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Reviewer: BlackCookieWolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

Super Work, I love the story so much

keep it on

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

thanks for the story

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 25

you tell it bells!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

someone is getting changed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

not cool.. not cool at all

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

didn't see that coming.  not use to a wimpy jasper!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

he is going to have you give it up girl what else is there.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

poor alice i have a feeling sean and her won't be friends too long  jasper is going to get pissed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

uncool....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

yeah the feeder huh doesn't sound too great!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

interesting can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

great story.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

nice twist with still having Alice losing her memories...

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

wow!!!! crazy ending..didnt see that coming at all, although i have a feeling Alice wont die just be changed, lol.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 22

finally what we've all been waiting for....Jasper finally confessed his feelings, yea!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

I thoroughly enjoyed your story.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

Crap Jasper was a soldier he tried to stand up to Jane and failed but he still tried. Damn Jane and her evil crew. Aro is such an arrogant bitch.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

I liked it. I'm glad Jasper showed us his swagger and I fucking liked it. Yeah like Dan could ever kick Jasper's ass. Ha!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

It was sexy at the beginning and the usual at the end.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

Aw yay Emmett yay! I was pleasantly surprised.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh boy things happened so quickly she was taken from the wolves Sean kissed her and she has a thing for Jasper which means she can't be with Sean because of the rules. She didn't stay with the wolves very long but what can you do. It was okay not your best chapter but I liked it.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh crap the wolves have Alice and Sean is knocked out and Jasper is going to go nuclear when he finds out. I enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

I liked it the volutri are coming the wolfpack entered the story and Sean is just dreamy. Poor Alice her luck sucks.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it. Alice and her parents, Sean looking all hot, conflicting feeling with Jasper and she's getting along with the other girls.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9

I have heavy periods and cramps plus I have to have some potatoes or I'll kill someone. I love how this story is coming along.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

I loved Jasper's POV awesome. sorry I forgot to rate the last chapter my bad it wasn't intentional.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

oh boy the volutri have been introduced yay but they are still scary as hell. what's up with alice's visions.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

Whoa mama that was cool but scary and crappy at the same time.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ew Em is a big meanie and Jasper was jealous as hell about Sean and Alice is getting used to being a feeder already.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Man its getting so good Rose and Em little Bella Eric was about to get served and Alice has her bag yay!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm liking it so fa not instance Alice/Jasper romance yeah buddy.

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like where this is going. I hope to read more later.

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 21

cute cat idea.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 28

I just reread this story from front to back and it's still magic!  Kudos!

Reviewer: jiggzers Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

i like this! keep it up!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

Darn, now I want pizza too!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

I just inhaled the last few chapters and all I can say is WOW!  You took a new idea, turned it around a bit, and created magic!  Alice meeting Esme on the plane?  Inspired!  I so much more than love this story!!

Reviewer: halconmia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

Can I find chapter 5 somewhere?  It went from them arriving at Emmetts to the rules about keeping a human.  Great story by the way.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

Bery good chapter. I think I am caught up with the story and reveiws now. I am really enjoying reading your story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Alice. She is always getting into trouble. Can't wait to see how Jasper reacts when he finds out.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

Enjoyed this chapter. One thing I don't understand...you said Emmett took them into town with him to a meeting because he did not trust to leave them alone but then he went out of town and left them alone. Why????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am glad that Alice got away from the werewolves.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yum...Jasper shirtless and wet!

Reviewer: rockcc12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

This is great. I like the very last sentence! Made me crack up.

 

Reviewer: mmauvahp1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter!!!  Update soon please!!!  

Reviewer: BelleDuJour Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

I feel bad for Alice - she's drugged, injected, then Jasper does his voodoo on her.  I hope it gets better for her soon!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wonderful story!  It catches you from the very beginning and nevert lets you go!  I'll be looking forward to your updates!!

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ohmy

Reviewer: genuinef250 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

so couldnt jasper feel her emotions while he was swimming? will dan and james come after them?

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 16

A shirtless, wet Jasper? Yum! I hope Dan does something stupid and Jasper ends him.

Reviewer: mmauvahp1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!!  Update soon please!!!  

Reviewer: mmauvahp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

There is no chapter!!!  :'( 

Reviewer: maz3331 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Is it just me - or is Chapter 15 missing ???? please check!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

Emmett may not be as big a dick as we thought.

Reviewer: rockcc12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

This made me cry! Why is Emmett such an asshole? I hope that Sean and Rose will not have to bred.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH GOODNESS.. I was shaking in my shoes reading that last part...WHEW...ok..maybe Emmett is going to come out of his stupidness...

I think the worst part of this chapter for me was Jasper sending everyone away... That broke my heart...  and for him to send her to Emmett?  THat was harsh and cruel...

BUT THEN AGAIN...

maybe by her being there, Jasper thought that Emmett would change a bit...hummm now that is an interesting idea..

Ok..Jasper is forgiven...FOR NOW!!..  hahah...

BUT I WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER...ok...just had to get that out there

Thanks so much for the update.. you know how much I love this story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review... and trust me, I'm working on Jasper getting together witgh Alice. It's hard to make him be her 'master' but be gentle and stuff all at the same time.

 

You'll get what you want, trust me. :)

Reviewer: LeslieC Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great Story. I really like the Jasper/Alice dynamic you have going on. I'm glad Emmett's not that much of a prick. Thanks.

Reviewer: shoneygal14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

there is no chapter 5 so i dont know what went on at emmetts house

Reviewer: bethhope20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love this story. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: deltagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

I so wish you would do a Jasper POV. Glad you were able to get your work back.



Author's Response:

I DID do a JPOV in chpater 8, I think. :)

I might do another as the story progresses, but not anytime soon.

Reviewer: K-princess Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

I love your story!

I hope you release the next chapter soon.

Reviewer: lenecarter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

So nice this chapter.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

Alice and Jasper keep ticking each other off, which is fun to read but I can't wait until both start to act on thier feelings for each other. Kinda sick of Sean, Edward can just keep him to himself.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

i am loving this story

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

I agree that SMeyer should have addressed the period issue...I mean she was writing about a vampire/human love affair.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow!!! So, is Jasper starting to fall in love with Alice or is he just drawn to her because her blood taste so good? What is going on with Sean? Is there going to be something between Alice and him.

I was reading your story over on FF. But now that you are here I will read and review here. Glad you are on this site. Welcome!!!!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

OK.. I think I said this when I reviewed before...OR...maybe I just thought it...but GO AWAY SEAN...SHU SHU...

I am thinking a big boulder should fall on him or something...Nice guy and all but GO AWAY...

Jasper needs some Alice, and we need some Jaspice lovin'.

I love this story...I mean so much...WAIT...I just thought of something....

Sean is the only one (outside of Jasper) who knew about her visions...AHHH HAAA...maybe he isn't a nice guy....Maybe a boulder is too good for him...now this changes everything...

See what you are doing to me...LOVE IT

Thanks so much



Author's Response:

Oh, don't worry, Sean will be out of the way soon enough. :)

It IS a JasperxAlice story, but it would be crappy if Alice and Jasper just go BAM and fall in love with each other. I'm sure that's what happen in Twilight, but I wanted for Alice to have a little crush on someone else first. Make Jasper jealous... *wink wink*.

 

In a few (well, actually, in this next five) chapters Alice will start falling in love with him. Just wait... =D

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

The story just keeps getting better.

Reviewer: icy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

good story. i can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

You got my attention all right, interesting premise..Update soon!

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  I like your premise and look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: JodyG Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am really intrigued by the idea. I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: SaraCGeorgeBob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aww, poor Alice. Du du duuuunnnn!

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