Date: 01 Dec 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
gah! Stupid Tanya... hopefully they find them soon! Loved her telling Esme off! :) (and Edward's reaction to it) LOL
Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Tanya is always icky, isn't she? Esme had it coming, right? Edward is really trying to be her friend.
I'm workiign on the next chapter so it will be updated soon.
Thanks for reading//commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 01 Dec 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Four
i for one didnt see that one comming ! looking forward to seeing whath appens next! i just hope that she dosent loose the baby it would be devistating i think renee needs to leave i belive shes causing more stress ! ialways look forward to an update
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! I'm also glad I threw a little bit of a curve ball :) We will hear more about the baby in the next chapter. Renee will be around for a little while longer.
I'm working on the next chapter as we speak so it will be updated in a few days.
Thanks for reading and commetning!
-Lisa
Date: 29 Nov 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
what did you do? See it coming? HELL NO.
Author's Response:
Your comment made me smile! I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I'm hoping to still have it posted by the end of the week...we'll see though. there will be a resolution I promise...it might take a few chapters but there will be one.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Poor Bella and Carlisle. It is one thing after another for them!
Author's Response:
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right? They do need a break for more than ten seconds, don't they? I'm still hoping to have the next chapter posted this week some time, we'll see. Thank you for reading and commetning.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm still trying to get the next chapter out this week some time. Thanks for reading and commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Renee, hey.... glad she's not my mum.
Calling her daughter a tramp because she has another baby to another man AFTER THE FIRST LOVE DIED... classy- what is she just supposed to put an "no longer open" sign across her ovaries - cause guess what? I'm pretty sure that no matter who she dated next, if she fell pregnant to them- it would still be two babies to two different fathers!
She takes the cake though in telling Bella to 'play the field' after she's had the baby- because that doesn't scream "TRAMP" at all does it Renee...
I do kinda get the whole knocked-up and not married thing though- more in the sense that Bella and Carlisle haven't discussed committment or living together or anything like that yet and it's kinda pissing me off - it's like they're not taking the whole thing seriously enough, like they're living in denial or massive procrastination!
Not sure what to make of Bella telling Molly that she can't call Carlisle 'daddy' or give him a card that says 'dad'... if I were Molly I wouldn't be holding out much hope for actually being included once the baby comes- a fear that she's already expressed.
Not totally sure about the new plot twist/event either- seems a little much that something happens to Molly both times she's in the care of someone else - way to give her mum anxiety about ever going away again...
But in saying that- I've enjoyed the story so far and I feel like I can trust you to make it good :)
looking forward to the next update! thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
First off all, thank you so much for reading and leaving yoru thoughts. I loved reading what you are thinking!
Renee is overboard just a little. SHe isn't trying to be a bad mom. She wants better for her child. She was out of line and that will be addressed later on. Their main focus is Molly after all! Renee might have soem remorse on some of the things she said or called Bella.
The committement speech will be coming up in a few chapters down teh road...don't you worry my friend :)
Bella's thoughts on the whole not calling Carlisle daddy thing is simple. She loves him but doesnt' want to make the decision for him. She feels like she is living a dream and has found her prince charming and yadda yada yada. She doesn't want to press too many buttons. She wants to talk about it with Carlisle first and not just assume that it will be okay. She's not saying it to be mean or make her daughter sad, it's just she doesn't want to step on too many toes.
The new twist....why should Bella and Carlisle have it easy? No one wants to read a story where things just happen so easily, do they? What's a little drama? I do think that Bella might be ready to move to the mountains and never leave and homeschool Molly and her new child after this exprence....however, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right?
Thank you for your compliment on writing adn trusting me things will work out in the end the way they were meant to be (or as I invisioned it:)). I'm still going to try adn update this week even though I updated twice.
Thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Renee is being a bitch. She had a baby with one man WHO DIED!!! She's in a steady relationship with the father of this baby. How the hell does that make her a tramp?!?! WTF.
Dear lord, Molly gone? Bella is never going to want to go away again.
Author's Response:
It isn't that Renee is a bitch...it's just that she had a different vision of how she wanted her daughter to end up. She didn't want her to be in love with someone older than her own mother. Also, Renee just implied that people would think Bella was a tramp because she had two children with different fathers. She is just confused and trying to work through her own emotions.
Molly is gone. I just said to another reader that I think Bella is ready to move to some mountain community and never leave and begin to home school her children from there!
I'm going to try and still update this week. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts!
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
wow... poor Bella she is NEVER going to leave Molly alone again (well that is when they find her)
Can't wait to read the next one to see what happened!
Author's Response:
Poor Bella is going to have to be medicated! The poor woman has been through so much!
Thanks you for reading. I'm hoping to still update this week, but we'll see.
