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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen

Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Glad you liked it, thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

WOW   Esme is a real piece of work.   Alice is an attentive teacher, wish there were more out there like her.    Awww for thier date.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read/comments.  Esme is a bitch.  There is no nice way of saying it.  She isn't a nice person.  Alice is good at what she does.  Wasn't the date cute?  I like writing these two.  Up next, Jacob's visit!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Excellent chapter!!

Boy, was Esme a bitch she really has a lot of issues. 

I like that Carlisle and Bella are growing closes they both deserve some happiness.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and comments.

Esme is fun to write because she is so different from the character from the series.  She is mean.  I was working on the outline and there are some things coming up that will make you shake your head.

Bella and carlisle will continue to get closer.  Coming up soon....the meeting with Jacob!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

I am glad that Edward and Bella talked. I can't believe how nasty Esme is. She is so bitter.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading/commenting.  Esme is well....she is bitter and cold and just not nice in this world. Edward adn Bella....well, they are talking...for now.  Things in the future might be changed by that!  Stay tuned for an update soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

So wonderful!  Cannot wait to see how the dinner party will turn out with Edward and Carlisle being there!



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter as we speak.  Thank you for reading/commenting.

-Lisa

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Professor Platt reminded me a little of Lady Catherine in Pride and Prejudice. Arts and allurements indeed.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/commenting.  The next chapter is being worked on as we speak!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

im excited to see what happen next in class or with edward ! keep the udpates commig 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/commenting!  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak!

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen

Esme is a total flip from Twilight. Well fine, she is exactly what you created a real B. I think Bella was smart to tell her off nicely and leave.

 

 



Author's Response:

I like missing around with the characters and Esme is one of my favorite ones to do it to!  She's going to be a trip.  Bella is going to try to stay calm for as long as she can.

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:32 AM Title: Out Take One

Loved this out take really got to see the relationship that the two of them have.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Excellent chapter

I would not be happy with my friend. Even though he was looking out for her. She is grown women with a child, she can take care of her self.



Author's Response:

She knows this, but the people around her feel the need to protect her.  As you pointed out, she is a single mother who seems to be doing  afairly good job of raising her daughter so yes, she can take care of herself!

Thank you for reading and commetning.  the next chapter should be up soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter Seven

i knew esme was edwards mom! and hmm bet carlisle is the dad lol wonder how bella will take that when she finds out that she flirts with father and son!

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:41 AM Title: Out Take One

Great outtake!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I don't know if there will be more, but I wanted to show Edward and carlisle's relationship.

Update soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:28 AM Title: Out Take One

Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm not sure if I will do another out take, but I wanted to show the kind of relatinship that Edward and carlisle have.  Next update soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:29 AM Title: Out Take One

great outtake! im glad that they were civil and edward realized what a duche he was 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  i'm not sure if I am going to do another out take, but I wanted to show how close Edward and Carlisle are.  Edward had a "oh no" moment.  he's going to try and be good from now on.  th enext update will be soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:25 AM Title: Out Take One

good outtake.  Poor Alice.   Please tell me Esme has a brain tumor or something???  I mean WTF



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the out take.  We'll be hearing more from Alice as hte story goes on (she's in the next chapter).  Sorry, Esme doens't have a tumor or anything/  She is just a cold hearted person.  She is a bitch and Bella gets to meet her in the next chapter!

The whole point of this out take was to show how close Edward and Carlisle are and I hope I did a good job with that.  the next updat will be soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the update! Thansk for reading and leaving a comment!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Jacob will probably be tough. That age thing is creepy. I couldn't date someone the same age my children. That is just wrong. Carlisle is a sweet guy, but he needs to find some one at least in her early thirties. She can still have children, but is older than his kids.



Author's Response:

Jacob will be total bug brother.  The thing with Carlisle is that his relationship with Bella is going to be really only his second that he has had.  Teh first being with Esme of course.  H eisn't looking at age, he's looking at someone who he gets along with and can enjoy things with.  We'll see what happens down the road.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

This was awesome...I love have Jasper grilled Carlisle...I want to see Jacob react now too!!!

You know what would be wicked cool though? If they want to a game, it's october, so it could be a pennant (sp) game...Red SoxYankees...as long as Carlisle is not a Yankee fan..I may have to stop reading if he is...(Promise me if you do that Bella won't wear a pink hat. That's just wrong on soo many levels.)



