Date: 05 May 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 111
cool story thanks for sharing it on here with us ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 111
over all I enjoyed the story BUT your grammatical and spelling and misuse of words were very distracting.
Bigger isn't better when all you are doing is repeating a previous chapter
Your story would be better is you has a beta to help you fix your errors
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 97
what is the big deal they eloped, it is not illegal
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2015 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 61
Bella shivered in my arms I knew she was getting old it is typos like this that distract from the story was she really getting old or was she getting cold? It is a lovely story but you should have stuck with one POV because it is like reading the same thing twice "most" of the time
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 49
too much repeat
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
enjoying this
Date: 11 May 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story you have written I totally loved the way it all pulled together - but has it finished ? Thanks for spending the time writing this adventure we all appriciate the effort that it takes
Author's Response:
Yes it's finished for now... There is a sequel that I"ll be posting after the first of the year.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 111
Ooops, I don't think you finished that last paragraph
Author's Response:
It didn't copy the full chapter over. I'll fix it here in a bit dang dang dang. I was tired last night and didn't check it and todays been one busy day.
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 109
Alice can't be too happy about this scene.
Author's Response:
Nope.
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 111
Not many people would want to live next door to there parent lol. What was Alice and Jasper thinking about????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Author's Response:
We will find out in the sequel.
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 110
Life is good she is finding her iner strength
Author's Response:
Yup and she will need it soon.
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 109
Rose is such a bitch and got what she asked for
Author's Response:
trust me when I say you've not seen everything she will throw their way. hehe...
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 108
James! Did Rose have something to do with this? Of course
Author's Response:
We will find out tomorrow when I post the last three chapters.
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 108
Rose is evil
Author's Response:
Yes Rose is pure evil.
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 107
That was was a wonderful suprise
Author's Response:
Yup.
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 106
What is Roses problem
Author's Response:
We won't find out for a while yet.
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 105
hope things are getting cleared up
Author's Response:
All will be cleared up soon and smooooooooooth sailing not.
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Date: 06 Oct 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 104
That is what she needs to do she needs to deal with the pap because she is a Cullan from now on.
Author's Response:
Yup, agreed.
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Date: 06 Oct 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 103
That is better she is where she is to be.
Author's Response:
She stepped into a different world and it's taking her time, but your right she is where she needs to be.
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Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 102
thank goodness she came around
Author's Response:
She is in love so it only makes sense that she would come back.
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Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 101
Every move they make is being watched. Bella needs to toughen up
Author's Response:
sometimes it takes a while to get used to being in the lime light.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 100
Back to the den of the Alice monster!
Author's Response:
Yup.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 99
Alice is such a pain in the ass, isn't she!
Author's Response:
She can be. I won't hate to have someone like her in my life.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 98
Edward finally gets his wish! Poor guy. LOL
Author's Response:
why poor guy?
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 97
The plot thickens!
Author's Response:
yup.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 100
Im glad she is not pregers yet
Author's Response:
It just won't be right for it to do that just yet.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 99
life is good
Author's Response:
This is the way life should be.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 98
That is what you call a great first time gentle the way it should be.
Author's Response:
Yup, wish everyones first could be loving like that.
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Date: 02 Oct 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 97
So Rose doesnt have a heart
Author's Response:
Nope and we will not fully understand until the sequel.
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Date: 01 Oct 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 96
For real, Alice needs the shit knocked out of her. It's not up to her, it's up to Bella. She really aggrivates me in this story.
Author's Response:
I'm not a big Alice lover anyways, so that's why she is the way she is in this story.
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Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 95
Shit busted.
Author's Response:
Yup busted what is going to happen?
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Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 94
Suprise I didnt think she would go through with it glad she did.
Author's Response:
She is so out of her element that she thought this would be the easy way to do it.
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Date: 01 Oct 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 93
Rose is trying to make things right good for her. Go Edward Go he cant wait anylonger lol
Author's Response:
Is she or is this all part of a game hmmmmmmmmm think I just gave something a way. You will find out the truth about Rose in the Sequel hehe.
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Date: 01 Oct 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 96
I have just found your story and I really like it!!! Very interesting and very different. I Just spent the past 2 days catching up. It made me spoiled now I have to Wait to See what happens next. It just means you have a good story :) Can't wait for the next update! TTFN
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I try and post 4 chapters every day as it states this was my first fan fic and it was written in 09 so it's a completed story that I'm posting here. I have a few chapters of the sequel written also and will continue that once I'm done posting this story.
