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Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 1:39 PM Title: "Reflections," a Leah/Riley O/S


Author's Response:

Hello, and thank you, TwiAggie94! 

signing posters, Exp 3

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter One

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Kellan at Chevy Volt event

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter One

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!

Kellan at #Ex3 Promo

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter Six

Loved it!

Author's Response:

You've made it halfway through! Yay! :D

Scarlett and Sandra

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter Five

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Great! Thank you!

Bella and Emmett

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter Four

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Woot Woot! :D

Kellan lifting drum barrel

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter Three

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Kellan Lutz as Hercules

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 6:45 PM Title: Love of a Lifetime: the Bear and Bella In the Morning Epilogue

Own, cute!! Love!!!! AMAZING EPILOGUE!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

It was so hard to write! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Kellan with 3D dots all over

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2013 2:11 AM Title: Love of a Lifetime: the Bear and Bella In the Morning Epilogue

This is an amazing epilogue. I watched/read as you wrote this a grew to accept the ending of this awesome story, and I can't even tell you how lucky I am to be by your side through it. 

Their story was fascinating - sexy and awesome as can be. 

I'm so happy that they got their happily ever after. 

Can't wait to the R & L's story. ;) 

You're the best bestie, bb

Author's Response:

Aww! Thanks, Quinny! Love you, bb!

Yes, their story is really fascinating. Definitely a great work by my imagination! :D LOL! 

Me too! You know how I struggled to wrap the story up! All good things must come to an end, though. 

R/L's outtake is a few months away! Sorry to make you wait, but it's the rules! ;-P




Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 4:04 AM Title: Love of a Lifetime: the Bear and Bella In the Morning Epilogue

Looking forward to more

Author's Response:

Thank you! 


Kellan fashion line

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter Two

Loved it

Author's Response:

Hello again!

Aww, thank you! You know this story was originally a O/S, and when I decided to expand it, I was only going to post a couple of additional chapters. I really like this chapter. I'm very sentimental about it. :D

Thanks for reading!

photo manip of Emmett and Bella

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 10:05 PM Title: Chapter One

Awesome chapter

Author's Response:

Hello there! :)

Thank you so much for reading! :)

Glad you enjoyed the first chapter! 

kristen stewart

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter Two

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Awesome! Hope you enjoy the story as much as I did writing it! 

I look forward to a chapter three review! ;)

romantic scene in movie

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter One

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Woo hoo! Thanks! :D

action scene of a movie

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Wait, so is Bella expecting?

Oh wow, they did find a rhytmn and seem to be doing well with the three of them together, love it! What a hot relationship they have too!

Glad everyone got their HEA!

Author's Response:

Eeeek! Can't answer that without spoiling the two donated pieces, but Emmett's definitely going to be a father! ;)

*fans self* That threesome was alot of work! LOL! Writing and re-writing it, I mean, LOL! ;)

Yep, I'd say so. I'm a sucker for HEA. :D

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I certainly enjoyed your reviews! Thanks for commenting as you read along! :D


flowers and thank you note

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter Nine

TWINS!? I had a little thought maybe, but then I was like no!

Love that these lemons are so hot!

That Newton fellow did sound creepy...they are lucky they didn't go along with his idea

Author's Response:

Bwahahahaha! Yeppers, twins for Leah! ;)

Thank you! *blushes*

LOL, yep, I totally made Newton creepy. I think he should've been more so in the Saga, but it's YA, so I had to step up to the plate. ;) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :D

Tom Hiddleston

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Hmm wonder if Bella wanting Emmett to be with Tanya realy was the lust talking...I wonder if he will. 


Glad Marcus explained things to Aro and that the girl from the scene got some sort of happily ever after yeah?

Author's Response:

Definitely the lust at that moment, but their relationship will naturally progress to that. :)

hee hee Thanks! It had me extremely nervous since it was the first anal I'd ever written.

Isn't funny how Marcus is a dom? And kind of a mob boss to boot? LOL 

Yes, the young lady definitely gets her HEA. It's in an upcoming chapter. :D

Such great questions and comments! Thanks so much! <3


inside limo

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Wait, one of Aro's brothers paid for the surgery?

Uh oh! If the baby isn't Jake's having his mom knowing about it will not be good!

So wait, what happened to Bree? Is Tanya coming with them on their funeral?

