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Reviewer: uga Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Whoa.  I never expect it to be Edward and Bella in this type of story.  It goes to show that sometimes things appear to be perfect when your outside looking in, yet reaffirms things aren't always as they seem.  It's sad when things go wrong.



Author's Response:

I'm SO sorry that I didn't see this review before now. 

This song overpowered me when I heard it sung live.  I, luckily, have never experienced this, but hearing it made me think I had.  Groban's voice is so powerful.  I know some people have a hard time thinking Bella would do that to Edward, but that's why it's a story.  

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow sooooo sad!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Sunny.  Thanks for r & r!  I agree it is sad; the song is so sad & beautiful.  However, it is also uplifting.  By the end, Edward is ready to move on & not let Bella hurt him anymore.  I like to fool myself into thinking it's a happy ending.  :)

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Ara Rayne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very well written but this is so not Bella... so it was a little hard to think she had done that to Edward. Tanya I could see but not Bella...



Author's Response:

Hi Ara.  Yeah I know Bella is nicer than that.  But when this popped into my head it was Bella & not Tanya.  I just ran with it.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sorry, I couldn't finish reading it....I can't for the life of me picture anyone doing that to Edward, I'm not a fan of Bella..but she's always been right, she was never good enough, I just don't like hearing that Edward thinks it's the other way around



Author's Response:

Don't apologize.  It's not everyone's forte.  :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

sad one shot! 



Author's Response:

I know.  Perhaps someday it will be expanded.

Thanks for r & r!

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