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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 12:37 AM Title: Lacking

well it did not start without angst but I liked it nonetheless I like histaorical pieces



Author's Response:

I love writing angst ;) More coming up in future chapters. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 8:21 PM Title: Dying

wow Edward are a monster here!!! first he don't protect his wife second he take out your child and he don't punish Charlie lol is so easy to hate him!!!!

I call my baby girl Julia!!!!I like because is simple but warm!!!I think it lol 

xoxo

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2011 4:54 AM Title: Dying

Wow, I can't believe Edward did that to Bella! Can't he get through his head that he's always hurting her? He needs to send for his daughter at once. I'm glad he saw what Bella's parents were doing to her, but he's no different. Thank goodness Tanya is there.

I named my daughter Jasmine! (:

Reviewer: LanaLee1248 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 11:05 PM Title: Dying

You always leave me guessing. Interesting chapter. I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 7:55 PM Title: Dying

:)

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 6:04 PM Title: Dying

i love this story! i am in the middle of watching season 3 of the tutors and love the early ways of this time!! cant wait for more

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:05 PM Title: Dying

As a woman, I am SOOO glad I am born in today's world and not back then.  I am guessing that it was frowned upon for Royalty to breast feed their own children.  That is a helluva punishment to banish the baby - I don't blame Bella for shutting down on everything.  Not sure if Edward can fix this one or not, but I am fairly certain Bella's terrible parents won't be around much longer.

Even thought I love them, it is sometimes hard to read historical preconceptions when we know the truth in today's time - like Bella having a girl instead of a boy is not her fault, but actually Edward as it is his sperm that determines the gender.  But back then women pretty much took the blame for anything child-related.  Tough times. 

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:47 PM Title: Dying

How could Edward be this mean?!  I reallu hope they have a boy the next time! <3 Please! Let her have a boy! 

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:37 PM Title: Dying

Wow - the Swan family & the Stanley need a serious beat down.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:29 PM Title: Dying

omg so heart wrenching, was there a tissue warning a the beginning????

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:49 AM Title: Dying

Well you asked the question what I would call my baby girl, after my auntie Gabriella which means Woman of God. An Italian form of the Hebrew name Gabriel and the American way is Abrielle.

Love how Tanya come to the rescue, I really do hope that Edward changes a little, just softens when it comes to Bella.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:25 AM Title: Dying

Poor Bella.......she should have listed to King Edward regarding a wet nurse to feed her daughter. The Stanleys needed to stay out of their business. They are just as much to blame if not more.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:05 AM Title: Dying

By the end of this chapter the king is well aware of how badly Bella has been treated by her parents; or at least has a very good idea.
He wants and needs a boy, true. But his actions haven't exactly helped his situation. Instead of aiding his own cause, he seems to be working against him.
One of the saddest things for me is how little respect they all have for Bella. No one asks herher opinion, much less take it i to consideration. The only one who has evercared for her has been Tanya and she was sent far away. But it seems someone alerted her to the current situation. She has taken a huge risk, but her love for Bella is stronger and bigger than any risks she might take. How did she find out what was going on? What will she tell Edward and him her?
I rather you post than reply ;)

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:56 AM Title: Dying

Edward is such an ass...for taking the baby from her.  I really hope Bella's parents get what's coming to them. I've always loved the name Natalie so that's what we named our baby girl.  Loved the chapter looking forward to more.

Reviewer: martinammorse Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:54 AM Title: Dying

Alona Marie or Grace Isabella my great grandmothers name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:20 AM Title: Dying

Stephanie.  I am glad Tanya came maybe this will shake Edward up enough to do the right thing.  Why doesnt Edward ?  how people are seeing what Bella is doing in privet???  What is going to happen to Charlie and What is going to happen when Emmett heres what is going on??????

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:12 AM Title: Dying

an English daughter, Elizabeth, Margaret or Katherine, Victoria, or Isabella. Isabella has a spanish flare to it.

Edward is great for punishment. If he had kept the baby with her mother he could still have started another baby.  Oh well we are talking 16th century.  I say kill Charles and Renee.

