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Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wonder how alice suspects that Bella knows Edward, because I am sure its not the true reason. 

Great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

well Bella met Edward a lot sooner than at the wedding!! he can be so cruel to Bella on her visits. 

Great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

well thats going to be awkward at the wedding!! Great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

the mental thought processes you need to go through after that must be immense. 

Great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

He is definitely as asshole but bella appears to like it! Great chapter x

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh Edward is definitely cocky and conniving! Great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

it must be horrendous to have to work those hours every day on so little sleep! just think how much more sleep Bella could get on $500 a night.!

great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:50 AM Title: Prologue

I have just refound this story on here, so I am going to have a complete re-read!

I love this first chapter, so hot in a very wrong way. x 

Reviewer: Molliegoodgolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

where did you go??

Reviewer: saasmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

I hate Works in Progress. I found this story in an a/n from TheSaintsMistress in Terms and Conditions Apply, came here to check it out to see if I wanted to save it for later. HAH.  Got caught up in the prologue and 19 chapters later, I'm pissed that I'm caught up in yet another WIP that I have to constantly check my email for updates for. 

Excellent story, excellent writing. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 13

Slowly making my way through every chance I get! Loving this, but I hope roughward comes back in some shape or form.

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

Shit, talk about not feeling.

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ok,time to go out for a quick butt and on to the next chapter. Another great one you are killing me.

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

That was a very cool chapter, can't wait to see how it all plays out.

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter, thank you 

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 12:42 PM Title: Prologue

WOW!!!!!! What the hell was that? I'm sitting here hot and sweating, time out I need to go have a smoke.

Reviewer: Honey Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

I love this dtory. I started reading it a couple of days ago. Please don't stop!!!!

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

Gah!

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

So emotionally charged. Fantastic.

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 10

Awww shiyet.

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Youre breaking my heart.

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

You go gurl.

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

*melts* Love this story.

Reviewer: jonesn353402 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

Dead. Dead. Dead.

Reviewer: Love2read01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome story. I can't wait to read more. Thanks

Reviewer: lulupatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

hey jada - just found you here...i've been following this fic since it was on FF, then the blog and am hoping you haven't given up on it.  your writing is bold and intense.  i've read through this fic twice now and am looking forward to what's next.  hope all is well!

best,

lulu <3

Reviewer: Sunny C Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:27 AM Title: Prologue

Sorry it's taken me so long to rad & review/appreciate this story.

So many good things said about this!

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

AWWWW shit is right.  I would storm out that door and stop his damanding fine ass. That's what *puts my big girl panties on* yup.  Great chapter

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9

gripped my heart. seriously bad. *tears* such a well written chapter. thank you

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Woohoo. finally! damn B.  Now...I'll just be over here..thinking things. ;) loved it

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

CRAP!!!!! I still couldn't get up and go run errands. And damn, now there is a freaking bite mark on my back. I may be creepy stalking you today. Does that bother you too much?? ;)

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMGah! is it him. SHIT!!! eeepp! loving this. Now I hate myself because I have to go and run errands. As if having gas in the tank was so important. I need to read dammit. :)

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

I need my 500 cause i lived that shit. MY GOD! Yes! love it girlie!

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, just fucking wow! What the hell is he so fucked up about?? Damn E. Reign that shit in. B, girl, it's a hard life (hehe, hard) but you gotta take it and move with it for now. :)

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Holy hell! I can't click next fast enough. I love it, maybe a little too much. LOL

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

I kinda fuckin love him. I am a sick, sick girl. :)

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

She needs to hand over that damn card. I need it now. I want it and would have just pulled his collar and showed him all my assets at that table. jsjs

Reviewer: jennlen522 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 1:25 PM Title: Prologue

Lord Have Mercy!!! and where is that huge ass Review button here like on FFN. I want to click, click, click. My God!. Yeah, this is gonna be a fun ride. :)

Reviewer: mandym Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I have just reread this story because it's so awesome but WHEN are you going to finish it? PLEASE

Reviewer: belizeanbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2012 3:04 PM Title: Prologue

where is the next chapter?