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Why would Molly run away!! She loves spending time with Alice and Edward. I wonder what happened to make her run away maybe Edward said something and she overheard it because he has been so angry about the baby and Bella and his father being together again.
Author's Response:
Molly does love her time with Alice and Edward. Who else would go shopping with her and make her pink princess pancakes with chocolate chips? The poor girl! We will find out where she is soon enough (or maybe not soon enough...depends on how you look at it).
thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts. I'm still gong to try and post the next chapter this week. We'll see what happens.
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
Good Chapter....
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter will still be posted this week.
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
I love that Bella and Carlisle are expecting a little bean and they are together. Why do I have a feeling Esme or Tanya is invovled in this issue. Or maybe Edward went off the deep end and took Molly. I love this story so far. Awesome job.
Jukie
Author's Response:
Junkie,
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Bella and Carlisle are the real deal. They do love each other and they are expecting their own. Perhaps one, or all or none of the people you mentioned have something to do wit Molly's disapearnace (I love beign vauge adn not helpful sometimes). We'll have to keep reading to find out.
Thank you for the compliments. I'm glad you are enjoying it! I'm hoping to have the next chapter still posted this week, but we will see.
-Lisa
Date: 28 Nov 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Three
looking forward to the next chapter! i have 2 theories either esme took her or molly decided that if she could call carlise daddy then she would leave? just my ideas! looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
thanks for reading!
I'm going to work on the next chapter for a littel while tonight. Interesting theories. I'm still hoping to post the next chapter this week some but we'll see what happens.
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
calm...so Esme's gonna wreak havoc?
I loved this chapter!
So there are rumors of a Sonic this side of the Mass pike. Do you know what town it's in?
Author's Response:
thanks for commenting and reading! Hopeyou had a good Thanksgiving :)
Esme will show up down the road but isn't a huge part of the "storm" that is quuickly approching. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. IT was so easy to write.
I don't about a sonic in this area, but there is one in Peabody I think.
I'm working on the next chapter. Hopefully it will be posted within the next week!
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Well Alice is happy and I think that Jake and Edward are going to be in the same boat for different reasons. Jake because it is his sister and Edward because he loves Bella.. Oh I wonder what Esme will say about this when she finds out.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
We're going to get Jake's opinon on the next chapter, as well as Seth and Renee. Esme's opinon will be down the road a bit.
I'm woring on the next chapter now and am hoping to have it posted soon!
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Good Chapter....
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Next chapter will be within a week I hope!
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Great chapter... and I don't know if I like that whole comment about the calm before the storm.... sounds like trouble ahead.... I am going to hope it is only going to be with how Jacob is going to react. Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
thanks for rading/commenting.
We'll find out Jake's reaction in the next chapter as well as Seth adn Renee's too. The storm will start to brew in the next one too. I'm hoping to have the next updat ewithin a week, but we shall see!
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Great chapter, getting everybody on board. And that is cheek, not check, okay. No one should kiss a check. Anxious to see Esme taken down.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and commetning.
The next chapter will be full of famiy arguments and that little storm I was talking about. Esme's reaction is up in a few more chapters. Hopefully the next update will be within the week1
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
I love how wonderful Carlise is with her!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and reading!
He is sweet isn't he? I'm working on the next chapter adn hopefully it will be up soon.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Storm? Oh shit! Now what?
Author's Response:
LOL! thanks for reading and commetning.
You'll just have to wait and see what happens. The visit with Jacob and Bella's family is up in the next chapter and things start to brew there. That's all I'm going to say. The next update should be within a week.
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
Hmmm Edward is going to be an issue for a little while.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commetning.
Edward is just trying to figure his life out. He does still seem to harbor some feelings, doesn't he?
The next update should be soon. I'm working on teh chapte rnow.
-Lisa
Date: 26 Nov 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Thirty Two
im so looking forward to seeing what comes out of her problem with esme! and edward needs to be put in time out !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commenting.
I have to start first by saying I loved your comment about Edward needign a time out....it made me laugh!
Esme's reaction will be a few chapters down teh road. There are bigger problems a head.
I'm hoping to have the next update by the end of the week. I'm workign on it now!
-Lisa
Date: 21 Nov 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter Thirty One
It is good that they have finally gotten through this rough patch and now they can focus on the baby!!!! I wonder what Alice and Edward are going to think about that one.
Author's Response:
Hello and thanks for takign the time to read/comment!
The next chapter is fun...everyone finds out about the baby and not everyone is enterilly thrilled.
The update should be posted tonight.
-Lisa
Date: 19 Nov 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
woo hoo for cornering Skankya. Glad she told him and he didnt freak about the baby
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and commenting on the story.
Carlisle is a smart man and he is very excited for the baby. he always said he wanted one more.
the next chapte rwill be posted tonight sometime (relativly soon I believe).