Reviewer: xodani Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:45 AM Title: Dying

This chapter brought tears to my eyes. There is nothing more horrible I could imagine than having your child ripped away from you and I really want to punch Edward in the face....so please, please, please, update soon so that he can either redem himself or I can start thinking up proper punishments. Love what you have done so far, and as for what I would name my daughter, I would call her Leighsa Ann in honor of my late aunt, but spelt differently (with leigh) for originality.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:30 AM Title: Dying

man you almost hate edward. is he that stupid. bella is different he knows that. she has given him a child and is bale to get pregnant and have a child. give her time and she will have a son. but man break her spirit and oh yeah she really wants to be with you and part her legs. i rather die my child being taken. i think she would rather be shipped off than live the life she is. she may be queen but she is a human incabator and her parents treat her like trash. edward no better. they really treat her no different. how should the queen be treated. the king is so high up but really without her you have no heir. treat her better. surround her with people who care about her and want what is best and maybe you will get your heir faster. a happy queen will put out. a sad and mad queen hell no

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:23 AM Title: Dying

I like the name Helen, but I probably would change it to Helena or maybe even Margarite. Love your story.

Reviewer: marirod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:16 AM Title: Dying

Wow really sad indeed. I dont even know where to start. I dont even want to imagine going through something as horible as your child being taken from you, especially by your husband, the man who is supposed to be by your side. Its no wonder that the Queen shut down. Everything came crashing down. It seems that she has no one on her side. Everyone from every side is against her. Her parents, her husband, her ladies in waiting. I really hope next chapter will have something good going for Isabella.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:01 AM Title: Dying

One step forward two steps back for Edward.  Is Edward going to bring the baby back?  I do not see Bella getting over this if she does not have her child with her.  Edward was such a dick in this chapter because he wanted to get his dick wet in Bella.  I am happy that he realized that he is the reason that his child bride is basically catatonic.  He made her that way when he took away the baby.

Thank you for the update.  How many chapters is it going to take for Edward to be a rational adult instead of a child in a man's body?

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:01 AM Title: Dying

I know back then all that mattered was the heir, a boy.  But I'm not from those times so I can complain.  I can't believe he took her baby away.  I half expected him to kill the baby...then to kill Bella when she stayed catatonic.  But he keeps yelling at her parents...can't figure that one out when he just seem interested in his boy baby.  When is someone going to knock the Stanley's out..they are really pissing me off in this story.  Geez. 

so, really good writting, I'm enjoying all the drama.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:52 AM Title: Dying

loved it looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:46 AM Title: Dying

Yay! Tanya!!!! I actually really like Tanya in this story! Please update ASAP! I love this story and hope that Helen get's brought back!

Reviewer: foufymaus Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:30 AM Title: Dying

oh goodness you made me cry. *sniffle* 

Thanks? *wipes eyes* for the update. LOL Can't wait for the next one. *wink* 

Reviewer: Vampress Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:35 PM Title: Lacking

I really enjoy this story. Period pieces are some of my favourites. I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Thank you for using the appropriate language and for doing research. It makes the story that much more captivating! Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update!

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 10:32 AM Title: Failing

Aloha!

I wasn't sure if I should leave you this review seeing as you already have a ton load to go through, but in the end, I just couldn't help myself =)

As ususal, I'm shaking my head over the asshat's behaviour. That guy is just so damn frustrating. Here I sit and my eyes are bugging out since he made so much progress and was kind of sweet at the beginning of the chapter, and then BAM! His Royal HTI (Hot tempered Idiiot) is so damn fucking quick to screw things up! How come he never questioned the audacity of Stanley for reading the letter in the first place? Catching the 'suspicious' letter because he was 'concerned' was one thing, but reading it? Shouldn't he have passed the letter over the to the king right away? And why did the king never question why Bella was bleeding? (Seriously, did she fall or did someone hurt her?) And most importantly, why didn't he lash out on Renee for hitting his wife. The Queen! I mean, he caught her doing so, but didn't really comment on it! Oh well, mayb we hear about it in the next chapter...but still! GAH! So far, he only commented on all the wrongs that Bella did 'wrong', whereas everybody else seems to get away with murder!

And don't get me started on Renee and the whole baby incident! Oh well, since you asked for my opinion...=) I do get that a male was worth more than a female ( as sad as it is), since they need heirs to ensure the bloodline and thereby, the throne and the reign over the kingdom. Alright, honour, where honour is due: kudos to King Edward for not sharing Renee's idea and killing their first born child because it turned out to be a girl. But did he really have to leave Bella like that- and so shortly after that traumatic experience no less? I mean, he wasn't upset that the baby wasn't a boy (yet?), but the way he acted, it was like he was washing his hands clean...and the only thing he had to say to her was, that they would start for round two in a few/ asap! Douchebag!

