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Reviewer: inbetweendayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

great chapter i cant wait til she wears his collar 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Great job...both times.  A lot of bang for the buck (ha ha).  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: roselynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

That was HOT!!!! I now need a cold shower.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Have fun shopping My applause for tackling this before black Friday!!! Be safe and have lots of fun...

I love this mature totaaly in love Edward... He adores Bella you can just feel seeping off the pages as you read it.  Bella is so innocent but not overly so, as she is quickly learning what she wants for Edward and she shows us that she is not as shy as one might expect, in a very good way I might add.  When she brought the breakfast tray in and asked if she coukd feed him, well that was wonderful shenis showing her love for him in many ways.. I hope that it isn't going to be a hard stretch for him to accept that she loves and adores him..

I think her first time was perfect for them... meaning she they both were needy and lustful for each other...does a persons first time have to be Roses and champagne? No, definitely not, I personally think his emotions and care of and for her during this special intimate moment expressed all that they needed and desired.  Edward made it even more special for her by patiently waiting for Bella to recover sufficiently.  Can't wait for more.  Hum... the teaser just makes me want to punch Monster Charlie out.. I bet he's gambling or something horrible like that....

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Really sexy chapter, love the way their relationship is developing. Thanks

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

looking forward to the next chatper 

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

OMg now I can't wait for next chapter I assume Edward is hearing the conversation. I wonder what he spend 10 k on in a wk.  I wonder what you are talking about not true with edward and his family. Ps I am glad to see her giving charlie hell. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Great update, love your lemons !!!!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Awesome!!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

Thanks for the update have fun shopping! Yuk! It was good really good you can feel the love he has for her with all the care and patience he had taking her for the first time. It was great! Thanks for making it that way!

Reviewer: loveLambLife Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

I think I've never reviewed this story before but I absolutely love it. Edward is hot and I especially enjoy reading the EPOV parts. those two are perfect for each other. I'm curious to find out what else you have in store for them :)

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

Oh, what does she want?  Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

Wow, Alice and Jasper AND Emmett and Rose are all into the BDSM lifestyle?   I can't wait to see what Bella thinks of Edward!

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

My complaint:  where's your Christmas spirit, we ahould get at least two chapters :)  Hope you found some good presents to buy.  I need ideas for a four year old who has literally everything!!!  Love your story, thanks for updating.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Wow, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

wow what a first time and a second time that shit is just hot.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 16 Coitus

wow that sooo worth the wait!fantastic chapter.that was so romantic and hot!update soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

they are good together

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

That was an awesome chapter, poor Edward isn't used to being jealous I think that's something both he and Bella are going to have to get used too.  I am curious to see how Bella reacts to Edward telling her about Rosalie being a sub for him since her reactions are never what I am expecting. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

: ) Good stuff.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Oh my jealousward is hot. Loved the playroom scene. It looks like Bella is not going to be a virgin for long. 

Reviewer: debussyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Damn, but you're good! I like posessive Edward since is stems from his insecurities, like Peter possibly being a better match. It evens up the playing field, with him much older and influencial than Bella. I think it's hot that the hidden vulnerability manifest as posessiveness.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Damn, I just love these two; they are so perfect for each other. I think Edward better tame that possessive shit, or he'll keep scaring Bella. Being possessive is great, in small amounts, but can easily become a problem in a relationship.

I guess I can't blame Edward, after all he's been waiting a long time to find the right one and let's face it, Bella has a lot to offer and is so fucking hot. I'm sure that's what had Peter doing that double take and trying to get all up on her. Maybe I'm wrong, but I kind of have a bad feeling about Peter. I wonder if he will be showing up again in your story.

Over all I think the little dinner party went well. It was cool that Bella got along so well with Emmett and Rosalie, and what can I say about Alice? Of course she's awesome.

