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Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 11:16 AM Title: Fight Club Part One

Glad for the kid time

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:32 AM Title: A Tight Fit

I m just reading now, and i think its awesome and have eveey faith in your master plan!

Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:14 AM Title: To Be Announced

Fun and funny chapter.  Loved it!

Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 12:16 AM Title: Long Drive

Child sex abuse is an important topic to raise.  Hopefully other victims will realize that they are not alone and hopefully let the authorities know...even anonymously--so that others may be saved from the same fate.  Mothers--believe your children and support them!

 

glad you shared Alice's story. 

Reviewer: kuntrygal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:40 PM Title: In Like Flynn

God I love Sonny!

Reviewer: kuntrygal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:35 PM Title: That Thing You Do

good grief I love Sonny! LOL!

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:45 PM Title: A Tight Fit

Just found your stories and I love them bread the quiet storm and now this one. I can't put them down. Read when I'm supposed to be working. I think your brilliant!!! I love that Bella put Viagra in his coffee. That's classic!!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:26 AM Title: NuMb

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:12 AM Title: The Twilight Zone

Loved this chap! The whole bedroom scene and Bella fake snoring was hilarious! Unexpected reaction. This entire series has been soo good! I'm sorry for all the drama I'm reading about after the fact 'cuz it such a good story. 

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 4:14 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

Wow!!  Just fucking Wow!!  I was not expecting that at all...Hope those two can get past this situation soon.  I am certainly glad that Aro is still alive & you are still doing an awesome job at writing this story your way!! 

Reviewer: msedwardcullen121 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:12 PM Title: Bucked Up

reading quiet storm and weather the storm for the 2nd time before reading the next story, really love them will proberly keep reading over and over, totaly lovin your version of edward and bella, totaly want to marry this edward. thanks for writing them.   :-)

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:02 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

It will be my pleasure to read Riders on the Storm. I love A Quiet Storm and Weather the Storm. You are very talented, thank you so much for sharing.

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One

Not sure why you are nervous about this sequel...it continues to be an amazing story...for me anyway...Still love it & all the characters!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:25 PM Title: Craft of the Father

OH MY ROB ! They shoot Sonny, I can't even begin to understand what Bella and Edward must be feeling. Very good chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:06 PM Title: That Thing You Do

This chapter was hilarious. Like father, like son !

Reviewer: Geneva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:21 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

Dayum that was hot ;) I love the passion between Carlisle and Alex... I hope there's more of these two in this story. 

Reviewer: Kirb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: Wag the Dog

Jeez - I soooo didn't see that one coming!  What a great scene with Bella, but poor Bella.  I couldn't figure out what was going on at first.  I wanted to cry myself after the fact.  (I found your story - stories- nearly two weeks ago and have been reading, reading, reading - sucking all the goodness in.  I'm loving it!! Thank you!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:44 PM Title: A Tight Fit

I don't understand the haters, but I think it's only jealousy. We can't deny that you are VERY talented, and I LOVE your fictions MOBWARD and OFFBEAT. I'm a French reader and a huge fan of your fine work. I love what you have done with the characters. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful skills at writing with us.

Reviewer: Geneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:42 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One

Where can I find the outtake por favor?:)

 

Reviewer: Shiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 12:22 AM Title: Craft of the Father

This is too damn sad. Makes my heart bleed thinking about how Edward and Bella feel. Sooooo sad. good overall. Look at spelling and word organization to make it less confusing. 

Reviewer: Geneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 9:24 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

Just as great as quiet storm .... So happy you did a sequel ;)

Reviewer: Geneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: In Like Flynn

Edward and Bella are hilarious as parents!!! And so are their kids. Love this chapter from beginning to end. 

Reviewer: Shiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:55 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

hot scene at the end. I bet that Bella can give Edward good blow jobs. I wish that they can have just one more kid. The way they love each other, I think they can survive with just one more youngster in the house.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:00 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two

I don't blame Bella any wife/mother would do that to whoever hurts the one they love.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:54 AM Title: Craft of the Father

Wow powerful chapter. I couldn't imagine what they are going through.

Reviewer: Shiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:36 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

THere has not been a lot of fucking and getting it on. I love reading about them having sex. It's so nice. Make it kinky like when they have anal sex. I can just imagine both of them having sex. They are such a hot couple. Can u tone it down on all the fights they have. I don't think the real Edward and Bella fought that much. It is kind of scary sometimes.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:25 AM Title: That Thing You Do

Wow talk about a little sex ed in the bathroom.