Thanks again~
-Lisa
Date: 19 Nov 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
yay!!! Thank god that Carlisle was not a cheating scum! LOL :) Cant' wait to see more... oh and Alice and Edward's reactiion to the baby!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks you fro taking the time to read and comment on the story :)
Carlisle would never cheat! he loves Bella and is way too protective of her to do anything bad to her.
We will get Alice and Edward's reactions in the next chapter...which sould be posted soon!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
So happy Carlisle is excited about the baby!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Carlisle is overjoyed about the baby! Yah!
The next chapter will be posted tonight at some point.
-Lisa
Date: 19 Nov 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
I love this! I can't wait to see how ESME is going to react to this news! Thatis going to be wicked cool!
ps gogle Haven Brothers in Providence, Rhode Island. It's hard to explain. and now I want hot weiners, so I'm gonna drag my daughter to Olneyville.
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you fro reading and commenting :)
We'll get Esme's reaction down the road a bit. Next up, Molly, Jasper, Alice and Edward get the baby news!
Next update will be tonight!
-Lisa
PS-I googled Haven Brothers quickly and it looks like one of those things that would be on the Food Network shows! It looks yummy!
Date: 19 Nov 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
Wow! They handled the Tanya thing WAY differently than I would of. She probably would of ended up smacked. Good chapter!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and commetning.
Yes, they were both civialized with Tanya. They tried to be mature about it. I think i would have smacked her around too...only a little. After all, violence isn't the answer but sometimes is a tempary soulution.
The next updat ewill be tonight!
-Lisa
Date: 19 Nov 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirty One
finally! loved the chapter ! looking forward ot seeing edward and alices reaction to a baby!
Author's Response:
Thank you so m uch for reading and commenting!
We will find out their reactions in the next chapter, which will be posted in a little bit!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
I would never trust Tanya. Bella is a fool to trust her. She has stated that she wants Carlisle. Bella is just scared of being hurt that she is going to be the one that does the hurting first.
Author's Response:
thanks for taking the time to read and comment on the chapter.
Bella is very much afraid, which is why she believed Tanya. Yes she admitted she wanted Carlisle, but Bella didn't know how much. She assumed the worse and kind of let her feelings and emotions take over instead of thinking rationally. We'll find out in the next chapter what really happened between Carlisle and Tanya.
I'm almost done with the next chapter so maybe by the end of the week it'll be posted!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Nov 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Great chapter... and I am thinking that Tanya is lying now.... Carlisle isn't that good of an actor! and she is prego... so hopefully they can get all this worked out so she can tell him! :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts on the chapter.
We'll find out in the next chapter what happened between Tanya and Carlisle and yes, above it all, Bella is prego!
I'm almost done with the next chapter so maybe by the end of the week the next one will be posted!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Nov 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Why do I get the feeling that Edbitch and skankya are in this together....or that skankya wants more that carlisle wants to give. Poor little molly too.
Glad b went to the dean.
Author's Response:
Dirst off, thank you for reading and commenting.
Esme and Tanya working together? Instersting thought. We'll fnd out in the next chapter what is went on between Carlisle and Tanya. Molly, that poor kid has seen her fair share of heartbreak.
I'm almost done with the next chapte.r I have to make a few changes and then edit it. Hopefully it'll be posted no later than the end of the week.
-Lisa
Date: 14 Nov 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Okay Bella is pregnant. I think
1. What did I tell you? I said Tanya is a liar. Why in these stories do these people believe someone they don't know and not the person they love? Investigate before you accuse.
2. To not let him explain says to me that she may want this to be true. This will satisfy her brother and everyone that says he is too old.
3. Molly is hurt. She loves him and she needs a daddy. Little girls love their daddies
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave me your thoughts on the chapter.
I agree with you about Tanya. Even when she isn't written as a bad person I still don't trust her! As for the way that Bella reacted, she went with her gut. She had been over emotional between the accident and then findin gout she is pregnant. You do have to admit she was willing to investigate by going to see Tanya. Should she have spoken to Carlisle first? Probaly but at least she was proactive.
Molly has been through so much for such a little girl. She had an instant conenction with Carlisle. Now that he is out of the picture, she doesn't really now how to handle it. She yells at and takes it out on the only person who has always been there, Bella.
I'm almost done with the next chapter so I am hoping by the end of the week the next chapter is posted. thank you again for sharing your thoughts!
-Lisa
Date: 14 Nov 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter Thirty
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
thanks! next chapter is due by the end of the week.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Wow!!
Author's Response:
Yep! Hopefully the next chapter will be posted by the end of the week. thanks for reading/commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
I dont know if I would believe Tanya or not. I just hope that Carlisle isn't trying to break Bella's heart even more...
Author's Response:
First of all, thanks for reading/commenting. I always love reading them.
