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Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 7:09 PM Title: The Announcement

loved it!

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 5:44 PM Title: The Interview

loved it!

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 5:17 PM Title: The Honeymoon

loved it!

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:07 PM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

loved it!

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 1:40 PM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 7:31 AM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 3:47 AM Title: The Fight

awe poor Bella and Edward!

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Date: 08 Dec 2012 1:08 PM Title: The Baby

loved it!

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Date: 08 Dec 2012 12:44 PM Title: The Surprise

loved it!

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Date: 07 Dec 2012 7:42 PM Title: The Emerald City

loved it

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Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:11 AM Title: The Meeting with Dad

loved it!

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 1:20 PM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

loved it!

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 12:37 PM Title: The Eve

loved it!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:42 PM Title: The Christmas Ball

loved it!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:39 PM Title: The Brunch

loved it!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:43 PM Title: The Accident

loved it!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:25 AM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

loved it!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:47 AM Title: The Halloween Party

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:17 AM Title: The Breakdown

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:37 AM Title: The Fire

loved it!

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:10 AM Title: The Birthday

loved it!

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:08 AM Title: The Morning After

loved it!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:20 PM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:17 PM Title: The Wedding

loved it

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:11 PM Title: The Reality

loved it!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 11:02 AM Title: The Talk

loved it! poor bella!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 10:37 AM Title: The Recovery

loved it!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:18 AM Title: The Funeral

loved it!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:39 AM Title: The News

loved it!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:12 AM Title: The ER

loved it!

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:22 PM Title: The Realization

loved it!

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 1:30 PM Title: The Confessions

loved it

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:40 PM Title: The Courtdate

loved it

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:13 PM Title: The Parties...Still

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:48 AM Title: The Parties

loved it!

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:51 AM Title: The Plans

loved it!

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:21 AM Title: The Holiday

awe! loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:28 AM Title: The Flashback

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:39 AM Title: The Lunch

loved it! Awe poor Edward!

Reviewer: basketsarah120 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:58 AM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

I love the story so far. I hate Mike. I also have a feeling Bella is pregnant. 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:17 AM Title: The Storm

loved it!

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:22 AM Title: The Calm

loved it! Mike is a prick 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:04 AM Title: The End

loved it! poor bella 

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:13 PM Title: Epilogue

WORDS CAN'T SAY HOW MUCH I ENJOYED THIS STORY..SORRY I DIDN'T REVIEW MORE MOST OF IT WAS READ ON MY PHONE AT WORK HIDNG IT UNDER MY PAPERWORK ....DON'T TELL ON ME ....I JUST COULDN'T STOP ....CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:29 PM Title: The Parties

WOW THAT WAS KINNA HOT .....POOR ALICE IS GOING TO EXPLODE IF THEY DONT GET OIME ACTION SOON ....I AM RIGHT THERE WITH HER ...THIS IS BEYOND FRUSTRATING

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:46 PM Title: The Flashback

HIS WIFES AND CHILD ARE GONE FOREVER CAUSE OF A SENSELESS ACCCIDENT ..THE MAN SHOULD BE PUNISHED SEVERLY 25  YEARS IS A SUITABLE PENANCE ...HE HAS BEEN UNHAPPY ONG ENOUGH LET MAKE THEM BOTH SMILE AND HAVE HAPPY THOUGHTS ...GOOD HARD SEXY TIME ..IS IT COMING SOON ...

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:15 PM Title: The Calm

AS ALWAYS HE IS SO SMOOTH.....

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Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:05 PM Title: The End

SO SORRY YOU HAD TO GO THROUGH THIS IN ANY FORM ...BUT IT GIVES WONDERFUL DEPTH TO YOUR WRITING FORM ....I WENT THRU IN IN A FIRST VERY BAD MARRRIAGE ...THEN I WAS BLESSED WITH THE PERFECT HUSBAND FOR OVER 25 YEARS UNTIL HE PASSED ON FROM CANCER ......I AM READING ALL YOUR STORIES THIS WEEK...... I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE FOR THE STORY OF BELLA ON ISLE ESME WOW TALK ABOUT SEXUAL CHEMISTRY ....SO I WILL BE HERE CATCHING UP READING YOUR STORIES

Reviewer: spdrmnky76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:14 PM Title: The Parties

I'm totaly loving this story! The lap dance was perfect! I cant wait to continue!

Reviewer: brebre123h Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:03 AM Title: Epilogue

i would like if you finish the story because it rocks



Author's Response:

It is finished...There is a sequel (fifteen chapters in) called The Next Chapter. 

Reviewer: 2SHOTS2BEERS82 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:57 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

I just wanted to let you know that there were parts in this chapter that didnt make sense or seemed to be missing big chunks of story..i went over to your ffn site and read the chapter there and it was complete. I just wanted to let you know in case, well you werent aware. Regardless, it was a great chapter :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:18 AM Title: Epilogue

Wonder ful end to this first part.  Cant wait for more.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:06 AM Title: The New Beginning

figures the tool would get the job as pricipal.  At least B knows it was offered to her first.

YEAH  babies.   Bet Edward was going nutso.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:53 AM Title: The Bean

YEAAA  for job.  eeeeekkkk triplets!!   Good thing they got extra bedrooms!!!.

 

Did I mention my daughters room is purple?  LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:47 AM Title: The House

Poor kids.  B needed that intervention for sure.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:33 AM Title: The Announcement

gotta love having money.    Sweet of him to give money to her condo buyers.