Reviewer: Shiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:27 PM Title: The Twilight Zone

about time one of their kids catch them having sex. Are they going to go back to fucking like rabbits before all the drama? I find it so hot reading about e&b having sex or fucking like wild animals. Fucking awesome!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:13 AM Title: Great Adventure

Wow nice thing to tell someone at an Amusement Park.  Rose should have come over & told her in private or something.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2012 7:32 AM Title: Long Drive

Oh i like Edward's thought of sticking the nine up his butt.  I also think some kind of slow torture would be fitting end.

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 11:03 AM Title: This Woman's Work



Reviewer: Fraulein Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 11:34 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

So happy that you are continuing this story! I was getting disappointed that this was finally ending - and now it's not!  I've really liked how you've had Edward and Bella evolve over time and how their kids have such great, developed personalities! Off to read part III. Thanks for sharing your great story!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 8:57 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

You know what the wine thing in Europe they allow children to drink wine with their meals & have younger drinking ages.

 

The United states has always had a love/hate relationship when it comes to alocholic beverages.

Personally my mother is an alocholic so I have not let my children have anything until they are of legal age.

Like anything when it comes to raising your kids as long as you are not abusing, endangering, neglicting your children you should raise them how you want to raise them.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:19 AM Title: In Like Flynn

So glad there is a sequel. I think I will go through some kind of withdrawal when I finish reading this series. I love it so much.

Reviewer: Shiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:38 PM Title: Wag the Dog

If Edward ever strayed, I would have fucked him up. He will never do that. It is just WRONG. Towards the end of the chapter, it became sad. I got teary eyed.

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapel Bells

Aww. What a cute ending.

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. And I can't wait to get to read the third installment!! Excited to read about the kids. How many chapters are there going to be in total for that one? Same length as these two?

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:26 AM Title: Craft of the Father

Whoa.. Mama bear. I understand she's upset, but Bella's not like that.. I'm interested in seeing if he gives her those ten minutes.. Is she gonna be strong enough to torture someone?

Sad chapter. Made me cry.. :(

Thanks for sharing. I love this story. The ups and downs, and everything inbetween.. :)

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:19 AM Title: Thanksgiving

Yeah, you can definitely tell Edward isn't interested. He's as you said, "jeolous of anyone who comes between them". In one chapter, he even mentioned that he loved Bella more than his own kids!!

He also hates it when Alex is over. I think her not talking to him and "being rude" is just an excuse he uses to reason with his not liking her.. he doesn't like "rude" people. :P

Another great chapter. I'm curious though.. What's going on with the whole Sonny/Alex thing... I mean, I'm not a boy, so I can't understand, but is this just a little crush. You've mentioned it several times, so I'm just curious as to where that's going.. She's only 12 years older than him.. :P

Thanks for sharing! I love this story. Also, you said that the third installment for this series is going to be short.. What do you mean by that exactly? I mean, these last two were over 40 chapters... And the third one is in the teens.. I haven't started it yet, but is it almost finished? How long is it going to be exactly? I'd like it to be close to finished before I start it. :)

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:41 PM Title: That Thing You Do

Ahah. Sonny is hilarious. So much like Edward. 

Another great chapter. Thanks for sharing!! :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 12:56 AM Title: Well Enough

Wow Renee is something else. I can understand her uneasyness with Derek there, but the way she treated Bella was horrible. And I've got one thing to say about Lauren,,.. You go girl she deserved bella's smack down. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:08 PM Title: Day-to-Day

Carlise that was dastardly what you did to Alex. Usually it's the women who trap the man not the other way. Hope it doesnt blow up in his face. Loved it

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:24 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two

Wow just wow. Great job this was one hell of a chapter. 

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:49 AM Title: Too Many Movies

Holy shit! It's Esme isn't it? Who hired that guy to kill Candance and Carlisle? Wow.. When that happened, I thought about this, but it was more of a "Lol.. What if Esme were to set that up" kinda thing.. That's funny. I guess she really just wanted a son after all, huh? :P

Great story. Thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:43 AM Title: Craft of the Father

That was a hard chapter to read. Poor sonny, he is one tough cookie. It's Dame I'm worried about. He is so sensitive that this is really going to haunt him. 

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:08 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

Oh gosh. This chapter.. I cried. Really hard. I had to stop reading for a minute or two. I don't exactly know where you're going with this, but I'll trust when you say that everything you write is for a reason. Considering I'm reading this SEQUEL, and still love it, that's gotta mean something good. :)

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:28 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two

I'm sorry to have to ask this question, but it's been a while since I read Quiet Storm, and while I should have read that before I started this, I was so excited I just HAD to start this one. Therefore, I'm a little confused on some things and was hoping you could help me out. Was Bella pregnant before she met Edward, and had a miscarriage. Edward mentions that that last miscarriage they had after Damion was born was HIS second and HER third. His because they also had one before Sonny was born, in their first year of marriage.

