Date: 26 Dec 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
What the fuck am I missing? There's something fishy going on here....and hope to find out soon just what that is!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Please update this story. I want to know why everyone want Bella returned to Aro for.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
You caught me off guard on how fast it became explosive! Why doesn't Jasper & Alice come to any of the family dinners? Is it bc of Alice being a past slave?
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Still a positive move to go talk to Alice & Jasper! Then even staying to listen to Alice was huge for him!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
She was able to go get a book more than one at that. That is about the only baby step forward.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm new to your work. Really enjoyed it, hope you continue this story.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved your update and ask for more. Please updates more.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it. Looking forward to reading more ;)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
With all respect, I'm afraid your story is mightily similar to rmcms5's 'The Perfect Wife'. Admittedly I've only read the first few chapters of this, but so far the similarities are many.
I have read quite a few reviews from your story, and it seems like the progression is the same as TPW as well. As TPW was one of the first stories on here, I'm assuming rmcms5 had her story first.
I don't mean to sound rude, and although it don't usually review as I'm never sure what to say, I didn't think it was fair that so many of her ideas have been used in this story.
Please don't give up writing, but do either ask permission to use someone's ideas, and credit them in your authors notes, or change the story.
Best wishes,
Candoid32
Date: 17 Oct 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Don't you just love family get-togethers?! Loved this chapter and all the drama! I'd still love to know what Edward Sr has against Bella? Curious... Loved the. Dress description as well!
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
My word, Edward has grown as a person! Good for him! Possibly Emmett's dialogue penetrated and he is now seeing Bella as an honest to God human being - a special one at that. Loved every little syllable! Thank you!
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward better be so careful of his father. He is crazy. Hopefully the rest of the family will stand up for them to Edward. I wonder if they all left the table in support or did they stay and fight for them.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lovin' Emmett!
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
poor eddie jr and bella why do i have this thought that edie sr killed bella family
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, wonderful to see you back!! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
TY for the chapter!
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad that Edward stood up to his father. I am wondering what Edward Sr. is really thinking.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE IT MORE PLZZ!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
awww poor Bella. Glad E stood up to his jerk Dad
Date: 17 Oct 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
SO amazing! I cannot wait to see what happens next! I hope Bella and Edward get some more happy times soon.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well that's over with. Please let him be able to keep Bella Safe. It s so horrible to see a mean Esme and Carlisle
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jun 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
I like it i cant wait for more
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
how often will you update
Date: 03 Jun 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
OF COURSE IT'S HER WEDDING NIGHT AND SHE DOES LOVE EDWARD DOESN'T SHE SHE WANTS TO BE MADE LOVE TO. I'M SURE HE CAN HANDLE THAT.
Date: 26 May 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
What??????? XOXO, Cheri
Date: 24 May 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
I DON'T UNDERSTAND????? THIS CHAPTER AND A FEW MORE WERE PRE-WRITTEN. YOU POSTED THESE CHAPTERS YEARS AGO. HMMMMMM!!!!!!!! OH WELL STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO NEW CHAPTERS.
Date: 23 May 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
LOVED this chapter. So glad that Edward try to make it special for Bella.
Date: 23 May 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella's whole attitude has changed because Edward has loving feelings toward her. That is all she wanted. She wants to be loved and cherished. Edward has asked for her forgivness for his previous behavior. They will make it with time and patience.
Date: 23 May 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG! love this!! Please please update soon!!!!looking forward to more....
Date: 22 May 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapter
Date: 22 May 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I AM SO GLAD THAT AFTER A FEW YEARS OF NEGLECTING THIS STORY YOU HAVE FINALLY DECIDED TO COME BACK AND HOPEFULLY FINISH IT THIS TIME. IT REALLY IS A GOOD STORY. THANK YOU FOR COMMING BACK AND I LOOK FORWARD TO FOLLOWING TO THE END.
Date: 22 May 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
OMG WHY A CLIFFIE WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok so whoever edward sr. is trying to sell bella too yeah needs to go to hell cause yeah no it's just not cool!!!!!! i hate how evil people can be just saying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to see what edward sr.'s reaction is to finding out theyre married it'll be epic!!!!!!!! aro can so go to hell i hate him and edward sr can go with him!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for an update hope its sooon!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 May 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
Uh-oh!! On the lady business?
Date: 22 May 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yes, no hiccups at the wedding! Oh my how is Sr. gonna handle this one! I love Edward's evolution in the story! :-) :-) Can't say I can see him letting her go, ever, though! thank you for the new chapter!
Date: 22 May 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad she said yes. Ed Sr is going to have a coronary tomorrow. LOVE IT
Date: 22 May 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
looking forwrd to more
Date: 16 May 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
OH I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US HANGING LIKE THAT SO NOT FUNNY. WELL I HOPE SHE SAY'S YES BUT I FEEL SHE GOING TO SAY NO I SO HOPE I'M WRONG. EMMETT IS SO SMART TO THINK OF A WAY TO SAVE BELLA FROM ARO AND EDWARD'S FATHER I'M THINKING THE PERSON THAT WANT BELLA SO BAD IS JAMES AM I RIGHT?
