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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 07 Jan 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 07 Jan 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 07 Jan 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Date: 07 Jan 2012 7:34 AM Title: Prologue

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Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter, full of love, hope and promise.  They are so in love, I hope Bella asks Edward to move in.  About this stranger, yep he here too cause trouble for Edward.  But how did he know so much, Peyton , the accident, all sounds fishy to me.  They need to tell everyone, Charlie, Emmett,Jasper, Carlislw, Wayne, everyone be on alert. It sounds to me like he wants to do something to Peyton!!  I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my goodness!  I was behind on this story and all caught up now!  I can't wait to see what the Valentine's Gift will be and how they are gonna handle that Aleskei dude and his impersonating Ryan and looking for Edward.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

looking forward ot the next chapter

Reviewer: lulaalice Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it and Happy New Year to ya.

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

ooooh i bet it's alex....

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter.  Glad to see that Edwards is okay for the most part.  Can't wait to read puppy reaction.  Till next time....Anne-Marie

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

Well, I can only speak for myself, of course, but I am damned thankful Edward pulled thru!!!  Yea, I was a little worries I admit!!!  And a puppy, P deserves it.  Poor thing she probably even aged!!  Happy times ahead, I hope!!!

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

Still with you Lady, still loving the story and can't wait for the next chapter.

sapho99

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love it!!

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 21

First off.....my nephew Tony is a proud member of our US Coast Guard stationed in San Diego.................

Great chapter..... I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter....can't wait to see what happens next........

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

OMG! Im still crying! Such an emotional chapter! I loved it!!!

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter!!!!! damn woman talk about knuckle bitting .... Have a great trip and we'lll be here when you get back.

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, what can I say except "sigh".  Wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: sweetdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 21

awwww that is the cutest ending to a chapter!!! he kept his promise! :) xxxx

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

loved it and im glad that he made it back in the end ! 

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

Damn...I think my eyes are connected to a never ending faucet!!!!!  I am full out sobbing and my husband thinks I'm crazy.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

wow what a week the boys have gone through. now we see that whatever time the men go through on the boat it is not any easier on land. some families go through a tough time on land. it doesn't seem something you would ever become ammune to. bella already losing someone to the water this is extra scary. poor peyton she is so in love with edward and needs him in her life when she finds out she will be beside herself. well this family has come through another major event in their lives. even though it is bella's man it defentiely effects the entire family. 

wow alot of emotions, loved the chapter. like edward says he kept his promise he did come home.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

Whew...to me that was a close one!!!! Edward, Bella and Peyton have to much to discover before something bad like dying happpens!!!!  :)

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

WOW, oh, WOW!!!  I had the kleenex ready to go.  Fantastic chapter, babe!!  I appreciate how you wrote it out.  Extremely creative and didn't leave us hanging.  I soo appreciate that.  When I reviewed before and requested not a huge cliffee, I wasn't being mean.  It's just I knew we were coming to this chapter and you've had to go recently, two weeks inbetween updates and I soo didn't want that happening.  I just had to know they got him out of the water.  I don't mind waiting to read the aftermath now.

Have a great week and hope to see an update, when you get a chance!!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

Nice job!! Left you on over on FFN too.

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

I really enjoy your story. It is so sweet with just the right amount of spice!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

God.. this is just a wonderful story.. JUST FREAKING WONDERFUL.  Thanks so much for the HOLIDAY update.  Love it. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 20

wow so love it

great chapter

they are still learning and growing

they are getting through and getting closer

i so love it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

loved the chapte3r looking forward to the next one 

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 20

A really nice fic.  Differernt and engaging.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

Perfect, honey!!  All around perfect!!  Loved it!!  Poor Edward!!  GO Bella!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

I love this story I am just so worried that you are going to take it all away from Edward and this is will not be a HEA. 

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2011 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

Fantastic as always!!  Like I always say, I adore this story!!

You know what I thought of when reading this chapter?  That when Edward goes overboard in the Prologue....Charlie or someone of equal importance is going to go in after him and die in his place.  Oh, God, that would be horrible all the way around!!!!  I hope no-one dies at the end of the Proglogue.  I don't think Bella or I could handle that. 

I do have other things to worry about in my life, believe it or not BUT how this whole Prologue is going to go down is worrying the shit out of me.  I mean, really!!!

GO Breaking Dawn!!!  Yippee, I think that's why I can't sleep.  My bff and I are going this afternoon to watch all 4 movies at a Movie Tavern starting at 4pm.  Soooo freaking pumped!!  One of the other author's lives in another country and already saw the movie and she said it was EPIC!!!

