[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:55 AM Title: Declaring
The King is learning his true worth through the eyes of one so young. The rebirth of his kingdom from such simple actions such as listening and engaging his loyal subjects will begin to endearing him to his wife more each day.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:01 AM Title: Learning
Even if Edward had used the situation to garner her affection, as his wife, she would not be able to deny him. The trust level still seems very tentative. What more is expected of the King by his Queen?
Happy that Tanya has been reunited with her daughter and will live out her life relatively comfortable.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:48 AM Title: Punishing
Edward has grown as a husband, man and King at the hands of two very remarkable women. Interesting how their love for him has grown yet left their camaraderie enact. I suppose both women are just thankful to have a confidant and friend in such a stressful position.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:30 AM Title: Dying
How did Princess Tanya learn of Helen's removal from the Queen?
How will the King deal with Lord and Lady Swan?
Has Edward pieced together his lifes mistreatment to his separating his own daughter from her mother?
Will Tanya be allowed to stay on as Isabella's confidant? That would be awkward for the King, don't you think?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:15 AM Title: Failing
At what point in history was a female heir accepted as true lineage?
Why did Alice not assist the midwife rather than her mother?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:55 AM Title: Crying
The King is finally growing in his own right, concerning his relationship with his wife. I'm pleased that he felt relaxed enough to share his worried mind over the religious debate in parliament. Bella's practical approach to problems seems to he a soothing balm to his mind. Up look forward to them growing in their partnership as King and Queen as well as husband and wife.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:35 AM Title: Apologising
I hope Emmett will be called upon frequently by the King to ascertain how best to approach his skittish Queen.
Will Isabella's life of neglect and physical torment ever come to the Kings attention?
Wow, her father offered his whore to teach her how to please a man. Threatening a small helpless child is a cheap tactic to use against the Queen. She needs to open up to her husband.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Wedding
Why was Lauren chosen as one of the Queen's Last-in-waiting?
Great mother daughter talk, Renee.
Will Edward's feelings for Bella grow?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:53 AM Title: Coercing
How will the King like finding his bride bruised and beaten? Emmett has been her only solace in a family seeking upward mobility. The level of physical abuse from her parents shocks me. She should have been groomed, pampered and cottled in preparation for her future society groom.
I'm enjoying the tid-bits of history in your A/Ns.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:35 AM Title: Resolving
I'm sure Bella knows the King will be calling upon her family soon. Will she adhere to her Queens request?
How much of a nuisance will Lauren's family be? Will her mother still hold a place in the Kings bed?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 2:06 AM Title: Departing
Not a big pet lover. They're ok if owned and properly trained by some else, but not in my house. I've seen too many not well cared for in the city. They deserve the country life with a place to run until they sleep for days.
Bella's gradually learning each action has an equal and opposite reaction. Choose your battles carefully.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:46 AM Title: Flaunting
I'm intrigued by the lack of understanding that Lady Isabella has in her position of Last-in-waiting. She should have been schooled in the position knowing at any time her father could accept a man of rank to be her husband without a rebuttal from her.
Queen Tanya has been very gracious to Bella bestowing her wishes of pleasing the King in her stead. Will Tanya cause any trouble in the future?
Is Emmett seeking a connection closer to the king? Did her flaunt his sister for this purpose?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2012 1:25 AM Title: Lacking
Ah, Bella is a lady in waiting.
Sad how women were disposed of when they were thought to be of no use any longer. Tanya is lucky to keep her head.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 10:23 PM Title: Lacking
Loving this story ! :)
Date: 24 May 2012 2:11 AM Title: Declaring
Yeah Edward was a royal prick, but surely Bella realizes that he has changed.
Date: 14 May 2012 2:48 PM Title: Lacking
Edward's a bitch!
Date: 13 May 2012 5:52 PM Title: Declaring
I like how this is evolving for Edward, Bella, and for the kingdom. Your writing is appreciated. I hope you can soon get some good news and relief. Thanks.
Date: 11 May 2012 8:41 PM Title: Declaring
It's nice to have a chapter, it's even better knowing all the effort it takes. Take care of yourself, that's the most important thing. Writing can go slowly. When a story is good, the readers wait.
Date: 10 May 2012 8:27 PM Title: Declaring
thankful for teh update, so sorry for your pain.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2012 11:32 AM Title: Declaring
I am glad he is in love with her. I do hope in time she will recite those same words to him.
