Date: 18 Dec 2012 11:16 AM Title: Fight Club Part One
Glad for the kid time
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:32 AM Title: A Tight Fit
I m just reading now, and i think its awesome and have eveey faith in your master plan!
Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:14 AM Title: To Be Announced
Fun and funny chapter. Loved it!
Date: 15 Dec 2012 12:16 AM Title: Long Drive
Child sex abuse is an important topic to raise. Hopefully other victims will realize that they are not alone and hopefully let the authorities know...even anonymously--so that others may be saved from the same fate. Mothers--believe your children and support them!
glad you shared Alice's story.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:40 PM Title: In Like Flynn
God I love Sonny!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:35 PM Title: That Thing You Do
good grief I love Sonny! LOL!
Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:45 PM Title: A Tight Fit
Just found your stories and I love them bread the quiet storm and now this one. I can't put them down. Read when I'm supposed to be working. I think your brilliant!!! I love that Bella put Viagra in his coffee. That's classic!!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:12 AM Title: The Twilight Zone
Loved this chap! The whole bedroom scene and Bella fake snoring was hilarious! Unexpected reaction. This entire series has been soo good! I'm sorry for all the drama I'm reading about after the fact 'cuz it such a good story.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 4:14 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
Wow!! Just fucking Wow!! I was not expecting that at all...Hope those two can get past this situation soon. I am certainly glad that Aro is still alive & you are still doing an awesome job at writing this story your way!!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:12 PM Title: Bucked Up
reading quiet storm and weather the storm for the 2nd time before reading the next story, really love them will proberly keep reading over and over, totaly lovin your version of edward and bella, totaly want to marry this edward. thanks for writing them. :-)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:02 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement
It will be my pleasure to read Riders on the Storm. I love A Quiet Storm and Weather the Storm. You are very talented, thank you so much for sharing.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One
Not sure why you are nervous about this sequel...it continues to be an amazing story...for me anyway...Still love it & all the characters!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:25 PM Title: Craft of the Father
OH MY ROB ! They shoot Sonny, I can't even begin to understand what Bella and Edward must be feeling. Very good chapter, thank you.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:06 PM Title: That Thing You Do
This chapter was hilarious. Like father, like son !
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:21 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Dayum that was hot ;) I love the passion between Carlisle and Alex... I hope there's more of these two in this story.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:06 PM Title: Wag the Dog
Jeez - I soooo didn't see that one coming! What a great scene with Bella, but poor Bella. I couldn't figure out what was going on at first. I wanted to cry myself after the fact. (I found your story - stories- nearly two weeks ago and have been reading, reading, reading - sucking all the goodness in. I'm loving it!! Thank you!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:44 PM Title: A Tight Fit
I don't understand the haters, but I think it's only jealousy. We can't deny that you are VERY talented, and I LOVE your fictions MOBWARD and OFFBEAT. I'm a French reader and a huge fan of your fine work. I love what you have done with the characters. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful skills at writing with us.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:42 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One
Where can I find the outtake por favor?:)
Date: 04 Oct 2012 12:22 AM Title: Craft of the Father
This is too damn sad. Makes my heart bleed thinking about how Edward and Bella feel. Sooooo sad. good overall. Look at spelling and word organization to make it less confusing.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 9:24 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
Just as great as quiet storm .... So happy you did a sequel ;)
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:08 AM Title: In Like Flynn
Edward and Bella are hilarious as parents!!! And so are their kids. Love this chapter from beginning to end.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 3:55 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
hot scene at the end. I bet that Bella can give Edward good blow jobs. I wish that they can have just one more kid. The way they love each other, I think they can survive with just one more youngster in the house.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:00 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
I don't blame Bella any wife/mother would do that to whoever hurts the one they love.
