Date: 22 May 2016 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I want more!so great!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
You should continue this story!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy smokes! That was hot. Great O/S.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi!!it was hot!!! i wold like to see you continue with this story!!! and see what Renee will do lol keep going !!! :D
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thatbwasbso sexy and erotic. A nice oneshot.
Date: 17 Feb 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
hey
WOW great!
bye
Lil
Date: 11 Nov 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was hawwwwwwwwwt :D I hope you continue to write more of this story. Pretty please ?:$
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
hot as dirty Edward, doing both Mon and daughter
Date: 29 Jun 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was one hot pone-shot
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG... this is awesome... I loved you lemon!!!
It was smut-filled but with a purpose. You had a plot so that's great. And I love that you left it open-ended. Maybe someday the inspiration will hit you to expand. If so; I'll definitely go along for the ride!
Muah ~ Fangs
Date: 18 Jun 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
yes, it was dirty and realistic... i've seen something like that happening in real life.. haha!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow brilliant writing.. makes me want to know what happens when bella's mom finds out..
are you going to continue?
Author's Response:
i really do hope to continue it - but i want to make sure i don't just write something for the sake of writing it ya know? i have been giving it a lot of thought lately so that means maybe i'm a little closer :) thanks for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn!
I'll be taking a much needed shower now.
XO
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is so perfect! Loved the story!
Date: 28 May 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is the best one-shot I ever had the pleasure of reading. Just like you I also find one-shots can be frustrating, as you want more than what you usual get from them. This was like a whole story but in one. I just wanted to say you write amazinly and to keep up the good work.
Sylvia :D :) x
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the compliment. :) M
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mmmmmmm!!! Yummmy! I really loved this story! It was wonderful! So Edward & Bella! But of course, the only sad part is I really would have liked to have seen where this would have gone! Great Story I hope you are planning to write longer stories similar to this one, I would love to read it. Thanks for writing this one. YOu have one more short story out there and since this was so good, I am headed over to read that one. YOu should hear from me soon! :^)
Author's Response:
Wow Thanks!!! Love ya!
Date: 20 May 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
It is HOT so thank you for sharing it with us, I only wish we could see what happends in the morning : )
Author's Response:
Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
HI. This my first review ever. It was incredibly hot, please give us more. I want to see how they work it out.
Author's Response:
I'm totally honored!! Thanks!
Date: 20 May 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
u should definitely continue..i would <3 to read renees reaction.. loved it!:0)
Author's Response:
Thank you - I'm definitely thinking of writing more of this - I usually can't keep my focus past one chapter but I know I'd like to see how it turns out too LOL
Date: 20 May 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
ya i say that was hot.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 May 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
are you planing to continue , you should!
Author's Response:
thanks for taking the time to leave a note. means a lot to me. i'm really considering adding more to it. don't have anything written out there, but it's on my mind for sure.
Date: 20 May 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
OK. I'm going to say hey because it's rude to read someone's work without saying thank you.
I liked it. I'm not necessarily a fan of a smutty one shot, particular when "love" is being whispered in the heat of passion. BUT, your smut is definately not dirty. Lord knows, there are worse out there.
Thank you for sharing. Have a lovely evening.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for taking the time to leave a note for me!! means a lot!!
Date: 20 May 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow that was great I wish you would continue this and make it into a story. It is really good
Author's Response:
thanks for the review!!! makes me so happy!! i'm really thinking about adding more to it - but not quite ready to yet! thanks again!
Date: 20 May 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well it wasn't quite as taboo as I thought. Which Im cool with lol!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! hopefully you still liked it. i know it's not as taboo as a lot of the things as i like to read - honestly i haven't gotten up the balls to post my dirtiest thoughts - just because i don't want to deal with all the prudes out there - but ya know what's just good kinky sex to one person is satans sin to another - so i was trying to say it's not your main stream kind of lemon i guess!! anyway thanks again for the review. means a lot that you took the time!