Reviewer: sweetdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 19

!oh my word!! i love, love, love this story. i have only just recently started reading it but have just been blown away. peyton just seems like the most adorable, sweet, genuinely kind kid ever and i just seriously want to hug her!! you have written edward so well in this story! ahhhh i just am in love with this story, cannot wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

I love the lemons!!!! That was so sweet of Edward to get Peyton that braclet.  It sounds like maybe we are getting close to the Prologue?   Please tell me there will be a HEA?  I dont like reading stories where both or one of them die in the end.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

love it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 19

loved the chapter cantwait till thenext chapterr 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

well i am glad edward is having life expierences and enjoying them with everyone. 

bella and edward seem to be moving along in their relationship. seems as if things are getting easier for bella and edward is learning how to be with others and how to feel and love.

i so love that edward thought of peyton and bought her the charm bracelet. that was great and her reaction was even better. so love it

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

i love this story.. great character development, right amount of angst & fluff, great attenton to detail and realistic dialogue

Reviewer: AlliSweets Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh my! The chair bracelet is The sweetest thing ever! Can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

This was one of my favorite chapters so far...so good.  I'm nervous about Alexski now...never even thought about the fact he was still out there.  It makes me wonder if Alexski has anything to do with Edward being in trouble in the prologue? 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

LOVE THE LEMONS.  Now as for Peyton, I love that she loves him so much.  I knew she wouldn't be mad at him and I kinda expected the exact reaction she had. lol.  I have kids too so...... yeah they see things differently than us.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow that was HOT DAMN.  I love the lemons.  I only wish you would include the pictures from your blog so that we can see the pictures as we read the story.  Finally they got to show each other how much they care.  I cant wait for more.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow I was shocked at Emmetts reaction. I hope he doesn't cause trouble.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow I was shocked that Bella sent him away. I mean I know it was a shock to find out that he was in prison but it wasn't his fault. I am sure that the money they gave him was from the man his friend robbed.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow at least they both got some release. I am glad that Edward stood up to Xavier he needs to back off.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

That was a hot make out session. I dont know how Edward was able to stop. He sure is passionate. uuugghhhh I cant wait for the lemon.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Finally he is talking to her and he got to touch her and kiss her cheek. I love that Payton gave him some things from her treasure box. I love this story and I tried to comment on your blog but it didn't go through. I love the pictures too but I am disapointed that you changed the people for the characters only Edward is the same picture. I really wanted to see the actual people.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love it!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

i am so glad things are going well.that edward got a second chance and he will be making the most of it. i think now more than ever does he understand the chance he truly has been given is a gift and one the 3 people helping him is not done without a heavy heart. but it seems they are quite impressed with edward and they where right to support the second chance. 

i love that edward and peyton went o a little date. they need that time together and have the open communication that they do.

love it look forward to the races

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

loved the chatper ! and how whipped he is with peyton

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 18

Review left on FFN as well. Just decided to give you some stars to go with it. :-P

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

This is my first review for this story and let me tell you this is a great story!!! I can't wait for more and the prologue......Edward better pull himself out of that mess cause Bella and Peyton will never recover if he don't!!!! Peyton's relationship with Edward is so precious!!! She will keep Edward on his toes. Great story...more please!!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

loved this chatper looking forward to the enxthcapter 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love the ILUs.  The way it came out was perfect!!!  The whole evening was great.  I like how Bella was testing Edward by moving around a little.  It was so funny that she noticed it.  The shower was the best!  I can't wait to see what is next.  I am so glad everyone is out together.  Great job...thanks so much!!!  See you in two weeks!!!

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

This is one hell of a great chapter!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 17

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

love it. i am thrilled they all went out together to hang. it is good for them all to get to know each other. i love the relationship that peyton and edward have

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

love it so much

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love Bella and Edward's time together!  Edward's talk with Peyton went so much easier then I thought it would.  She has a way about her that just makes everything ok.  I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!!

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope the week you spend away from this is wonderful.

Can't wait for the next chapter and knowing you will be relaxed and happy will make the next one more special.

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Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 16

I assumed Peyton would totally be on Edward's side when he told her...kids are like that- they see the simplicity of something we adults think is so complex and make us realize it really is simple when seeing it through their eyes.  I just love Peyton! Looking forward to Bella and Edward moving forward.Ü

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thank you for the story.

I hope the soccer a few weeks ago went well.

Used to be a soccer mom - loved the road trips

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

oh so love it. bella and edward getting through

love the talk with peyton and edward. she is too cute for words.

the girls seem to be okay with edward which is a plus

love it

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 16

Peyton is such a cutie!  She is just dear!  Thanks for the great chapter!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love it!  They are so good together.  Evan's story is sad.  I can't believe they never found him.  That never crossed my mind.  I can't imagine being somewhere and hating it and not being able to go to my parents and tell them.  The worst part is they walked away from Peyton...their own grandchild...a piece of their son.  How can people do that. 