As for Renee..and Charlie....the crusome twosome.....I really, really, really can't wait for chapter 11 to arrive! I just hope ehatever hellhole the two of them end up, there's enough room for the Stanley's in it as well! *smirks evilly* 

To answer your question: If my midwife (even if we were living in the olden days)  would induce labour by sticking her dirty finger iside of me to break the waters with her fingernail, I would so kick her in the fucking head repeatedly. And if she then went on to put pig fat (or any other fat or substance I didn't deem kosher) on my private parts, I would wrap my legs around her head tightly, and choke that bitch to death!  Just to clear things up here- I don't appreciate violence. I'm a fucking pacifist. In my head I'm like Gandhi! But there are some things that would trigger me turning violent...messing with a pregnant and in-labour-me, is definitely one of that. (not that I was in labour before...just sayin'!)

Anyway, as always- despite my ranting and yelling profanities left, right and center, I do love this story! I think I love that it pisses me off so much! Well, not the story per se, but the asshats that starr in it! =)

Take care!

-Sue

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 11:44 PM Title: Failing

WOW, living in those times was rough.  Amazing chapter.

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 11:44 PM Title: Failing

Edward is very heartless at the end of this chapter. He just left Bella there and her mother slapping her after giving birth. Why didn't Edward do anything about that?

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 10:43 PM Title: Failing

Just when it seems Bella is about to catch a break and enjoy some peace and calm in her life, something occurs that shakes her life once more. She truly can't trust anyone in court. At least Edward was able to see this and if not agree at least understand his wife a bit more.

The baby came, but it wasn't what everyone wanted. Bella doesn't seem to care it's not a boy. But Edward's reaction did surprise her. How will she act with him now?

Reviewer: Jen8f9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:32 PM Title: Failing

Oh! I hope Edward give Renee a good kick for trying to hit Bella! Cant wait to see more!

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 11:03 AM Title: Failing

Aww! <3 this chaper was teh best so far! <3 I hope Edward learn to love the little girl.. <3 

Please hurry with the next chapter, I can't wait!

And hopefully the next baby will be a boy..<3 

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 10:36 AM Title: Failing

why would renee want to get rid of the baby is it because its a girl?  after i became well i would deck her....king needs to do something with her parents...

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 8:53 AM Title: Failing

thanks for the newest chapter.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 7:07 AM Title: Failing

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 5:15 AM Title: Failing

im excited for the next chapter 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:58 AM Title: Failing

I want to know what is going to happen to Renee I hope it is bloody. 

Reviewer: TwiTrek23 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:57 AM Title: Failing

Love the story, but I really can't wait to firtst find out what caused the early labor and second when Edward will findout about Charles and Renee and make sure they get what they deserve!

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 4:09 AM Title: Failing

awww no boy, you do know though that if someone was seen hitting the queen they could be put in jail or exiled even if it was the mother, i just feel bad for bella always getting hurt by the swans, oh well fantastic chapter

Reviewer: pix23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:32 AM Title: Failing

the midwife better have my number before she puts her finger down in there. ;)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:00 AM Title: Failing

i do not think i like their birthing ways.

i am glad they found bella in time. i am glad bella is keeping her baby. her mother is wicked. and once again bella the whore is a disappointment to her parents. my goodness bella what will you do. i am still not sure if edward is happy about his child. i know he needs a boy and heir and will keep trying. at least he knows bella is able to have kids and can bear him children. that is a plus. 

Reviewer: marirod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:50 AM Title: Failing

Loved the long chapter.
Isabella's parents are really getting on my last nerve. The moment I read Isabella was pregnant I knew you were going to write that she was going to have a girl. Gotta have drama right? I still loved it as always.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:36 AM Title: Failing

Okay. Time to toughen up Isabella. Renee needs to be delbt with severly. She was going to have the princess killed.  So tell that to Edward. Renee does not deserve to stay in court any longer. Renee and Charles should be removed.

 

How dirty to break your water with someone's fingernail..............ewww..

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:15 AM Title: Failing

Loved it.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 2:02 AM Title: Failing

I hope The King does something about those rotten Stanleys and Swans...good grief...I hope she'll have a son...eventually....

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 1:46 AM Title: Failing

OMG poor Bella! How long does it take to be churched? Will he let Bella feed her own baby? I hope Bella gets her boy. Renee is psycho.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 1:45 AM Title: Failing

If a midwife stuck her sharp ass finger up there and tried to break my water, she would be the recipient of a lovely donkey kick . . . and I've had 3 kids!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 9:03 AM Title: Crying

Wow a bumpy two chatpers, I really do hope that they start to build a life together where they trust each other and talk to each other.

I love this side of Edward. 

Charlie is up to something... not sure what it is.

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:08 AM Title: Crying

aww so sweet

Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 7:43 PM Title: Crying

Guten Tag! =)

Alright, this is the third time I'm trying to post this reply...no idea what's wrong here!

