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Reviewer: The Real MC Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

that was strange and confusing but good!! if tht makes any scense

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 - You offer you

good we need some revelations!!  poor bella... how sad... glad ed did the right thing and didn't take advantage.  he is growing up!  can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Confusion

???? strange i guessed right about the cover of being gay though. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

well bella you got a lot to say to ed... cause i would like to know what the hell is going on. you are very very confusing bella very!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Paint me good

hum  what does he have up his sleeve i don't trust carlisle at all

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Hellos and goodbyes

lots of issues lots of issues!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing every chap. Hopefully you're still with me even with all the issues and confusions. ;D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

hum.. it's not going to be that easy ed..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Card

oh boy making him run the gauntlet.  but you know what he needs to he messed up and if she is worth it to him then he would take everything dished out to get her!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 - White blank canvases

strange.. poor jacob not my favorite person.  he was so against ed and now he wants her to get back with him intersting.  well i guess bella is the cover of james being gay? 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

this is so strange... argh!! i am confused!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

HOT but i guess she got what she wanted.  she is going to be gone in the morning isn't she?  so much for being married! glad you value your marriage bella~

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Wake up to the truth

okay we still don't know why he kissed her, what to prove he didn't love her anymore?  that is pretty lame and not sure i would buy it.  why is she jumping into the sack with him so fast?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Pickles and peanut butter

yeah kidnapp her so we can get some answers from both of you!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Forever scarred

this is way complicated... why would alice tell them to meet each other and then they aren't there?  what is up with that?  it seems like people are trying to keep them apart

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Vacation and surprises

confused and bewildered i hope we can get some answers soon!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Infamous grandfather

okay what a loving family.. does carlisle have anything to do with why bella and ed broke up?  i have a sneaking feeling he set him up!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Denials and truths

oookay... hum why do i think there is more to this story?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

james huh?  interesting twist!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

oh ed what did you do?  love ya jasper..



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;D

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 - You offer you

Man!  Jacob died.  That had me crying.



Author's Response:

*huggles* =D

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 18 - You offer you

Found your story today.  Read one chapter and I was so hooked!  Read all the chapters right away.  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you're liking the story. ;D

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 - You offer you

Wow



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 18 - You offer you

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Confusion

loooking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

thank you. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

i have a feeling her eggo is preggo and its going to get intrewsting looking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Let's see next chap. if your hunch is correct. Thanks for reading. ;D

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

ahh now don't do that.  

 

I am Mary Mary as always, just had to use my husbands pc until our move is completed.

There lives are so messed up.  That is what you get when you cheat and you lie. Just stop that, tell the truth and when you can not because of hurting someone's feelings then just be quiet.

Even if Jasper knew why Edward kissed Tanya. At this point it makes no difference who did what. He should have never done that. PERIOD  He just has to say why he did it and he knows it was wrong and he has regretted that decision ever since. He hates Tanya.

I say buy that damn Mansion and then give it to Bella. Just for her if that is what she always wanted. Or buy it and then keep quiet about it until she is more receptive.

 

 



Author's Response:

Edward is sorry he did what he did. He actually admitted he was wrong in the earlier chaps. However, he is having a hard time accepting that Bella won't be coming back to him.

Thanks for reading. =D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

What is the deal with James??

Author's Response:

You will find out soon. Thanks for reading. =D

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 - FY, Em!

I want to know what the deal is with James!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Paint me good

Well Good for Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews. I appreciate it. =)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

of course Tanya is still trying. Grandpa is helping feed her the info.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 11 - White blank canvases

James is gay. Got that jake is dying got that. Bella married James for some reason perhaps to give him insurance or something. A cover of some kind a BEARD?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

she was right, why did he need proof?  Well she just cheated on James. So she is no better, only she is married.

 

Yes we trust you, I just don't like her choices here.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Wake up to the truth

Yes but this is wrong. She never got an answer to the Tanya thing. Just miss communications for the Spears/Sears Bar messup. So cheat on James now? 

 

BAD



Author's Response:

Just a little more, then you can read about James and Bella.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Pickles and peanut butter

interesting story.  I am not sure if I get slither, the title. Perhaps it is how they live?

