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Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 8:15 AM Title: The Realization

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:41 AM Title: The Confessions

Loved it! Poor Jake!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 7:25 PM Title: The Courtdate

They are so cute together!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 4:41 PM Title: The Parties...Still

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 3:52 PM Title: The Parties

Finally!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 2:26 PM Title: The Plans

Yay!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 1:09 PM Title: The Holiday

Great chapter!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 10:42 AM Title: The Flashback

Loved it! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 9:47 AM Title: The Lunch

Poor Edward!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 8:27 AM Title: The Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 7:55 AM Title: The Calm

Mike is a prick!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2016 7:34 AM Title: The End

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 8:10 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved, Loved, LOVED this sweet story!  Thank you for writing it and I am so glad this story was the medicine that soothed your soul! 

Reviewer: barbarablade007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2015 5:01 AM Title: The Holiday

This is do sweet, I have all the feels.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 12:13 AM Title: Epilogue

awesome story i'm looking foward to reading the sequel;D i do have a question though about the year and their ages, at the beginning bella and edward were 32 and i thought it was 2011 but when they got married it was the following year but 2011 and they were still 32? ;)

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:03 PM Title: Epilogue

I used to work with children with autism. I volunteered for summer programs. It was by far my most rewarding job. I loved when I was able to communicate with them. I had won boy with a facination with plastic. The sound it made. So I'd tye plastic bags all over my apron and he start to play, play, play. He didn't like people but he's interact when you had plastic. I had one boy who I thought was non-verbal because that's what his family told me. We were having clean up time and I started singing. His eyes lit up and he sang with me. It was the shock of a life time. We then sang every Disney song I could remember. But that's how he communicated sing/talking. 

This was a great story. I would like to thank you for all of the sleepless nights. I'd have to just finish a chapter and three chapters later it would be 3 am. I enjoyed your writing style. Kinda mad and happy with the way things ended. For now. lol You're now my favorite author on TWCS



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for sharing those stories about the children with autism...The little boy and the singing got to me (music teacher...anything with music gets to me). Wow! 

Hugs!!

Josie

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 4:58 PM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

XOXO

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2014 5:28 PM Title: The Accident

I HAD to look up a three carat diamond to see how big this thing is, WOW

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2014 4:04 PM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

Bella pissed me off. Why not go to the cops after spotting the car. AHHHH I can't deal. I can not take these cliff hanger. I can't! I need to take a hit from my inhaler.

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 6:05 PM Title: The Birthday

You get a 10!!!

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 9:37 PM Title: The Talk

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. Don't let mike  be that cray cray that he killed someone. Damn rich family covered it up for him ahhh. I can't take it. I need a xanax and a hit from my inhaler. 

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 7:25 PM Title: The Realization

OOOOOO now I get the lemon reference. O_O wow!

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 9:39 PM Title: The Courtdate

I can't believe you made Jacob, Quil and Embry all gay! I needed a 10 min break just to laugh it out. Too funny.

Reviewer: Ni Ra Di Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 6:29 PM Title: The Parties...Still

I got a little confused why Edward did all that changing so quickly. lol He put on dress pants and a tie in once paragraph and then scrubs and a name tag in the next. Glad they finally kissed. who would have thought Mike was shitballs crazy. 

Reviewer: tinabambina Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 11:13 PM Title: The Calm

Your Edward is yummy! That's a little weird, Mike having her followed!? Should I be worried? Xxx

Reviewer: tinabambina Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 11:09 PM Title: The End

Hi! I just finished the latest chapter of Friends with Benefits and I am usually very good at reviewing but it was soooo good I couldn't stop reading to review! I promise I will go back and do it! 

So now I'm starting all your other fics! Love this and Mike is a dick!! 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 2:19 AM Title: The Flashback

Wow that poor Man has been through so much heartache, I hope they can mend each other

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:57 AM Title: The Storm

she needs a few more sessions with the physic in self esteem lessons

Reviewer: KBB Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 5:17 PM Title: The Plans

I know it has been a while since you finish this story but it is fantastic. It is so hard to find good fanfiction anymore. I am reading some of your other stories also. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: annie345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:36 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

I know this story was written a while ago so it's probably too late to see if this chapter was fixed somewhere else, because clearly a lot got lost somewhere. I am confused but I hope that either the stuff about Todd is explained later or it doesn't matter. I am loving this story however.



Author's Response:

Apparently, it didn't transfer over...or something. I've fixed the chapter

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 7:07 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

hey, i'm just wondering about the missing parts in this chapter? i'm loving the story but there were a few times it seemed to be missing some dialouge between the characters and the story about Todd's past and what Bella did to make him relax.  are they in an outtake?

