Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading your story up to the latest chapter. I must admit that I'm just now able to see again after spending chapter after chapter in tears. I noticed that other reviewers have negative opinions of Edward and think he may have an ulterior motive. I don't and it's not because I'm "Team Edward." It's because Edward has also suffered at the hands of these animals and Bella and he now have each other to console one another through this horrifying time in their lives. I would like to see a happy ending but it's obviously going to take some time to get there. Speaking of happy endings, I don't think Alice is dead. I think that's one of the many lies they've told Bella in order to "break her."
Please update soon because I'm hooked like a drug addict on crack.
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH man... I can't remember... is there a HEA with this story?! How can James and Laurent do this... Can't they just run away? Go to the authorities? They're both under age, right? Or just Bella? Doesn't anyone care that Bella just disappeared?
Have I asked enough questions? LOL... sad but great story!
Muah ~ Fangs
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh no! I'm glad Edward came for her but afraid of what James and Laurent will do to him... what rules did Edward break? Did they find out about her keeping the extra money?!
Gah! This is painful (but good)...
XoXo ~ Fangs
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Lord, I'm cringing at what might happen next... gah; your James sounds so freakin' creepy and dirty. Ewwww.... And I'm guessing Laurent is going to be really mean; the 'nice' ones usually are...
XoXo ~ Fangs
Date: 30 Jun 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm very intrigued. I can't wait to read more.
BTW, your chapters go from chapter 4 to chapter 6... No chapter 5?
Hope you get a chance to update soon... Muah ~ Fangs
Hi, just checked it out.
Apparently Chapter 4 got mucked up...so chapter 6 is actually number 5...but its all fixed now so it should be okay :) sorry.
Glad you like it