Anyway, glad to see there was an update! =)

Yes, you're giving us an emotional whiplash in regards to His Royal Asshat, and yes, I crossed him off my imaginary shitlist for fictional characters for the time being, since he managed to make up for his latest fuck-up! =) Seriously, that guy is killing me! I can't believe he got all pissy and pms'd over Bella being eager to go down on him, and accused of whoring around his castle! WTF? It was a bit dubious that Bella did a 180 in the bedroom and was eager to go down on him, when she was just an innocent and pure young girl the day before, I give him that. BUT seeing as he probably stuck his little Edward into more things than he should have, he shouldn't be so quick to throw accusations left, right and center! *facepalm*Totally irational that guy, when the heck was she supposed to turn into a Stanley between getting her private bits torn, being abused by her father, and made fun off by her maids?! GAH! PMS thou' art a wacky bitch! =)

I'm glad that Jasper reported what he and James witnessed to Edward! Chapter 11 can't come soon enough... I know that you are perfectly aware that we all want to see Charles and Renee taking the train to nowhere (yes, I saw some of the other reviews ^^) and you probably annoyed by answering that question! But seriously, they need to go! =)

I would say, Edward should go Protestant.

Loved the chapter and the story- as usual! Can't wait for the next chapter- as usual! Loving to get frustrated and hating on Edward, as usual! =)

Take care!

-Sue

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 5:04 PM Title: Crying

the chapter 11 can´t be faster enough!!!I like this Edward but he don´t are in my good grace yet lol, it's kidding i loved when he give up the whores Stanleys ;D

xoxo

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 5:36 AM Title: Crying

:)

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2011 1:17 AM Title: Crying

Great chapter.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 6:51 PM Title: Crying

Yes Yes Yes!  A new chapter!! <3 can't wait for more! <3

Reviewer: camianbu88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:16 PM Title: Crying

great chapter, the whiplash is totally understandable and welcome, at least for me. I think that if I were King Edward, I would choose to become protestant for the simple reason that it allows the crown to clean once and for all the church, really the catholic church was beyond help, at least in England and Rome at the time.

Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:53 PM Title: Crying

Edward is still an asshole.  Of course, he probably wouldn't survive as King if he wasn't.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 11:33 AM Title: Crying

so loving the change or shoudl i say growth in Edward !!!!!!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 7:04 AM Title: Crying

I again am appalled by Edward's childish behavior.  He does not think before he reacts.

He really thought that in the time from when he bedded Bella and tore her so badly apart that she needed stitches that Bella had bedded someone else! Also, let's not forget that he hit her face so hard that it left a mark!

I know you say that he is going to make a few more asshole mistakes, but he has done some horrific things to his wife already.  

What else are you going to put poor Bella through?

I am glad that he finally acted the way he should have always acted with Bella since he married her, but he is so not off my shit list yet!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 5:42 AM Title: Crying

He should have had to beg for forgiveness but it was about time he did it right :)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:46 AM Title: Crying

I hope the king will have strong, harsh words for Charles. He deserves them and some more. His tactics can cost him so much. He has proved he isn't very intelligent. How can his children be smarter than him, is good and a surprise. It had to be so difficultfor Emmett to aproach both his sister and the king, but he had to.
As for Bella, it must had made her want to die. To have to endure his father's misstress' guidance, to act on them only to be rejected by the king as he did.
At least it seems the king is seeing things differently now. It was an improvement, lets hope it will keep on like this.

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:31 AM Title: Crying

I love this story! I really love historical fiction from this time period and you're doing a fabulous job!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:15 AM Title: Crying

Love Emmett and so glad he loves his sister.  I was so happy that Edward went to her and appoligised and made her feel good the way he should of the first time.  I would like Edward to see catch her parents being mean to her

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:56 AM Title: Crying

I'm waiting for Edward to walk in and witness first hand Bella's parents abusing her. Heads will roll!...I hope.

Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 2:42 AM Title: Crying

Edward needs to stop jumping the gun with Bella and learn to be patient. If I were Edward I would choose to be Protestant.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 2:25 AM Title: Crying

Well, I am a Protestant, so! I think we should always have free will. I think my belief is in clear seperation between government and the church. No one should be forced into a religion.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 2:05 AM Title: Crying

i am glad that bella seems to have people like emmett and jasper looking out for bella. even james seemed to be concerned and not nasty in this one. charlie is a pig and i hope edward deals with him. not only did he put his hands on bella but sent his whore to give bella lessons. i am glad edward knows and went to her. i love that he was able to give her passion and see that laying with him can be pleasurable as well and won't be so bad. it will get there. so loved it

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:48 AM Title: Crying

now the end of the chapter is the edward i like

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:48 AM Title: Crying

loving this story

 

Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:19 AM Title: Crying

Great chapter...looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:19 AM Title: Crying

Whew, Edward is maybe settling down...his harsh, quick handling of Bella is toning down.  It is becoming and "awwwwwwwe" experience.



