Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Super Work, I love the story so much
keep it on
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
thanks for the story
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
you tell it bells!!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
someone is getting changed!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
not cool.. not cool at all
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
didn't see that coming. not use to a wimpy jasper!!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
he is going to have you give it up girl what else is there.
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
poor alice i have a feeling sean and her won't be friends too long jasper is going to get pissed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
yeah the feeder huh doesn't sound too great!!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
interesting can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
nice twist with still having Alice losing her memories...
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow!!!! crazy ending..didnt see that coming at all, although i have a feeling Alice wont die just be changed, lol.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
finally what we've all been waiting for....Jasper finally confessed his feelings, yea!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Crap Jasper was a soldier he tried to stand up to Jane and failed but he still tried. Damn Jane and her evil crew. Aro is such an arrogant bitch.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
I liked it. I'm glad Jasper showed us his swagger and I fucking liked it. Yeah like Dan could ever kick Jasper's ass. Ha!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
It was sexy at the beginning and the usual at the end.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Aw yay Emmett yay! I was pleasantly surprised.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh boy things happened so quickly she was taken from the wolves Sean kissed her and she has a thing for Jasper which means she can't be with Sean because of the rules. She didn't stay with the wolves very long but what can you do. It was okay not your best chapter but I liked it.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh crap the wolves have Alice and Sean is knocked out and Jasper is going to go nuclear when he finds out. I enjoyed this chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
I liked it the volutri are coming the wolfpack entered the story and Sean is just dreamy. Poor Alice her luck sucks.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it. Alice and her parents, Sean looking all hot, conflicting feeling with Jasper and she's getting along with the other girls.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
I have heavy periods and cramps plus I have to have some potatoes or I'll kill someone. I love how this story is coming along.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved Jasper's POV awesome. sorry I forgot to rate the last chapter my bad it wasn't intentional.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh boy the volutri have been introduced yay but they are still scary as hell. what's up with alice's visions.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa mama that was cool but scary and crappy at the same time.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ew Em is a big meanie and Jasper was jealous as hell about Sean and Alice is getting used to being a feeder already.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Man its getting so good Rose and Em little Bella Eric was about to get served and Alice has her bag yay!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking it so fa not instance Alice/Jasper romance yeah buddy.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like where this is going. I hope to read more later.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
I just reread this story from front to back and it's still magic! Kudos!
Date: 12 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
i like this! keep it up!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Darn, now I want pizza too!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just inhaled the last few chapters and all I can say is WOW! You took a new idea, turned it around a bit, and created magic! Alice meeting Esme on the plane? Inspired! I so much more than love this story!!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Can I find chapter 5 somewhere? It went from them arriving at Emmetts to the rules about keeping a human. Great story by the way.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
Bery good chapter. I think I am caught up with the story and reveiws now. I am really enjoying reading your story.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Alice. She is always getting into trouble. Can't wait to see how Jasper reacts when he finds out.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Enjoyed this chapter. One thing I don't understand...you said Emmett took them into town with him to a meeting because he did not trust to leave them alone but then he went out of town and left them alone. Why????
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad that Alice got away from the werewolves.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yum...Jasper shirtless and wet!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
This is great. I like the very last sentence! Made me crack up.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!!! Update soon please!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
I feel bad for Alice - she's drugged, injected, then Jasper does his voodoo on her. I hope it gets better for her soon!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful story! It catches you from the very beginning and nevert lets you go! I'll be looking forward to your updates!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
so couldnt jasper feel her emotions while he was swimming? will dan and james come after them?
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
A shirtless, wet Jasper? Yum! I hope Dan does something stupid and Jasper ends him.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter!!! Update soon please!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
There is no chapter!!! :'(
Date: 05 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Is it just me - or is Chapter 15 missing ???? please check!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett may not be as big a dick as we thought.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
This made me cry! Why is Emmett such an asshole? I hope that Sean and Rose will not have to bred.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
OH GOODNESS.. I was shaking in my shoes reading that last part...WHEW...ok..maybe Emmett is going to come out of his stupidness...
I think the worst part of this chapter for me was Jasper sending everyone away... That broke my heart... and for him to send her to Emmett? THat was harsh and cruel...
BUT THEN AGAIN...
maybe by her being there, Jasper thought that Emmett would change a bit...hummm now that is an interesting idea..
Ok..Jasper is forgiven...FOR NOW!!.. hahah...
BUT I WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER...ok...just had to get that out there
Thanks so much for the update.. you know how much I love this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review... and trust me, I'm working on Jasper getting together witgh Alice. It's hard to make him be her 'master' but be gentle and stuff all at the same time.
You'll get what you want, trust me. :)
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great Story. I really like the Jasper/Alice dynamic you have going on. I'm glad Emmett's not that much of a prick. Thanks.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
there is no chapter 5 so i dont know what went on at emmetts house
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this story. Please keep writing.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I so wish you would do a Jasper POV. Glad you were able to get your work back.
Author's Response:
I DID do a JPOV in chpater 8, I think. :)
I might do another as the story progresses, but not anytime soon.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love your story!
I hope you release the next chapter soon.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
So nice this chapter.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Alice and Jasper keep ticking each other off, which is fun to read but I can't wait until both start to act on thier feelings for each other. Kinda sick of Sean, Edward can just keep him to himself.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
i am loving this story
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
I agree that SMeyer should have addressed the period issue...I mean she was writing about a vampire/human love affair.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow!!! So, is Jasper starting to fall in love with Alice or is he just drawn to her because her blood taste so good? What is going on with Sean? Is there going to be something between Alice and him.
I was reading your story over on FF. But now that you are here I will read and review here. Glad you are on this site. Welcome!!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
OK.. I think I said this when I reviewed before...OR...maybe I just thought it...but GO AWAY SEAN...SHU SHU...
I am thinking a big boulder should fall on him or something...Nice guy and all but GO AWAY...
Jasper needs some Alice, and we need some Jaspice lovin'.
I love this story...I mean so much...WAIT...I just thought of something....
Sean is the only one (outside of Jasper) who knew about her visions...AHHH HAAA...maybe he isn't a nice guy....Maybe a boulder is too good for him...now this changes everything...
See what you are doing to me...LOVE IT
Thanks so much
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry, Sean will be out of the way soon enough. :)
It IS a JasperxAlice story, but it would be crappy if Alice and Jasper just go BAM and fall in love with each other. I'm sure that's what happen in Twilight, but I wanted for Alice to have a little crush on someone else first. Make Jasper jealous... *wink wink*.
In a few (well, actually, in this next five) chapters Alice will start falling in love with him. Just wait... =D
Date: 08 Feb 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
The story just keeps getting better.
Date: 08 Feb 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
good story. i can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
You got my attention all right, interesting premise..Update soon!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I like your premise and look forward to reading more.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am really intrigued by the idea. I cant wait to read more.
Date: 26 Jan 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww, poor Alice. Du du duuuunnnn!