Date: 10 May 2012 4:56 AM Title: Declaring
No matter how long, your updates are always worth the wait! The weaving of personal and political here is marvelous. That, of course, was the truth of the matter in this time. Again, thank you for the update. You have been in my prayers and on my mind. Wishing you only health and happiness,
Joanie
Date: 10 May 2012 3:42 AM Title: Declaring
awww he said I love you! their getting there update soon
Date: 10 May 2012 3:32 AM Title: Declaring
Another great chapter, cant wait to read more..... hope u feel better soon
Date: 10 May 2012 3:28 AM Title: Declaring
looking forward to more
Date: 10 May 2012 3:19 AM Title: Declaring
Hang in there! This chapter was totally worth the wait :)
Hope you get to feeling better soon!
Date: 09 May 2012 11:28 PM Title: Declaring
So sorry for the illness. Glad you wrote this. Also very glad Bella did not forgive him and JUMP in love in two paragraphs. Good job.
God Bless you.
Date: 09 May 2012 11:21 PM Title: Declaring
Hello ammNI,
thank you very much for this chapter, I liked it very much and I've missed your story. Please go on.
Love - Tiina
Date: 09 May 2012 10:30 PM Title: Declaring
Worth the wait - more?
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 6:18 PM Title: Learning
Looking forward to your next chapter. You have caught my attention with this story and I am enjoying this ver much.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 8:51 PM Title: Learning
I am so glad to see them growing together.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:15 AM Title: Learning
Great chapter! I hope you get better soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:11 AM Title: Learning
Edward is growing, and James was boiled alive. Hurah!! Now, we need to have a boy child. Bella needs to get over her adversion to sex. Did Edward not show Bella that sex could be very enjoyable for a female?
Date: 06 Feb 2012 9:00 PM Title: Learning
I hope doctors find out what's happening and that you will be better very soon. We do miss the story and you, but your health is much more important. Please take care of yourself.
Changing is a process that takes times, with steps forward and some back every once in a while. Edward is doing a great job but there have to be difficult moments. These help make the good ones seem even better.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 8:22 PM Title: Learning
I hope you will feel better soon and that the tablets are working.
I absolutely love your story and shall continue the read it even if I have to wait a bit longer for an update.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:55 PM Title: Learning
Hi!! I like to see Edward be a good king!!! hope you get better and i will pray for you!!!
xoxo
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:21 PM Title: Learning
What an improvement in the King`s behaviour.Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 10:58 AM Title: Punishing
Brilliant story. So happy that Bella is free of Renee and Charles. Hope Bella and her brother's will find peace now. Fingers crossed that somewhere down the track that Edward and Bella will have a couple more children maybe a boy and a girl? ??? Hope you will get some free time soon and continue this great story.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 5:48 AM Title: Learning
So good to hear from you I am sorry for your pain and hope that they figure out what is wrong. I hope to hear from you soon I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 5:45 AM Title: Learning
i like that edward seems to be learning from his wife.
bella so kind and willing to help and loyal. i loved her relationship with tanya. i am glad tanya got lucy back and they will be together now and taken care of. bella can be able to see her as well.
things seem to be working out
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 5:21 AM Title: Learning
Hi. I'm sorry about your condition. I work for the medical profession, have they checked you for Lyme's disease, pmr or lupus. Have them test you for pmr, is actually under diagnosed and a high amt of prednisone can help with the pains. Some blood test including ANA, DNA ds, esr, and other joint related test might help. Thank you for updating and I wish you well
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:44 AM Title: Learning
ahh, they are not having sex? Is he philandering?
Anna, sounds like you have an auto immune disease. Causes joint pain. I have that and so does my daughter. They are very hard to diagnose. Start looking in that area..
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:53 AM Title: Learning
I began reading this story from the beginning tonight, I really loved it. I did not know if I would like this type of Edward, but kept on reading and was hooked. The way he stands up and protects Bella, their love will grow and I can't wait for more, very curious to find out if they have more babies.
On another note...I hope they find a cause/reason for your pain so they can treat it. I feel your pain, I have a chronic condition and severe pain which I have to seek treatment, which led me to fanfic and believe it or not it helped me by reading these great stories and letting my mind drift....If they cannot find a cause, there are doctors who solely specialize in pain treatment.
Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:50 AM Title: Learning
loved the chapter ! looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 3:33 AM Title: Learning
sorry for your health issues/
this is one of my favorite story and I have trul missed it and look forward to more
Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:45 AM Title: Learning
I hope that you will be feeling better soon and I thank you for updating with all that you have had going on. I love this story and will wait patiently for the next update. Your health and education comes first.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:04 AM Title: Learning
Hope you feel better, great update!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 1:03 AM Title: Learning
I'm not a doctor but to me this sounds lik arthritis .. I kno ur thinking I'm to young for that but I'm 19 an I've had active arthritis for 2 yrs an that's exactly how it started severe joint pain or it could be just a bad case of tendinitis .. I hope you feel better soon because I love this story
Date: 06 Feb 2012 12:55 AM Title: Learning
They are coming together! Time heals all wounds but how long will it take for bella?update soon
Date: 22 Dec 2011 9:45 PM Title: Punishing
wow it was hard!!!I almost feel bad for Renne, almost!!! I loved how Edward are change and to have a little more of Tania!!!!
xoxo
Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:46 AM Title: Punishing
Glad Bella's parents were dealt with.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2011 2:54 PM Title: Punishing
cutting out the jackasses! score!!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:51 AM Title: Punishing
I glad to see that Edward realizes that he could have more of the relationship with Bella if he gave her his kindsness, I'm soooo glad that baby Helen is back with her mother and I'm ecstatic that Charles and Renee got what they deserved; can't wait to read more ^-^
P.S.-good luck of your exams.
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2011 4:09 PM Title: Punishing
loved it about time renee and charlie saw some action!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:28 AM Title: Punishing
Awesome chapter, well worth the wait!
Date: 04 Dec 2011 11:27 PM Title: Punishing
good they got there punishment :) seems like the king is changing
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:47 PM Title: Punishing
Disturbing much!! I can definitely say that I will no longer think of what it would be like to live in medieval times. Those are cruel and disgusting punishments. I can't definitely appreciate that we don't have those types of executions now a days. Although it was an important chapter, I never wish to read something like this again. It literally made me feel sick.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 11:36 AM Title: Crying
Aw cute. Although I don't know how I feel about Edward at the moment. At the begining of the story I wasn't a fan of him because he was rude and mean. But then I was thinking this is my first time reading a story where Edward is a totaly different character. So it is kinda cool to see Edward in a different perspective, in which he isn't the lovey dovey guy everyone writes him to be. So I like this story for it's uniqueness! I really like him making mistakes, although the apologies could use a little touch up possibly.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:27 AM Title: Wedding
You sound so smart when you explain things in your A/N
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:47 AM Title: Coercing
Ow physical abuse. It's funny how in the olden days how they thought getting an heir to the throne was determined by the woman, when really it's the male's sperm that dictates the gnder of the baby.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:17 AM Title: Lacking
I am totally into stories right now that involve kings and queens. Excited to read this story.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:21 AM Title: Punishing
I hope your troubles find a way to disappear soon, so ou can't really enjoy this first months of college life :D
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 9:29 PM Title: Punishing
Poor Queen. Loving the story. Thank you for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 9:08 PM Title: Failing
Another good one.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 8:12 PM Title: Wedding
Great chapter. I like that you are going with what was the norm in that time.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 7:52 PM Title: Coercing
Another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 7:22 PM Title: Departing
Great chapter. I like the direction you are going in with the characters. Imperfections are the best. Love me some temperamental Edward. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 6:19 PM Title: Lacking
I am already loving this story! Catching up on it now.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 6:13 PM Title: Punishing
I wasn't expecting that to happen to B's parents, although they probably deserved it, given the era.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 5:51 PM Title: Punishing
wow i am thrilled that edward actually listen to what tanya had to say. bella so called parents where horrible to her. their treatment was implorable.