Cool about the gun.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 2:24 AM Title: The Interview

Ugh  wonder why the alarm company didnt notify them.  That bothers me.   I think the school board will appaud her for not taking crap from two little boys in that meeting.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:58 AM Title: The Honeymoon

woo hoo   Sweet honeymoon, a little short but he'll make it up to her later.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:48 AM Title: The Dream Wedding of Bella and Edward

Wonderful wedding and presents flowing!   You get special pic for that

rose

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:38 AM Title: The Destination Rehearsal

wonderful times with family.   She needs to get over her self esteem stuff though

 

Ok  so Rose cant go in the pool but she can go in mudbath and hottub???   LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:25 AM Title: The Dress and Weddng Preparations

Yea for dress and going to Mexico

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:18 AM Title: The Fight

bella needs to do more councelling or something.   Mike really messed her up.

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:11 AM Title: The Baby

wonderful chapter.  YEA for baby.   Ugh for mikey then psycho moron

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:03 AM Title: The Surprise

woo hoo  yummy lemonade!!!

 

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:42 AM Title: The Emerald City

DAYUM   Hottie at the end.

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:27 AM Title: The Meeting with Dad

awww for charlie and sue.   Glad they had a nice reunion

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 12:09 AM Title: The Hospital at Christmas

wonderful thing to do for the kiddies.   Ho Ho Ho

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 11:51 PM Title: The Eve

Wonderful chapter with all their family and friends.  Charm bracelet was sweet.

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 11:36 PM Title: The Christmas Ball

grrr  F'ing Aro had to ruin a special night for our kiddies.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 11:04 PM Title: The Brunch

What a sweet chapter.  Love Brunch and all.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:48 PM Title: The Accident

YEA for engaged.  you get a happy dance for that

 

Happy Dance

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:33 PM Title: The Conferences and Concerts

silly Bella, you should have went straight to the police.   UGh Mike is going to really hurt someone else soon

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:22 PM Title: The Halloween Party

Awww poor Rose.   Glad Edward was there though.   Yea for Jake and Ren.

 

grr for the "tail"

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 3:10 PM Title: The Breakdown

Poor rose. Glad she has great friends to support her. Ugh for the skanky twins and Aro. Just ewwwwww.

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 2:49 PM Title: The Fire

Poor rose. Em is so sweet. Ugh aro is so creepy

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 2:23 AM Title: The Birthday

What a wonderful birthday. Yummy car time

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 2:05 AM Title: The Morning After

Awww cute morning after. Loved my lasing.

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 11:40 PM Title: The 32 Year Old Born Again Virgin

yippee!!!!   You get something special for that.

lemon

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 9:24 PM Title: The Wedding

wonderful marriage.   Dont know if I could pull off pink though.  LOL.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:50 PM Title: The Reality

yea for new clothes and moving in together.

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:52 PM Title: The Talk

oh my   detective edward is onto something I think.

 

Poor B.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:49 AM Title: The Recovery

oh bella.  flashbacks are a bitch

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:34 AM Title: The Funeral

ppor bella.  really rough week for our kids

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:17 AM Title: The News

I was wondering at the beginning of the chapter about where Mikey was.   ugh.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:59 AM Title: The ER

woo hoo  Almost up to a full lemon!!!  Rose is such great friend.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:52 AM Title: The Realization

Wonderful chapter.   Like your mini lemon too.   He is so sweet.  I need one of him.

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:30 AM Title: The Confessions

awwww poor Jake.   Quil needs to be sued.  Arsehat.     Yea for e and his lovely words.   Ugh Lauren is going to be a probelm I think

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:18 AM Title: The Courtdate

awww poor jacob.  ROFL for Quil being the horndog.   Isnt Seth gay too?     Our kids are too cute together.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:07 AM Title: The Parties...Still

Mike is a pathetic ass.  She's making a mistake kissing a doctor???? moron.   Ah well.    YEA for Em and Rose together.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 3:14 AM Title: The Parties

Poor klutz B.  But at least they really kissed!!!

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: The Plans

go Eddie.   Get'er

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 10:36 PM Title: The Holiday

aww those two are so cute together.   Cant blame Bella for wanting to be cautious.

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 9:38 PM Title: The Flashback

So sad that all DUI/DWI trial dont end that way.   Wow  poor edward

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 7:12 PM Title: The Lunch

Aww Eddie is so sweet to take care of the girls. Awww poor Eddie. Parents and wife???

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 6:37 PM Title: The Storm

If Mike wanted the house so bad he should have bought it. Pathetic. Awwww for nice eddie

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:59 PM Title: The Calm

Ugh Newton is a pig. Pooh bitchy b comes out to play

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:36 PM Title: The End

Ugh why did Mike even want to get married then. Jerk. And Skanky Jessica? Ugh. Great story start.

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:17 PM Title: The New Beginning

This was a PERFECT story!  I loved the whole thing!  UGH, I'm so glad she's OK!  Personally, if I ever get the chance to have a kid, I may actually have them remove my parts then and there.  I hate endometriosis!  LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so sad this is over!!

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:46 PM Title: The Talk

NO FREAKING WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Holy COW!!!

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:12 PM Title: The Recovery

AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!  I totally understand Bella's freak out, I truly do.

OH! And I know this is like WAY LATE, but I was on Depo Provera for a few years and I hated it!  My hair was falling out in clumps, I had a splitting migraine an hour after each injection, my body ached, I was miiiiiiissssssserable!  BUT, that wasn't as bad as Lupron Depo which gave me hot flashes every 15-30 minutes.  Seriously.  I am 27 - and that was a few years ago that I had to take that - I shouldn't have hot flashes!  I just thought of that when I read she was put on that.  LOL!!  O_o anyway........................  great chapter, wonderful story, as always!

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