We'll find out in the next chapter what happened in Utah. Hopefully it'll b eposted by the end of the week.
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thanks for reading and commenting.
Next chapter should be posted by the end of the week!
-Lisa
Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
loved the chapter had to go back and read for the preggo question! im so looking forward to the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. The next chapter should be posted by the end of the week. it's almost done.
-Lisa
Date: 13 Nov 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter Thirty
knew she was...but damn you stopped there!!! now have her go eat at haven brothers and get 4 all the way and we'll know she's preggers...update quick...the uspense is killing me
Author's Response:
I like writing the cliffies! they are fun when you control them, totally not fun if your reading the story!
What is Haven Brothers?
The next update should be by the end of the week. I'm almost done.
Thanks for readign and leavign comemnts!
-lisa
Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
I think Tanya & Esme are working together for their own agendas. Of course, each one believes they can attain their objective and still thwart the other in the end. Evil knows no bounds. Be interesting to see how this pans out.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.commenting.
Intersting...Tanya adn Esme are working together. Interesting theory. They would make a pair, wouldn't they?
The next chapter will be posted soon. I'm just putting the finishinf touches on it now.
Thanks again!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Next chapter is up today at some point!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Nov 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
I wonder if Carlisle is telling the truth about Tanya but I am thinking that he is because I don't really think that he would cheat on Bella. I wonder how he is going to fix this and even his relationship with Edward. Oh and that ending was just mean!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commenting. We will actually hear Tanya's side of the story in the next chapter...which should be posted soon! Also, there are answers that tie along with this chapter's mean ending!
-Lisa
Date: 12 Nov 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
I think Edward should have confronted his father first before telling Bella. I think Tanya has a track record of lieing on all Fan fiction!.. lol
I think if I wanted to find this out I would have gone down to the hospital and checked to see if he was there. Quietly checking up. Then I would believe Carlise over Tanya.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commenting.
Edward isn't the most rational person. While his intentions were good, he should have gone to Carlisel firrst, your right. Tanya doesn't have a good track record, does she? lol!
Next chapter will be posted ASAP!
-Lisa
Date: 11 Nov 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
i just hope for her sake shes not preggo! looking forward to seeing whats the outcome of the grade from esme and what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you fro reading/commenting.
There is alot of stuff happening in the next chapter, which is going to be posted today at some point!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
good chapter. Although I would have gotten Skankya in a room with Carlisle and then challenged them both.
Poor b and molly. So Esme thinks she'll get away with it? I'd go and challenge her, secretly recording the conversation to give to the Dean to get the biatch fired.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/commetning.
Bella will do a little more research of her own in the next chapter. Esme is talked abotu briefly, but still is touched upon. The next chapter will be posted today at some point!
-Lisa
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Good Chapter....
Author's Response:
Thanks! next update is today!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Well, I think Tanya is a bitch who want Carlisle and would do anything to get him. If they got their phones mixed up then she would do anything to cause trouble. Fucking bitch. I don't normally read stories that are anything but E & B but I really like this one.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading/commenting. I feel liek you gave me quite the compliment by reading this story since this isn't usually your favorite pairing! thanks!
Bella goes and tried to find out answers on her own. The next chapter should be posted soon, liek today soon!
-Lisa
Date: 11 Nov 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
I think Bella needs to stop being an all or nothing type. She just goes off. She didn't even listen to Carlisle. She is acting like a child. She should have listen. I have always been team Edward, but in this story it is too late. Bella needs to stop being a brat and listen to the man. He has done nothing but prove he loves her. What has she done to prove she loves him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading/commetning.
Bella is in emotion overload. She's just settling back down from almost loosing Molly and Jacob is hurt. She feels guilty that eh isn't there ofr Jacob. She is going through something with Esme and her grade. She's emotional. Should she have listened to Carlisle, maybe. We'll have to wait and see what happens.
Also, your review means a lot to me! You are the second person to say that you usually don't like the B/C pairing and are B/E perfered, but you sre sticking with the story. thank you, that really does mean a lot. I'm hoping as the story continues, you'll stay that way!
the next update should be today at some point.
-Lisa
Date: 11 Nov 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
OMG you can't just leave it there!!! :( LOL Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Hehehehe!!
Thanks for reading/commetning on the story. There will be some answers in the next chapter, which is going to be posted today.
Hope you enjoy!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
Oh man! Now we have to wait to find out about her results! I feel that he really did not cheat. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading/commetning on the story.
We get some answers in the next chapter...some, well, one. You'll have to read and find out what it is!
-Lisa
p_SNext update should be today.
Date: 11 Nov 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Nine
These cliffies are killin me!
Author's Response:
Hehehehehe!!!
We do get some answers in the next chapter...and by some, I mean one answer.
The update should be later today.