Well any how. Edward money or not is paying for his "kiss"



Author's Response:

Slither is based on the song with the same title from Velvet Revolver. I have a longer explanation in my blog. Check it out if you want. --->  http://verucasin.wordpress.com/2011/05/17/slither-my-newest-tale/

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Infamous grandfather

Well perhaps he deserves her. Perhaps



Author's Response:

Maybe. Let's see.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Denials and truths

Oh she HAS to forgive Eddie.  Nope she does not HAVE to forgive you.  You screwed the pooch so to speak so that was your "end of story".

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

I know we dont have the why's yet. SO I am letting this build. If they all hate Jasper & Bella why go to the Whitlock Wedding?  If it is for Alice then make sure to stay to yourselves.



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Paint me good

Ooohh!  I like Edward threatening Carlisle. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, girl. ;) Hugs.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Paint me good

Wow, everything changed.  I had developed some thoughts of what Edward was like, who he was, but this chapter was way out there, a little wierd with Aro's rambling and a totally different view of Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Hellos and goodbyes

Sad but I'm liking this story. The tension!



Author's Response:

Thanks girlie. Muahz! =D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Hellos and goodbyes

Bella has a lot of demons.

Author's Response:

Yes, she does. A lot of things to deal with before she could actually with E again.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

she might just want to say hey...lol



Author's Response:

She might. ;) Let's see next chapter.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

Wow, wasn't expecting Bella to track Edward down like that. Hope Tanya is gone for good, can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

loved it i just hope he gets what he wants from bella finally ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Friends and enemies

I don't know what to think, I am like a burger on the grill flipping!



Author's Response:

lol. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Card

Glad to see Edward take the first step and contact Alice.  Jasper walking in is a whole other story, I don't think he will just sit down and communicate with Edward.  Hope he is okay.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked this chapter. Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Card

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: debussyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Card

Your Alice is a riot. I can just see her blowing smoke circles in Edward's face while he grovels for her help. Curious to see if Jaz would let E get some much needed words in before he starts swinging. Great story.



Author's Response:

Alice is not as chipper as she is in other stories...but she still is a quiet force to be reckoned with. 

Glad you liked it. Thank you. =D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Card

Looking forward to the rest in a couple days!



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 11 - White blank canvases

well that was intresting looking foward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you. =D

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 11 - White blank canvases

mmm hmm.....



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 - White blank canvases

Well don't you give all of us team Edwards a soft spot for your Jake.

I think I got James is gay, Yeah the reasons for thier marriage??



Author's Response:

I don't usually make my Jake a good guy in my stories, but it seemed I did (unconsciously at that) to make him sweet in this one. lol

Yes, you got James is gay...and...this is one great factor as to why he is married to Bella. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

looking foward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

hmmmmm......that bella has plans.



Author's Response:

Maybe she does...or maybe she doesn't. 

Don't worry though, next chapter is in her pov...so you'll get a little of what's she's thinking. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: debussyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

This chapter redeemed Edward for me. His torment and remorse was so sincere  and profound, I'm now rooting for him, instead of wanting to bitchslap him.  Hope that life is treating you well and you'll favor us with more answers to the many mysteries soon.



Author's Response:

Glad you're starting to like our Edward. He will definitely need to heal first (both he and Bella) before he/they can move forward.

I'll update in a few days.

Thank you sweetie. =)

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

Interesting story. Now come on why the hell did Edward kiss Skankya? If it's the reason he gave her well then it's screw up & he deserves what ever happens to him. No excuse the night before their wedding (doucheward). Thanks :)



Author's Response:

Edward's excuse for kissing T was lame, but he needed to come clean to Bella. So he said it like it was.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

So Alice could tell him the story of Bellas marriage situation?

He has to fight for her!!



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will. 

Edward and Bella needs to heal before they could forward. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Glassed heart

I'm so confused by Bella's actions. I can't wait to read more and find out what is going on in her head.



Author's Response:

You'll soon know. Next chapter is in BPOV. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

I trust you but please post soon.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I'll update soon.  Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

totally hot sex! looking foward to the out come of this chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you. =) See yah next update.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

i trust you dog!!  lol...but i did like them bumpin uglies!  lol



Author's Response:

Glad you do, bb. lol

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

wow! What does she know? What did he do to her?

 

I am very curious about the dynamics of this Bella & Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

The sex was hot of course. I feel so sorry for both of them. It's Edward's fault for being stupid that put them in this position. I wouldn't forgive easily (or possibly ever) if I was in Bella's shoes. I'm curious about her marriage to James. Obviously she doesn't love him or she wouldn't cheat since that's what she feels Edward did to her.