As far as Bella being ready to lose her v-card, it might not be set in stone. I mean she obviously craves that giant cock of Edward's, and she cares a whole lot for him and trusts him, but she could possibly freeze up at the last minute. Maybe not, it's just a possibility. I have to say though that I think she'd be fucking insane not to jump all over that hot ass man. ;) I'm pretty sure you won't disappoint us. Love your story so much! Thanks again for writing.  =)  K 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

well i am glad edward introduced bella as his girlfriend. to bad peter didn't take it so well.

these seem to get along great in the playroom. their relationships in both areas have alot to look forward to.

loving it

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

great update !!!!! I will look for your page

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Wonderful chatper and I can never wait for the next chapter, but I do!

Cant wait to see if Bella will go through with it or get nervous at the last second.

Fiorella

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

I think it is rather sweet that he was worried about her being Catholic and out feelings about birth control. I guess he didn't realize the rest of the behavior is not really in line with Catholic doctrine, but it is sweet. If you are going to have premarital sex, birth control use is best.  I love possess Edward. It is so sexy.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

wow that was hot!fantastic chapter.can't wait for next chapter theteaser sounds hot hot!update soon

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Nicely done. When I read the first part and u mentioned about the family coming and Jasper bringing Peter my firs thought was oh SHIT its about to get ugly. But then nothing major happened which i was greatful for. Im glad everyone seem to be excepting of Edward and Bella. And the scene they did, awesomeness, Edward is a bit possive, which i love BTW. Im looking forward to next weeks update. Time for some sexy times. great job as always

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Ohhhh....   The anticipation is killing me!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Well its about time he is going to make love to her. I know it hasn't been alot of chapters but still it seems like forever. lol. It looks like Peter was really pissed when he found out she was taken. lol Too bad Peter, she is taken.

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

So very good

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

loved it ! 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Dinner was... not very pleasant at first for Edward. He was close to loosing it, several times. good thing Emmett and Alice knew exactly what to do and say. Of course Peter would find Bella attractive and would want to get better aquainted with her. He just had no clue about what the dinner was really for. Hopefully he will get over it and help Bella when it's time for her to go to school. 

The playroom was hot, sexy, erotic and very pleasurable for both. They really enjoyed it. I think it was also good to have the scene before the limits talk. Then there was what Edward told Bella he wants... I am so jealous, they have to wait one day while us have to wait a week!!!! ;)

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

I love it and can't wait for the next chapter. I think that she would be a little nervous but she ould be ready because she really cares for him. Please update ASAFP.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

I love it! I just knew that Alice knew what was going on. The push she gave Edward was perfect! The playroom was awesome and I am glad the lists were pretty close too. I don't know why I was a little shocked that he just told her he wanted to make love the next day. I can't see Bella saying, why wait. I love this story! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Thanks for the update! I love jealous Ed! I am glad he doesn't like to share. That is a hard limit for me! It was HOT! Can't wait for more

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

I loved everything about this chapter. I am so glad that Edward did not back down from introducing her as his girlfriend. Loved the playroom scene. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 15 Fire and Ice

Hot Damn   Flaming hot I would say..  Yes, I thought that perhaps Alice knew... sneaky little shit.. Hehehehe!!!!  Awwww Peter there is no competion my dear boy... HotWard will wind out every time so sorry son!!!!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I am really surprised that he hasn't made love to her yet. I dont think I would have lasted this long as a matter of fact I know I wouldn't have. I dont know how he does it or should I say doesn't do it. lol.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Oh I bet Edward is going to be so pissed. lol

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 12 **Playtime**

I think that was a really good session. I think he was very attentive and asked her several times if she was ok. I was very pleased with it.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2

Well he seems to be having fun already. I dont like that he has left her wanting a few times now.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 10 Conversation

Well at least its out in the open now and like I suspected she is not running. lol

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience

Well it doesn't seem that she is going to have any trouble once he tells her he is a Dom. lol. She seems to be enjoying what she is reading.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7 **Encounters**

Well that was hot. I would have loved to read it from EPOV. I am surprised he didn't take her virginity though.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 6 Beginnings

I think Bella is just as much effected to him as he is to her. And hopefully he wont be able to stay away for long.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5 Expectations

Well I think he freaked out like you said. lol. But he finally realized that he never told her to call him Edward so the door swings both ways. At least he got some release when he went to bed. lol.

