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Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 5 Colchis/Epilogue

very good story ...I loved it!  Thanks - Xanath



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I must finde some new inspiration in mythology some time.

Reviewer: ForeverTeamEdward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5 Colchis/Epilogue

Loved it.  Its hard to find supernatural stories that I like and this is one of the best I've read.  Thanks so much for writing it and sharing it.  Yummmy pic of Alexios turned man btw :)



Author's Response:

Ehi, thank you so much, what a heartwarming review! I mostly read and write only supernatural,and I do believe there are other good stories of different authors out there. Whenever you want I'll rec some for you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 Colchis/Epilogue

What a lovely way to end the story, both Alexios and Kalia living forever in simple peace and happiness, surrounded by their family! Thank you so much for this magical tale. I'm looking forward to The Parachutist. Hope you have a great trip and enjoy your time away.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! Till mid August, then!

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 5 Colchis/Epilogue

Lovely story. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and telling me. Till next time, then.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 The Dryad

A wonderful, magical and yet totally logical answer to their dilemma! How very clever you are, not to mention imaginative. This just proves that doping the right thing often has great rewards. I'm ashamed to admit I'm drawing a blank on what question Alexios will have for his favorite Dryad. It sure does look a lot more like there may be a HEA in our lovers future!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this comment. You will not have to wait too much for the answer, as I plan to update at the beginning of next week.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Ok, I'll bite. Always looking for a unique story and this seems to fit the bill!

Author's Response:

I had a lot of fun writing it. Only, I warn you, as a bite is a small one, as it is not overlong.  But also some delicacies have to taken in small bites... Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 Impossible

Dare we hope for some supernatural help for Alexios' misery? He has pleasured his Kalia and denied himself, I think he deserves a reward of some sort for being so good. Can't wait to see what you have in store for these two.



Author's Response:

Well, it seems that some supernatural help is coming. Did you see the illustration? It should remind you of something (or someone).

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 Alexios

As soon as I read the words, "my beloved", I knew Alexios and Kallia were destined to have great joy, or great sorrow, probably both. With all her family gone, Kallia has no one else to rely on and Alexios surely won't abandon her, so there they are. It surely will not be easy, no matter what they decide to do. Talk about star-crossed lovers, I think these two definitely qualify!



Author's Response:

Even without mating bond or imprinting, it is indeed love at first sight. Mythology is full of love (or sex) stories between different species. But, it becomes possible when there are supernatural forces at work. For the moment, the only supernatural thing is Alexios, but he cannot work magic, and Kallisté is merely human. So, yes, troubled, frustrated lovers. But maybe the gods will smile on them...

Thank you

Reviewer: BerryWonderful Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

It sounds interesting so far. Can't wait to see where you take it :)



Author's Response:

I am going to update tomorrow, to give a little more substance to my readers. I hope you'll like it. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

I like centaurs. Nice story.  Update soon.



Author's Response:

Much will be revealed about centaurs. Not all of them were nice, however. But this one is particularly lovable. You'll see.

Thank you very much for the review.

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

Well, I suppose you like it. Thank you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

This is starting out in danger and blood. War will always be with us, sadly. Mankind can't seem to help themselves, or want to. So, a centaur? That is a creature I've not thought of in many, many years. Oh, except the ones in Harry Potter! Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, and thanks again for the new story.



Author's Response:

Well yes, the only thing that has changed is that now men have the means to kill a lot more people when the wage war, but the intentions are the same as they were almost three thousand years ago. However, this is not a story about war, it is about one of the essential messages of Twilight: love (and friendship) are possible even belonging to different species.

Not that Kallistè and Alexios will have it easy!

Thank you for R&R

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue

Wow... i like it so far. But another chapter would definately help me decide whether to keep it a tab open on my computer.... lol

Good Work :)
I have to ask though were you inspired by the picture that you have on the front of this story or did you find the picture later



Author's Response:

The story is all written, and short, (5 chapters). Can you keep your options open till Thursday? The second and the other chapters are longer than this one. But I HAD to end it with the centaur surprise.

In fact first I conceived the story (It came to me in a taxi, while we were stuck in the crazy Roman traffic). I wanted to leep the spirit of Twilight, i.e. an (almost) impossible love story between different species, while writing a story with no vampires). So I went surfing on google images looking for centaurs till I found this one.

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