-Lisa
PS-Thanks for reading/commenting!
Date: 09 Nov 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Great chapter
Glad Molly is OK. Can't wait to see what her test says.
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting and reviewing. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'm about to post the next one now!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Did they not use protection? It is not like they are young and don't know how to use it properly.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting/ reading.
They apaprently did not one time. I'll get more into it in a few chapters. This is going to linger for a chapter or two before we find out if she is deffinitly with child.
I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully nothign tragic happens like deleating the file or battery running out of juice!
thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
I am thinking that she is probally pregnant but even if she isn't hopefully Bella gets through all of this. It is so sweet that Molly told Carlisle that he is like a daddy to her..
Author's Response:
Hello,
thanks for reading/commenting on the chapter.
I love writing Molly. She is probaly my favorate character I have written in a long time. I love writing her and Carlisle.
We'll find out about the pregnancy mystery in a chapter or two.
Working on the next chapter now!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Great chapter.... and I am thinking that she is prego! :) Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey-
Thanks for reading and commenting on the chapter.
We'll find out in a chapter or two whether or not Bella is with child!
-Lisa
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Carlisle and Molly are adorable. Hope Molly is ok and doesnt relapse.
Author's Response:
i love Molly. She has attatched herself to Carlisle.
I'm working on the next chapter now. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
I am still waiting on the Tanya confession...
Pregnant, oh my.
Author's Response:
We will get back to tanya in the next chapter. We will find out in a few chapters whether or not Bella is preggers.
Thanks for reading.commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 06 Nov 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thanks! And thanks for reading/commenting!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! thanks for commenting and reading!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
Carlisle was amazing! So great!
Author's Response:
I love Carlisle and I love writing Molly. He's a great guy.
Thank you fro reading and commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
i love that molly woke up, but you left it there? Imma gonna die now!
Author's Response:
I needed to do some type of cliffie! I'm trying to practice them so I can get better witht them :) We'll get back to it in a chapter or two. Up next: we get back to the Tanya mess.
Thanks for reading.commenting!
-Lisa
Date: 06 Nov 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight
i dont think her eggo is preggo but youve done twists before ! im looking forward to the enxt chapter i hoppe and excited to see if edward is going to call carlisle out on his bs
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and comentting. We will revisit the Tanya situation in the next chapter. Edward comes back too. We'll find out whether or not she's preggers in a chapter or two!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Love the story!
Author's Response:
Thanks...I'm working ohard on the next chapter which I hope will be posted soon!
-Lisa
Date: 31 Oct 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Great chapter... I really am thinking that Tanya must have been making it up.... I really don't think with the reaction that Carlisle had and his history he would have done that... well at least I am hoping that he didnt! :) Can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting!
We're goit away from Tanya in this next chapter just for now. The topic of her will be back really soon! I'm hoping to update very soon!
-Lisa
Date: 30 Oct 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Because of what Esme did to him he would never cheat. That would be so far out of left field. Also, Tanya said a lot of BS how Bella having a kid was a turn off for him. He loves Molly and Bella. It would be a real twist if Molly was not OK. Life is not a story book with happy endings all the time. Bad things happen all the time.
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Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and commenting.
We'll get back to tanya in a little bit. Also, we find out what happens to Molly in the beigning of the next chapter, which I am hoping to post...now (or close to nowish!).
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Carlisle is so sweet to her. Glad Bella told him about what Ed did. Wonder how long until Eddie confronts Daddy C. aww for Alice and Jazz. Hmmm so did Bella get an ok grade from Esbitch last semester? Was wondering about that. Uh oh for cliffy
I have long term history with migraines too. I can totally relate to the alarm clock and any light/sound making it worse.
Author's Response:
We're going to revisit Bella and her grade later. Remember I said we havent' seen the last of Esme yet? She'll be back. Edward is going to stay quiet for now. Alice and Jazz are sweet....lovwe them!
I hope I'm done with the migranes. they were not fun.
Thanks for reading and I'm working on teh next chapter now. Hopefully you won't have to wait as long this time for an update!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Oh cliffie. I think she stole Carlisle phone and made it look like he cheated!
Author's Response:
Did you liek the cliffie?
Thank you for reading/ commenting. I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully it won't take 2 weeks to post this time!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Aww why did u have to leave it there!!!!! Mega gutted lol please write fast ur doin an amazing job on this story!!!
Author's Response:
So I left you with a cliffy, hu? Sorry about that! Who am I kidding, no I'm not! I want you to come back and read more! I've worked on the next chapter some today. I'm hoping that the next update won't take two weeks this time.
Thank you so much for reviewing and reading. Until next time!
