go with it.....I promise it's worth it!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 9:49 PM Title: Dirty Dancing

Poor Bella.  Jealous and she can't do anything about it.  That is just torture.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 9:44 PM Title: When I Saw You

Oh...what a a sticky situation.  Move over Emmett...Edward's in town.  lol  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 9:04 PM Title: Make It Work

He was doing so well then he had to mess it up.

 

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2010 7:52 PM Title: The Way We Are

Oh I wonder how Edward's going to react to Bella since she is living with Emmett. 

Reviewer: Cullen_girl23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 6:05 AM Title: The Way We Are

wow, nice story!!

it's a little weird reading about bella and emmett living together though Lol!!

I'm definetely going to read it

Reviewer: violetlily88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 1:51 AM Title: The Way We Are

i love it so far. i love jealous edward



Author's Response:

Thank you! At least it's complete and you don't have to wait for updates!

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