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: The ER

This is the second time reading this story Which I love and the contence never get's easy to read. My beautiful 8 year old daughter was hit by a drunk driver when we where coming home from school. He mounted the path a ran into 6 children. Killing 2 of them. She would of been 19 years now x

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:31 AM Title: Epilogue

Great story! I don't think there has been any story you've written that I haven't liked. You put so much emotion into your characters. I look forward to reading the sequel.

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue

rofl great story cant wait to read the sequel to this. im glad that they got their happy ever after and that they have a loving family. i hope whatever is wrong with marie the doctors can find out. keep up the good writing.

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2013 6:17 PM Title: Epilogue

xoxo - *.*

Reviewer: LADYREB Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2013 11:28 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved this story.  You mentioned a sequel but how will I know when it will be out?  Why isn't there a place to choose to follow the stories?

 

thanks,

Ruby2sday



Author's Response:

The sequel is called 'The Next Chapter.' To follow, what you need to do is click on the story and 'add to favorites.' It'll send you an email when a story you've favorited has updated. You can also favorite an author too and it'll send you an email when the author updates one of their stories, as well. 

 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:56 AM Title: Epilogue

Chocolate. Bon bin. When's the sequel??

Reviewer: blondferretgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 9:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Love the story!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:35 AM Title: Epilogue

A sequel!!! You've made my day...I can't wait to continue... until next time

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:15 AM Title: The New Beginning

Sniff...sniff...that simply beautiful...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2013 1:18 AM Title: The Bean

Holy hell triplets! Damn throw u for a loop why don't ya...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:33 PM Title: The House

Sigh thank God for interventions... the girl needed the kick in the ass...lol

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:09 PM Title: The Announcement

Oh. Hope Bella shoots mike' s sorry ass...yay for bean!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:55 AM Title: The Interview

Damn Mike...I so want to best the ever living Hades out of him...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:30 AM Title: The Honeymoon

WEll its about time that they figured out about thier little bean...lol...Wow that was one hell of a honeymoon...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:30 AM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

All right thier married!!! That was fabulous my dear!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 3:32 AM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

Ohhh its almost time for the wedding...LOL...so excited

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:39 AM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

Hmmm so wonder when Bella will realize that her nervous stomach is something more...lol...can't wait for the wedding...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 2:04 AM Title: The Fight

Fuckin Mike...I hope he is caught soon and maybe Edward gets in a few punches...grrr

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 1:29 AM Title: The Baby

I am so excited to see baby Edward...He sounds adorable...

 

Grr and Mike needs to have his nuts stomped on, I hope they find the jackass soon...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 12:56 AM Title: The Surprise

What! But that baby still has a month...impatient imp...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:59 PM Title: The Emerald City

Yay!! The visit went well and a hell of a steamy end

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:13 PM Title: The Meeting with Dad

Lol.. I love Sue... thanks for bringing charlie in, that was great...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:26 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

Aww the kids were great...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:21 AM Title: The Eve

That was one hell of a Christmas!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:10 AM Title: The Christmas Ball

Damn Aro...I'm glad Bella knee'd the bastard...he deserved it...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 5:22 AM Title: The Brunch

Awww

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 4:59 AM Title: The Accident

Yy their going to get married...Mike the fucker better beware

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 12:42 AM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

Oh hell honey...more poor heart can't take these cliffies..

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 6:41 PM Title: The Breakdown

Fuckin slime ball Aro...hope his nuts get caught in a file cabinet

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 6:00 PM Title: The Fire

Ohh evil nurse whores and practicing for kids what a hell of a combo...lol

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:49 PM Title: The Birthday

Holy fuck...that was on hell of a birthday!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:44 PM Title: The Morning After

Aww a druggie Edward is so cute

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:50 AM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin

Oh hell yeah!!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:29 AM Title: The Wedding

Aww...what a sweet wedding

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:52 AM Title: The Reality

Damn I love that man...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 9:21 PM Title: The Talk

Holy shit is right!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:23 PM Title: The Funeral

Oh lord...a very sad chapter...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:17 PM Title: The News

Mike that colossal ass!....grrr

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:43 PM Title: The ER

Hmm We need a lynch mob to hunt down Royce the bastard....

 

wow and sexy times...yeah!