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

HmMM I am starting to think Charlie only cares about money. Poor Edward was interupted in his fantasy. lol

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

He sure had a hard time controlling himself huh? LOL Well it looks like he has the plan all set to catch her in his web. I hope it works.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

woohoo! cheers for crotchless panties and garters! alice has to know what's going on, but i'm glad she's staying out of the way for now. i can't wait until 1) edward collars bella and 2) everyone comes over for dinner, in whatever order. but i am so anticipating "the lemon".

Reviewer: debussyfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I'm getting sucked deeper into this fic with every chapter. The chemistry jumps off the page and these two are just so endearingly horny! Love everything you've written.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I think I got a little zesty flavor in that chapter and I liked it lol.  I hope all the family will welcome Bella and not make her feel like she dont belong.  Love your other story's

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

SO SO SO HOT!!!!!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I can't believe how much I love your Edward and Bella. I love them both, but I'm really into Edward; he is so damn sweet. I'm looking forward to the dinner party, and everyone's reception of Bella.

I can think of several things that Edward could plan to make the first time he and Bella make love really special for her. In my opinion, and without going into every detail; I think it should and probably will be mainly about the romance. I know, boring response, but Edward wants to make it special for Bella and show her how much she means to him 'as his girlfriend'. Maybe he'll plan something special in the playroom. I'll just have to wait until your next chapter or two to find out. Thanks for writing; I really do love your story.  =)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

wow go bella go. man these two have such chemistry

i am so surprised that alice has called them out

i am glad em is giving edward the benefit of the doubt about bella.

can't wait for the dinner party.

so love it

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I am soooo loving this story. Can't wait to see what everyone thinks of Bella and Edward together. Can't wait to see more playtime too. ALSO, can't wait to see what Edward's has planned for how he is going to take her viringity.

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

Well obviously Edward really enjoyed the impromtu strip tease/fashion show and got a surprise he definetely wasn't expecting in the form of Bella being waxed, the reward was totally hot!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

He really is very sweet to her... I like him.  I know RL is going to catch up with them eventually, but I am enjoy them getting to know each other.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

LOVE IT, the naughty fashion show, the orgasmic dinner. Well who wouldnt love it. He's going to Tiffany's so we know the collar will be beautiful and only the best for Edwards sub. I think he may also buy something extra. As her boyfriend. Now the Lemon thats coming up he done said he was going to make love to her befor he collars her, so with that said. hes either going to get rid of alice or him and bella is going to go away, and hes going to pull out everything he can think of to make it the most memberable event in her life to this point. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: inbetweendayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

love la perla great chapter cant wait for the collar and the familys reaction

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I loved they spent a kind of normal evening, and that they can share a bed just to sleep and hold each other. it really is a big change for Edward, but he is changing. I wonder what his family will be saying. They will be happy to see him happy and with Emmett already supporting him, it will be okay.

Bella was worried of what Edward would say about her trip to the spa. Nothint to worry about, he was thrilled.

I am certain he is going to get her something amazing!!! Can't wait!!!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I really do love these two crazy kids, they know how to steam up the computer screan.

 

till the next update!

fiorella

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

You're killing me with this story and now I'm gonna have to take a cold shower!  Great job.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

Can't wait!!!  ;-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

His family has to see that he really loves her. He is so patient with her.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

oh boy... they are so hot together.  i can't wait to see what the family is going to say.  i don't think it is going to be as easy as Ed thinks.  I am so glad you have made this so the love for her is easily seen and felt.  You know he feels for her and she is not something to be used just for enjoyment.  I know he won't share..at least i hope.  thanks for the update can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

Very hot.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

loved it looking forward to the enxt chapter 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

lordy soaked panties!!!!!  what a yummy chapter!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

I love these two! Alice has to know something is going on. She wouldn't miss all this that is going on around her. I can't wait for everyone to meet Bella. I think everything will be fine. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 14 Panties

Lucky, lucky girl.  Love the story!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

So they are making it offical when are they coming out

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Wow, it is really starting to get hot and heavy for these two, I wonder how the family are going to take the news of Cullens much, much, much youger girlfriend.