Ah lemons galore! 

Author's Response:

Hahahaha! Yes! The plot thickens! LOL

Yes, Aro's brother Marcus paid for Jacob's funeral. We'll get fully immersed with him next chapter.

And, yeah, that was surely unwelcome news to Mrs. Black, huh? *laughs evilly* ;)

Nope, Bree dumped Tanya once she found out about Bella. 

And, no, Tanya didn't go to Jake's funeral. Only Aro went. Just goes to show what everyone thought of him, huh? Not really. That was kinda rude. Bella and Emmett had to leave for their honeymoon, so Aro ended up representing the radio station as a whole at the funeral. *shrugs*

Sweet lemon meringue pie! All kinds of lemons in this citrus-filled chapter! ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :D


fountain outside of a hotel

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter Six

Hmm Bella is crestfallen that Tanya brought someone, right after she married Emmett lol! Wonder how that makes him feel

WHOA! I have never heard anyone get married like that. That's so awesome!

Loved it! Glad Tanya made it, guessing she may add some drama or lust? Hmm

Author's Response:

I just think that she was definitely nervous that she was there. And what if Tanya had brought someone? She definitely has unresolved feelings for Tanya at this point, of course Emmett realizes this. Tension! Eeek!

Haha, cool. Thank you. I thought it'd be pretty neat. :)

Aww! Yay! Glad you liked this chapter so much! :) 


wedding dress

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter Five

SO Jake is missing, but his club guys found him. He's unresponsive. Hmm

I'm glad Leah is with Riley! He seems like a real genuine guy!

Wonder what's up with her baby...hmm

Uh OH! Here comes Bree!

Author's Response:

Ugh, Jake. Yeah. :(

I know! Me too! I totally love them together! :D

tee hee hee. . . can't tell you. . . ;)

Yep! I just knew Tanya would be back, too. LOL 


Scarlett Johansson photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter Four

Oh wow! Okay, so I'm team Riley! Leah needs to stay away from Jacob! He's domming on the side? Wonder if he told her that! Makes sense why he was looking at everyone but Leah at the bar that night!

Author's Response:

Woot woot! Another one for Team Riley! ;)

Did that whole Jacob was a dom-in-training surprise you? Because it did me and I'm the author! ;) And yes, it sure does explain his shitty behavior towards her. :( 


Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :D


Xavier Samuel photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter Three

Love their wedding plans! I think it will be a great day and something they both are clearly excited for!

Always hot lemons, love it!

UH, OH! Leah and Jake and the baby and Riley! I wonder how this will play out. Leah should have come clean right away though....but things happen and here they are. Maybe she will end up with Riley?

Author's Response:

I remember when I was done with this chapter, and I was like, "The sex is crazy!" LOL I had never written so much lemony goodness before! :)

Erm, yeah, sudden story arc I came up. Almost became too much, like maybe they could've had their own story, but I really liked how everything eventually played out. :D


Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed another chapter! :) I'm loving these reviews! :) Thank you! xx


Vanessa at Diesel/Marc Jacobs event

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 11:39 AM Title: Chapter Two

Whoa the beginning of this! Pretty steamy! 

I loved that moment with her dad and Emmett. I thought that was so sweet of him to ask even when he is only there in spirit! So so so sweet. He really loves her that's for sure! 


Beautiful proposal!

Author's Response:

Hahahaha, well, you know... it was Emmett's turn. ;) LOL!

Oh that cemetery scene... yeah. I love the peace and serenity of it. Emmett's so sweet! 

Thank you, I enjoyed the studio proposal, too. I thought it was cool that they pitched in and helped Emmett surprise Bella like that. I had a hard time deciding on a song for him to play in the background, too. Flyleaf is not true hard rock/heavy metal, so it was a little odd of a choice, but it in the end it was the lyrics to the song and the strong female lead singer that won me over. :)


Glad you enjoyed the chapter! :)

Kristen Stewart B&W photoshoot

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter One

Oh wow! I was not expecting Tanya! Normally when you see that name it's not pleasant, but she was nice! 


Very steamy!! 

Author's Response:

Hee hee hee. I get that a lot (about Tanya).  :) 

Thank you. Glad you thought it was steamy. ;) Hope it helped with your own writing. :D


Kristen VF photoshoot

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Oh god.. this is hot! hahaha

Love it!!!