Also, how old are they? Edward was 25 and Bella was 23 at the start of QS, so.. Two years passed in that book (right?) and then the epilogue was 9 years after that, and this is 2 years after THAT. So, what... Edward is (25+2+9+2) 38 years old? And Bella 36? Is that it. Sorry but I just like to get people's ages right, when I try to picture them and the story in my head.

Great story. I love this. Thank you so much for sharing with us! I can't wait to finish this and start the third one. Their kids, all grown up. Aww! :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:00 PM Title: Thanksgiving

I almost peed my pants when sonny and Katie were hiding in the tub.., and our little perv tried to get Alex to show her boobbies. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:26 PM Title: That Thing You Do

How old is sonny...  He is his fathers son. 

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:57 AM Title: Thou Mayest

Lol.. It seems that only Edward and Bella will be the last couple standing. What happened to these guys? They have so many kids. And it's weird that Carlisle would do this. I still think of the book Carlisle.. Where he's all loving and doting to Esme. It's weird to read about them like this. :P

Another great chapter though. I love this. Your characters are awesome! :)

Also, I saw that you wrote a third installment to this.. That sounds interesting. I can't wait to read that as well! :)

By the way.. Can you please tell me what year this takes place in? I'm thinking way into the future. (iPhone 6? :P) So.. Did the first book take place during present time, or maybe a couple years ago... then this is 12 years into the future? Is that how it is.. So almost 2020? And what, the third takes place in the 2030s?

Thanks for sharing. :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:48 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

Sure hope Aro finds someone too. Let's hope carlise doesnt blow it

Reviewer: edwardxbellaforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:52 AM Title: Indemnity

So.. Candace is the 16 year old girl Carlisle slept with, before Quiet Storm even began? So, 13 years later... She's what? 29 years old now? And she had Anthony at 26? Then how come [I think it was Aro who] said that she had a baby at such a young age...? That kinda confused me a bit..

Aww. Poor Bella. Carlisle really messed things up, huh? I hope he tells Esme. And soon! I remember you said in an AN or something that he isn't done messing up yet, and now I'm wondering if this is what you meant, or if he's gonna do more stupid shit. Also, I cheated and looked on your blog at things for this story. I saw the collage of pictures you put of the people, and you put one of Carlisle and a 'Alexandra' all by themselves. And Esme wasn't in the one of all the characters. Makes me sad.. Is she gonna kill herself or something? And Carlisle meets someone he actually loves?

Anyways.. Great story. Just wanted to say that really. I haven't left a review here before, but I'll try to from now on. Your stories are great and you deserve to know it!Thanks for sharing your wonderful words!!! Your Edward/Bella from this Storm series are one of my all-time favourites. They are amazing together! :) :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:32 AM Title: Love and Happiness

Loved jealous Bella...  She sure took that girl down .  Can you immagine if that cop went to attest Bella. Hell have no furry as Edward protecting Bella. 

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 2:28 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

I let my daughter have a sip of my wine once, went to the bathroom, came back and see she drank the whole glass! Little shit!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:50 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

yay a whole new story with the skip and his tribe! can't wait to see what the kids are like all growed up. guessing they are still all a hand full! lol

thank you for sharing your story

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapel Bells

sucks about the baby but the wedding goes on, they love eachother and thats what counts. so cute how this really does bring them back around full circle starting and ending off at c's wedding...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Long Day

sorry ed with your track record saying it is not enough. gotta show it every day.

love the family interaction. and the phone calls to the wives? so funny

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:15 PM Title: Now and Then

heehee poor lizzie and hanna wanting strippers. lol

glad to see the little bits of 'normal' that they all get in their lives...

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: Long Drive

I was raised with an abusive step father. I think all child molesters should have their hands and dicks cut off. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:33 AM Title: NuMb

Wow I actually felt sorry for carlise. Esme not so much. I have to wonder if she was behind jr. 

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Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:18 PM Title: Breaking Dawn

Wow that was some great lemons 

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Date: 01 Sep 2012 3:20 PM Title: The Twilight Zone

Loved it. Glad to see Edward didn't run again when Bella confronted him. 

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 8:39 PM Title: Blondie

Wow Esme... Never saw that coming. Great twist. 

