[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2019 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
liked the story overall but feel like you took a shortcut to "THE END"
Date: 12 May 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow that was an amazing story. I couldn't read all the rape and abuse... just enough to know what Bella went through. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 May 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh thank god. Alice is alive and Edward is there.
Date: 11 May 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
No say it's not so.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
excellent story ;) i read it 1st on ffn but after finishing it i felt that some bits were missing? it still made me cry though ;D
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh Im sad its over but so glad they got a happy ending... Thanks for sharing your story with us! XoXo - Fangs
Date: 06 Jul 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
OH WOW.. you had to end it there? hahahahaha. This is a great story. Thanks for bringing it over to our site. James and Laurant are so scary. I think I may have nightmares.
Thanks
Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading your story up to the latest chapter. I must admit that I'm just now able to see again after spending chapter after chapter in tears. I noticed that other reviewers have negative opinions of Edward and think he may have an ulterior motive. I don't and it's not because I'm "Team Edward." It's because Edward has also suffered at the hands of these animals and Bella and he now have each other to console one another through this horrifying time in their lives. I would like to see a happy ending but it's obviously going to take some time to get there. Speaking of happy endings, I don't think Alice is dead. I think that's one of the many lies they've told Bella in order to "break her."
Please update soon because I'm hooked like a drug addict on crack.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my gosh! I'm so nervous AND excited for the next chapter... Thanks for updating so many in a row...
Can't wait to see what happens next...
XoXo ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh please... Oh please let Princess Bella be saved... and Prince Edward too... I'm struggling to see a happy ending here... I hope there is one...
*sigh*
XoXo ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH man... I can't remember... is there a HEA with this story?! How can James and Laurent do this... Can't they just run away? Go to the authorities? They're both under age, right? Or just Bella? Doesn't anyone care that Bella just disappeared?
Have I asked enough questions? LOL... sad but great story!
Muah ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh no! I'm glad Edward came for her but afraid of what James and Laurent will do to him... what rules did Edward break? Did they find out about her keeping the extra money?!
Gah! This is painful (but good)...
XoXo ~ Fangs
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Lord, I'm cringing at what might happen next... gah; your James sounds so freakin' creepy and dirty. Ewwww.... And I'm guessing Laurent is going to be really mean; the 'nice' ones usually are...
Poor Bella...
XoXo ~ Fangs
Date: 05 Jul 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
So sad. Big tears in this chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Please update soon! I hope Edward goes to Carlisle in the next chapter! They need to get away!!!!!!!!!! Update soon! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Liar liar pants on fire! Alice can't be dead! God I hate James!!!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
well i hope that they can get out of there soon !
Date: 30 Jun 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
not sure i am going to keep reading james and laurent are going to rape her....
Date: 30 Jun 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
did you really kill alice or is he lying? he is a sank... please don't hurt bella too much
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh boy she thought her mom wouldn't hurt her... come on bella it is going to be bad i can feel it
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
this happiness isn't going to last is it?
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy not good...
Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
excited to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm very intrigued. I can't wait to read more.
BTW, your chapters go from chapter 4 to chapter 6... No chapter 5?
Hope you get a chance to update soon... Muah ~ Fangs
Author's Response:
Hi, just checked it out.
Apparently Chapter 4 got mucked up...so chapter 6 is actually number 5...but its all fixed now so it should be okay :) sorry.
Glad you like it
much hugs
lizzie hopscotch
Date: 10 May 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
well i hope they stick together !
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
ok... a little bit of a filler chapter but definitely still holding my interest. I'm very curious to see where you go with this.
Muah!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
So, just curious... r u from AZ?
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start so far... I can't wait to read more :)
Date: 08 May 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the update!
Date: 08 May 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm with Bella; the less she has to deal with James the better.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! It reminds me of Water for Elephants kind of, its fresh in my mind, because I just got back from watching it. Lol! Can´t wait for the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
omg I love
thanks
Date: 03 May 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like the banter between Edward and Bella.
Date: 02 May 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
Looks really good. love the plot bunny!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
like me anymore
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is different. i will b waiting for an update
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
ih wow intresting begibning
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving it! Looking forward to more!