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Date: 30 Sep 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 92
I cant wait to see what is going to happen what will the evil bitches try to do and will Bella's parents show up????
Author's Response:
Everything will surprise you.
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Date: 30 Sep 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 91
I hope her parents will come to the party and not give her crap.
Author's Response:
They will be there, but they will be bringing someone.
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Date: 30 Sep 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 90
I am glad that Sophie told edward what is going on so he can try and stop it or at least warn people .
Author's Response:
Yup it shows that Sophie will be a good person.
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Date: 30 Sep 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 89
That was interesting.
Author's Response:
Nice words. totally not me and you know it.
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Date: 30 Sep 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 91
No worries, It worked out. I di like yours better! Just saying.
Author's Response:
Thank you, and you will have more of me real soon.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 88
Now, if I don't know anyone and the first thing I hear from a bunch of strangers about a girl I just met. Whom happens to be friends with my friend and engaged to her brother.
I wouldn't be asking if the girl will fit in or ruin anything. Since those same strangers said Amber had to publicaly clear Bella's name. And it was on orders from my friend and her brother. I would be pissed at this Amber person. And wonder what she did; that needed to be cleared.j/s
Author's Response:
It will all be cleared up soon enough trust me.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 88
Opions are like assholes everyone has one lol
Author's Response:
So, true but will Sophiie be a good person or a bad person?
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 87
He can take care of me ;)
Author's Response:
I think we all want a man that will care for us when we are sick.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 86
That is the shits food poisning no fun.
Author's Response:
yup had it a few times. It all depends on your system as how fast it hits and ifyou will end up in the hospital or not. It also depends on which more you get.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 85
Missed you. Alice will be Alice pushy lol
Author's Response:
Alice will always be Alice thats the fun of being Alice. Glad to be back.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 88
Kind of hoping Sophie is a nice person and can befriend Bella? Any chance??
Author's Response:
Sophie will be her friend.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 87
I wish my husband was that attentive when I'm sick! He's good but not that good.
Author's Response:
once upon a time elton was like that.... I think young love has something to do with it.
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Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 86
So glad you are back!
Author's Response:
Thank you. It felt good to be back in the saddle today.
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 84
At least he knows she was stupid.
Author's Response:
yup.
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 83
So things are the way they where before???
Author's Response:
kind of we will find out more real soon.
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 82
I think Bella should be pissed at him for the way he acted.
Author's Response:
I agree, but we know kind hearted people don't get pissed easy.
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 81
I dont think Edward handled that very well.
Author's Response:
agreed men can be very stupid at times.
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 82
I don't think I would have forgiven him soo easily.
Author's Response:
Sometimes we are stupid when we are in love. I know I've done the same thing many of times.
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Date: 15 Sep 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 84
Where have you been? I have missed your stories! Thanks for the multiple chapters and resolving the James thing.
Author's Response:
Life is crazy and going to get crazier for a while around here. Hubby has a bad heart valve, which they will replace on the 20th and then he will be down for the rest of the year. That mean I have to take care of all the farm animals myself. Learn how to drive a tractor so I can give them hay this winter oh how much fun that will be.
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Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 80
A new twist.. can't wait for more
Author's Response:
I've been told that I've got a very twisted mind...
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 80
Where did Bella go????
Author's Response:
We will find out soon.
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 79
another misunderstanding
Author's Response:
yup .
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 78
What brother???
Author's Response:
We will find out all about it soon.
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 77
I would like Amber to burn at the stake lol but a public appoligie would be good to.
Author's Response:
I'm with you Amber needs to burn.
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 80
Edward needs to get over it!! This has nothing to do with Bella
Author's Response:
You know it and so does he and he will get over it as we will see tomorrow.
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Date: 28 Aug 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 80
OH NO. Now what??
Author's Response:
You will find out very soon I promise.... I'm going to post tomorrow.
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Date: 23 Aug 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 76
Amber is going down
Author's Response:
Yup.
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Date: 23 Aug 2011 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 75
He cares so much and when he finds out who Amber is he is going to want to bitch slap her.
Author's Response:
yup,
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Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 74
Amber is the cheater that is going down????