-Lisa
Date: 29 Oct 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
im not sure what i think of carlisle and i think that edwrad needs to talk to him about the phone call.... and molly i think shes awake ... at least i hope so! always look forward to the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the tiem to read and review. I like hearing your views on things. Hopefully it won't take two weeks to update!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
YOU LEFT IT THERE???? FIRST MOTHER NATURE NOW YOU? SO NOT COOL!!!!
I also think hedropped hs phone.
Author's Response:
How are you doing where you are Cassie with Mother Nature? Ick...really, snow in October. Hope this isn't an indication of how the winter is going to be....hopefully it is something freak. Looks like I'm on the line 4-8 and 8-12....ick. Have I mentioned ick yet? Ick. How about where you are?
Anyway, getting back to B2B....are you a little mad that I left you with a cliffy? You'll just have to coem back when I've updated to see what happens. Nice theory with Carlisle and the dropping of the phone.
I'm hard at work on the next chapter. Hopefully it won't take two weeks to update it!
-Lisa
PS-Thanks for reading and reviewing!
PPS-Hope you don't get too much snow!
Date: 29 Oct 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
It doesn't seem as though Carlisle has cheated. It could have been Tayna playing games. I don't know what to think right now.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I liked hearing your perspective of what could be happening with Carlisle. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up soon, for real this time. I'm working on it now.
-Lisa
Date: 29 Oct 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
I think that Tanya got ahold of Carlisle's phone and lied about all of it I at least hope so. I hope that Bella isn't going to have to make a life or death choice for Molly because that will kill Bella. I can't imagine what she is going through because I think that I would die if something happen to my son and I hope and pray that nothing ever does.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and commenting. I liked hearing what you think is going on in the story. We will find out in the begining of the next chapter what is going on with Molly. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.
-Lisa
Date: 29 Oct 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
i think carlisle cheated on bella and she can't see that. why didn't edward say somehting before he left.
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving me a comment and for reading!
I'll answer your second question first. Edward saw first hand that Bella was in pain and in a state of hurt and confusion because Jacob adn Molly are in the hospital. After seeing that Molly is in a coma, Edward decided that Bella really doesn't need the added stress. Just because he hasn't said anything doesn't mean it won't be revisited.
Intersting that you think that he cheated on Bella. I love hearing all of the theories! I am working on the next chapter so hopefully it own't be too long before an update.
-Lisa
Date: 29 Oct 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Seven
Dragging this part out, is mean!
I think Tanya in any story is questionable when you speak of truth. If Molly does not wake up then she could be brain dead, the machines will show that. If her brain is alive they may want to take the machines off and let her die. Well with a small child that would be devistating.
WRITE FAST
Author's Response:
LOL to your comment! I have enjoyed reading people's comments and theories about what is happening in the story. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts.
We will find out in the beginig of the next chapter what the deal is with Molly.
You'll be happy that I am writing fast! I've worked on the story for the better part of the evening (since i'm house bound due to SNOW!!! Oh goodness! It's going to be a long winter!).
Thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Well what do I think. Tanya spilled the beans to Edward. Now Edward has to get Carlisle alone and tell him. I think I need that part before I talk really! Tanya in any story is not the best one to trust on her word.
If it is true then I think it might be the best thing for Bella. She needs someone that in honest with her. Perhaps that someone is not a Cullen, they have issues.
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting and reading!
Will Edward speak to Carlisle about it? We'll have to wait and see (actually, you guys will have to wait and see. I know what is going to happen:)). I will say that Tanya isn't gone for good.
Loved the comment about the Cullens and how they have issues...so funny!
I'm working on the next chapter. It will be posted soon!
Thanks again :)
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Curve Ball....nah... I'm thinking someone switched phones with Carlisle since he hasnt gotten any of the phone messages. If it was Skankya, I hope Carlisle reams her a good one.
Hope Molly is ok
Author's Response:
We will find out a few chapters down the road about what happened that night. You'll just have to wait and see.
We'll also find out what happens to Molly in just a few chapters (before the one with Tanya).
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment :)
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:50 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Poor Molly!! I hope that she is going to be ok. And that damn Tanya I wonder if something really did happen with her and Carlisle but I am thinking that it didn't she just somehow got ahold of his phone. I wonder if Edward is going to confront Carlisle with this the first chance he gets because he is afraid of him hurting Bella.
Author's Response:
We'll find out about Molly in a few chapters. We'll also find out about that night a few chapters down the road. Edward isn't speaking to his father, so no confronting (but the issue will come out, promise!).
Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts. i love reading them!
The next chapter will be soon, I promise!
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
love the drama hte the coma
Author's Response:
The drama is developing because of the curicumstances. If Bella didn't need Carlisle for support, then Edward wouldn't have called him and no one would have known abotu Tanya. Remember, Edward didn't know when they were together the first time years ago. I promise the coma thing isn't going to go on very long, just another few chapter.