Author's Response:

Jasper loves Bella and knows she has been through enough pain and doesn't want to see her go through more.  Jacob, well, we'll see about him later!

I don't know abotu working a baseball game in since it is half way through October in the story. I'll see what i can do, but I will not make any promises.  Don't worry, i'm not too into baseball (I like football more) and I love NYC but there is no room in anyone of my stories for positive Yankees!  it just isn't going to happen.  As for the pink hat, no way in heck! Someone bought me a pink Patriots hat and I just stared at it thinking, "Do they really expect me to wear this, in public?" I'm a girly girl but have to put my foot down at pink sports teams hats!

Thanks for commenting and reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

I think what Jasper did was sweet. Sometimes we want something so bad that we are blind to the obvious and it take others who care about us to pick up on the little or not so little flaws that we allowed ourselves to overlook. Are they going to continue to go this slow? I mean by now they shouldn't be scared to kiss each other. To me that's not really rushing anything



Author's Response:

Jasper loves and cares for Bella.  She has been hurt so many times and he just doens't want to see her hurt again.  they are going to take it a bit more slwoly for now considering that this is really both of their second relationships.  Carlilse thinks he's rusty and poor Bella just doesn't know what to do!  We'll see what happens though.

Thank you for commenting and reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

I understand they want to protect her, but she is no baby. They need to shut up and watch it develop and let HER decide.



Author's Response:

Don't worry about Bella.  She is good and will take care of herself.  Everyone around her just wants to make sure she is okay since she has been broken up about so many things in the past.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen

well im excited to see whats to come of these  2



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and commenting!

There will be more up next!

-Lisa

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Carlisle's reaction to Jasper opening the door was to be expected considering his past with  his ex-wife.

Wouldn't it be funny if Jacob became friends with Edward? How ironic if Jacob supported a B/E relationship over the B/C relationship.



Author's Response:

Carlisle is just nervous with the whoel dating thing.  He has only seriously dated one person and look where that ended up.  Hmm...perhaps a J/E relationship is a good idea. We'll see what is coming up!

Thanks for reading and commetning!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen

Jasper is such a cool big bro.   Hmmm wonder how Esme is going to treat her.  Wonder if Eddie told her anything about her and Daddy C.



Author's Response:

Jasper loves Bella and wants to protect her and make sure she's happy.  We'll get a little inside to Esme's relationship wtih Edward when I post the out take of his dinner with Carlisle.  We'll see where both he adn Carlisle are coming from when it comes to Esme.

Thank you so much for leaving a comment and reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Big brother jake is so funny.   Hmmm  So Jasper is gonna move to Boston huh.   Interesting development.   Glad Eddie applogized.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!  Jasper is indeed off to Boston with Bella and Molly.  Edward is going to hang low for  abit but he'll be back.  i always pictured Jake has being the over bearing big brother and I hope I am writing him like that.

I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  I'm hoping to have it up soon, but it might have to wait until next weekend.  Fingers crossed though!

-Lisa

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Love the story! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you and I'm glad you are enjoying it! 

I am hoping for an update mud week, but it's another crazy summer week, so it might be a week. 

-Lisa

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter Nine

OMG!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I'm hooked!



Author's Response:

Yah! Thanks!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

im glad that he pulled the stick out of his ass ! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Edward will try adn be more civil and actually act towards a friehdship with Bella.

The next update should be mid week, but posisbly next weekend.  It's anothr crazy weeks.

Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Her decision was correct. Edward is emotional. He will learn from that by this situation. He spoke out of hurt and from past experience.  Bella was honest and told them both. Now it is a strange situation, but it happened deal with it.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/commenting.  It is s strange situation and Bella spoke up once she realized what was going on.  Edward is starting to slowly turn around thought.

The next update should be mid week to even next weekend.

Thanks again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter Six

She is going to date father and son? Well and Mama/Edwife is her professor?  I maybe wrong but I am think this is where this is going..

 

 



Author's Response:

It'll get intersting, I promise1

thanks for reading/commenting. 

-Lisa

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

That chapter was wicked awesome.  Now I'm off to DD to get an iced coffee because this heat is a wicked pissah...

 

 

I lovve that you are from here!!!



