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Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

What the fuck am I missing? There's something fishy going on here....and hope to find out soon just what that is!

Reviewer: xshynenstarx Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 24

Please update this story. I want to know why everyone want Bella returned to Aro for.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

You caught me off guard on how fast it became explosive!  Why doesn't Jasper & Alice come to any of the family dinners?  Is it bc of Alice being a past slave?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

Still a positive move to go talk to Alice & Jasper! Then even staying to listen to Alice was huge for him!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

She was able to go get a book more than one at that.  That is about the only baby step forward.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm new to your work. Really enjoyed it, hope you continue this story.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved your update and ask for more. Please updates more.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it. Looking forward to reading more ;)

Reviewer: candoid32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

With all respect, I'm afraid your story is mightily similar to rmcms5's 'The Perfect Wife'.  Admittedly I've only read the first few chapters of this, but so far the similarities are many. 

I have read quite a few reviews from your story, and it seems like the progression is the same as TPW as well.  As TPW was one of the first stories on here,  I'm assuming rmcms5 had her story first. 

I don't mean to sound rude, and although it don't usually review as I'm never sure what to say, I didn't think it was fair that so many of her ideas have been used in this story. 

Please don't give up writing, but do either ask permission to use someone's ideas, and credit them in your authors notes,  or change the story. 

Best wishes,

Candoid32 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

Don't you just love family get-togethers?!  Loved this chapter and all the drama!  I'd still love to know what Edward Sr has against Bella?  Curious...  Loved the. Dress description as well!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 19

My word, Edward has grown as a person!  Good for him!  Possibly Emmett's dialogue penetrated and he is now seeing Bella as an honest to God human being - a special one at that.  Loved every little syllable!  Thank you!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 24

Edward better be so careful of his father. He is crazy. Hopefully the rest of the family will stand up for them to Edward. I wonder if they all left the table in support or did they stay and fight for them.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Lovin' Emmett!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 24

poor eddie jr and bella why do i have this thought that edie sr killed bella family

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

Wow, wonderful to see you back!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

TY for the chapter! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

I am glad that Edward stood up to his father. I am wondering what Edward Sr. is really thinking. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 24

LOVE IT MORE PLZZ!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

awww poor Bella.   Glad E stood up to his jerk Dad

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

SO amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I hope Bella and Edward get some more happy times soon.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great update

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

Well that's over with.  Please let him be able to keep Bella Safe. It s so horrible to see a mean Esme and Carlisle

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Georgie20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

I like it i cant wait for more

Reviewer: amberbrian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

how often will you update

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

OF COURSE IT'S HER WEDDING NIGHT AND SHE DOES LOVE EDWARD DOESN'T SHE SHE WANTS TO BE MADE LOVE TO. I'M SURE HE CAN HANDLE THAT.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

What???????  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

SO amazing :D

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

I DON'T UNDERSTAND????? THIS CHAPTER AND A FEW MORE WERE PRE-WRITTEN. YOU POSTED THESE CHAPTERS YEARS AGO. HMMMMMM!!!!!!!! OH WELL STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO NEW CHAPTERS.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

LOVED this chapter. So glad that Edward try to make it special for Bella. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella's whole attitude has changed because Edward has loving feelings toward her. That is all she wanted. She wants to be loved and cherished. Edward has asked for her forgivness for his previous behavior. They will make it with time and patience.

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG! love this!! Please please update soon!!!!looking forward to more....

Reviewer: becky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love it

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I AM SO GLAD THAT AFTER A FEW YEARS OF NEGLECTING THIS STORY YOU HAVE FINALLY DECIDED TO COME BACK AND HOPEFULLY FINISH IT THIS TIME. IT REALLY IS A GOOD STORY. THANK YOU FOR COMMING BACK AND I LOOK FORWARD TO FOLLOWING TO THE END.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG WHY A CLIFFIE WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok so whoever edward sr. is trying to sell bella too yeah needs to go to hell cause yeah no it's just not cool!!!!!! i hate how evil people can be just saying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to see what edward sr.'s reaction is to finding out theyre married it'll be epic!!!!!!!! aro can so go to hell i hate him and edward sr can go with him!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for an update hope its sooon!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Uh-oh!!  On the lady business?

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

Yes, no hiccups at  the wedding!  Oh my how is Sr. gonna handle this one!  I love Edward's evolution in the story!   :-)  :-)  Can't say I can see him letting her go, ever, though!  thank you for the new chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 23

Glad she said yes.  Ed Sr is going to have a coronary tomorrow.  LOVE IT

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

looking forwrd to more 

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

OH I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US HANGING LIKE THAT SO NOT FUNNY. WELL I HOPE SHE SAY'S YES BUT I FEEL SHE GOING TO SAY NO I SO HOPE I'M WRONG. EMMETT IS SO SMART TO THINK OF A WAY TO SAVE BELLA FROM ARO AND EDWARD'S FATHER I'M THINKING THE PERSON THAT WANT BELLA SO BAD IS JAMES AM I RIGHT?