Keep up the beautiful writing.

I never can wait for more of this story, I always wish the chapter were 10 times longer so I could read more and more about these two characters.

Thank you for the update.

Fiorella

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2

Love this story and your Domward!  Keep it coming, please!

Reviewer: sessa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Girl, I love ur story read all 13 chapters last night.  The lemon scenes r so

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Ah poor Edward didn't get a big part in this chapter, he must be lonely. I should probably make sure he's okay. ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

I am so glad that Alice and Bella are getting along. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks about her getting waxed and seeing her in her new undies!!!!!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

I couldn't help but giggle-snort at Bella as she enjoyed the aftermath of her first Brazilian. I'm pretty confident that Edward will be completely okay with the newly hairless Bella. (I don't know why but that just made me giggle)  =P  Probably because it's about 5:30 a.m. and I've had no sleep, but I had to catch up; I was 5 chapters behind.

Yeah, Alice is onto them. I think maybe she has been for awhile now. And lord do I want to go on a shopping trip like that!

I think it's perfect that Edward and Bella have so much in common; I think it almost always makes a relationship better. Speaking of better, I can't wait for the 'lingerie fashion show'. I'm sure it will be smokin hot.

Have I told you enough how much I love your story? Well, I love your story so much. Thanks for writing.  =)     xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 12 **Playtime**

I don't mean to get all sappy, but...Awww, I love your Edward so much.  =)    xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 11 Conversation Pt.2

I really love Bella's eagerness. Hell, who wouldn't be with Edward as your personal sex guide. *drools* Now, let's go play!  ;)    xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10 Conversation

*Smirks* Am I enjoying this a little too much? Never enough!  ;)  I can't wait for the rest of 'the talk'.  *Giggling wickedly*   =)   xoxo

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2011 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 Experience

Damn, that excerpt you wrote was hot! Oh hell, your whole story is fuck hot. I love it, and I'm thankful that you are writing it. Edward and Bella haven't even made it to the playroom yet, and I'm getting heated up; I can only imagine how these two will sizzle then.  ;O   =)    xoxo

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

this is great

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

loved this chapter looking forward ot the next one 

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Great chapter!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

I am not sure what Bella expected Edward to do while he was making breakfast for the three of them. I think she got a little scared. I hope the family takes the age difference well. Alice knows she is pretty smart.

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

OUCH!  I hope Edward appreciates her pain.  That was a great chapter, but not near enough E&B!  I look forward to more.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Edward should be delighted with the results of her shopping trip. :)

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Loved this chapter!  I can't wait to see Edwards reaction to her new undies and her wax job!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

I loved it.  I am so glad that Edward said that he would want Bella to be his girlfriend more than his sub.  So sweet...

I think that Alice knows that something is up as well, but I think that it is a good thing.

Thank you for update.  Can't wait to see what happens between the two lovers next.  Like when is Edward going to pop Bella's cherry?

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Loved this chapter! Alice has to know something is going on! She may know more about Edward's "other life" than he thinks. And who knows...Alice may have another "life" that Edward doesn't know about. That Maria woman was a little bit obvious. Was that a tease of something more from her character? This story just gets better and batter. I can't wait till Tuesday!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

great update, the first wax is always the hardest lol

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Alice is surely suspecting something, the thing is... Will she say anything? And to whom?
It was an interesting day, Bella enjoyed parts of it more than she thought she would. Others might be seen as necessary, at least that's probably how she is thinking of the waxing.
Then the lingerie... I'm sure Edward will be more than pleased and might be opening Bella an account.
I can't wait for them to get ome and the show to begin!!!!,,

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

I dont think Edward is going to be too pissed about her getting waxed, He will just be having her do other things until shes healed. Im thinking Alice knows that something is up. Now if its that B&E are together or that Bella may have a bf on the side and no one knows, but I do think she knows something is up. Im loving everything about this story. I cant wait to see where you go from here.

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Maria was a bit creepy!  I keep cringing from her painful waxing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 Shopping

Alice and her pixie evil reverse psychology and distraction skills.  She's too funny...up until the rug ripping. 

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