Reviewer: Jobiwan13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 7:09 PM Title: Prologue

Wow!!!!!! Great 

Reviewer: readstoomuch Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

I read Chapter 20 on your blog. So incredibly good.  Thank you again for sharing this story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!  More, please!!!

Reviewer: Fraulein Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow - awesome story. the depth, pain, general hopelessness and confusion you've woven around your main characters is amazing.  I like that you jumped 5 years and had them meet up again. I think you have completely captured Bella's emptiness - the 'is this it'? rings incredibly real.  The interaction between the two of them now after all these years is really well played. There isn't a simply, easy happy ending  - yet!  They have too much baggage between them to be a happy copule immedicatley and I'm glad you are taking the time to really work through all those layers.  I'm looking forward to your next chapters!  

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

So why can't Edward see his girl? Why is Renne a bitch? Kate isn't happy and Bella is a little lost. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 18

Is it a bad thing getting to know each other? Not in my book. 

 

As for finding daddy dead, that's gotta be hard for anyone does Renne blame Bella for it? 

 

 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow the pics are great. I love seeing a story in pics. 

 

Bella will have to talk Edward down or call 911

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

All this time I thought she was dead, why can't he see her if she's not? With the money he has he can't follow her to the end of the eath and back. He just showed up again at Bella's for a run? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

It might help for him to talk to Bella about his girl. 

 

 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ask him in for coffee or water just anything and ask him everything you needed and still what to know. 

 

I followed you on twitter but I'm locked so you can't see me talking to you lol 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 13

She needs to hear it just as much as he needs to say it. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

Lol loved the a/n. 

 

See you got me again I thought Edward would call find out why Bella was at Esme's. Nope it took 5 years, why so long? Did he get help cause I think he needed it. How did he find Bella? 

 

Maybe if I stop asking and just read the next chapter I'll find out :) 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

I thought Bella would make it out with out Edward knowing, I mean he had a lot going on. Bella may be getting a phone call soon. 

 

I had to wait all night to read this but I couldn't stay awake anymore or I would of lol

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh no he's about to walk in and see Bella. Maybe now we will get anwsers?  

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

She hasn't yet but she should google Edward cause I wanna know what she finds. I know when I find out I'll be crying I just know I will

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yes but it's the 2nd time he's taken her in the week. She should feel smug about that as well he can't wait for her. 

 

how did he know last time to find her at work? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

Is there a nice way to hand over the money? Nope didn't think so. One good thing is now Bella knows Edward won't be at the wedding. 

 

My friends read the story yet won't tell me anything, even if I beg. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

That's why that meeting was changed. So Edward could make it? Alice is very bad...trying to see what will happen and if Bella really does know Edward. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

Edward has or had a daughter? Why did Alice say it didn't matter? I get why Edward's cold now. 
Is you leave I won't be coming after you....that's what Edward said?Saturday's at 6 pm no later, yet he's gone and found Bella at work for some fun. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

First what did Bella stop herself thinking about with the flash back? 

 

Why can't Bella look at Edward? It's like he's disgusted with himself for doing this. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

He's a hard ass but I like it and by the sound of it so does Bella. 

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Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward gets what he wants and knew she would come round. 

 

I take it Bella won't be working at the hotel again? 

Will you be doing an EPOV from him watching her and wanting to make the other? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

No strings is never just no string, one will always fall for the other. £500 a night. Is more then I get right now, I might just call him up lol. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 6:43 AM Title: Prologue

Damn that's hot. Still with you, think I'll stay till the end. I like a Dom Edward. If Kellan/Emmett would have me as just a play toy I'd be all in lol 

Reviewer: Aphrodite32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fuck, he is hot! But this is so wrong...