Author's Response:

I'm afraid it won't be like this for long. King Edward still has a long way to go yet. Thank you for reviewing and I apologise for how long it has taken me to reply to your review.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: Annie26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:10 AM Title: Crying

I love period pieces, and this story is no exception! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing and I apologise for how long it has taken me to reply to your review.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:07 AM Title: Crying

hes not a  complete duche looking forward to seeing what happens next 



Author's Response:

Not completely no, but at the same time he hasn't completely reverted to being a sweetheart. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: flavia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:03 AM Title: Crying

I certainly chose Become Protestant! I really hope he didn`t cheat on her! And please I wish she become pregnant! 



Author's Response:

King Edward will not be cheating on Bella. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:02 AM Title: Crying

I love the chapter. Absolutely Beautiful



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing and I apologise for how long it has taken me to reply to your review.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: marirod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:55 PM Title: Crying

Edward was so sweet at the end of this chapter. It makes me wonder why he didnt act like that their first time together. Is it because hes never cared about someone else's pleasure but his own? That makes me wonder about Tanya. Wondering how their marriage was like. Did he give her pleasure? Did he atleast care about her even a little? So many questions in my mind. Haha.

Author's Response:

King Edward has never bedded a woman who hasn't wanted him to share her bed with him. That means that unlike in Bella's case there was natural arousal and so he has never had to learn how to provide pleasure to a woman. Also during the time many believed that most, if not all, pleasure in the bedroom was for the man alone. You will see later on in a conversation about his marriage with Princess Tanya.

Thank you for reviewing and I apologise for how long it has taken me to reply to your review.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:51 PM Title: Crying

The stringing of the swans should be sooner;) they r so freaking vile. Please I hope Edward catches them doing something to Bella and punish them for their antics. Thank you for updating. I love old historic fictions. Too bad there are not that many around. Love urs by the way. I think u have the only Tanya that I like. Sorry it was short lived ;).

Author's Response:

I apologise it is taking me so long to have the Swans be punished thoroughly for their misdeeds. Tanya will return as many of my readers have the same opinion as you in regards to her character in my story. Thank you for your lovely words and I'm glad you like my story.

Thank you for reviewing and I apologise for how long it has taken me to reply to your review.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2011 4:17 AM Title: Apologising

such a great addition

Author's Response:

Thank you!
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: marirod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 1:26 AM Title: Apologising

The first part of this chapter made me cringe. Poor Bella she's all alone. Hopefully Edward comes around soon.

As for ur question on gifts I would prefer both. Sometimes your man just wants to spoil you with gifts. Then there are the thoughtful ones that make you all warm inside and make you feel so loved.

Author's Response:

It seems to have made a number of people cringe. Loneliness will be a prevalent theme for Bella. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: camianbu88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 1:00 AM Title: Apologising

I really really hope the punshment for Charles and Renee is something grand and humilliating for them, I really do! and I can`t wait for when our dear Edward realizes all, or maybe some of the most importants, wrongs in his treating of his wife.

I do prefere heartfelt gifts, they have way more meaning than ostentatious ones :D



Author's Response:

The punishment will be grand, gorey and gruesome. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:54 PM Title: Apologising

More thoughtful ones

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:47 AM Title: Apologising

charlie is such a jerk



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And he won't get any better, just progressively worse. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:18 AM Title: Apologising

I can't believe that Bella is being treated like this. Why does everyone feel like they can beat on her. I seriously hope that Edward catches the way her parents treat her, they deserve to be punished.



Author's Response:

They will be punished, trust me. Bella is a poor soul trapped by her situation and gender. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:23 AM Title: Coercing

I don't like her parents. Why are they so mean to her?



Author's Response:

They are mean because they see Bella as their black mark of shame on their name due to her gender. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:42 AM Title: Lacking

I guess he didn't love Tanya, he was so heartless.



