Date: 23 Jan 2016 8:15 AM Title: The Realization
Loved it!
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:41 AM Title: The Confessions
Loved it! Poor Jake!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 7:25 PM Title: The Courtdate
They are so cute together!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 4:41 PM Title: The Parties...Still
Loved it!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 1:09 PM Title: The Holiday
Great chapter!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 10:42 AM Title: The Flashback
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 9:47 AM Title: The Lunch
Poor Edward!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 7:55 AM Title: The Calm
Mike is a prick!
Date: 22 Jan 2016 7:34 AM Title: The End
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Dec 2015 8:10 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved, Loved, LOVED this sweet story! Thank you for writing it and I am so glad this story was the medicine that soothed your soul!
Date: 06 Nov 2015 5:01 AM Title: The Holiday
This is do sweet, I have all the feels.
Date: 05 Oct 2014 12:13 AM Title: Epilogue
awesome story i'm looking foward to reading the sequel;D i do have a question though about the year and their ages, at the beginning bella and edward were 32 and i thought it was 2011 but when they got married it was the following year but 2011 and they were still 32? ;)
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:03 PM Title: Epilogue
I used to work with children with autism. I volunteered for summer programs. It was by far my most rewarding job. I loved when I was able to communicate with them. I had won boy with a facination with plastic. The sound it made. So I'd tye plastic bags all over my apron and he start to play, play, play. He didn't like people but he's interact when you had plastic. I had one boy who I thought was non-verbal because that's what his family told me. We were having clean up time and I started singing. His eyes lit up and he sang with me. It was the shock of a life time. We then sang every Disney song I could remember. But that's how he communicated sing/talking.
This was a great story. I would like to thank you for all of the sleepless nights. I'd have to just finish a chapter and three chapters later it would be 3 am. I enjoyed your writing style. Kinda mad and happy with the way things ended. For now. lol You're now my favorite author on TWCS
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and for sharing those stories about the children with autism...The little boy and the singing got to me (music teacher...anything with music gets to me). Wow!
Hugs!!
Josie
Date: 27 Jun 2014 4:58 PM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations
XOXO
Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:28 PM Title: The Accident
I HAD to look up a three carat diamond to see how big this thing is, WOW
Date: 25 Jun 2014 4:04 PM Title: The Conferences and Concerts
Bella pissed me off. Why not go to the cops after spotting the car. AHHHH I can't deal. I can not take these cliff hanger. I can't! I need to take a hit from my inhaler.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 6:05 PM Title: The Birthday
You get a 10!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2014 9:37 PM Title: The Talk
Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. Don't let mike be that cray cray that he killed someone. Damn rich family covered it up for him ahhh. I can't take it. I need a xanax and a hit from my inhaler.
Date: 17 Jun 2014 7:25 PM Title: The Realization
OOOOOO now I get the lemon reference. O_O wow!
Date: 16 Jun 2014 9:39 PM Title: The Courtdate
I can't believe you made Jacob, Quil and Embry all gay! I needed a 10 min break just to laugh it out. Too funny.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 6:29 PM Title: The Parties...Still
I got a little confused why Edward did all that changing so quickly. lol He put on dress pants and a tie in once paragraph and then scrubs and a name tag in the next. Glad they finally kissed. who would have thought Mike was shitballs crazy.
Date: 17 Apr 2014 11:13 PM Title: The Calm
Your Edward is yummy! That's a little weird, Mike having her followed!? Should I be worried? Xxx
Date: 17 Apr 2014 11:09 PM Title: The End
Hi! I just finished the latest chapter of Friends with Benefits and I am usually very good at reviewing but it was soooo good I couldn't stop reading to review! I promise I will go back and do it!
So now I'm starting all your other fics! Love this and Mike is a dick!!
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:19 AM Title: The Flashback
Wow that poor Man has been through so much heartache, I hope they can mend each other
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: The Storm
she needs a few more sessions with the physic in self esteem lessons
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:17 PM Title: The Plans
I know it has been a while since you finish this story but it is fantastic. It is so hard to find good fanfiction anymore. I am reading some of your other stories also. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:36 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas
I know this story was written a while ago so it's probably too late to see if this chapter was fixed somewhere else, because clearly a lot got lost somewhere. I am confused but I hope that either the stuff about Todd is explained later or it doesn't matter. I am loving this story however.
Author's Response:
Apparently, it didn't transfer over...or something. I've fixed the chapter
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:07 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas
hey, i'm just wondering about the missing parts in this chapter? i'm loving the story but there were a few times it seemed to be missing some dialouge between the characters and the story about Todd's past and what Bella did to make him relax. are they in an outtake?
