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Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 11:55 AM Title: Prologue

I'm not normally a Rose fan, but I do like Em.  So that being said I will give this a go.



Author's Response:

Hi

thank you and in that case I hope you like it and what I did to Rose. I tried to give her something behind just mouthing off.

Let me know what you think

Nelly/Elvie

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 11:12 AM Title: Part Seven

Fantastic!!



Author's Response:

Thank you sweets.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 10:53 AM Title: Part Six

I agree, what the hell is up with the reviews?  I mean seriously!!  I've read a butt load of stories over the last 3 years and I do mean a TON!!!  This is a great story and well written.

Your Emmett sounds just like what I imagined him to be.  Love it!!!

Keep it up, honey!!!  You're doing great!!  Everyone else is missing out......but NOT me!! :)  I'm the smart one, reading your story.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:22 PM Title: Part Two

Love me some Emmett!!  I'm an Edward girl, all the way but Emmett runs a close 2nd.  Yummy!!!

Really enjoying this story thus far.  Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Hey

Thank you so much for talking your time to review and then bother with 3. I feel  honored.

I am happy to see you are enjoying this story. I had fun writing it.

If you didn't catch it reading the chapters. Prima Nocte is a parallel story to Four Weeks, which is about Jasper and how she met Alice. It is the same story, just from Jasper's POV. I thought I'd twist it up a bit and make Jasper a woman.

If you are looking for some Edward and Bella action check out Starting Over, that will explain about their daughter and a lot of other stuff. If you read I hope to see a comment or two from you

Thank you for your support.

Elvirina/Nelly

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:18 PM Title: Part One

Jasper as a woman and Alice as a lesi.  Funny!!!

Can't wait to see where Edward and Bella are coming from since they already have a two year old daughter and Edward and Rosalie just broke up?

Cuteness on Emmett's play on Rose's shoes and dress.  Clever.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:15 PM Title: Prologue

I've already read all the 3 chapters and noticed you don't have any reviews, yet, so I'd thought I'd leave you 3 reviews.

Enjoyed the Prologue.  Interesting story line.

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