Author's Response:


Why thank you, CChuff! :D

Glad you've enjoyed the story. It's been a lot of fun for me to write! :D

two girls holding hands in the woods

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:48 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Love the Madi and Jon scene, of course! ((How could I not?!))

Your Emmett just totally rocks my socks. He's been a wonderful sweetheart during the entire story and just makes me smile to read him. (No wonder he's making a guest appearance in ch 20 of Skylark!)

Tanya and Bella just really bring this full cirlce, but I'm sooooo happy with, and impressed by, your use of sub-characters to create an original plot and make them lovable protagonists to all of your readers!



Obviously, I hate to see this come to an end. You write such a fun Emmett. But I'm so happy that we'll be creating a new world for Em and Ed to live in. Pllllllllaaaaaayyyy Ballllllllll!

Love always!


Author's Response:

Hello my beautiful, wonderful bestie! :D

Aww, yay! I'm glad! Written just for you, love! :D So hawt! *wiggles eyebrows*

Tee hee hee, yeah, Emmett tends to have that effect on me, too. LOL ;) So yeah, I can't wait to read his guest qppearance. LOL!

Yeah, Bella and Tanya have really shown what it's like to be in love. They were my first femmeslash scene to write, and this story turned into my first poly story. It has been amazing story to write, and I'm very proud of it. :D

You keep saying I use the subcharacters and really make them "pop". :) Thanks, hun. :)


I do too, but it's time this ended. The original O/S (the first chapter) was posted back in August 2011. 

Our collab is another new adventure for me, and I'm so thankful for the opportunity to work with you. Love you so much! 

~ Louise

Kellan and Sesame Street


Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 6:08 PM Title: Chapter Nine


Author's Response:

Aww, hi CChuff! 

LOL, I take it you liked the chapter? ;)

Thanks so much for reading! :D

SWATH promo manip 

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Aw! You're my bestie too!


1. Rockfest is going to be awesome!!!

2. Madi sounds like a total babe. I wonder where you came up with her... ;-P

2 1/2. Jon Astin sounds HOTTTTTTTTTT! (Wonder where you came up with him?! ;-P)

3. Love how you incorporate Lot44 (in several chapters). You're such an awesome fan!

4. Mike is a creeper.

5. I love Riley and Leah. Cannot wait for the spinoff, it's going to be AWESOME! (Still putting up those balloons. Out of breath.) ;-P

6. You're so awesome. Good job with everything you've written... Can't wait for the next chapter and the spin-off!

7. I LOVE YOU, bestie!!!!




Author's Response:

Hey, sexy! ;)

1. Yes, RockFest will absolutely be the hottest concert of the summer! ;) tee hee hee

2. She does, doesn't she? Such an inspiration! What a great muse! 

2.5 My bestie made me do it! ;-P LOL

3. Eh. *shrugs* Just doing what I can. :-D

4. Yes, he is! I like what I did here with him. 

5. ROFL Thanks for decorating for the baby shower! ;-)

6. Nah, you're more awesome. You're so much better at this writing thing than I am! ;)

7. LOVE YOU, TOO, best friend! LOL 



baby and daddy

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter Eight

OMG! It't hot! hahaha! Love it! ;D Continue pretty please!!

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you, thank you! And I will, for a couple more chapters! ;)

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter Eight

How is it possible that I didn't review this yet?!

I'm getting my comments on the preread confused with the chapter. I also blame the sickness and the moving. It's kicked my ass. So, I sincerely apologize for not submitting a review! UGH. *shakes my finger at you* You should have said something!! ;-P


I'm fascinated with the way you have created main characters out of sub-characters. I think it is absolutely unique and amazing. Each of your stories does this amazingly. 

I am SO excited by the future of Tanya, Bella, and Bear. Despite what ANYONE else thinks, this is going to be awesome! 

And I REALLY cannot wait for the next chapter!! ((You know why...))


LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Author's Response:

Hahaha, Quinny, it's okay! ;) After all, it's taken me a couple of days to reply! ;) No apologies necessary! I know you've been busy!

Careful, I'll grab that finger! ;) No, I wasn't going to say something! You kidding me?

Anyhooooo, LOL!