Author's Response:
It was going to be interesting.
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Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 73
How soon can they get married???
Author's Response:
We will find that out very soon hehe.
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Date: 22 Aug 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well, I'm glad Edward apologized to Bella. I thought she might have been stubborn about things, guess I was wrong. =)
Author's Response:
He would be an ass if he didn't
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward better be careful, or he's going to scare Bella away. Edward may want what's best for her, but she may see it differently if he's not careful of how he goes about things. xo
Author's Response:
I think he will be changing a lot over the corse of this story.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awww, they are so cute! =)
Author's Response:
I'm having fun with them.
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[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is so fun! xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I had a blast writing it.
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Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
JUst found your story and started reading, I love it!! It is so good I'm only up to chapter 10 cant wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you... I call this my silly story.
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Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 76
Poor Bella can't get away from Edwards girlfriends or her insecuritys
Author's Response:
Yup, but trust me it will all work out.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I wonder what Edward will say when he finds out how Bella got screwed over in that lawsuit, maybe he will help her. I also can't wait until Alice is in the picture more, she just kills me! =)
Author's Response:
We will find out very soon....
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well, here we go! =)
Author's Response:
hope you goes the way you think it should.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, how can things go wrong with Alice helping him? Hmmmm =)
Author's Response:
Alice will be Alice and she will be a ball of energy.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
The more I read, the more I giggle. I can't wait to see what Edward's plan is to meet his 'dream' girl. Silly Bella, she should have looked up to see who helped her up when she tripped. =)
Author's Response:
The fun is just begining.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Edward, just send Tanya packing already! =)
Author's Response:
LOL
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is too much fun! :D
Author's Response:
I enjoyed writing this story and have always called it my silly story. Just so you know when I post chapters it's four at a time.... this is a completed story since it was written the summer of 09. There is a sequel that I never finished, but will finish.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this game of cat and mouse with the notes. I'm having so much fun reading your story! =)
Author's Response:
Thank you,
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
I died laughing at Edward's note, what a dork. But at least he's a hot dork. =)
Author's Response:
Yup, I just wanted to have some fun.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is great; I'm loving it already. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you. The chapters my be short but it was a fun way to use my mind.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
*Giggles* I love the note she just left him! =)
Author's Response:
Notes can be fun.
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so excited! I'm finally going to sit down and read your story; I've been dying to for a few weeks now. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you and remember it does have errors. I know this and understand this, but I felt I needed to post this here so people will see and understand just how much I've grown as a writer.
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Date: 18 Aug 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Tanya, coz she dont get it. Edward doesn't want her, but she still keeps trying to get him. lol
Author's Response:
We will see why later....
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 72
good for Bella sticking up for herself and telling Tanya off
Author's Response:
Is she gone?
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 71
he is just so sweet
Author's Response:
He found his other half and he wants to give her the world.
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 70
Her dad was not playing nice
Author's Response:
nope, but they will both be on board soon.
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 69
i cant wait for him to meet her parents
Author's Response:
This is going to be an interesting get together.
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 72
Alice always wants to know. Poor Tanya
Author's Response:
Why poor Tanya? and Alice will be Alice what can I say.
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 72
She did great standing up to Tanya!!
Author's Response:
Yup...... but is that the last of Tanya?
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Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 68
Its a good thing she told him.
Author's Response:
Yes he needs to understand what he is walking into.
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Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 67
She wont get mad at him for booking one suit she doesnt want to sleep alone but she may be pissed that he is talking to her parents.
Author's Response:
We will sooon findout.
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Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 66
How are either one of them going to sleep without the other.???
Author's Response:
It will be hard, but they will do it.
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Date: 13 Aug 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 68
I hope this goes well for Bella
Author's Response:
We will see.....
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Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 65
Poor Alice had to wait LOL
Author's Response:
Yup I made Alice wait.
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Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 63
It does seem that Bella is awfully quiet.
Author's Response:
she will find her voice very soon.
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Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 64
cant wait for dinner
Author's Response:
I won't make you wait to long...
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Date: 11 Aug 2011 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 63
I cant wait for the reaction from everyone
Author's Response:
We will find out soon.
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Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 62
still so sweet
Author's Response:
Thank you
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Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 61
How sweet
Author's Response:
Thank you my dear... and remember to watch the polls so you can vote for my original when it comes up for vote in the next few days.
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