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

love it, update again soon.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awwww!  I gotta say he did amazing!  Sooo sweet and caring!  He remembered all her favorites!

i gotta say the last line made me giggle!

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Em is smart.   That was a sweet "date" and proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

hmmm a few more puzzle pieces.... Daddy C needs to die.  what a prick.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

hmm Daddy C and Aro are def up to something.  Wonder if B had a big inheritance or something coming at 18?

Aww the school thing is a sweet idea

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

Glad Rose is being so nice.   Bella is confused and confusing too.   Hope Em and E take down Daddy C, Aro and I'm guessing James is involved somehow.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

oooh Daddy C is up to something, thats for sure.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

oooh Daddy C really wants to die huh?  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

hmm now what does Daddy C have against Bella? or is it he owes Aro?   Hmmm this is not good.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loving Emmett!!!.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

Go Emmett  LOVEIT.   Glad he is see what a dick he is.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 13

Go ROSE!!!!!   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bet Mommy already knows about Aro and all the evil deeds.   Hope Rose cuts his balls off.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 11

Glad Alice spoke her mind.   Think she was a bit stupid to threaten the taking away part.  That will back him in to a corner and he'll fight harder.   Hope Elizabeth, Jazz, and Alice get into his head before Daddy Dearest does.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

At least she isn't broken and told him off some.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

Horny Dick..... Yeah  thats a good name for him.   Hope Jazz keeps up the pressure on him

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Glad B isnt totally broken.    Face it E.... you're an accessory to kidnapping, participating in a white slavery ring, and are a rapist (even if they haven't gone all the way yet).

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Typical rapist comment...you're wet so you like/want it.

Glad V was nice to her.   E you are a MORON!!!

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow he really is clueless isnt he?  at least she got away with only a handjob for now

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hope Em and or Jazz kicks his arse.   What a delusional prick he is

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

Def an entitiled self absorbed pervert.   At least one man in the family (Jazz) has his head on straight.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

Nope dont feel sorry for him one bit.  WTF does he expect???  Of course she is crying and trembling.  She's been kidnapped, sold, and expects to be raped.  DUH.  Oblivious men.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

hmmm already dont like him.  Deserves a junk punch.   This reminds me a little bit of The Perfect Wife.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hope she gets to kill Aro at some point and get some revenge.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

OH MY GOSH!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 22

So thrilled to see this story again!!  Thank you! XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'd ask for that drink too, and then say yes ;)

I do hope she does, if not for all the right reasons right ow but for the important one, keeping her safe.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

He's changing for her and she appreciates it. There's so much more he wants to give herbut not all of it is possible right now. Especially now when he has to ask this of her.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

He's changing and somehow happy and proud about it. Then she goes and kisses him...:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh my, Edward has come a very long way.  Now, say Yes!  Bella! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 22

looking forard to more 

Reviewer: mtaz4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for updating great chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

Gotta love Emmett lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 21

OH SNAP :D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love this chapter. Thanks for the update!!!!!!!!1

 

Reviewer: Gooseonline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

this story is very good. thank you

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

I think he made here the happiest person on the earth...

I have been away for a month any only missed one chapter, you got to love that.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

L'apprentissage d'Isabella se passe bien pour le moment.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Une bonne fessée devrait être suffisante !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

J'aime bien ce chapitre !

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Merci pour les deux.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Merci !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

J'aime bien cette introduction !

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

Edward  is showing her he loves her with his actions. This will do more to win Bella's heart than forcing himself physically. Bella will want Edward physically when she is ready.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 20

Nice chapter, lol loved the little self-loving in the shower by Edward!

Reviewer: mtaz4321 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for a great chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love it he truly cares for her she has to feel it.  Aro and Carlisle are up to something not good cant wait for more.  Thanks

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

GREAT STORY SO GALD YOU ARE BACK i HOP YOU FINISH IT. good work

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

looking forward to more

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great to see you again!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love this!!!!! I am glad that she is comfortable with Edward. Also glad that Edward is trying to make her comfortable. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

SO amazing!  I am excited to see what happens next :D

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

so happy for another chapter, I really like this story and have missed it....  Yay! she is feeling less pressure and Edward is trying hard we can tell!

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

good chapter when are you going to update?

Reviewer: blindinlove1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not to be a pain and beg and all, but!  Please consider continuing this story.  I have been checking for updates weekly and am just dying to know where your imagination is heading for this story.  I loved it and just can't wait...I know there are others that feel the same way too.  No pressure of course :-)!

 

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