I am fascinated with this whole remark. ;) Thank you! I think it's because of my love for the underdog, lol! Seriously, though, I love that about fanfiction. I also love writing non-canon. I think it's more creative and more fun. No offense to you, of course! I love your work! I'm just not one of Eddie's girls, I guess. *shrugs*

I'm very VERY happy with how this has all turned out. I had no intention of this being a poly story when I started working on continuing the O/S, LOL, so I think it's amazing, too! Thanks! :D

tee hee hee, I do! Glad you love it! ;)

Aww, love you, too, Quinny! XOXOXOXOXO

~ Weezy

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Looking forward to more 

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Love it!! OMG!! SUPER HOT Bella and Tanya!!! Love!!!

Continue!!! ;D

Author's Response:

Well hello, CChuff! :D

Oh yeah?! You liked that? tee hee hee You just might love LOVE next chapter then! ;) 

Thanks for reviewing! 

Just a couple more chapters to go! (Total of ten!) I'll be writing a Leah/Riley spinoff/OS for the Fandom4LLS compilation. http://fandom4lls.blogspot.com/

See you next chapter! :D

~ Louise

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter Seven

You amaze me every single day. And not just with the surprising things I see on my phone screen when I wake up, either...

first: JON ASTIN!!!!! I swear to GOD!!!!!!!! You know me so fucking well! You're my bestie for a reason! 

Second: all the anal play is hotttttttt! But you already know I feel this way, since I preread it. ;-P heehee

third: I cannot wait to see how this twist turns out. Actually, THESE TWISTS! 

Have I told you lately how much I love Ri and Leah? Well, I do!

And if the blog is anything to go on, we're in for some heat with B & T!


love you, angel!


Author's Response:

Tee hee hee hee hee hee, yeah, that's still embarrassing! *blushes*


First: Thank you, I thought it was fun, LOL! Glad you like it so much! ;) *hugs* 

Second: Staaaaap! LOL, I thank you. I value your opinion and trust you, bb! :D 

Third: Round and round, over and under we go! ;)

Fourth: *sigh* IKR?? Can't wait to write their O/S for the Fandom4LLS compilation! ;) (As well as the collab piece with you!)

*fans self* Yeah, gawd yeah we are! I'm loving all the research, too! ;) Earning my new nickname, lemme tell ya! 

Love you, too, bb! *squishy hugs*


girls kissing

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter Seven

looking forard to more 

Author's Response:

Me too, Lani! Thanks for reading! :)

Kellan Lutz at Coachella 2013

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter Six

Love the wedding! Will it have more scene Bella, Tanya and Emm? Love it!

Continue! I love your writing ;D

Author's Response:

Aww! Thank you, CChuff! 

Got more out of ya this time! ;) LOL

Glad you enjoyed the wedding. I was hoping it wasn't too quick of a read. I have another story that has a more detailed wedding, so I really didn't want to do that with this story. 

Yes, we'll definitely have more of our three characters together. ;) It's been building up since the first chapter. 

Thank you so much for your support! :D 

See you next chapter! :)

Scarlett in purple

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter Six

My list of "Gahhhh!'s":

You're an dirty, sexy angel. I swear. 

The things in that head of yours...gah!

I have to tell you that Leah is my FAVORITE character. She is so awesome, strong, and fun. Good for her for standing up to Jake's mom.

And Ri... gah! (again with the Gah!'s, yesssss...) I love him. What a guy... And Brit accents!!!! GAHHHHH! 

Bella and Emmett are married now! Gah! 

And Tanya is back! GAHH! 

JOHN AINSWORTH! Yesssssss! <3

I know there is so many GREAT things to come! Yayayayayayayay! 



PS. Are they going to go to Vegas at some point? I'm sure that would be wild! 


Author's Response:

Hahahaha! Oh, my dear friend, Quinn! ;D

I love your list of Gah's! LOLOL 

Yes! I love love LOVE Leah, too! Seriously considering a spinoff with her and Riley! :D Love them together so much! LOL, I hope I'm doing the accent right! 

Whew! Thank goodness that's over with! ;) LOL! Glad you're not mad I didn't go into intricate details on the wedding. Did that in Second Chance, and this story's pace is much quicker, so I opted not to go heavy in the deets.

Of course Tanya's back! ;) 

Hahahahaha! Caught that did you? ;) I should've included a link to his site in the author notes. Maybe everyone reading that's curious about him will google him?! That would be so awesome! :D John Ainsworth ROCKS! 

