Date: 16 Aug 2014 1:47 PM Title: On The Edge
That was so sensual and Hawt I wouldnt mind reading more of your characters. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 5:17 AM Title: On The Edge
I was right there with Edward, screaming PURPLE! (my fav color, btw) I've read a lot of D/s stories and hadn't read about a safe word for release. I love that idea.
You 'hit it out of the park' with your first one shot, D/s and slash story. You're a natural! Thanks for taking the time to share.
~LauraLeigh
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2012 7:08 AM Title: On The Edge
Wow
Great story ;)
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 2:49 AM Title: On The Edge
Intense, loving and beautiful. Would love to see more of this relationship...possibly a prequel???
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:29 PM Title: On The Edge
Wow. That was powerful and extremely sensual. I could see it all as I read. Loved it, would love to see more.
Catherine
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 12:33 PM Title: On The Edge
great one shot. i love D/s stories and this is the first one shot i have read. I too teared up at the end so sweet!
Date: 28 May 2011 5:40 AM Title: On The Edge
WOW that was hot and wonderful. I hope you decide to write more that was just amazingly hot.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2011 2:54 AM Title: On The Edge
OMG I love it *wipes away tears from the last bit*
I came over here from Nickeyd26's prompt on Voice.
I am so glad I did.
Nice way to intertwince Bella and Jazz... clever, not as I have seen before. I liked it :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:18 PM Title: On The Edge
I think that was a great one shot!!!!
Author's Response:
balesp,
Thank you for the review and the rating!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed the one shot. I will be writing more soon! Thank you for your support!
jesspace
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:35 AM Title: On The Edge
Beautiful story! I am really starting to enjoy e/j stories! Loved your hints towards Bella!!!
Author's Response:
kitkatr- Thanks for the review!! I really appreciate it! This was my first one shot and my first D/s AND my first slash story. So it was an eye opener for me. But I really enjoyed writing it. We all need a little E/J lovin' sometimes!!