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Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:49 PM Title: A Tight Fit

I realized that after starting the 3rd sequel that fir some reason i never read the 2nd one. So I'm doing that now. I have to say you are doing an amazing job. I may not agree with everything that Bella and Edward do but I love the story and you should always write the way you want. If someone doesn't like it they don't have to read it. Now that I've gotten that off my chest on to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: italianlady91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:40 AM Title: Too Many Movies

Okay. I've been reading this straight through the past couple of days. And can I say that I absolutely LOVE this! I had a mini heart attack when Edward Sai he killed aro. I wanted to cry. And now with esme!!! All I can say is that bitch!!! 

Well I love your stories. All of them. And ignore those haters! You're wonderful!

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:16 AM Title: Eclipse

You are a great writer, very exciting and powerful story. Please do not let others bring you down. Stay strong and stay with it. I have not had 2 stories keep my interest like this ever b4! I was to busy reading to post a BIG THANK YOU. Please do not sugar coat it into boring PLEASE

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapel Bells

awwwww that was awesome 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:06 PM Title: Long Day

well looks like eddie has some work cut out for him 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:34 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement

Yes, I'm very interested & thrilled that you are continuing with this 'can of worms' you started. I love all these new off spring characters. Can't wait 'till Wed!:-)

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:40 AM Title: Part 3 Announcement

So excited you are elongating it... Absolutely love this trilogy :) 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:46 AM Title: Now and Then

i wonder what was up with the money 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:54 AM Title: Day-to-Day

well hell 

that was awesome 

nice chapter btw.  i thin kalex doesnt love carlisle 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:30 AM Title: Logic

heheeheh kylie is freaking hilarious 

i loved the chapter wow 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:10 AM Title: Days Like This

well snap that was defintely an intense chapter!

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Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:55 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two

well shit 

i think they have alot to work on now 

dont they 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One

sht bella drove him over the edge and i will be shocked if he doesnt get arrested becuase of his anger 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: This Woman's Work

holy hell things are going to get out of hand arent they 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:44 PM Title: Craft of the Father

mamma bear has come out to play that was a scarey chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:09 AM Title: Thanksgiving

well shit carlisle freaked the flip out 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:48 AM Title: That Thing You Do

LOLOL well hot damn!

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:43 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

well heck 

that was definitely interesting and yuck vomit lol and carlisle jealous i lol-ed 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:50 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

well then that was definitely interesting chapter 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 11:46 AM Title: Fork Me

giggles that was awesome 

heheheh :D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:15 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two

aww her dad doesn seem bad at all i guess she gets her rambling from him 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:39 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part One

awww all lovey dovey 

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:15 AM Title: Members Only

well hell that was insane 

nice chapter though loads of drama im so sad to see nanny die though :( 

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Blondie

This shit is so real.  Not enough words. Awesome writing.  

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Too Many Movies

I am late getting into this story.  Absolutley loved Quiet Storm.  In reading the authors notes I am shocked that certain readers have been mean.  You have a talent that few possess.  Your style is gritty, edgy and fierce.  I read passages to my husband who thinks this should be made into a movie.  As for the others, they have an option. STOP READING.  I think they like to flame because they can or are stupid. Your story makes me think; shudder, cry and get very emotional.  I am mature.  Have read many books; published and on fanfiction.  THIS SHOULD BE PUBLISHED>  It's vivid and real.  Better than the SOPRANOS>  I follow you on Facebook.  You make my day.  Never listen to the few.  They don't get it.  Write for us; your true readership.  And by the way, I don't leave reviews for you to respond.  It's just to let you know, I am here and a fan.

Linda from Michigan(formerly Bay Ridge Brooklyn)

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:00 PM Title: Love and Happiness

well shit on a stick 

shit just went to hell 

didnt it 

if sehs flipped whose side is she on and who does she have with her 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:40 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

they are totally going to off esme 

eh 

isnt he 

damn 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One

i wonder if edward will still off esme 

if bella were to talk to him about it 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Fight Club Part Two

i had to skip the part where he you know 

but heck edward enjoys his torture 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:32 PM Title: Fight Club Part One

i hope aro doesnt try to off him! 

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:21 PM Title: Requiem for a Dream

well heck 

that was insane 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:33 AM Title: Voices Carry Part Two

well that was one heck of a chapter 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:44 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One

wow 

that was defintiely an interesting chapter !

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:47 AM Title: Great Adventure

well damn to hell who was bellas father?!?!? 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:05 AM Title: Long Drive

well hell that was intense! 

i dunno what to say 

i wonder what jasper and edward will plan 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:06 PM Title: Breaking Dawn

well shit that was insane 

wonder if esme is really that stupid 

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:43 PM Title: Intricate Dance

other then her threatening esme lol

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:45 PM Title: Aro's Daycare

giggles* aro is awesome 

stilla ho but aweome 

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