And of course, Zepp and Lepp also in this chapter! Can't have a rock & roll themed story without the rock & roll! ;)   m/ 


Oh, you want the Bunny Ranch visit, huh? ;) LOL


<3 tee hee hee, love ya, bb! <3

Thanks so much for your support! Loved this fun review! Let's do it again next chapter. There's a certain character you may be interested in: Jon Astin. ;D 


Skylar Astin at Pitch Perfect premiere

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter Six

Looking forward to more 

Author's Response:

The next chapter's already with the betas! :) 

Thanks for reading! :D

b&w photo of Kellan

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter Five


Author's Response:

No worries, CChuff! Nice to meet you, by the way. :)

Guess this means you've enjoyed what you've read? What was your favorite part? Do you have a favorite pairing?

Hope you like the next chapter!

Thanks for your review! :D

~ Louise

Kellan all smiles

Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter Five


How do you write such fantastic sex scenes? 

I love that Jake is gone. Isn't that a terrible thing to say?! But now Leah and Ri can be happy and free of that drama. So glad. <3

I love you! Muah! 


Author's Response:

Hi, Quinn!

LOLOLOL, I dunno. I guess I watch too much porn! ;)

Pfft, nah. I am too, actually. lol But uh, just because he's gone don't mean there isn't going to be any drama. *ducks* LOL!

Love you, too, dahling! Even if you're probably throwing things at me right now! hee hee


Johnny Depp rocking with the Black Keys

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter Five

I just have to say I think JJ's would be honored you included them in this story. I remember the melting pot up there. I am not sure how far it was from there. I know it was on the news here and it rips you apart when they said they had one missing. I was sick to my stomach when I saw some of the footage right before and as it happened. I guess jacob is out of the picture now for leah. I have a feeling twins. 


For Megan's family and jj's we are sorry you lost one to a bad situtation. 


Honestly if I could give this story a 11 I would. 

Author's Response:

Aww, lb!

I'm crying here! :'( Thank you so much. I'm so happy you like this story so much! 

As for Megan and JJ's, I hope I was able to convey how sorry I am for them. I mean no disrespect at all. Like you, I was completely heartbroken as I sat and watched it on the news all night. It was just horrible. However, there is always light at the end of the tunnel! Like their page on facebook so you can follow their progress. :)

Yeah, Jake the snake is definitely out of the picture! I don't like zombies, so no go there, LOL! ;)

I'm still keeping mum about Leah. ;) You almost had it out of me! LOL!

Thank you so very much for your support! See you next chapter!

Take care!


Kellan and Ashley photoshoot

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter Five

looking forward to more

Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks so much for reading! Glad you're continuing to like it!

smiley fun


Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter Four


Jake is such a douche, but I love Riley. I'm so happy that he is being a supportive, wonderful guy. Can't wait to see how their story unfolds. :D

AND I can't wait for chapter 5. I think I need a big glass of lemonade to calm myself after that ending. ;p




PS. And thanks for the shout out! 

Author's Response:

Hey, girl!

Aww, thank you for such an awesome review! You're so supportive and awesome, you know that? 

I'm curious how things will turn out, too, LOL! There are things that need to be decided and I'm procrastinating a bit. 

Chapter 5's with my permanent betas from PTB! Never worked with permanent betas before, so I'm looking forward to it. Wish I had them when I was writing Second Chance, but oh well. 

tee hee hee, can't wait for you to try the lemonade in chapter five! ;) It's spicy!

LOL, you're welcome. I just may have to do it every update! ;)



couple walking

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter Four

Yes you are back. Jake is major asshole in this one. I am glad to see leah and reily seem ok for now. I wonder if she is measuring 12 is she pregnant with twins which will put a major crimp in the plans. This is good. 

Author's Response:

Yep, I'm back, LOL! Hey, lb! :) Nice to see you again!

Yeah, Jake is a total douchebag. 

I so love Riley and Leah together! I gush at their romance! If I say anything about her pregnancy, I might accidentally give it away, so my lips are sealed! ;)

Thanks so much for the great review! Loved it! Glad you're enjoying the story as much as I'm loving writing it! :D

See you next chapter!