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King Edward has known only lust and never true love. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:16 PM Title: Apologising

Love the story so far. I was really proud that Edward turned down Stanley's offer. Now to give Bella a backbone, she is queen now. her father is a ass cant wait to see what happends to her parents when Edward finds out how she is treated by them cant wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that you were proud of our idiotic king. Bella lacks a backbone because of how much she has been demeaned throughout her life. She has never had the chance nor the ability to grow and flourish in order to become a strong enough woman that can stand up to all the evils in her life.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:09 PM Title: Apologising

I prefer both types of gifts. Edward seems ok to me I mean he is King and Bella should just talk to him. Great Chapter



Author's Response:

Communicating will definitely help these two but they're both a bit idiotic in regards to relationships. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:54 PM Title: Apologising

Hating the Swan parents even more! I'm not too fond of Edward yet but at least it is a step into the right direction. 

I sure hope Isabella won't entertain the idea that she needs "sex ed" from some mistress...She should tell Edward about the threat to her little sister.



Author's Response:

Georgia isn't Bella's little sister biologically, they just have a close sisterly bond. Unfortunately in regards to the mistress, Bella doesn't have much say in the matter. King Edward will soon take two steps back, I warn you.

Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:37 PM Title: Apologising

Thoughtful gifts, no doubt. They show that someone cares enough to pay attention to what you like.

Both Edward and Charles behaved terribly in this chapter, although Edward is at least trying to redeem himself. As for Charles, he might still have certain "control" over his daugher, but his pride and ego are probably going to cause his downfall. Bella is the queen and is above her family. They better be more careful or Bella's temper might be directed to them...



Author's Response:

You are correct in saying that Lord Charles' pride and ego will be the cause of his downfall. Credit is due for the king's attempts at trying, however he will display a few more asshole tendancies in the next couple of chapters. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:12 PM Title: Apologising

Oh poor Bella!  Not only is her family horrible to her but now her husband and king are slapping her around as well not to mention he might as well have just raped her considering how thoughtless and careless he was while taking her virginity.  So sad, not even a friend to comfort her. 



Author's Response:

Bella's situation is definitely a sad one and it will get worse before it gets better for the poor girl. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:30 PM Title: Apologising

Poor Bella!!  I'd hate everyone.  Edward has potential.  Can't wait to see how awesome he turns out to be.

Bella's parents need their heads removed.



Author's Response:

King Edward will have a few more idiotic, asshole tendancies but his potential will be seen shortly. Bella's parents will get their dues in Chapter 11. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:55 PM Title: Apologising

so her father can still get to her and hurt her.  hope that changes soon.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately yes he can. Lord Charles is the type of man who prides himself on his ability to control his household. Even though Bella is married - and to the king no less - Lord Charles still considers her as being partly his property and wishes to use her for his own gains. His fall will come soon enough.

Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:39 PM Title: Apologising

thoughtful ones are the best...i sill want to kick edward ass and her dads...

 



Author's Response:

I wouldn't expect anything less. Hopefully King Edward can redeem himself slightly with the next chapter. Lord Charles will be dealt with in Chapter 11. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:40 PM Title: Apologising

He has to learn. More thoughtful

gifts are the way to go. Love the

story. :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like my story. King Edward will have much more to learn as the story progresses. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: TiramiSue Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:57 AM Title: Apologising

*courtsies* Lady Anna-Margaret! Lol =)

Do I actually have to word my thoughts? I think at this point you'd guess what I have to say pretty well....but, oh hell, where'd be the fun in that? =)

Alright, here we go...

WTFF? No, seriously, What.The.Fucking Fuck? He actually injured her?! In- and outside of her hooha? Yes, yes, he is the king and a man (duh! ^^) and only out for their own pleasure, yada yada...but seriously...ungh! He acts as if he was actually a virgin with no idea whatsoever how to handle a woman, and only knows the basics from hearsay (in...out...in...out...) Ram-Bam, indeed! What a fucking dick! Oh lol! I mean, certainly Lady Isabella's wasn't the first cherry he popped...the thought of hiom leaving behind a trail ripped and deflouvered young girls kind of makes me queasy...(even if it's just a fic ...=P) Sweet Baby Jesus, that guy is killing me! And to think that Bella got her ouchies 'cleaned and treated' with vinegar and salt water...well, fuck!

And then he actually hit her...again, I know that he is a man in a world/era dominated by men, and also king, which grants him the right to do whatever the fuck he wants to do-no questions asked... So, when Bella kind of showed an attitude towards him, he reacted without thinking. It was an impulsive reaction; he had no idea how to handle it and it was obvious that he was sorry the moment it happened. No, I'm not saying that I agree with what he did, think that Bella is the one to blame for showing a little glimpse of her free will and personality, nor do I tolerate violance against women (or violence in any form/kind!)