Author's Response:

I loved your comment!  Wicked funny!  I love Boston too!  It's home.

I'm also glad that you took the time and comment.  Promsie more stuff coming up in a bit. This week is kind of crazy, hoping to update mid week but it might have to wait unti lnext weekemd!

Thanks for leaving the funniest comment I think i have ever recieved!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Great stuff! I can't wait for them all to go back to Boston and see what will happen next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

The next chapter will open right when they get back (unless I change it...again).

I'm hoping ot have an update by mid week, but realisticly it might not be until next weekend.

Thanks agian!

-Lisa

 

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

I love your Jacob. He is awesome. He also makes some good points. Is Carlisle too good to be true? Everyone has flaws. Where are Carlisle's? I guess we'll have to wait and see.

Molly is beyond adorable. I loved the "walking thesaurus" line.



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading commenting.

I'm glad you like Jacob.  He isn't a bad guy, he's just overprotective and loves his sister and niece and wants the best for them.  We of course will learn more abotu carlisle as the story moves forward.  I love writing Molly!

The next update should be mid week to next weekend.

Thanks again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

I still think Bella is being a fool. Carlisle is too old for her. You should not date some one older than your parents. That is just gross. Edward didn't do anything unforgiveable. Bella must have a hard heart, because she is not perfect either.



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading.commenting.

I hope you stick around and continue to read the story.  I'm not going to say which way it is going to go, but it is far from over.

I appreciate your feedback and your views of the story. 

I'm hoping to update mid week, but it might not be until next weekend.

thank you again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

I really liked the chapter. However, I did not get the beginning were Bella was upset with Carlisle. He did not do anything wrong. He wanted to make sure no one got hurt including Bella. I think Bella made the correct decision after Edward was so rude to her.



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for leaving a comment and reading the story!

 

I'm glad you liked it.  Bella wasn't so much angry with Carlisle as she was frustrated with their situation.  She went from having zero interest in any guy in five years to having two men being intersted in her (and she in them).  She understands that it is complicated at best.  She doesn't know what to do and she is just confused.  Edward wasn't very nice to her, was he?

I am almost done with the next chapter and hope to have it up before I leave for work.

Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

I think Bella handled the Edward situation all wrong. She should have talked to him in person. You don't email some one with this type of information. She was already blowing him off because she did not respect him enough to talk to him face to face. She said Edward was rude. I don't think so, he was protecting his heart. She was the rude one. Edward is a sensitive person. Carlisle even said he was. Does Bella really want to be Edward's step parent?



Author's Response:

hi,

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment.

Bella didn't have Edward's number and wanted to talk to him immeditly.  She thought email would be at least some way to communicate with him.  She also didn't want to being the subject up in class.  I agree with you when you say you think Edward was just protecting himself, he was.  He has been hurt badly and doesn't want to put himsel in the situation again.  Edward isn't out of the picture.  He'll be back.

I'm hoping to finish the next chapter before I have to leave for work.  Fingers crossed!

-Lisa

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

I think Bella should listen to her daughter. I'm all Carlisle, the problem is will he have time for a new relationship including Molly with his work schedule?



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and giving a comments.  I'm working on the next chapter now and then debating wether or not to do an outtake with Carlisle and Edward.  Either way, we will be getting to know both of them better real soon.

Thank you again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Edward does seem nice but they are getting to know each other as friends and Bella just told him that her whole life was all about Molly. With that being said he should have included Molly in the plans for the next get together. Not only that but he seemed to stumble a little after she said she was her daughter. No Bella shouldn't include Molly with whatever she does with him but it would have been nice for him to put that out there.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Alright, father and son both have a past with women cheating on them. Oh she has her hands full and I hope they don't think she's trying to be a player by seeing them both. Well kind of seeing them both but not really. They are both awesome but I'm cheering for Carlisle

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Bella didn't make an inform decision regarding the two men in her life. I think she really she should have left well enough alone and stayed away from the both of them and dated other people. Edward on the other hand is acting really petty now. He is a glutton for punishement. Now he will have to see Bella all the time with his father not a ideal thing at all. He just pushed her into his fathers lap what an idiot he is! I do think that he probably fell hard for her but since he was hurt before he won't ever fight for anyone again. He is such an ass for sure. Since is mom is a slut he thinks all woman are whores. Love this chapter update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

We are going to get into Edward's head a little bit in the next few chapters or so.  I'm toying with an outtake between Edward and Carlisle.  I'll figure it out after I'm done with the current chapter that I am working on.  There is some more drama coming up and I hope you enjoy what you read.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

I am a true Bella/Edward fan, but in this case I like carlisle! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Wow  Edward is acting like a real child.  Wonder if he'll mess up things with esme too.

