Date: 10 Feb 2020 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 33
I have loved reading their story, their journey. Thank you for sharing it with us. Great job.
Date: 10 Feb 2020 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
The house was finished in time!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2020 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love the girls name!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow, they have really had a rough go of things. I hate that Bella had to have a hysterectomy. But I do not feel like she would be having any more kids any way. I don't think either one of them could take the stress of it.
Date: 10 Feb 2020 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh no!!!!!!! What is happening to Bella? Is she hemorrhaging?
Date: 10 Feb 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 28
I'm glad Edward decided to do the art show. I hate that Bella was not there for him. Oh no, her water broke
Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
I knew Bella was going to have a panic attack.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bless Bella's heart. Being in bed that long has a suck. I had normal pregnancy with all 3 of mine.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
I would be pissed at that pizza place.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad she is being honest with Edward and her dr.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
I dont blame people for getting on to Bella. It is not just herself now but she is carrying 2babiez. Those 2 babies are depending on her to keep not only herself healthy but them also.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella just thought Edward was a worrywart. He will be up her ass all the time now.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no. Why did she past out? Edward is definitely going to have a stroke. So glad I can ho straight to the next chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad they had a good night at the ballet.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
I felt like that was what was going to happen. When Charlie mentioned something a few chapters back about Renee and a lawyer.
Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very moving with Bella and Caius. Leukemia is awful. My cousin's little boy had a 2 year battle with at starting at 5 years old. To become cancer free and them lose his battle. He battled it for 2 year .
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
I just wonder what is in Renee's journals.
Date: 08 Feb 2020 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
So the boys were right!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2020 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad they are going to build. I was just wondering why they went just building back. I figured Renee had over dosed.
Date: 07 Feb 2020 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
What in the world happened to Renee? Over dose????
Date: 07 Feb 2020 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
The decor of the house sounds horrible but I have lived in a house with olive green stove, oven and sink. Also olive green bathtub, toilet and bathroom sinks. Lol. Can't wait to find out what Edward said to Renee to get her to leave without throwing a fit. Again you meanted Jude . But whose baby is it??????
Date: 06 Feb 2020 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is so sweet to go get her cotton candy.
Date: 04 Feb 2020 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
O, I love that the boys were making a cradle. How sweet.
Date: 04 Feb 2020 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love that Esme is trying to feed them. Lol.
Date: 04 Feb 2020 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Anthony was right....twins. I am guessing that Renee set their house on fire or was it the "project" that the boys have been working on???
Date: 04 Feb 2020 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
When Edward said the car had Arizona tags I knew it was Renee.
Date: 04 Feb 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my, I didn't even think about Edward being scared with Bella being sick because of what happened to Sarah. Wow. Who the heck is at the door? So glad I can go on to the next chapter right now. Lol.
Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad Anthony was ok. I have a question...I believe in the 1st chapter were Bella and Edward picked the boys up from school you mentioned baby Jade. Who does Baby Jude belong to??? I thought maybe Emmett and Rose. But you also mentioned that Angela and Kate were waiting there too.
Date: 03 Feb 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have a feeling she is going to be very emotional during this pregnancy.
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, in the boys defense they did not tell them to NOT tell. Lol.
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Finally having a baby
Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't believe Lauren just left and hasn't made any attempt to keep in contact with Bella or Alex. That's just wrong.
Date: 02 Feb 2020 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't believe Lauren just left and hasn't made any attempt to keep in contact with Bella or Alex. That's just wrong.
Date: 02 Feb 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I bet the boys have been hounding them for a baby sister or 2.
Date: 25 Aug 2019 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 33
i always love reading your stories
Date: 01 Jul 2019 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 33
An amazing end to an amazing story. I've loved following Edward & Bella on this journey. Yes, I definitely shed some tears, but they were sometimes happy, sad or just from laughter. And that's what makes a great story. Thank you for writing this. I've enjoyed this story as well as Taking Chances very much. I can't believe I didn't read them sooner. You are awesome to share them with us this way. Thanks.
Date: 09 Jun 2019 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you. Loved it.
Date: 25 Apr 2018 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 33
This story was awesome, made me cry, laugh and feel happy at different portions.
Date: 04 Apr 2018 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
Yeah, bloody fantastic indeed! ;-)
Date: 03 Apr 2018 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
I think beyond my love for your E&B relationship, I adore your Charlie. He is ever present, funny, strong and sweet and I know you can write him dark. Couldn’t finish that one. Anyway, I love the interaction between him and Bella it’s like my relationship with my Dad. Cheers and thank you!