I expected Bella and Evan to have had a great love.  It was surprising to find out they were nothing more then best friends.  She loved him but was not in love with him.  The whole situation is sad. 

I love this story!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

 

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

God I want to have your babies! LOL

great chapter can't wait for next week.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

ROTFL at Jasper's hair teasing!! #grins

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

love it

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

What an awesome chapter... I'm so sad about Evan... but I am a Bella & Edward kinda girl.  I  love little Peyton.  I can't wait to see how Rose handles Emmett to... loved it!!!

Reviewer: dannysmitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 15

aww poor Evan. he seems like a sweety!!!

 

Edward and bella? HONK HONK HI THERE SAILOR! That was steamy hot! Muy Caliente!

Reviewer: ashleybaker373 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

I Love this story and I really want to read more. I can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the awesome job.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved the ending. I wasn't expecting Bella to take so long to get back to Edward, and poor Peyton blaming herself for stupid grownup problems. So happy that she ran to meet him at the end and can't wait for more of Evan's story next time. Thanks

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am glad she is finally ready.  She needs to deal with the past and start living again!  Really living.  I love Peyton.  She is so cute.  She is not letting her Mom get away with anything.  She wants her best friend and that is that.  I love it!  She was so scared to ask her Mom if Edward left her a text.  She didn't want to be disappointed anymore.  I can't wait for the talk.  They need to get this all out.  As for Rose...I love her so much!  Emmett is going to be so sorry when she is done with him.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awesomeness!!  Wonderful chapter, as always!!  Loved it!!  Can't wait to hear from Edward!!

Yeah, good luck to Emmett.........yeah, not really.  I ALMOST feel sorry for him BUT I can't stand people who jump to conclusions and pass judgement before the whole story.  That is such a pet peeve of mine!  HATE it!!

This is the most precious, well written story!!  I've read a fuck-ton of stories over the last 3 years and this is one of my favs.

Can't wait to keep moving forward.  Good luck to your son and his soccer team!  Until next weekend.......

Reviewer: swift-lovestory Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved it!! This story is addicting. Cannot wait for next chapter

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.  Can't wait for the next one.Ü

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

loved it looking foward t o the next chapter 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am glad Bella didn't beat up her parents too bad for knowing about Edward's past before she did.  Now I have a bad feeling for Edward having to work with Emmett on a small boat in the middle of the ocean, so hopefully they can resolve this soon.  I shudder to think what will happen when Xavier finds out. Stellar ending that Bella realizes she still wants Edward even with his baggage, now please get these kiddos back together soon, okay!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

DEFINITELY want more. Did I leave you anything over on FFN? I think I did but I'm not sure.....

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the chapter. I absolutely adored when she went running after him in the rain and wrapped herself around him. Great scene.

Reviewer: jd2383 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

loved charlies point of view. It gave a different prospective than we are used to reading. 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

She wants him and she knows it.  That is a huge step at this point.  I am sure she has questions and she also has a story to tell.  They can get through this, but I am sure there will be a lot of tears before it is all over.  I hurt for Edward.  I am glad that Bella ran after him.  I think he needed that even though it hurt too.  I am sure they don't feel like it, but these two people  are so strong.  I am worried about Emmett's reaction.  Don't need tension on the boat.  I can't wait until next week.  Great chapter....thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yep, tissues were needed.  I really didn't expect Emmett to react the way he did- I worry that he's going to confront Edward and do or say something unforgiveable.  I also wonder how Rose, ALice, and Jasper are reacting to this news.  I don't even want to think about how Xavier is going to handle it- maybe he'll surprise us all?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

loved it 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

wow everyone is soul searching and thinking things through. i really love renee and charlie. their happinees and love and family values. they have good kids. bella will come around. she finally sees she deserves to be happy. edward thank god he is honest with charlie. just makes charlie have more respect for him. but unfortunately i see emmett making things worse and having it out with edward. i hope edward just stands there and listens and doesn't react that way edward doesn't get in trouble and em looks like the ass. i see rose and alice be very accepting and coming to terms with edward. i like the way renee sees edward was needed by the family the whole family. oh so love it

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Fantastic!!!!  Can't WAIT for next weekend!!

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

i really like this story and am looking forward to the next update

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

Accurate tissue warning...damn!

Reviewer: swift-lovestory Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

I am tears, I know he will not go away, I cannot wait for the next chapter, love your story

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

Geez...that was rough!  Cried like a baby!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

yes this was defentiely a rough chapter. i knew it would be heavy. he had to knew something like this could happen. but i want him to remeber that charlie said when he tells her she would have a open mind she would need to think and don't  do anything rash. i am hoping he gives her time.she never said goodbye or that he couldn't see peyton she just asked for time.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

I said it before, I'll say it again - that DID NOT go well!!

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