I'm really loving this story. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Edward's excuse is lame, and he knows it too. But it is what it is, so he needed to come clean to Bella. 

James and Bella's marriage will be explained soon, and decide for yourself whether she cheated or not.

Anyway, thank you. See yah next update. =)

Reviewer: debussyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Kiss me and lie

Great to find your story here. I've stopped going to Twilighted after incessent virus issues. Thank you for a very charming trip to the gutter in this chapter. I like it that Bella's in control and owns his ass, because frankly, he needs to grovel more. This Bella seems to live as if every moment is her last, with no regrets or apologies. She draws me in. I have a harder time warming up to this Edward, minus his mad skills in bed, that is. I do love your style however, and will follow every update.



Author's Response:

Hi. I saw you last time here, but wasn't able to respond because your review got lost somewhere. I attempted to answer but got an error every time. 

Anyway, glad you can relate to our Bella here. I love writing her, so I'm kinda thrilled her character pulls you in. ;)

Thanks bb. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Wake up to the truth

im glad that they are talking 



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

I just read the section again and you're right. I must have just completely 'spaced out' when I was reading and missed the fact that it's not the same time frame, but it was after her shift.

Sorry, it was my bad, not yours or your beta's. I love reading your story so much that sometimes I rush to get to the 'good stuff' (I want to know what's going to happen) that I miss the details.

I can only claim I read it before I had coffeee. I have a fresh cup in hand today and am going to reread it SLOWLY.

Please forgive me.  :)

I'm looking forward to your next chapter.  Mic



Author's Response:

No problem sweets. It's okay.

Don't worry about it. ;)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Wake up to the truth

Nice to see the location to meet in CA was a misunderstanding and not Alice trying to keep them apart.

**just a note - you need to edit or have your beta edit a little better. You switch Edward's drink back and forth between coffee & beer in the same scene.  He smells coffee, asks for a beer & drinks a cappacino.**



Author's Response:

Hmmm....your comment about the confusing drinks...I can't quite understand it. I even went back to see if I got all the drinks wrong, but I didn't. The beer was ordered at the restaurant where Bella worked (where the place smelled like coffee and cigarettes), while the coffee and cappuccino was ordered in the other restaurant.

Copy paste it if you think I made a mistake, so I can understand what you're talking about my beta and me not editing it properly.

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Wake up to the truth

Still not sure why Edward thought it was a good idea to dry hump Tayna...Then he actually got pissed at Bella because she humiliated him??? What an ass!!! LOL!



Author's Response:

If you read the chapter closely, T did the dry humping not E. He just kissed T...but still that doesn't excuse his behavior.

He is one stupid asshole, that's for sure.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Pickles and peanut butter

excited to see what happens next and what hes going to do about everything 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Pickles and peanut butter

I Like this Aro.  nd what eddie boy needs to do is kidnap her and fucker her till she she says uncle!



Author's Response:

Yes, I like a good Aro. He is always a villain in other fanfic.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Pickles and peanut butter

Nice update.  I like this Aro. I understand Edward's obsession with Bella, but he should let her go.



Author's Response:

Yay, you like Aro! He is a constant in E's life...one he needs. 

Yes, I say E needs to let Bella go too...but not before he clears things up with her. Don't worry, that'll be soon.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Forever scarred

well im excited to see what ahppens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Forever scarred

Sounds like Alice misled both of them in CA or they got their info wrong to wait at two different hotels?



Author's Response:

Well, let's see if Alice had something to do with their not meeting in CA.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Forever scarred

She needs to make up her mind, what she wants? I mean I would go crazy with all the back and forth. I thought it was just a kiss with Tanya, he made it sound like nothing was really to it. But Bella mentioning the dry humping has me questioning what the hell really happened that night. Are we going to get the answer to that question any time soon



Author's Response:

To Edward it was nothing. Though it would really be hard to explain to anybody why he did that. It was stupid really. 

I'm still building up their characters. But don't you worry, they will have a talk soon so some of the questions will be answered.

Thanks. ;) 

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Vacation and surprises

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Vacation and surprises

well that was an intresting chatper 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Vacation and surprises

I think it mean that she's married but not for love or anything like that. They may be good friends and she asked for a favor thinking it would keep Edward away so she didn't have to deal. Maybe he agreed because she needed a green card and had no one else in his life at the moment. I don't know, I'm reaching but it's killing me that I can't figure all this out. You have me stumped and that rarely happens so I'm going crazy lol



Author's Response:

Lol. Well, you have some nice guesses there. We'll see if you got some right (of course in future chaps.)