Carlisle is so sweet.



Author's Response:

I might be a Bella/Edward fan at the end of the day, however, Carisle is my favorite character from the series.  I have beef with the movies because they cut his role down so much and he is an importiant character. 

There will be more eith E and C coming up.  Also, we'll meet Esme in a few chapters too!

Lisa

PS-Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Bella's been alone for five years with her daughter. I'm a bit surprised that after all this time she's willing to put herself and Molly in the midst of a hornet's nest. Edward's animosity is bound to cause turmoil for a C & B relationship. I wish Bella would just walk away from both Cullen men. That Rose is a smart woman. I agree with her completely. Bella is playing with fire.



Author's Response:

I think Bella is kind of tired being stuck on the side lines.  She was content with it for so long, but now that someone (well, the two men) have shown interest in her, she convenced herself she is ready and will at least try to get into the ring of dating.  Ihope you like what's coming up next!

-Lisa

PS-Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

well with the way edward was treating her then i dont blame her for not wanting anything to do with him at all ! im excited to see whats happens when carlisle talks to edward. i think carlisle is the better bet right now 



Author's Response:

I might do the conversation with Edward and Carlisle as an outtake....I haven't decided yet.  I am working on the next chapter (the visit with Jacob). 

Thanks for readign and the next update will be soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter Ten

I think that Carlisle handled it right, either Edward would be hurt. At some point he would want to meet the woman his dad is dating, right? What to do, what to do....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.

I've been so busy this week and am slowly (a lot slower than I'd like) working on the next chapter.  I'm hoping it will be up tomorrow or early next week. We'll see Edward's reaction then.

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Great chapter

I think Carlisle did the right thing. He does not want anyone to get hurt. It seems to be Bella has to pick on to try and have a relationship with she can't have one with both of them. I will say this there is a big age difference between my husband and my self (not 20 years). He was 48 when our third child was born. Age doesn’t matter; it is the connection that you feel with someone. Bella has a lot to think about. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and then leave feedback for it.

Carlisle is a good guy, that's why he did what he did.  He doens't want to see anyone hurt, mostly not his son.  He likes Bella but feels that she has to make soem decisions.

I'm glad you brought up the whole age thing.  The first story I wrote for this site was a Carlisle and Bella story.  I had orginally wrote it a few years ago and it was non twilight, however I changed it a little bit and rewrote it and posted it.  i actually got a few emails from people saying it was gross that I would even think of putting those two characters together and they went on and on.  I'm so glad that you understand what i was trying to convey in the other story.  Age is just a number.  The connection and love that you share with some one is what matters.  As I get older (I'm 30) I'm learning that this is true.

Anyway, getting back to the story, the next update might not be until next weekend.  I have a very busy week a head of me.  Thanks for reading and i hope you like what's up next!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter Ten

well i hope that edward dosent take it the wrong way ! excited for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

We'll see Edward's reaction in the next chapter.  Hang on tight, the next chapter might not be for a week (sorry!).

Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter Ten

great chapter.  I agree with waiting to date until Bella is out of Esme's class.  She seems like the vindictive type to me.



Author's Response:

Bella willl reach out to Edward in the next chapter.  We still have a few more chapters to go before we meet Esme.

Thank you fro reading.  The next chapter probaly won't be for a week or so.

-Lisa

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter Ten

I think Calisle was right. He truly showed himself to be a caring and honorable human being. He couldn't hurt his child. Kudos to him.

Rose is right. Bella needs to be honest with Edward, but I predict that Edward will act badly. He's been so hurt in the past that I can see  him jump to all sorts of conclusions.

The Lion King on Broadway is spectacular!

To this day I can't watch The Wizard of Oz.



Author's Response:

Bella will contact Edward in the next chapter.  Carlisle is a good guy and we haven't seen the last of him yet.