Reviewer: Aphrodite32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2012 2:47 PM Title: Prologue

Jeeesusss! 

Reviewer: cbmtmorris Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 12:07 PM Title: Prologue

Jada:

First and foremost I wish to let you know that I am totally obsessed by this story.  I first found it at Twilighted.net, and immediately I was drawn in by the Prologue.  With each succeeding chapter, I found myself more and more facinated by the characters.  So dammed damaged, dysfunctional--both of them.

I was so dammed shocked when I read an interview you gave in February in which you stated that this was your first foray into writing.  You have talent!!  Your descriptive words often make a reader feel as if they are observing the interactions quietly, unnoticed in the background.

I have to admit that on more than one occasion I have called in late to work to read the latest update--LOL.  Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that I love this story!!  Since I follow you on Twitter, I am aware that you have had much going on in your RL so upates will be posted when you post.  

Thanks again for sharing your talent. 

 

 

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

Aw that last sentence made me almost cry. This story has me on the edge wanting to know what happened between the Cullens, and for the rest of the story to make sense!

Reviewer: shortieecakee Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's been a while since I read a story like this I can tell it's going to be differe then others. Exciting!

Reviewer: danathemagicbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh my God, this story is just great! I totally fell in love with it!

I would have preferred to send you a PM, but somehow it didn't work. You know, I am a German native speaker and I would like to share your story with new German readers, so I wanted to ask for your permission to translate your story... It would be so great if it were okay for you. Please send me an answer to danathemagicbunny@hotmail.com, I would be so happy and honored!!

Dana

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

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Date: 13 Jan 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I read this chapter as soon as you posted it but RL got in the way and i could not review. However since this whole story is absolutely wonderful and each chapter better than the next it didn't feel right to just not write anything at all, so here is my late review.

I like that we got a bit of an insight to Edward's life and feelings when he first became a father but now i am even more intrigued to learn what happened to turn him so against everything and everybody. Bella's inner turmoil while interacting with him after they left the restaurant is heart quenching and let us not even mention that phone conversation with her mother. I think she has so much love and affection to give but nowhere and nobody to give it to. It makes her insecure, lonely as hell and just plain sad.

I agree with Edward one one thing, despite what she feels, they have a lot in common. Also, there is this electric current between them, more than just simple sexual tension -if there ever is such a thing- one can almost hear it crackling.

Looking forward to the next chapter. This is hands down one of the best stories I have read in twilight and svm fandom. 

Reviewer: coonyham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh boy, where is this going to go?

Reviewer: coonyham Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 12:48 AM Title: Prologue

So glad I found you again. I was waiting for an update on ffn. I found you thru a referral from another story, I googled your name and found you. Just read chap 1. Thanks for continuing this angst story.

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

hope to see them become more comfortable with each other now that they said there peace :)

Reviewer: pinklove7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 19

I loved it!! I am dying to know more about Edward, but at the same time i'm very nervous! Gah her phone calls to her mother kill me! I love this Bella, and how she has this huge war going on inside her...I can def see why she would be wary of him, but at the sametime I can't wait to see her open up some more!

Reviewer: RoseT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

THings to seem to be moving forward a bit, which is a good thing!  I hope you get around to more info about Josie soon.

Reviewer: RoseT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ahhhh....I don't know what is worse...having someone dead or living, but you can't see them for some reason or another.

Reviewer: RoseT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ugh...that was a rough chapter...but good!

Reviewer: RoseT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

Ahhh...ok, so sex which I think was good, but still not enough info!  I want info!  :)  Reading on....

Reviewer: RoseT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

No no no!  I want infomation on what Edward's deal is!  Not that I don't mind more sex, but I want info info info!

Reviewer: RoseT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 4:20 AM Title: Prologue

WOW, WOW, WOW!  I have been reading this on your blog and then thought it would be easier and quicker to read the chapters here so I came on over.  What an intriguing story!  I love it so far and can't wait to see how this story progresses now that E and B have seen each other in a completely different light than in their unconventional relationship.

