Date: 05 Jan 2018 9:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it! Gonna check out another one of yours I haven't read yet. I think this is the 3rd or 4th I've read. Thoroughly enjoy your writing.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 12:35 PM Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for posting it. Any chance you will post some outtakes from Alice's POV?
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2016 6:03 PM Title: Epilogue
I like this sarcastic E and love that u kill Alice
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2015 11:22 AM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME story ;) a have a couple of questions though ;) forks university? and when she changed did she change to an animal diet? and did her eyes stay brown? i was a bit disappointed that edward didn't have green eyes though ;D
Date: 02 May 2015 4:59 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story. Loved it.
Date: 02 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: The Magic Key
Interesting theory.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:34 AM Title: You Blow My Mind
Okay, they like having sex, can we please get back to the plot?
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:23 AM Title: Taking Control
Wow, once they got started, all they want to do is have sex!
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:13 AM Title: Me And My Jealousy
So, maybe Heidi came by to assist with the Jasper situation?
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:44 AM Title: Crash and Burn
That was such a touching love scene.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 4:24 AM Title: Every Rose Has Its Thorn
How very interesting to have Alice be the evil one.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:49 PM Title: Do It Now, Remember It Later
Interesting getting Edwatd's perspective.
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:32 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
Jasper really is evil and diabolical as well.
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:25 AM Title: Secret Confessions
I knew Alice was bad news.
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:07 AM Title: Love Bites
This story is just facinating. I'm so glad I have had the opportunity to not only read it, but also let u know how much I'm enjoying the read.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 11:59 PM Title: Hot and Cold
That was definitely interesting. Too bad Edward didn't allow Bella to talk to him and explain.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:58 AM Title: Feeling Sorry
I just love this story. So glad I have the opportunity to read it and give u my thoughts as well.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:36 AM Title: Kiss The Pain Away
Wow, that was an eventful chapter.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:59 AM Title: So Many Questions, So Little Answers
Why am I thinking that Jasper isn't telling the truth about Edward.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:40 AM Title: The Truth About Lies
Boy, Alice is really a bitch in this sTory.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 5:06 AM Title: Unwelcome Visitor
This just gets better and better every chapter.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:46 AM Title: Let's Celebrate
I'm guessing this is the dark sheep of the family, Edward? I love that Emmett and Bella are both still human.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:09 AM Title: Prologue
I started reading this as a PDF on my Kindle. I wasn't aware it was on this sight. I'm on chapter 3 and just love it and wanted to tell you how much I love what you are doing with the characters so far. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2013 6:46 AM Title: Prologue
Love it so far!!!You're a fantastic writer :) the words just gelled, certainly drew me in.I've been searching for a fic to read for AGES now and i think i found it :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 2:25 AM Title: Epilogue
loved it but i must sit and cry (m thank god for tissue) but anywho , loved it
Date: 07 Jul 2011 8:34 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story. I will miss this. What a journey. Edward changed so much, who would have thunk it?
thank you until we meet again,
Date: 07 Jul 2011 8:24 PM Title: Epilogue
I am sad this story is over. I hope you write another soon.
Nice job!
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:36 PM Title: Raise a Little Hell
i so shall miss this story,, good job joking aside,, i will reread it again
Date: 07 Jul 2011 7:33 AM Title: Prologue
yeh you got me - onto the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2011 9:51 PM Title: Raise a Little Hell
You know they came along way. I was worried we might not make it here. You have been great, updating and all.
Pat yourself on the back. All too many writers give up while writing.
Thank you,
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:04 PM Title: Raise a Little Hell
Oh I am so going to miss this story, but I enjoyed this chapter. Especially the kick ass fight with A&B!!!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:01 PM Title: As I Lay Dying
THIS is an epic fucking story! loves it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:47 PM Title: Raise a Little Hell
I am so happy that Edward and Bella are wearing their matching shirts, drinking O negative blood and watching TrueBlood together. :)
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:38 PM Title: Raise a Little Hell
Wow. I didn't expect it would end so quickly. Makes sense, but still.