I loved the Lion King on Broadway.  We took my niece when she was eight.  I had seen it before but it was fun to see it through her eyes.

What scared you with the Wizard of Oz?

Thanks for reading/reviewing.  The next update will probaly be in a week or so.

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Was wondering when she'd figure it out.  LOL    Sweet day together though



Author's Response:

Bella's a smart cookie...it just took her a little time.  They had a great day together, until the phone call.

The next chapter should be up this weekend sometime.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Holy Crow  she figured it out.... Oh, this is getting good now...Of course I love Daddy Dr C.  but I am a die hard canon pairing loving BxE ... so I am pulling for our Edward!!!  Sex on legs that he is....  Love the story!



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for reading and commetning.

It took our girl a little while, but she did figure it out.  I love my share of Edward but I feel liek Carlisle is under used a lot (he's actually my favorite charcter in the Twilight world).  I once knew where I was going with this sotry, but know, I'm not sure.  The next update shouldn't be long, maybe this weekend.

Thanks again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: time for now Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Edward and Carlise believed that was coming.  Prof will be Esme.  The mum of Edward and Alice or Elizabeth Mason.   This is complicated - good luck to Bella.  Love the story thank you. 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/reviewing.  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

Things will begin to unravel in the next chapter as Bella confides in a few people about her realization.  Hang on...things are going to get intersting!

The next update should be this weekend sometime!

Thanks again!

-Lisa

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter Nine

i hope she talks about her revelation! cant wiat to see waht ahppens next 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/reviewing!

the next chapter will be a lot of thinking on Bella's behalf, I promise.  She confides in a few people and gets their opinons.  Things are going to get intersting, I promise.

The next update should be more than likely this weekend sometime.  I'm really busy next week and I want to update as sooner than later.

Thanks again!

-Lisa

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Just spectacular. 

While I would never fault a mother for bowing to her child's needs, I believe that the "spark" needs to be there for a healthy relationship. I'm anxious to see who Bella develops a "spark" with.

And bravo to you for going against the "Esme the perfect nurturing mother" stereotype. Medical school and having kids young is TOUGH! It's not a fairy tale.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words :)

I like mixing up the other wise known and established characters.  In my last story Edward was actually Edward Swan and Charlie and Renee were his parents where as Bella was a Cullen and Carlisle adn Esme were her parents.  It's fun (come to think of it, Esme wasn't all that nurtering and in my first story she was dead.  I really don't have anything against her...I promise!). 

As i just wrote to another reader, I once knew where I was going with this story but as I continue to write and make an outline, I have two and I don't know which way I'm going to go.  It's an adventure we'll all have to wait and see (although I'm pretty sure I'm going with my first thought but we'll see).

The next update should be maybe this weekend.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  I'm really busy next week so I won't have time to write a lot.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Hi,

I just found your story and I love it. Right now I am a Carlisle and Bella fan. Normally, I am E and B all the way.  But I just love Carlisle in this story and really feel like I know him.



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for reading!  I'm usualy a E and B fan too, but for whatever reason sometimes I like a little C and A too (Carlisle is my favorite character from Twilight.  Not saying that this story is going to be C/B, but still).  I hope you stick around and like what I have coming!

Thanks for reading,

Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter Eight

This is weird. She is dating a father and son. She needs to stick with the son. As much as I love Carlisle, he is too old for her.

Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for your comments and for reading.

This is the first story that I have ever written like this.  I have no idea how the hought popped into my head but it did.  I usedto have a straight outline of how I wanted the story and now I'm not so sure.  Things iwll pick up and become more insteresting in the upcoming chapters....I hope you'll stick with it and enjoy it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter Eight

hmmm   cant wait till they all find out they are in each others lives and how.



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading!

Thinks will pick up and become more intersting in the upcoming chapter so stay tuned!

-Lisa

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Loved this story but I have a very bad feeling Edward will be there. Bella needs to take a break from the both of them. Her relationship with both men will destroy someone in the end. To top everything off they are father and son that's what I am assuming here. If they are pity Bella who is stuck in the middle. Her daughter loves Carlise how can Edward compete with that his father? I really hope Edward doen't think Bella was playing a game with him.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading and commetning!

Bella is just getting back into the dating scene.  Things will be explained farther on in the story.

Hope you continue to enjoy it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter Eight

well i have a feeling its going to get a whole lot intresting! cant wiat 



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading/ reviewing!