However, I do believe that he was really sorry for his behavior. I mean, he apologized to her after all-nothing I think a king would do too often! He actually fell on his knees--> that gesture was worth more than the stupid gift he gave her! Bella was absolutely right-he doesn't know her at all, if he did he would have thought of something else buy her forgiveness...oooops, sorry (I'm trying, really trying not to be too harsh with His Royal Asshat, especially since he's doing a little better...but sometimes it's still a bit hard to let things go or see hit from his perspective/ be objective)...*cough* I mean, ask for forgiveness and make amends. But then again, he probably never learned how to apologize in the first place because he didn't have to, and-I'm taking a ballsy guess here- he must have adapted his behaviour from somehwere growing up, buying affection and using ostentatios things for bribing reasons were kind of normal, I think. So, I guess His Royal Dickward did it with solely good intention. After all, the fact that he apologized in the first place shows that he cares about her. Again, that probably didn't happen too often in his life...it is a learning process for him. So yeah, here I am, admitting that His Royal Imbecile really made an effort, and it was kind of cute. Boy, do I love to hate him..or do I hate to love him? Gah!

In case you're wondering at this point whether I forgot about Charles and what he did, or if I simply have nothing to say about him, rest assured, I was just saving the best for last....That stupid mofo needs to rot in hell! NOW! The nerve he has...ungh, I want to see him in so much pain! Imean, what kind of person blackmails his daughter by threatening the well-being/ life of an innocent child (nevermind that said person is a girl...)! I couldn't even tell whom I hate more at this point- him or that loathsome thing he married! The yboth need to day a long and painful death!(May as well take the Stanleys with them when they go...just sayin') I really can't wait for Edward to finally find out about the maltreatment of his wife. I love how Bella stood her ground-well, at least tried to until he brought Georgia up...I really hope that Jazz will tell about what he and James saw. He is not stupid, so I hope he saw the'hug' for what it really was! Please, please, please!!! =) I seriously want them all hung on their genitials and the burn! GAH!

Alright, Ithink that's all to be said about the chap at this point...only maybe that Edward should have gotten her a new little pup for company instead of what he did get her. I forgot to tell youlast time, but I love the new banner! =)

Regarding your response from last time- I was kind of dumbstruck when I read the greeting in German! It actually took me a few secs until I realized it was indeed you! Wow, six years of German must have been a pain- especially grammar! Hell, I've been learning it all my life and still mess it up here and there (grammar has never been my forte, no matter the language...you may have realized that by now...=) oops! ) Anyway, that was really cute! ^^ I'm really sorry for butt-kissing the ground while reading my thought vomit! But it was kind of dunny, too!^^  I'm exactly the same, I always get so into a story and the characters, that my emotions always are all over the place! For example, when I read New Moon for the first time, I a) panicked out when I got to the part where there's only month's name announced and nothing else-> for a second I thought something was wrong with my copy....(facepalm). b) I was so pissed off when the Cullens and most importantly Edward left for such a long period, that I actually threw the book away and against the next best wall in a childish outburst, only to hurriedly jump right out of bed the instant it hit the ground to continue reading...(don't say it! Don't even think it! I know, okay, I know....as I said, that all occured the first time I read that book, so please have some mercy with me!). c) I more or less skipped every other page -starting at the point meadow/Laurent incident- until Alice returned and then again until they were reunited in Volterra. d) read the whole book in merely a few hours, and then again right away (since I skipped so many pages the first time) because I had to know what the hell was going on.... And don't even get me started on how I cursed Bella out in Eclipse when she went and kissed Jacob....LOL I'm such a freak!

Ok, in case you are still with me, sseing as you updated you obviously survived the party week at college. Thank God for that! Don't worry about replying taking longer than usual- I totally understand! I so would have done the same =) Have you met a lot of people yet?  I think, I really need to start saving money so that I can go and check out all those in kilts myself! =) =) =)

As for your question, I prefer the thoughtful gifts that come from the heart at any time. I'd rather take anything self-made than anything that was just bought only for the sake of gifting. Did that make sense? What I mean is, if I only buy something to give away only because I have to, then in my opinion, the gift itself is not worth that much, since there really was no thought behind it. I'mnot sure I'm expressing myself here correctly, but I can't do any better at the moment- sorry. Of course I am thankful for any gift or little something I receive. But when I see that the person who gave it to me actually put effort and thought into it, maybe even made it themself, it's worth so much more than any materialistic value something bought could have. (In most cases anyway =) ...)

And now, finally, I ran out of things to say...Jeeez, that really turned out to be a long one! =) Again, I am sure I forgot half the things I wanted to say, but we can't have you doing your homework last minute again, because you were busy working through my ranting here! So, let me just say that I enjoyed the chapter and really can't wait for the next one! And in absolute Irish and German stereotypical fashion, let me part with a

Prost/Slàinte!