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:44 AM Title: The Realization

Holy Hale... O.o...fabulous

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:05 AM Title: The Confessions

So I want to stomp on Quil's nuts and make him beg for mercy...what an ass

 

aww Edward is in love...sigh

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:37 PM Title: The Parties...Still

Wow talk about awkward with Rose and Emmett... but so sweet those two miss each other...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:20 PM Title: The Parties

Well hot damn...my temp spiked dangerously high my dear...phew...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 1:50 PM Title: The Plans

Yeah I'd be dancing too...can't wait to see what happens to these crazy kids...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:56 AM Title: The Holiday

I have no words other than... Wow O.o

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 9:15 PM Title: The Flashback

Oh lord I just want to grab poor Edward and smother him in love...

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Lunch

Frickin Hale...poor Edward

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 6:19 PM Title: The Storm

I'd love to be royally screwed that way...lol

Reviewer: storm fruego Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:28 PM Title: The Calm

Lol... what a way to begin...

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:17 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

Great chapter

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:18 AM Title: Epilogue

I know one thing for sure. Edward and Bella will move heaven and earth to find a way to help Marie. It's slightly unusual for a girl to be autistic, but not unheard of. I would love to read a sequel to this story, as I have developed a real liking for all the characters. They are people it would be fun to be friends with! Loved this whole story, even the trials they had to go through.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 6:00 AM Title: The New Beginning

Probably scared Edward half to death when Bella had that complication, but it all turned out okay. Since she can't have more children, it's a blessing she had three at once! The happy ending is only beginning!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 1:02 AM Title: The Bean

Boy, Bella and Edward really hit the jackpot, three babies at once! Good thin the have that big new house with five bedrooms! I guess it will put a crimp in Bella's career plans, though. Taking care of triplets and being principal of the middle school won't exactly be compatible.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 12:39 AM Title: The House

Well thank God Bella finally saw the shooting for what it was, the only way to save Edward! That intervention came just in time, as she was headed to a very dark place that could have ruined things between her and Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 12:05 AM Title: The Announcement

So, a new home, an announcement of a new baby, and Bella has a carry permit. For a gun, not a baby! Now she can blow that son-of-a-bitch away when she sees him next! To protect herself, her child or her husband, I have no qualms whatsoever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:43 PM Title: The Interview

Are Bella and Edward the unfortunate heirs of extra misfortune? It seems like they have all their troubles and someone else's also! This should be such a happy time for them and they still are under a cloud, courtesy of Bella's ex!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: The Honeymoon

I don't care how you kill off Mike, as long as he doesn't hurt Bella, the baby or Edward! They are so happy about being married and the baby coming, it's a damn shame to clutter up their life with evil Mike Newton!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:34 PM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

If there is such a thing as perfection, this may well have been it! You did a wonderful job writing Bella and Edward a perfect wedding!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:01 PM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

Big help that Edward is fluent in Spanish, makes navigating  the bureaucracy so much easier. Rehearsal seems to be going smoothly and everyone is there and ready to go!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 9:28 PM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

How exciting! They're almost married and Mike hasn't disrupted the proceedings any more! I wonder when Bella is going to figure out why she's sick every morning? Funny Edward hasn't noticed yet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 8:57 PM Title: The Fight

It's easy to say don't let Mike have control, but not so easy to really do! I hope they both get to the place where they can put themselves ahead of everything else! The stress will get them if they can't!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 8:20 PM Title: The Baby

If the cops don't get him this time, there's no hope for law enforcement! Mike's a total asshole, not to mention dangerous as hell! Touching moment there, when Jasper told Edward they named the baby for his uncle, his godfather! Nice they asked Bella to be godmother, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 9:36 AM Title: The Surprise

How sweet, a Valentine baby for Alice and Jasper! This was a really great holiday for Bella and Edward. Can't wait until Bella shows Edward the flogger Heidi gave her . Wonder what he'll think of that?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 9:07 AM Title: The Emerald City

I'll bet Edward is glad that Bella pushed him to see his old friends from Virginia Mason. Seattle wasn't nearly as bad a place with Bella at his side and in his arms!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:58 AM Title: The Meeting with Dad

Except for the revelation about Mike not telling Bella of Harry's death, this visit went really well. Charlie likes Edward and Bella is glad her dad has Sue in his life.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:26 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

Atruly blessed Christmas was had by our lovers, along with family and friends. What's any better than that?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:09 AM Title: The Eve

A very nice Christmas Eve with all their friends , a lovely dinner and fun wrapping gifts for the little ones in the hospital. Edward's right, Bella is a very caring, thoughtful woman! Probably why she's such a good teacher. She and Edward had a great first Christmas together!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 6:02 AM Title: Epilogue

love it

 

i have a cousin who works with austic children

she has so much patience

 

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 5:41 AM Title: The New Beginning

love the story

great read, all the ups and downs. man they have been through so much and made it out the other side and are still happy and in love and together

 

love it

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