Date: 28 Sep 2012 5:54 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Wow powerful chapter. I couldn't imagine what they are going through.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:36 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
THere has not been a lot of fucking and getting it on. I love reading about them having sex. It's so nice. Make it kinky like when they have anal sex. I can just imagine both of them having sex. They are such a hot couple. Can u tone it down on all the fights they have. I don't think the real Edward and Bella fought that much. It is kind of scary sometimes.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:25 AM Title: That Thing You Do
Wow talk about a little sex ed in the bathroom.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:27 PM Title: The Twilight Zone
about time one of their kids catch them having sex. Are they going to go back to fucking like rabbits before all the drama? I find it so hot reading about e&b having sex or fucking like wild animals. Fucking awesome!
Date: 22 Sep 2012 9:13 AM Title: Great Adventure
Wow nice thing to tell someone at an Amusement Park. Rose should have come over & told her in private or something.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 7:32 AM Title: Long Drive
Oh i like Edward's thought of sticking the nine up his butt. I also think some kind of slow torture would be fitting end.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 11:34 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement
So happy that you are continuing this story! I was getting disappointed that this was finally ending - and now it's not! I've really liked how you've had Edward and Bella evolve over time and how their kids have such great, developed personalities! Off to read part III. Thanks for sharing your great story!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 8:57 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
You know what the wine thing in Europe they allow children to drink wine with their meals & have younger drinking ages.
The United states has always had a love/hate relationship when it comes to alocholic beverages.
Personally my mother is an alocholic so I have not let my children have anything until they are of legal age.
Like anything when it comes to raising your kids as long as you are not abusing, endangering, neglicting your children you should raise them how you want to raise them.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 6:19 AM Title: In Like Flynn
So glad there is a sequel. I think I will go through some kind of withdrawal when I finish reading this series. I love it so much.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:38 PM Title: Wag the Dog
If Edward ever strayed, I would have fucked him up. He will never do that. It is just WRONG. Towards the end of the chapter, it became sad. I got teary eyed.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapel Bells
Aww. What a cute ending.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. And I can't wait to get to read the third installment!! Excited to read about the kids. How many chapters are there going to be in total for that one? Same length as these two?
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:26 AM Title: Craft of the Father
Whoa.. Mama bear. I understand she's upset, but Bella's not like that.. I'm interested in seeing if he gives her those ten minutes.. Is she gonna be strong enough to torture someone?
Sad chapter. Made me cry.. :(
Thanks for sharing. I love this story. The ups and downs, and everything inbetween.. :)
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:19 AM Title: Thanksgiving
Yeah, you can definitely tell Edward isn't interested. He's as you said, "jeolous of anyone who comes between them". In one chapter, he even mentioned that he loved Bella more than his own kids!!
He also hates it when Alex is over. I think her not talking to him and "being rude" is just an excuse he uses to reason with his not liking her.. he doesn't like "rude" people. :P
Another great chapter. I'm curious though.. What's going on with the whole Sonny/Alex thing... I mean, I'm not a boy, so I can't understand, but is this just a little crush. You've mentioned it several times, so I'm just curious as to where that's going.. She's only 12 years older than him.. :P
Thanks for sharing! I love this story. Also, you said that the third installment for this series is going to be short.. What do you mean by that exactly? I mean, these last two were over 40 chapters... And the third one is in the teens.. I haven't started it yet, but is it almost finished? How long is it going to be exactly? I'd like it to be close to finished before I start it. :)
Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:41 PM Title: That Thing You Do
Ahah. Sonny is hilarious. So much like Edward.