Until next time! =) Take care

-Sue



Author's Response:

Finally Sue I have gotten round to replying to your chapter 7 review. I suck, I know. Firstly *curtseys* I love how you began with ‘Lady Anna-Margaret’ *giggles* I definitely haven’t been showing the most ladylike behaviour in recent weeks ;)

 

By this point yes I do know that there will be lots of ranting from you which makes my day! Your reviews make me smile as broad as Jack Nicholson in Batman :D

 

Yes he did injure her poor vagina. It was common that a poorly prepared virgin could be ripped both inside and outside should the man just slam into her. King Edward has been with virgins before but they all wanted to be in his bed and so were naturally aroused. Bella, unfortunately, did not have those kinds of feelings towards His Majesty and had also just received a frightening from the evil Lady Renee; definitely unlikely to have helped her have any natural arousal. Whilst vinegar and salt water are good at cleaning cuts and preventing infection in some cases they do sting like fuck! :P

 

King Edward was truly remorseful for his violent action. Yes it was wrong for him to slap her in the first place, but I am glad that you understand it was an impulsive reaction from a man living in a male-dominated society. His buying of affection he learnt from his father. You’ll learn more about his childhood and background later on in the story. I think some people might find it rather intriguing and help to see him in a different light. In regards to your question ‘do I love to hate him…or do I hate to love him?’ I’m sure you can’t help but hate me for making him so hateable and likeable at the same time lol

 

I’m sure you, like many others, will be highly anticipating Chapter 11 in which Lord and Lady Swan will receive their dues. You definitely provided me with a, um, vivid picture of what you’d like done to them *chuckles*

 

I am glad you like the new banner. I think they are both pretty awesome. These people are truly talented!

 

Six years of German was absolutely crippling, especially the last two years but that was mainly due to the other three people in the class bullying me. I so did the same in regards to New Moon. I was flicking backwards and forwards completely freaking out at 3am in the morning (I’d just finished Twilight, went to the toilet and came back to start in on New Moon). I skip the wolf bits too; I just go “Boooooooooring!” lol

 

I have met lots of new people however its quite funny as quite a number of the people here staying at the Halls of Residence are doing the same course as me – Masters in Primary Education with Teaching Qualification – and are from Northern Ireland! If you save up enough money to visit Scotland, even though there is bugger all really here, you gotta come to Dumfries!

 

I definitely took your departing words to heart and ended up drinking more :P

 

Thanks for always being patient with me and being a truly amazing reviewer!

~Anna-Margaret

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:05 AM Title: Apologising

I dont like Charlie or Renee they are terible people.  I think a gift should come from the heart if it doent it means nothing.  I think Bella has been beat enough.



Author's Response:

Lord and Lady Swan will be dealt with in Chapter 11. Bella will have a few more trials to face, I'm afraid. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:54 AM Title: Apologising

:)



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Glad you are still with me. Thanks.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:46 AM Title: Apologising

Why the hell doesn't Bella have her parents killed? They are guilty of treason for their treatment of the Queen afterall?

These characters are all just vile even for the time period.

I'll give this story one more chapter before I decide to leave it or not....I don't deal well with cruelty and abuse. This was supposed to be a romance and it is reading more like Horror.

Author's Response:

Bella is not a strong person. She has been belittled all her life which has affected her inner strength and self esteem. She is also extremely careful and cautious about who she trusts with the secrets she hides. I understand that there are people who do not like my style of writing romance. I prefer to have the characters face many trials before love and romance can be discovered and brought to life. I hope the next chapter will give you some of the romance you are looking for, but I will warn you that there is still a little more angst to come.

Thanks for reviewing and I hope you do manage to stick with the story.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:18 AM Title: Apologising

Wow, medicine has come a long way (I know, gross understatement, literally).

I like that Edward feels remorse for both events, and of course he doesn't know her that well yet, but I am hopeful he will WANT to learn more about her as we move forward.

Her parents are still vile, and I am hopeful the King finds out more of their true colors and they get what they deserve.

Author's Response:

Medicine definitely has come a long way. King Edward will want to learn more about his wife to help them move forward in their marriage. Lord and Lady Swan will get what they deserve in Chapter 11. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: gabys Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:28 AM Title: Apologising

Edward is still an ass....but I cant get over charlie he needs some sense knocked into him.  I prefer thoughtful gifts...even homemade means more then something purchased in a store.



Author's Response:

Lord Charles is too thick-headed to have sense knocked into him. Thanks for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
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