I am hoping to make the next few things intersting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:41 PM Title: Chapter Eight

You are creating a really interesting dynamic between Bella and each of her potential suitors. I wonder how Molly's presence might influence Bella's feelings. As a mother, naturally she would gravitate toward anyone who helped her daughter or who her daughter liked. I'm curious to see what's next for these characters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

I hope you l ike what is to come!

-Lisa

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter Seven

This is a very interesting set of circumstances that you have created. I was particularly struck by one comment that Edward made,

"At first I did try and stay with her.  I loved Tanya and I wanted to work things out.  In the end she ended up cheating again.  I didn’t want the start of our relationship to be like my parents’ marriage so I broke things up."

It's telling that even after the cheating in his parents' marriage, Edward gave Tanya a second chance. It appears Edward desperately wants a loving relationship, so much so that he was willing to forgive his fiance for being in bed with another man. I'm not sure how many men would forgive their fiances if they "saw" the cheating firsthand. That has to be a sight seared into the brain. For as many trust issues that Edward claims to have, he seems to yearn for a relationship.

I'm curious to see how you continue to portray Esme. She's always such a paragon of virtue. It's truly interesting to read about a less than successful Esme and Carlisle dynamic.

Can't wait to read more! 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/reviewing!

Edward wants what his parents didn't have...a loving relationship that will last.  He is almost desperate for it without saying so.  We'll get to know him a bit  more as the story goes on.  Also, he idolizes his father and is very much like him in a lot of ways.  We'll also learn more about that later.

Esme is a no noncess woman.  We'll be meeting her a few chapter down the line too.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story!  The next update will be soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter Seven

SO i am guessing Carslile is Edwards dad! Love the story!



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/commenting!

Things will get intersting in the next few chapters...promise!  I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter Seven

This story sounds fun and I kind of see where this is going.  I have to say, please don't have Bella sleep with father and son, I may not be able to continue reading something like that.  As of now, this story has potential to be very entertaining.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing.  I'm trying to make the story fun.

I don't want to spill too much, but I promise there will be no sleeping with the father and son.  Blah! First of all, Bella is so far away from sleeping with anyone that by the time she does I bet she will have straightened a few things out.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hop eyou continue to do so!

-Lisa

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter Seven

I loved how they opened up to a Major Degree, yes, Bella still has misgivings about opening up about Baby Daddy but she will if she is giving time to develope the trust.

As for Edward lets keep in mind that he too has MAJOR trust issues.  I hope our Girl heard the full scope of that fact....Hence Dr. Carlilse......Love this story....

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commetning!

Bella does have major issues when it comes to trust, but it's more than that.  She isn't just putting herself out there, she feels like she is puttingMolly out there too and doens't want to do that at all.  Edward too has some major issues when it comes to trust.

I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story!  The next update will be soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter Seven

hmmm alice the mooch huh.    lol for Bella getting wrong assumptions again at the store



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for stopping my to read and comment on BtB.

Alice isn't fully done growing up yet...lol!  She's getting there though.

Bella is learning when it comes to making assumptions!

Date number two should be up soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter Seven

well im excited to see what happens next chatper and to see how the next date goes ! 



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you again for reading and leaving feedback on my story!  I'm so glad you are enjoying it.

Date two should be posted soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter Seven

great chapter!!! carlisle is edwards dad, right? this will b interesting....can´t wait for the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for reading and spending the time to comment.

In a few chapters things will start to unravel and Bella will be pasting pieces together.

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! The next update will be soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter Six

Great stuff!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it!  thanks for reading/writing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Six

hmmmm    Lemme guess  Esme is the exwife and eddie is one of Carlisle's older kids (with esme??)



Author's Response:

Perhaps, maybe, I don't know.  You'll  have to read to find out. :)

Thank you for reading!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter Six

im excited to see how these 2 dates will go ! 



Author's Response:

Stay tuned....I'm writing the chapters now.  Glad you are still enjoying it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter Five

Carlisle is wearing a ring. I hope. Bella could use a friend. Molly sounds cute.

Author's Response:

Over the next few chapters we will be getting to know Carlisle and Edward a little better.  We will also see Bella turning to someone who knows her well and is a friend.  Every time I hear the name Molly I picture a a littel girl with curly hair who is just so innocent.