Another great chapter. Thanks for sharing!! :)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 12:56 AM Title: Well Enough
Wow Renee is something else. I can understand her uneasyness with Derek there, but the way she treated Bella was horrible. And I've got one thing to say about Lauren,,.. You go girl she deserved bella's smack down.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:08 PM Title: Day-to-Day
Carlise that was dastardly what you did to Alex. Usually it's the women who trap the man not the other way. Hope it doesnt blow up in his face. Loved it
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:24 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
Wow just wow. Great job this was one hell of a chapter.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:49 AM Title: Too Many Movies
Holy shit! It's Esme isn't it? Who hired that guy to kill Candance and Carlisle? Wow.. When that happened, I thought about this, but it was more of a "Lol.. What if Esme were to set that up" kinda thing.. That's funny. I guess she really just wanted a son after all, huh? :P
Great story. Thanks for sharing. :)
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:43 AM Title: Craft of the Father
That was a hard chapter to read. Poor sonny, he is one tough cookie. It's Dame I'm worried about. He is so sensitive that this is really going to haunt him.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:08 AM Title: Two Weeks Later
Oh gosh. This chapter.. I cried. Really hard. I had to stop reading for a minute or two. I don't exactly know where you're going with this, but I'll trust when you say that everything you write is for a reason. Considering I'm reading this SEQUEL, and still love it, that's gotta mean something good. :)
Thanks for sharing.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:28 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two
I'm sorry to have to ask this question, but it's been a while since I read Quiet Storm, and while I should have read that before I started this, I was so excited I just HAD to start this one. Therefore, I'm a little confused on some things and was hoping you could help me out. Was Bella pregnant before she met Edward, and had a miscarriage. Edward mentions that that last miscarriage they had after Damion was born was HIS second and HER third. His because they also had one before Sonny was born, in their first year of marriage.
Also, how old are they? Edward was 25 and Bella was 23 at the start of QS, so.. Two years passed in that book (right?) and then the epilogue was 9 years after that, and this is 2 years after THAT. So, what... Edward is (25+2+9+2) 38 years old? And Bella 36? Is that it. Sorry but I just like to get people's ages right, when I try to picture them and the story in my head.
Great story. I love this. Thank you so much for sharing with us! I can't wait to finish this and start the third one. Their kids, all grown up. Aww! :)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:00 PM Title: Thanksgiving
I almost peed my pants when sonny and Katie were hiding in the tub.., and our little perv tried to get Alex to show her boobbies.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:26 PM Title: That Thing You Do
How old is sonny... He is his fathers son.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:57 AM Title: Thou Mayest
Lol.. It seems that only Edward and Bella will be the last couple standing. What happened to these guys? They have so many kids. And it's weird that Carlisle would do this. I still think of the book Carlisle.. Where he's all loving and doting to Esme. It's weird to read about them like this. :P
Another great chapter though. I love this. Your characters are awesome! :)
Also, I saw that you wrote a third installment to this.. That sounds interesting. I can't wait to read that as well! :)
By the way.. Can you please tell me what year this takes place in? I'm thinking way into the future. (iPhone 6? :P) So.. Did the first book take place during present time, or maybe a couple years ago... then this is 12 years into the future? Is that how it is.. So almost 2020? And what, the third takes place in the 2030s?
Thanks for sharing. :)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:48 AM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
Sure hope Aro finds someone too. Let's hope carlise doesnt blow it
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:52 AM Title: Indemnity
So.. Candace is the 16 year old girl Carlisle slept with, before Quiet Storm even began? So, 13 years later... She's what? 29 years old now? And she had Anthony at 26? Then how come [I think it was Aro who] said that she had a baby at such a young age...? That kinda confused me a bit..
Aww. Poor Bella. Carlisle really messed things up, huh? I hope he tells Esme. And soon! I remember you said in an AN or something that he isn't done messing up yet, and now I'm wondering if this is what you meant, or if he's gonna do more stupid shit. Also, I cheated and looked on your blog at things for this story. I saw the collage of pictures you put of the people, and you put one of Carlisle and a 'Alexandra' all by themselves. And Esme wasn't in the one of all the characters. Makes me sad.. Is she gonna kill herself or something? And Carlisle meets someone he actually loves?
Anyways.. Great story. Just wanted to say that really. I haven't left a review here before, but I'll try to from now on. Your stories are great and you deserve to know it!Thanks for sharing your wonderful words!!! Your Edward/Bella from this Storm series are one of my all-time favourites. They are amazing together! :) :)
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:32 AM Title: Love and Happiness
Loved jealous Bella... She sure took that girl down . Can you immagine if that cop went to attest Bella. Hell have no furry as Edward protecting Bella.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 2:28 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
I let my daughter have a sip of my wine once, went to the bathroom, came back and see she drank the whole glass! Little shit!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:50 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement
yay a whole new story with the skip and his tribe! can't wait to see what the kids are like all growed up. guessing they are still all a hand full! lol
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 02 Sep 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapel Bells
sucks about the baby but the wedding goes on, they love eachother and thats what counts. so cute how this really does bring them back around full circle starting and ending off at c's wedding...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Long Day
sorry ed with your track record saying it is not enough. gotta show it every day.
love the family interaction. and the phone calls to the wives? so funny
Date: 02 Sep 2012 6:15 PM Title: Now and Then
heehee poor lizzie and hanna wanting strippers. lol
glad to see the little bits of 'normal' that they all get in their lives...