Date: 11 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: The ER
This is the second time reading this story Which I love and the contence never get's easy to read. My beautiful 8 year old daughter was hit by a drunk driver when we where coming home from school. He mounted the path a ran into 6 children. Killing 2 of them. She would of been 19 years now x
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:31 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story! I don't think there has been any story you've written that I haven't liked. You put so much emotion into your characters. I look forward to reading the sequel.
Date: 10 Dec 2013 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue
rofl great story cant wait to read the sequel to this. im glad that they got their happy ever after and that they have a loving family. i hope whatever is wrong with marie the doctors can find out. keep up the good writing.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:17 PM Title: Epilogue
xoxo - *.*
Date: 23 Nov 2013 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved this story. You mentioned a sequel but how will I know when it will be out? Why isn't there a place to choose to follow the stories?
thanks,
Ruby2sday
Author's Response:
The sequel is called 'The Next Chapter.' To follow, what you need to do is click on the story and 'add to favorites.' It'll send you an email when a story you've favorited has updated. You can also favorite an author too and it'll send you an email when the author updates one of their stories, as well.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:56 AM Title: Epilogue
Chocolate. Bon bin. When's the sequel??
Date: 15 Oct 2013 9:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Love the story!
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:35 AM Title: Epilogue
A sequel!!! You've made my day...I can't wait to continue... until next time
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:15 AM Title: The New Beginning
Sniff...sniff...that simply beautiful...
Date: 14 Oct 2013 1:18 AM Title: The Bean
Holy hell triplets! Damn throw u for a loop why don't ya...
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:33 PM Title: The House
Sigh thank God for interventions... the girl needed the kick in the ass...lol
Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:09 PM Title: The Announcement
Oh. Hope Bella shoots mike' s sorry ass...yay for bean!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:55 AM Title: The Interview
Damn Mike...I so want to best the ever living Hades out of him...
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:30 AM Title: The Honeymoon
WEll its about time that they figured out about thier little bean...lol...Wow that was one hell of a honeymoon...
Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:30 AM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward
All right thier married!!! That was fabulous my dear!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 3:32 AM Title: The Destination Rehearsal
Ohhh its almost time for the wedding...LOL...so excited
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:39 AM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations
Hmmm so wonder when Bella will realize that her nervous stomach is something more...lol...can't wait for the wedding...
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:04 AM Title: The Fight
Fuckin Mike...I hope he is caught soon and maybe Edward gets in a few punches...grrr
Date: 13 Oct 2013 1:29 AM Title: The Baby
I am so excited to see baby Edward...He sounds adorable...
Grr and Mike needs to have his nuts stomped on, I hope they find the jackass soon...
Date: 13 Oct 2013 12:56 AM Title: The Surprise
What! But that baby still has a month...impatient imp...
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:59 PM Title: The Emerald City
Yay!! The visit went well and a hell of a steamy end
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:13 PM Title: The Meeting with Dad
Lol.. I love Sue... thanks for bringing charlie in, that was great...
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:26 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas
Aww the kids were great...
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:21 AM Title: The Eve
That was one hell of a Christmas!
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:10 AM Title: The Christmas Ball
Damn Aro...I'm glad Bella knee'd the bastard...he deserved it...
Date: 11 Oct 2013 4:59 AM Title: The Accident
Yy their going to get married...Mike the fucker better beware
Date: 11 Oct 2013 12:42 AM Title: The Conferences and Concerts
Oh hell honey...more poor heart can't take these cliffies..
Date: 10 Oct 2013 6:41 PM Title: The Breakdown
Fuckin slime ball Aro...hope his nuts get caught in a file cabinet
Date: 10 Oct 2013 6:00 PM Title: The Fire
Ohh evil nurse whores and practicing for kids what a hell of a combo...lol
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:49 PM Title: The Birthday
Holy fuck...that was on hell of a birthday!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:44 PM Title: The Morning After
Aww a druggie Edward is so cute
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:50 AM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin
Oh hell yeah!!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:29 AM Title: The Wedding
Aww...what a sweet wedding
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:52 AM Title: The Reality
Damn I love that man...
Date: 09 Oct 2013 9:21 PM Title: The Talk
Holy shit is right!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:23 PM Title: The Funeral
Oh lord...a very sad chapter...
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:17 PM Title: The News
Mike that colossal ass!....grrr
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:43 PM Title: The ER
Hmm We need a lynch mob to hunt down Royce the bastard....
wow and sexy times...yeah!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:44 AM Title: The Realization
Holy Hale... O.o...fabulous
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:05 AM Title: The Confessions
So I want to stomp on Quil's nuts and make him beg for mercy...what an ass
aww Edward is in love...sigh
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:37 PM Title: The Parties...Still
Wow talk about awkward with Rose and Emmett... but so sweet those two miss each other...