i am glad that edward made those that brought bad to his wife the queen responsible and make them pay. i truly believe with people they can trust by them and showing his wife he loves her and supports her he will be blessed with an heir and bella will support him no matter what. i would love to see tanya back in the castle as bella's lady in waiting and watching over her. i truly believe she only wants what is best for edward and bella and knows it is not her. maybe tanya will be able to get her lucy back and the kingdom will be whole and moving in the right direction. i know the king is giving alot and i hope all will see him as strong king and doing what is right. love it
Date: 03 Dec 2011 4:00 PM Title: Punishing
wow what a chapter
Date: 03 Dec 2011 1:36 PM Title: Punishing
This is one of the best ff I have ever read! <3 I love it! <3 I'm so happy that edward is stating to treat Bella more nice, and Bella to finally accept him! <3 Maybe one day they can say I love you to each other and really mean it! <3
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 1:03 PM Title: Punishing
I am in my final two weeks before I graduate, so I do understand akthough I have missed your update so good luck in finding more time
Date: 03 Dec 2011 3:27 AM Title: Punishing
Good ridens to the Swans they are evil people all but Emmett where is he???? I am glad Tanya came back to help not only Bella but Edward to. I was so happy he brought the baby back to her. I hope things go well for you and I cant wait for more this is a great story
Date: 03 Dec 2011 3:26 AM Title: Punishing
im glad that got what they diserved ! looking forward to the next hcapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 3:10 AM Title: Punishing
Dude, Tanya's pretty much my favourite person, ever! She's completely dignified and badass, with visiting the castle to see Bella (and not hating her as her replacement, which could be well within her right), and then just kind of... staying there, without the King's permission? Totes BAMF.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:40 AM Title: Punishing
That was so gruesome....Awesome. Thanks for the explanation, I was confused. So now I can go back and read and understand. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:33 AM Title: Coercing
When I am sad panda, I watch BBC North and South, or Doctor Who!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:33 AM Title: Punishing
Kinda gruesome, but glad they are gone now! looking forward to the next update :)
Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:29 AM Title: Punishing
It's great to hear from you and the story. Uni and life do tend to take over certain things, like writing. But even if updates are far from each other, as long as you don't give up on the story, we'll be here.
Finally, Bella is getting some sort of closure and Edward is seeing things as they are, not as some around him have been trying to present them. Who would have guessed it would take Tanya to make him stop and really pay attention.
Renee and Charle's punishments were awful, but deserved and what was given at the time. As for Lauren, I hope she wears the Brank for a long time.
Take care of yourself, and good luck with the end of term!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:28 AM Title: Resolving
I prefer mexican hot chocolate. I will melt a blend of dark, milk and white chocolates over low heat, add cinnamon, vanilla extract, cayenne pepper, and whisk in milk until it is slightly foamy. Sometimes I will add extra cocoa powder! Thank you for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:27 AM Title: Punishing
I understand how busy you are right now. Try being a teacher from 7am-4:30pm and then attending graduate school at night. I know exactly how you feel. I also was sick for three weeks last month.
I am so happy that Tanya handled Edward. I am happy that Edward brought Bella's daughter back, showed true emotion by crying for all that had befallen his queen at his hands, and finally, made Charles and Renee pay for the horrible way they treated Bella. Lauren received a punishment. I hope she stays in the Brank for months. I also want Lauren's parents to be punished by stripping them of their titles, their lands, and their place at court. I want them to be paupers.
Believe it or not, but I am a very, very, very, etc. distant heir to the throne of Enland. At least a thousand people would have to die for me to take the throne.
This chapter was worth the wait. I knew you were busy with real life. Thank you for updating. Take your break and relax from everything. Don't even write, just enjoy not having to run around like a chicken with its head chopped off.
God bless! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:27 AM Title: Punishing
I was overjoyed with the update. It was a frightening, scary and compassionate chapter. It was extremely well written. I am so happy your Edward finally figured out how truely good your Isabella really is and brought her parents to justice. I look forward to when you are able to add another chapter. Have a lovely Christmas, Boxing Day and New Years. I hope you've seen Breaking Dawn Part One.
Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:22 AM Title: Punishing
So glad for the update!just found this story like a week ago and luv it :) update soon
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2011 2:21 AM Title: Departing
My favourite dog is a brac de weimar, or Weimeraner!
Date: 05 Nov 2011 2:03 AM Title: Dying
Damn Lauren, it hope she gets what is coming to her and that baby Helen is returned to her mother sooner rather than later.
Date: 22 Oct 2011 11:30 PM Title: Dying
I hate edward being such an ASSHOLE!
Surely he did not intend to bed a woman that had given birth just days earlier!@
Bastard has NO feelings! Bring his *&%&^(*&((& daughter back!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 2:47 AM Title: Dying
I named her Erica
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 2:26 AM Title: Crying
having a British mother Henry created the Church of England which is was very similar to the Cathlic church it just allowed divorce which was the main reason he created it
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:58 AM Title: Apologising
thoughtful gifts are better and hopefully the King will realize this soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:39 AM Title: Wedding
lobster
and hopefully he will learn to make love and not just take
Author's Response:
Bella will help teach him many things and he has many things to learn. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:25 AM Title: Coercing
charles and renee need to end up on king edwards badside ;0
Author's Response:
Oh they will :D Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:15 AM Title: Resolving
great job
Author's Response:
Thank you.
~Anna-Margaret
xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:02 AM Title: Departing
I have 4 Jack Russells they are small dogs with BIG personalities
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Flaunting
flaunt, when I was young