Date: 10 Sep 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved this chapter
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this chapter keep on writing
Date: 03 Sep 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 33
My daughter had twin boys a year ago. She had a very low iron and the Dr. had her get an iron drip to bring it up. The boys came 3 weeks early and one weighed almost 9 pounds and the other weighed 5 1/2 pounds. They are now within 1/2 pound of each other and running around everywhere. Thanks for the great stories. Loved them. - Zanath
Date: 21 May 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
awesome sequel!!!!! ;D thanks so much for completing it ;)
Date: 21 May 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
omg you are evil!!!! well i really hope renee caused the fire but i have a feeling the boys experiment will be the cause ;( havent they been through enough!!!!!! ;)
Date: 29 Oct 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 33
Amazing series from beginning to end.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wonderful ending. Glad to see this jump forward.
Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great Job! I hate to see it end.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 33
Tears. Tears. Tears. Great ending.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved every word. Even when Renee was involved. Love you and your stories sooo much. Thank you for sharing your talent!
Date: 27 Oct 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
I can't believe the story has ended. This has been one of the best stories that I have read. How can you not love all of these characters. Looking forward to anything new that you have coming up. I truely enjoy your writing.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 27 Oct 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 33
(tearing) Wow I just really enjoyed reading Taking Chances and Moving Forward! I totally loved it! thank you for writing them and I look forward to reading mre from you!
thanks again! :-)
Date: 27 Oct 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved both stories. I dont review like I should but I did love reading this! !
Date: 27 Oct 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 33
There babies are all grown up. I have enjoyed reading these stories. The dynamics between all the characters has been amazing. There have been so many ups and down that I'm glad I got to read and enjoy.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
What a great ending
Date: 27 Oct 2013 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it!! Going to miss this story.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 33
Ah. Nice to see their happy ending but sorry to see them go.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wonderful chapter. :)
Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
That was such a touching chapter. It was my favorite in the whole story.
Date: 25 Oct 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella and Edward have an amazing extended family.
Date: 25 Oct 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 32
Glad to see that their long journey has finally gotten them to a really good place. It will be sad to see them go but I am glad they have finally found their complete happiness.
Date: 24 Oct 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Ahh this was so sweet.
The story of Tia and Bella was pretty sad.
the house was awesome!
Loved it!!
Date: 23 Oct 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wonderful chapter. Excellent surprise with the house
Date: 23 Oct 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
Looking forward to more
Date: 21 Oct 2013 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 31
aww the boys are so adorable
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
I know Bella doesnt' mean to be so stubborn, but she still isn't listening to her doctor. All she needs to do is lay in that bed and heal. She doesn't need to tear anything by moving. Everybody knows that when someone says fine that it is a lie. You would think that she would learn. I love the names.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
Tears.. :)
So good!!
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
Looking forward to more
Date: 20 Oct 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
I started reading Taking Chances Monday and finished this chapter last night. Haven't been able to put it down. Love it and can't wait to read more :)
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh tears, great chapter.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am so happy that Bella is doing ok. Edward would not have made it through another death. After this experience, I don't think they were going to have anymore pregnancies. Having a hysterectomy is not the worse thing, when it could have been death. They have 4 healthy children. Bella needs to concentrate on that then what she lost.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my gracious! This was so scary!!
I can not wait for the next update! Thank you for posting this one so soon!! :)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
Tears, tears, tears,
. What a GREAT chapter. :-)
Date: 17 Oct 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
Bb. I am still very worried. Great chapter.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 30
oh wow. E's gotta be going completely nutzoid.
Date: 17 Oct 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
lol poor Em. He had to be sacred to death. hope the girls and B will all be ok.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 29
Omg. Don't put Edward through this. Ahhhhhh. Next chapter. Next chapter.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Looking forward to more
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
Is Bella hemorrhaging ?? Sounds like what happened to a couple of friends of mine right after delivery and its scary shit especially when your a nurse/physician and know what's going on! I'd rather be like Bella and be unaware. Can't wait for next update!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
Nothing can happen to Bella, Edward will not survive. She better just have past out.
Date: 15 Oct 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh my.....
HURRY AND UPDATE!!!
You left it at a scary place!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
Poor b. So hard to be on bed rest
Date: 12 Oct 2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 28
I knew her water would break. Congrats to Edward.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my cliff hanger. Love it!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
Finally the babies are coming. I hope Bella is normal again after the birth.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
Looking forward to more
Date: 10 Oct 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
Ut oh!!
Update soon please!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
aww I can't blame Bella I'd be scared as hell too! Alex and Anthony are too funny :)
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
What did Bella think she could do? She can hardly walk. All that could have happened is she could have caused herself to go into labor. What would she have done if that would have happened. Bella can act so stupid.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
You had me worried for a minute there...did Edward get into an accident.... Was Bella's water going to break... Whew every body is okay but since babies pick storms for birthdays I'm guessing the twins make an appearance next chapter . ;-)
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
LOL!! Brothers are no better! I have 5 of them!! :) and two sisters!
Love this, looking forward to more :)