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:20 PM Title: The Parties
Well hot damn...my temp spiked dangerously high my dear...phew...
Date: 08 Oct 2013 1:50 PM Title: The Plans
Yeah I'd be dancing too...can't wait to see what happens to these crazy kids...
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:56 AM Title: The Holiday
I have no words other than... Wow O.o
Date: 07 Oct 2013 9:15 PM Title: The Flashback
Oh lord I just want to grab poor Edward and smother him in love...
Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Lunch
Frickin Hale...poor Edward
Date: 07 Oct 2013 6:19 PM Title: The Storm
I'd love to be royally screwed that way...lol
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:28 PM Title: The Calm
Lol... what a way to begin...
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:17 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas
Great chapter
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:18 AM Title: Epilogue
I know one thing for sure. Edward and Bella will move heaven and earth to find a way to help Marie. It's slightly unusual for a girl to be autistic, but not unheard of. I would love to read a sequel to this story, as I have developed a real liking for all the characters. They are people it would be fun to be friends with! Loved this whole story, even the trials they had to go through.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:00 AM Title: The New Beginning
Probably scared Edward half to death when Bella had that complication, but it all turned out okay. Since she can't have more children, it's a blessing she had three at once! The happy ending is only beginning!
Date: 18 Jun 2013 1:02 AM Title: The Bean
Boy, Bella and Edward really hit the jackpot, three babies at once! Good thin the have that big new house with five bedrooms! I guess it will put a crimp in Bella's career plans, though. Taking care of triplets and being principal of the middle school won't exactly be compatible.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: The House
Well thank God Bella finally saw the shooting for what it was, the only way to save Edward! That intervention came just in time, as she was headed to a very dark place that could have ruined things between her and Edward.
Date: 18 Jun 2013 12:05 AM Title: The Announcement
So, a new home, an announcement of a new baby, and Bella has a carry permit. For a gun, not a baby! Now she can blow that son-of-a-bitch away when she sees him next! To protect herself, her child or her husband, I have no qualms whatsoever!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: The Interview
Are Bella and Edward the unfortunate heirs of extra misfortune? It seems like they have all their troubles and someone else's also! This should be such a happy time for them and they still are under a cloud, courtesy of Bella's ex!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: The Honeymoon
I don't care how you kill off Mike, as long as he doesn't hurt Bella, the baby or Edward! They are so happy about being married and the baby coming, it's a damn shame to clutter up their life with evil Mike Newton!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:34 PM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward
If there is such a thing as perfection, this may well have been it! You did a wonderful job writing Bella and Edward a perfect wedding!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: The Destination Rehearsal
Big help that Edward is fluent in Spanish, makes navigating the bureaucracy so much easier. Rehearsal seems to be going smoothly and everyone is there and ready to go!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 9:28 PM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations
How exciting! They're almost married and Mike hasn't disrupted the proceedings any more! I wonder when Bella is going to figure out why she's sick every morning? Funny Edward hasn't noticed yet!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 8:57 PM Title: The Fight
It's easy to say don't let Mike have control, but not so easy to really do! I hope they both get to the place where they can put themselves ahead of everything else! The stress will get them if they can't!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 8:20 PM Title: The Baby
If the cops don't get him this time, there's no hope for law enforcement! Mike's a total asshole, not to mention dangerous as hell! Touching moment there, when Jasper told Edward they named the baby for his uncle, his godfather! Nice they asked Bella to be godmother, too.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 9:36 AM Title: The Surprise
How sweet, a Valentine baby for Alice and Jasper! This was a really great holiday for Bella and Edward. Can't wait until Bella shows Edward the flogger Heidi gave her . Wonder what he'll think of that?
Date: 17 Jun 2013 9:07 AM Title: The Emerald City
I'll bet Edward is glad that Bella pushed him to see his old friends from Virginia Mason. Seattle wasn't nearly as bad a place with Bella at his side and in his arms!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:58 AM Title: The Meeting with Dad
Except for the revelation about Mike not telling Bella of Harry's death, this visit went really well. Charlie likes Edward and Bella is glad her dad has Sue in his life.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:26 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas
Atruly blessed Christmas was had by our lovers, along with family and friends. What's any better than that?
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:09 AM Title: The Eve
A very nice Christmas Eve with all their friends , a lovely dinner and fun wrapping gifts for the little ones in the hospital. Edward's right, Bella is a very caring, thoughtful woman! Probably why she's such a good teacher. She and Edward had a great first Christmas together!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:02 AM Title: Epilogue
love it
i have a cousin who works with austic children
she has so much patience
love it
Date: 17 Jun 2013 5:41 AM Title: The New Beginning
love the story
great read, all the ups and downs. man they have been through so much and made it out the other side and are still happy and in love and together
love it