Thanks for reading and commetning...I apprecaite reading what you think!
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:00 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
I am thinking that Carlisle left his phone somewhere that Tanya could access it. I don't think he did anything with her. Amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
We'll find out a few chapters down the road what happens. Edward isn't going to bring it up at this particular moment because Bella is too stressed out. Carlisle isn't goign to say anything about it. I promise, there will be a resolution to it.
Thank you so much for reading and leaving soem feedback. It means a lot to me.
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Glad it happened and hope he really was with tanya. Yes I know she will be hurt but I really want her and Edward together
Author's Response:
We'll find out down the road what happened with Tanya. It's not going to come up quite yet. Edward doesn't want to uspet Bella right now and since Bella doens't know, she isn't going to confront him. Carlisle sure as heck isn't going to offer anything, since he doesn't know why Edward is so bwetching right now.
You'll just have to sit tight and wait and see what happens.
Thank you so much for reading/commenting. I appreciate it!
-Lisa
PS-The next update is going to be soon.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
can we string Tayna up by hr toenails pretty please she really needs to go and go now
Author's Response:
LOL!!! We haven;t seen the last of Tanya. She won't be brought up for a few chapters, but she isn't gone (just like Esme. Out of sight, out of mind if you please).
Thanks for reading/commenting! I promsie the next update will be soon :)
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
well im intrested to see what happens next i hope edward calls carlisle out on what happed
Author's Response:
Edward isn't going to speak to Carlisle for a while, so don't hold your breath on that one :(. Tanya won't make a reapparence for at least a few chapters. Other things need to work themselves out first.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my little story :) I promise the next update will be soon!
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
First off I know he did not cheat. Why, it was done to him and he would never do it to someone. Second Tayna is lying she wants to break them up. I hope Bella never belives her. He is just not that type of guy. Even if Bella and Carlisle broke up I could never see her with this Edward. His actions last chapter speak so much louder then his words. I hope you don't do the break up get back together thing. One can have drama and still be a sold couple. Until next time
Author's Response:
We'll find out what happens later down the road. tanya isn't going to be brought up for a few more chapters. You'll just have to sit tight and wait to see what happens :)
Thank you so much for reading/reviewing. It really does mean so much to me!! I promise the next chapter will be posted sooner than later :)
-Lisa
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Good Chapter...
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next one will be soon.
Thansk for reading :)
-Lisa
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
OMFG!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!!! Itake it you are a little shocked? Keep reading (although Tanya doens't get brought up any time soon. She's a few chapters down the road). Sit tight and you shall see what happens.
Thanks for reading/reviewing. I appreciate it!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
YOu've got some 'splainin' to do about Tanya in Carlisle's bedroom. Just sayin'.
Author's Response:
LOL! All will be explained in due time (in this case, due time is a few chapter down the road. Sit tight and you'll see).
Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I apprecaite it!
-Lisa
PS-I promsie the next update won't be too long :)
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
If Carlisle cheated on Bella, I'll rip off is dick! But I have a feeling he didn't. But how is he going to explain that to Edward because right now that is what it looks like.
Damn, poor Molly! I can't wait to see what happens to this poor kid. She is Bella's whole world.
Author's Response:
I'd be afraid if I were Carlisle!! Ouch! We will revisit this topic, but it will be several chapters down the road. Edward isn't speaking to his father...so the topic isn't going ot be brought up, espically while Bella is so stressed out.
We'll find out what happens to Molly in a few chapters. I don't want it to go on for a long time. She is Bella's world. We'll see how Bella deals with that.
Thank you for reading. I'm working on teh next chapter and will get it posted ASAP (hopefully some time this weekend :).
-Lisa
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
wow! OMG so Jacob is ok but Molly isn't :( and then all the phone crap with Carlisle.... I really hope that he wasn't actually in bed with Tanya! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving feedback. TI does mean so much to me and I apprecaite it!
We'll find out what happens to Molly in the next few chapters. We'll also find out about Tanya and Carlisle in a few more.
I'm hoping to have the chapter up some time this weekend.
Thanks again!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
Wow!!! Edward really doesn't take no for an awnser does he? It is kinna good that he was there though because Bella might have been in the hospital too if she was there alone. I hope that Molly and Jacob are going to be ok.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are all caught up! I'm working on posting chapter 26 soon (like in a little while soon).
Edward isn't a jerk or a creep. He is just isn't thinking and acting impulsivly. He is going to prove to be a good friend for Bella. He is key in teh next chapter. he stumbles uppon some information that will be key later on.
More on Molls and Jake in the next chapter. it isn't going to be all roses for a while.
Thanks for reading!