Date: 11 May 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
love it, update again soon.
Date: 05 May 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awwww! I gotta say he did amazing! Sooo sweet and caring! He remembered all her favorites!
i gotta say the last line made me giggle!
Date: 05 May 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
Em is smart. That was a sweet "date" and proposal
Date: 05 May 2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
hmmm a few more puzzle pieces.... Daddy C needs to die. what a prick.
Date: 05 May 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
hmm Daddy C and Aro are def up to something. Wonder if B had a big inheritance or something coming at 18?
Aww the school thing is a sweet idea
Date: 05 May 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Glad Rose is being so nice. Bella is confused and confusing too. Hope Em and E take down Daddy C, Aro and I'm guessing James is involved somehow.
Date: 05 May 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
oooh Daddy C is up to something, thats for sure.
Date: 05 May 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
oooh Daddy C really wants to die huh?
Date: 05 May 2013 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
hmm now what does Daddy C have against Bella? or is it he owes Aro? Hmmm this is not good.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loving Emmett!!!.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
Go Emmett LOVEIT. Glad he is see what a dick he is.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bet Mommy already knows about Aro and all the evil deeds. Hope Rose cuts his balls off.
Date: 05 May 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Alice spoke her mind. Think she was a bit stupid to threaten the taking away part. That will back him in to a corner and he'll fight harder. Hope Elizabeth, Jazz, and Alice get into his head before Daddy Dearest does.
Date: 05 May 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
At least she isn't broken and told him off some.
Date: 05 May 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
Horny Dick..... Yeah thats a good name for him. Hope Jazz keeps up the pressure on him
Date: 05 May 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad B isnt totally broken. Face it E.... you're an accessory to kidnapping, participating in a white slavery ring, and are a rapist (even if they haven't gone all the way yet).
Date: 05 May 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Typical rapist comment...you're wet so you like/want it.
Glad V was nice to her. E you are a MORON!!!
Date: 05 May 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow he really is clueless isnt he? at least she got away with only a handjob for now
Date: 05 May 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hope Em and or Jazz kicks his arse. What a delusional prick he is
Date: 05 May 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
Def an entitiled self absorbed pervert. At least one man in the family (Jazz) has his head on straight.
Date: 05 May 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nope dont feel sorry for him one bit. WTF does he expect??? Of course she is crying and trembling. She's been kidnapped, sold, and expects to be raped. DUH. Oblivious men.
Date: 05 May 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm already dont like him. Deserves a junk punch. This reminds me a little bit of The Perfect Wife.
Date: 05 May 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hope she gets to kill Aro at some point and get some revenge.
Date: 02 May 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
So thrilled to see this story again!! Thank you! XOXO, Cheri
Date: 02 May 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'd ask for that drink too, and then say yes ;)
I do hope she does, if not for all the right reasons right ow but for the important one, keeping her safe.
Date: 02 May 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
He's changing for her and she appreciates it. There's so much more he wants to give herbut not all of it is possible right now. Especially now when he has to ask this of her.
Date: 02 May 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
He's changing and somehow happy and proud about it. Then she goes and kisses him...:)
Date: 02 May 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my, Edward has come a very long way. Now, say Yes! Bella!
Date: 02 May 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forard to more
Date: 04 Apr 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for updating great chapter!!!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Gotta love Emmett lol
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love this chapter. Thanks for the update!!!!!!!!1
Date: 19 Jan 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
this story is very good. thank you
Date: 12 Oct 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
I think he made here the happiest person on the earth...
I have been away for a month any only missed one chapter, you got to love that.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
L'apprentissage d'Isabella se passe bien pour le moment.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Une bonne fessée devrait être suffisante !
Date: 10 Oct 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
J'aime bien ce chapitre !
Merci.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Merci pour les deux.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
J'aime bien cette introduction !
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is showing her he loves her with his actions. This will do more to win Bella's heart than forcing himself physically. Bella will want Edward physically when she is ready.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks good chapters
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Nice chapter, lol loved the little self-loving in the shower by Edward!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for a great chapter!!!!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love it he truly cares for her she has to feel it. Aro and Carlisle are up to something not good cant wait for more. Thanks
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
GREAT STORY SO GALD YOU ARE BACK i HOP YOU FINISH IT. good work
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great to see you again!!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love this!!!!! I am glad that she is comfortable with Edward. Also glad that Edward is trying to make her comfortable.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
SO amazing! I am excited to see what happens next :D
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
so happy for another chapter, I really like this story and have missed it.... Yay! she is feeling less pressure and Edward is trying hard we can tell!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
good chapter when are you going to update?
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not to be a pain and beg and all, but! Please consider continuing this story. I have been checking for updates weekly and am just dying to know where your imagination is heading for this story. I loved it and just can't wait...I know there are others that feel the same way too. No pressure of course :-)!