Anyway, thank you. =)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Vacation and surprises

yes! Bella likes to have fun!  How convienent for her to be vacationing too ...hope it leads to a discussion!



Author's Response:

Yes, our Bella is different here. Let's see what happens next chapter. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Infamous grandfather

I love this OOC Carlisle!  He makes it very interesting...but I also love your strong/stubborn Edward!  Poor guy can't catch a brake!



Author's Response:

*grin* Glad that you like my characters. Thank you. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Infamous grandfather

excited to see what happens next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Denials and truths

he is such a dick to her ! 



Author's Response:

E is just angry that she had given up on them that easily. I know it's not an excuse, but anger sometimes makes us do something we will surely regret. 

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Denials and truths

Wow that chpater kinda had me going was she in the same room as that kinda shit was happenng between me and the hubby?  That was great.



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;) *grins*

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Denials and truths

K you have me so out in left field. What the hell is going on? She left cuz of a kiss? That seems a little extreme.Also she's so pissed over a kiss yet she's married already. I know that I don't have all the facts yet but right about now it's now looking good for Bella. I mean she walked away without a word and yet she thinks she owes him nothing after all this time? I'm sorry but I call B/S. He at least deserves the right to have his say as to what happened. After all it did cost him everything? I mean why would she not want to hear him out? From what he says there love was amazing shit like that doesn't just go away. You have to give me something here, don't leave me hanging? I hate it in left field its lonely. lol



Author's Response:

The kiss was not just a simple kiss. In the next chapters, you would have an idea why B left him.

And as for Bella being married to James, there's a valid reason for that. Well, as you know I can't give away as much details as I would like too. Don't woory, I'll update soon. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lindsaywin Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

A really intense first two chapters-very compelling, so keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

Umm yeah why is she married to James of all people? Also it was only a year and she was so hurt from what he did that she left his ass at the alter yet she so quickly married someone else? Also what does he do for a living and just cuz people were mean to him as a kid that gives him the right to be a dick? What the hell is with Emmett, where's the family loyalty



Author's Response:

It's over a year. (a year and a half to be exact). There's a reason why Bella is married to James, and it'll be revealed in later chapters.

Edward is an investor. And as for Emmett, I can't quite get your statement, but I'm guessing you assume he's doing something bad by interacting with Edward. Emmett is not blood related to Bella or Jasper. He is related to Alice.

Okay, I hope I answered your questions. PM if you have more.

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: phoenices24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

Update this is great!



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Break Me Even More

Ok, I'm sticking with you because I have to know what the hell is going on!



Author's Response:

Good to hear! Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

OMFG I cant wait for more what did she catch him doing or should I say who was he doing????



Author's Response:

I'll update very soon. Hope to see you around. Thanks. =)

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Well? What did he do? And why wont he go near her even if he was paid?...

Author's Response:

I'll update soon, so you'll get some answers.

Thank you for reading. =)

Reviewer: lithium Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

omg.. you can't do this!

how am i supposed to sleep now? 

:OO i love the first chap so far.. hope you'll post the next soon! 



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank for this nice review. ;)

I'll update very soon. 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Love it!   This seems intriguing... Naturally it's going to be good you only write GREAT stories!!!!  Can't wait for more of this and MP of course....

 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked this as well as you liked MP. ;) (I'll try to update MP as soon as possible.)

Anyway, thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope to see you when I update this next time. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

looks intresting! i



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

I am guessing she saw him cheating on her but???



Author's Response:

Something like that. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. ;)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Oh yes I fucking love. I can't wait to see what happens next please come with this story I want to know what the hell he did that she saw and why she doesn't stay in one place for too long



Author's Response:

Don't worry, an update is happening very soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. =) 

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

well well eddie.  cry motherfucker!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope to see you when I update. ;)

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

WHOA...now that is a freaking awesome beginning! Im totally confused and I so want more!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Love it!!!  Damn ...I was angry at bella for dumping edward at the alter, but then the things that jasper said, totally made me change my mind!  Can't wait to see what stupid things edward did to push her away!  Lokking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thank you. =)

 

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