I hope you are enjoying the story.  more to ocme soon.  Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter One

I wonder why Edward had a change in attitude?  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter Five

didnt see that one comming! i like carlisle as a person and dr! cnat wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenitng!

I really like writing Carlisle, he's a fun character.  I hope you continue to enjoy the story!  The next update should be in a few days!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter Five

That explains a lot.   Guess Mike's parents blame her a bit.   Wonder if they'll ever find out they are grandparents.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and coomenting.

At this time Mike's parents are gone and aren't coming back.  I have this story laid out and outlined, so as of now that's going to happen.  I actually went to high school with a girl who died suddenly.  Within six months her parents literally just picke dup and moved and vanished.  Her older sister never finished senior year with us.  It's sasd but it does happen.

Anyway, the next update should be in a few days or so.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter Five

WOW! Amazing chapter! I love how she thinks Dr. C is better than Prince Eric!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.  Dr. C will be around for a little bit..maybe longer.  I hope you are enjoying the story!  Next update should be in a few days.

-Lisa

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter Four

can't Bella catch a break here? This poor girl I declare   I love the story and very interested to see this play out.  Very nicely done too!!!

 



Author's Response:

Bella's life has been some what hetic for several yeears.  You will learn more about it in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and commetning as well as your words of encouragement!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lindsaywin Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter Four

Very promisng story so far-keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  Also, thank you for the words of encouragement.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: kymmie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter Four

Omg this story is soooo sad and cute all in one I take it Carlisle will find out about "Molly" soon if that's her daughters name if that the secret it seams to be. Update soon and do you know who she is going to end up with are are you goin as you write.

Author's Response:

You are very inclined about Molly.  She'll be making an apparence soon, along with some information about Bella's history adn why she is kid of drastic when it comes to having fun.  I know who she is going to be with :)  I just have to get the story there.

Thank you for reading and commenting.  I hope you will continue to enjoy the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter Four

Bella jumps to conclusions and Angela is no help. Bella needs to communicate better.



Author's Response:

They are like two gossiping old ladies! LOL. The next chapter should be up over the weekend.

Thanks for reading adn reviewing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter Four

Looking forward to next update to find out what is going on!



Author's Response:

There will be answers in the next chapter (it should be posted this weekend).

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter Four

i hope rose is alright and im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

All will be revieled in the next chapter.  thank you fro reading and reviewing the chaoter!  Next update should be this weekend.

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter Four

oh no  wonder what happened to Em.     Bella is very pesimistic and a bit judgemental....  esp about the Esme/Edward thing.



Author's Response:

Bella is kind of emotionally and it will be revieled why soon.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter Three

Bella should invite Edward to have coffee. It is during the day and in her place of safety. She needs to have fun according to her whole family. It is a good way to start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Bella and Edward will be talking a bit more in the next chapter...wait until you see!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter Three

Curious to find out if she will respond to Edward!



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading/commenting.  Bella and Edward will be chatting in the nexxt chapter...just wait and see!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter Three

well im liking the family aspect of them and im intrested to see what carlisle and edward have to do with it all ! 



Author's Response:

Bella is very close to her fmaily and they are tight knit.  She has done a lot for them as they have for her.  Carlisle and Edwrad's growing relationhip with Bella will be seen in due time.  Thanks for reading/commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Three

hmmm  the Cullens are going to be too hot to turn down for long.  yum



Author's Response:

the Cullens and Bella will be chatting some more and getting to knwo each other better.  Wait and see!  thank you fro reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter Two

hmmm Yeah for new grade and for flirty Carlisle.



Author's Response:

Yep, it's the begining of something :)

thanks for reading...next update will be soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter Two

loved your first 2 stories im excited to see where this one goes 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words.  I hope I don't disapoint you and you keep reading this one too!

-Lisa

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter One

Ah father and son flirting....  how cute.



Author's Response:

I kow, orginal, right?  I'm trying to write it so it isn't creepy!  Please stick with it!

:) Lisa

Reviewer: Nik2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter One

So happy you are starting a new story.  I am hooked already.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you like the new story!  Thanks for reading and commenting.  Chapter two sill be up shortly...happy reading!

- Lisa

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