Date: 16 Jul 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
As much as I was surprised that this was a O/S and wanted it to continue, I really loved it. It was perfectly written. I'm such a visual person that it really did seem like a movie, fading in and out from the past to the present. I don't feel like there are missing pieces just maybe a little withholding of more information, but there was detailed portions of the more important events. Great story.
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. This was a blot bunny I'd had sitting on the shelf for a while, and when the opportunity to write for the Tusnami relief presented itself, I thought it would be the perfect time to share their story.
Thank you for reading I am truly glad you enjoyed it so much.
Date: 15 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
You know you so could continue this on for a full story. I loved reading this when I got my copy with the FFT.
I have to say I have toyed around with the idea of making it a full story. So you just never know. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I am glad you enjoyed it.