Loving it!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:54 AM Title: Battered and Bruised
:)
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:52 AM Title: Every Rose Has Its Thorn
:)
Date: 02 Jul 2011 10:52 AM Title: Do It Now, Remember It Later
:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 9:20 PM Title: As I Lay Dying
Hum! so Jasper tried to do something right hun! All I have to say is Bella kick som a*s now!!!! I love the new story, the teaser is awesome.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 8:42 PM Title: So Many Questions, So Little Answers
:)
Date: 26 Jun 2011 7:31 PM Title: The Truth About Lies
:)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 3:03 PM Title: As I Lay Dying
I'm guessing that Jazz was hoping he could keep her around by turning her. Although she hates him now, she should realize that he was insane and that made him hurt her. I guess I see it that Jazz was a victim in this as well and I'm kind-of sad he's dead.
But yay! She's with Edward. Waiting....
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2011 2:18 PM Title: As I Lay Dying
I loved this chapter! This is the first story I've read where Bella is changed and doesn't know it...even when she wakes up! I don't think Edward needs to worry about "protecting" Bella from Alice. Yeah! Bella is gonna kick Alice's butt!:)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:45 AM Title: Battered and Bruised
I think Jasper was lying to Alice to keep Bella safe. If he really didn't care about her, he wouldn't have cared if Alice snapped her neck. She may keep him calm, but now she wants the madman. I think Jasper is going to fall on his sword to help save her.
But what do I know?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:03 AM Title: The Magic Key
So Alice is Maria & Victoria in this story. Very clever. And now we know that if Jazz can be taken away from Alice, maybe things will be okay.
And Edward really needs to keep it in his pants.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 9:30 PM Title: Crash and Burn
Break time!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 8:55 PM Title: Do It Now, Remember It Later
Now we know Edward's story. Reading on....
Date: 21 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Secret Confessions
Damn. So much for Jazz being a nice guy.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 8:12 PM Title: Love Bites
Edward's still a jackass. And am I the only one who feels bad for Jasper and wants him to end up with Bella still?
Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:39 PM Title: Feeling Sorry
Bella, if you loved him with every part of your being you wouldn't have been kissing Edward. Just saying....
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:54 PM Title: Stolen Kiss
Hmmm, I was wondering if maybe Alice had special powers and changed Edward into Jasper. That would explain the night before.
Onwards....
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:12 PM Title: First Meeting
Actually, I'm liking the story as it is. We'll see how the E & B plot goes.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 8:13 PM Title: Battered and Bruised
Edward better get there fast before there's nothing left of her to save. Also at the beginning did Jasper feed her some of his blood? If kinda seems like that's what he did knowing Alice like he did and what she'd probably do. He doesn't want to lose Bella so he took drastic measures before Alice could do more harm
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Next chapter will be posted soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:53 PM Title: Battered and Bruised
Alice is a scary mean girl because she pretends to be so sweet. I hope that Bella gets to kick Alice's butt. :)
Author's Response:
LOL yes she is! Next chapter will show if what you want comes true!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:48 PM Title: Battered and Bruised
Wow, Alice is mega bitch! Jasper's just a snivelling wimp. Can't wait for Edward to open up a can on both of them. ;o)
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 1:01 AM Title: Consequences
Bella is as good as dead if she doesn't get some vamp blood un her ass very soon
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:32 PM Title: Consequences
WOW, let the games begin!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:26 PM Title: Consequences
Oh my. The shit's hitting the fan now! Feel bad for Bella. I'm sure she heard what Edward said and misconstrued it. Now she's in the clutches of a wack job. Next chapter should be very interesting. Is it the prologue portion?
Date: 09 Jun 2011 5:35 PM Title: Prologue
Can't hardly wait for an update!!! Me likee!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:04 AM Title: The Magic Key
Realization hit! WOW!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:15 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
Wow, Jasper sucks! Hope Edward gets to beat the shit out of him. How about Alice and Jasper getting it on the first day they met? What a tool! Whew. It felt good to vent. Ha!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:11 PM Title: Kiss The Pain Away
Oh man, I'm liking this story. It's great that you've made Alice the manipulative bitch and Rosalie the caring friend. Yep, I'm figuring it's been Jasper killing people all along........Edward left to keep the family intact. Enjoying the chemistry between Bella and Edward. Was it Rosalie who asked Edward to come back or someone else? Hmmm.
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying it! Yes, Rose is the one who asked Edward to come back.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:44 AM Title: Love Bites
loveable jackass
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:36 AM Title: The Truth About Lies
I usually love all things Jasper but I want to punch him and cut Alice's head off
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:25 PM Title: First Meeting
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:11 PM Title: Prologue
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Tara