-Lisa
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four
Wow!!! That letter from Billy came at just the time that Bella needed it. It is good that she got to see what he truly wanted her to have out of life. I am shocked that Jacob finally is going to give Carlisle a chance.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three
It is good that Bella seems to at least have one aly in her family!!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Two
Wow!!! I thought that Edward was going to ruin everything but I am glad that he didn't because those two deserve to be happy!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter Twenty One
Well I didn't think that Edward had it in him to actually confront Bella about her relationship with his father. Bella and Carlisle are so cute and they are both good for each other!!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 10:11 AM Title: Chapter Twenty
Well it seems that Edward isn't over his feelings for Bella. I wonder if he is going to do anything about them or is he just going to let it be.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter Nineteen
It is really sad that Carlisle lost a patient but it is good that Bella and Molly were there to help him through.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter Twenty Five
okay first... I LOVE this story... so thank you for writing it.
on this chapter:
well I must admit- you nearly gave me a heart attack... I was hoping and praying that this chapter would not end up or show Carlisle and Tanya hooking up- because I think I would just about die of a broken heart if anything happened between them too (not to mention, I'm really not liking the fact that she's married and was happy to make a gross play for Carlisle both by herself and then trying to get Bella in on the action- and it goes without saying that I would hate for Carlisle to ruin his blessed character in the story by cheating or anything near there...
But then... you blew me away with what happened between Edward and Bella this chapter... WOW! or WOAH!
While I'm intrigued to know why she kissed him back even a little bit- I really didn't see this coming... I didn't think Edward would be so pushy... I can't wait to read more and see what Carlisle's reaction may be.
I'm very interested to see what happens in the end... I can't see Bella with anyone but the very very lovely Carlisle at this point and I don't know if it's realistic to think that if something did happen between them- that Edward would happily keep Bella in the fam after his dad has already had sex with her... that's just weird and would make for awkward family dinners let alone explaining to Molly..."Hey, here is Carlisle- he used to be my lover but now he's more like your grandpa..." eeewww. But what will happen with the other leading characters (Edward) and not so-leading (Tanya, Esme).....
I'm on the edge of my seat anf keen as beans for more...
looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Wow-your review is so long! Thank you so m uch for takign the time to read and comment to let me know what you are thinking! I love it!
I want to warn you that Tanya isn't gone (neither is Esme). Life can never be simple, thus this story isn't going to be simple. Edward will find out some information in the next chapter that he doens't know what to do with. You'll see what I mean when you read it. Anyway, getting back to Tanya, she's a skank. I never liked the character in Breaking Dawn. Fan fiction is fun because you get to play around with established characters. There are some characters that kind of always stay the same to me...like Carlisle. He is my favorite character from the series. he will always be kind and nice. Edward always comes out all right. I hope I have some what improved Bella (I think she's whiney and a bit annoying in the books, in the movies she isn't so bad). Tayna to me is someone who just will always be annoying and a skank.
Now, getting back to Back to Boston, Edward..poor Eddie. he isn't a bad person or a creep. he is just thinking compulisivly and irrationally. Bella realizes the kiss was a mistake and it comes up again.
I'm still working out the ending. there are a few more twists and turns coming up. Hope you stay and read the rest of it! I'm so glad that you are so intersted in it! I'm about to post chapter twenty six now.
Thanks again for reading :)
-Lisa
PS-Your comments towards the end made me chuckle! So funny!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen
It is good that Bella is happy and that her and Carlisles relationship seems to be going well. I wonder what Renee is going to say to Bella the next time that she talks to her. I am sure that Jacob has already informed his mother about his sisters new boyfriend.
Author's Response:
Again, I have read all of your reviews thus far and have enjoyed your comments. I'm glad tha tyou are sticking with the story and you enjoy reading it.
I liked writing Esme as being mean because it is so different and not the way she was written at all. Carlisle is my favorite from the series so that's why he can do no wrong (or can he? Keep reading to find out!).
I realize now that Jacobs was way too jerky but it was because he loves his sister. He is trying tobe protective but when a little overboard, obviously.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:22 AM Title: Outtake Three
Way to go Carlisle. I think that he hit the nail on the head with his thoughts on Esme and he is right in that Bella is a better woman and mother than she would ever be.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 12:54 AM Title: Out Take Two
Go Edward!! Go!! It is good that Edward let his mother know what he thought of her. I think that Esme is just upset and jealous that Carlisle is moving on with his life and she seems to just be at a standstill.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Wow first she has to deal with Jake and his opinions and now Esme!! It is really sad that Esme is so unhappy with her life that she has to try to ruin others. It is good that Bella didn't shut Carlisle out and talked to him about what happened.
Date: 20 Oct 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen
I really think that Jacob deserved the lashing out that he got from Bella.. I never thought that I would date let alone fall in love with someone older than me but it happened. There isn't the age difference like with Bella and Carlisle but there is an almost 10 year difference between the two of us.