Reviewer: athazagoraphobiac Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

Really enjoyed this chapter and was so pleased to find and update when I checked. You describe Bella's emotions with such raw sensibilities that I feel them myself. Amazing job. I wait with anticipation for Chapter 20.

Reviewer: rainbow raw Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 2:31 AM Title: Prologue

Hi. Amazing story! Could you tell me which movies/videos/shows were used for the little promotional image you have in the summary? :)

Reviewer: andreamid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love your story, but just wanted to ask why does Edward never takes his dog for his morning run?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

The word 'chrysalis' comes to mind. It seems she's emerging from this deep depression or regressed state that she has kept herself tucked into to try & protect herself from the hurtful people {wouldja even call her family loved ones?} she has been surrounded by all her life. Scary stuff for her. I hope E proves trustworthy this time. Boy isn't she resiliant though, keeps calling her mom each week & letting herself get close to E again.

Great chapter, I love reading about your characters and am excited to read where this story goes.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

She's starting to thaw.  I actually believe she's more screwed up than he is and that's saying something.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

They're very stilted and awkward around each other, unsurprisingly. Two broken souls with no friends or family to speak to, could they really develop a friendship after all that's passed between them?

Reviewer: leesmee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

Yes I'm enjoying this but, the wait for their "understanding" feels over long. ...The word endless comes to mind , I'm hoping the next phase will come soon & be worth the wait.Thanks have a good one :)

Reviewer: DaisyAllday Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update!  I've checked the status on this one weekly for a while now and was thrilled with this chapter.

I can't wait to see how this one progresses from here.  Hopefully, the sun is finally starting to shine.

Reviewer: Nicos1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hey! It's TheSaintsMistress here! Yeah-don't ask. ;)

Just wanted to pop in and leave you some love.

I'm constantly reminding myself that I shouldn't rush the feelings between my characters--that things need to progress naturally in order for the emotions to come across as true. FYW's perfect in that way!

You create such a wonderfully torturous pace,that I want to cry and cheer all at once! I want to snuggle with your words and also shrug away from its cold feet.

I LOVE the slow burn--and you are a master in creating it!

You've created two increadibly complex characters and I cannot wait for you to start pealing away at their layers.

So...I shall fluff my pillow and place it at your feet until next time...'cause it's SO worth the wait!

xoxo

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

I wanna know more about Josie and what happened to her.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

I understand,I think, why you chose to write their struggles in this chapter the way you did.But I must confess that I wish they will overcome everything that is in their path and finally be happy together.

Reviewer: ronjon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

Well, it seems we are finally moving forward. Maybe just a smidge at a time, but it is better than nothing.  The girl has serious issues and needs help. I just don't know if Edward is the one to help her.  Anxious to see what he pulls out of his hat. Oh, and welcome back, by the way.  I was afraid the story had been abandoned.

Reviewer: aborealis7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Good chapter! Phew these two! I think it's interesting that he felt the need to abuse her for his own feelings of insecurity. That he saw himself in her and her situation! They are slowly bridging the gap, I think that they actually need each other. Bella's mom is a piece of work,ugh! She is never going to be happy for her daughter or even love her.

Reviewer: weirdISawesome Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

yesssss you're back! i've been waiting for an update for soooo long!
i loved the tension and the uncertainity, and i like the fact that there's some sort of a mutual understanding going on between the two of them..

have i told you that i absolutely adore your writing? it's as if i'm watching a movie, the scenes are complete, there are no lame broken sentences that are seen in alot of other fanfics, i absolutely love it!
can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

Looking forward to seeing what will happen next with Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

thanks as always awesome chapter

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

Brilliant, as usual. Very good writing. I just love love love LOVE! this story. Very curious to see how this pans out and what happened to Jane and Josie.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

They are chinking away their armor with a toothpick.  Great chapter.

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