Vanessa Hudgens as Leah


Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter Four

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Lanigirl! I'm working on it, LOL! Apreciate the review! :D

Kellan with fans

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter One


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Thank you! 


Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter Three

When I lived in the area. I can tell you the things this radio station morning show would blow your mind. I had forgotten some of them. I don't know if he still does some of the wild things, the other day I tuned in to hear a crazy thing he wanted. I am sure some of the things he done years ago would be fined and maybe kicked of the air now days. Great cliffy but so timed out well. 

Author's Response:

LOL, yeah, Johnny Dare may have changed co-hosts over the years, but he's still as crazy as ever! I'm trying to work in some of the crazy stuff he's pulled over the years, but there's a lot, LOL.

Thank you so much for continuing to read and leaving reviews! See you next chapter!


Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter Two

Good job Bear.

Author's Response:

I guess you liked the proposal? 

Thanks so much for reading! :D


Reviewer: QuinnLark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter Three

Oooh!!!!!!!! No cliffies! Not nice! We've talked, so I think I know where this is going...which is going to blow everyone's freaking mind!!! 

I love when Jake and Leah are together, in stories. :) 


Thank you for the shout-out, my dearie! You rock! My numbers are jumping! 

Love you! 




Author's Response:

tee hee hee

What's wrong with cliffies? ;)

Shh, don't tell! ;)  LOL, I hope so! :D

Oddly enough, I do, too, so thank you. Not gonna lie, though. I think my love triangle's hot!

And you're so welcome! I'm so excited! Maybe someone will make you a banner, that'd be awesome!

Love you, too! xoxo

Jake and Leah

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter Three

looking forward t omore 

Author's Response:


Thank you. Glad you've enjoyed what you've read so far!

Thanks for reading!

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Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Blueberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter One

I loved this and how Emmett only watchs. That to me just makes it hotter!  I will be waiting on the next update. Have you ever thought about making this a continuing story??? We all love it!

Author's Response:

Hey, Blueberry!

Yeah, me too. Very hot! Thank you, and glad you liked it! :)

The update shouldn't be too much longer, so cross your fingers! I think the second chapter will be the last. I never meant for it to be more than one, lol. Then the reviews started coming in and I was nominated for a Tomato Soup Award last year right after it was posted, too. It's been great having such a positive response! This was only the second story I've ever written. First femmeslash and first all-human, for that matter! I've been wowed by it all, that's for sure! 

Thank you so much for your support. Hope you and the rest of the Gang like it here on Coffee Shop. I look forward to meeting the rest of you!



Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter One

Oh holy shit. I think I to plug in a fan and get some air from reading this.

I can only image how good it will be when Emmet and Bella get it on!


Author's Response:

Nice to meet you, witchywoman000!

Are you cooled off yet? ;) tee hee hee 

I hope it's as hot as the first chapter. To me it is, but my opinion doesn't matter. 

It'll be up in a couple of weeks. I'm suffering with ya, believe me! 

Hope you favorited the story so you know as soon as it's posted. Thanks so much for the review!


Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter One

Hey Sister!

We have finally made it on to this site. I know it has taken forever. I am still getting everyone signed up here. It is crazy trying to find all the stories that we were in the process of reading.

I can almost bet that Grape will be the last one to sign up because she is the lazy and party girl of the group LOL!

Voted our top three favorite stories of the group, this story took 2ND place. So I am thrilled to see that you are concidering to continue it.

Be look for other sisters to come over here. We have read up to chapter 6 of your other story. I am sending in my reviews now and hope the others are getting their butts in gear.

What started being only three sisters has turned into fourteen and I am hoping for more.

Thank you for being such a wonderful author and we love your work!





Author's Response:

Welcome to the Coffee Shop, Sister! *hugs* Oh, I bet. Hopefully it's not too much trouble. I think it's well worth it! :) LOL at Grape! 

*gasp* 2nd place?! Really? Awesome! Thanks, Lemonaid Gang! *group hug*

Yeah, I've worked on it a little bit at a time since it was first posted. I never imagined the enthusiasm to continue it, lol! It's been great having so many reviews for it (mostly on FFN).

Fantastic! I'm ready to meet each and every one of the fourteen of you. Like I said before, I'd join you if you asked! :)

I just answered your reviews you left for Second Chance, actually. Thank you. They mean so much to me. Keep them coming! I love reviews!

Aww, thank you. That means a lot since there are so many out there! Not only for Twilight, but fanfic in general. Thank you so much for your support! Truly. 


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Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter One

All I can say is......................yummy stuff. I hope that you continue this.

P.S. If you have anymore stories like this I want to read them. I got your name from an author and yes..............it is very hot Emmett.

Author's Response:

Nice to meet you, NikkiBlue855!

Aww, thank you! All my stories that I've written so far have been Emmett stories. This one was my first femmeslash as well as all-human, not to mention the second story in my resume. :) 

Yes, I am finishing up the second (and last) chapter to this one. I never thought I'd get the response I've gotten since I wrote it more than a year ago, LOL! Thanks to the reviews on all the sites it's posted on during this time, I have been really excited to work on it again. I hope to have it posted within the next couple of weeks, in fact. =D So hopefully you've favorited this story so you know when it updates! :)

Thank you so much for reading. And please let me know who referred you, I'd like to say thanks. 

Til next time, happy reading!

Twilight cast

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter One

This is just so yummy. I am going to sound greedy but I would love for it to turn into a few more chapters.

I am trying to find as many people that I know over here. I can't remember where I left off on your other story so I am going to read it again.

But I am going to FanFic to send you a PM.

I just love the shit out of this and hope that you continue it.

Author's Response:

Hey, coolbikermama!

LOL, lick your lips, because there WILL be a second chapter! *squee* All I ever intended was one chapter, but the response for this has been the best I've gotten from all my stories. I couldn't believe it at first. Hell, still can't. So, here we are a year later and I'm finally finishing up the conclusion. My goal is to have it finished, beta'd, re-edited, and then posted by the end of the month. :)

Got your PM on the site that will not be named, lol, and I love the idea! Not to mention HOT!! ;) I'm trying to talk petersgirl into collaborating with me, since she's all about Jax. :) Haven't heard back from her, though. But if she doesn't want to, I'm sure I could come up with something. ;P 

Glad you really, really like Bear and Bella! I look forward to getting the conclusion up soon!

Til next time, mama, take care! 




Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter One


I just read this again and love it!!!!

There is just not enough hot Emmett love in the world.

I am going to be reading from here from now on.

I will read any Emmett story that you write.

Keep up the great work!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Aww, hello there, mymonkeyman12!!


I agree. Definitely need more Emmett stories and of course, Kellan! ;)

So glad you like TWCS. Not quite the traffic as that other site, but I think that will change. :)

Aww, thank you, sweetie! I do have a story that's in an anonymous photo prompt contest (voting opened today), so I can't post it yet. Hopefully you'll like it as well. I'm very proud of it. It's a one-shot as well. 

As for Bear & Bella, I am currently working on a second chapter to conclude it. Hot Emmett loving guaranteed! ;) Hopefully I'll be sending it to Project Team Beta by the end of the week. Cross your fingers!

Thanks for the review here. Glad you found me and like the site! 


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Reviewer: Ms CVG Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter One

Great job!!! Sounds like the fans may encourage you to write another chapter. I have to admit that I'm intrigued to see how things play out with Emmette and Bella. Just one night...oh the possibilities.

Author's Response:

Hey there, Ms CVG!

Hee hee, thank you so much! I probably wouldn't have posted it if it hadn't been for your encouragement.

And you know what? All the reviews here, on ffn, and Twilighted want me to continue this, too. So I am seriously thinking about it.  :)

Thanks for leaving a review!


Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter One

aww poor tanya. she got her fun but it still sucks being the odd man out.

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Author's Response:

Hi, Suzie!

Hey, don't feel bad for Tanya. She got what she wanted. :)

Reviews for this have been awesome, so I'm considering adding a second chapter. Not definitely, but at least I'm considering it.

Thank you for reading it and writing a review. Glad you enjoyed it, too.


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Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter One

know it's only a one shot but would love to see how thing develop between them x

Author's Response:

Hello, nicci!

You're not the only one! You're the second review here, and with the ones on ffn all suggesting the same...I just may have to add another chapter.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a review.


hot Bella

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter One

THAT WAS HOT, and i love how Tanya was into bella.

Author's Response:

Hey, Cullensbabymama7!

Why thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

If I get more reviews like yours, I may have to add a second chapter! ;)

Thank you so much for your review, and for reading!

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