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: Long Drive
I was raised with an abusive step father. I think all child molesters should have their hands and dicks cut off.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:33 AM Title: NuMb
Wow I actually felt sorry for carlise. Esme not so much. I have to wonder if she was behind jr.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 10:18 PM Title: Breaking Dawn
Wow that was some great lemons
Date: 01 Sep 2012 3:20 PM Title: The Twilight Zone
Loved it. Glad to see Edward didn't run again when Bella confronted him.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 8:39 PM Title: Blondie
Wow Esme... Never saw that coming. Great twist.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:49 PM Title: A Tight Fit
I realized that after starting the 3rd sequel that fir some reason i never read the 2nd one. So I'm doing that now. I have to say you are doing an amazing job. I may not agree with everything that Bella and Edward do but I love the story and you should always write the way you want. If someone doesn't like it they don't have to read it. Now that I've gotten that off my chest on to the next chapter.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:40 AM Title: Too Many Movies
Okay. I've been reading this straight through the past couple of days. And can I say that I absolutely LOVE this! I had a mini heart attack when Edward Sai he killed aro. I wanted to cry. And now with esme!!! All I can say is that bitch!!!
Well I love your stories. All of them. And ignore those haters! You're wonderful!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:16 AM Title: Eclipse
You are a great writer, very exciting and powerful story. Please do not let others bring you down. Stay strong and stay with it. I have not had 2 stories keep my interest like this ever b4! I was to busy reading to post a BIG THANK YOU. Please do not sugar coat it into boring PLEASE
Date: 25 Aug 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapel Bells
awwwww that was awesome
Date: 24 Aug 2012 6:06 PM Title: Long Day
well looks like eddie has some work cut out for him
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:34 PM Title: Part 3 Announcement
Yes, I'm very interested & thrilled that you are continuing with this 'can of worms' you started. I love all these new off spring characters. Can't wait 'till Wed!:-)
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:40 AM Title: Part 3 Announcement
So excited you are elongating it... Absolutely love this trilogy :)
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:46 AM Title: Now and Then
i wonder what was up with the money
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:54 AM Title: Day-to-Day
well hell
that was awesome
nice chapter btw. i thin kalex doesnt love carlisle
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:30 AM Title: Logic
heheeheh kylie is freaking hilarious
i loved the chapter wow
Date: 24 Aug 2012 1:10 AM Title: Days Like This
well snap that was defintely an intense chapter!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:55 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part Two
well shit
i think they have alot to work on now
dont they
Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One
sht bella drove him over the edge and i will be shocked if he doesnt get arrested becuase of his anger
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: This Woman's Work
holy hell things are going to get out of hand arent they
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:44 PM Title: Craft of the Father
mamma bear has come out to play that was a scarey chapter!!!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 5:09 AM Title: Thanksgiving
well shit carlisle freaked the flip out
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:48 AM Title: That Thing You Do
LOLOL well hot damn!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:43 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two
well heck
that was definitely interesting and yuck vomit lol and carlisle jealous i lol-ed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:50 PM Title: The Cupid Shuffle Part One
well then that was definitely interesting chapter
Date: 22 Aug 2012 11:46 AM Title: Fork Me
giggles that was awesome
heheheh :D
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:15 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part Two
aww her dad doesn seem bad at all i guess she gets her rambling from him
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:39 AM Title: Trick or Treat Part One
awww all lovey dovey
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:15 AM Title: Members Only
well hell that was insane
nice chapter though loads of drama im so sad to see nanny die though :(
Date: 21 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Blondie
This shit is so real. Not enough words. Awesome writing.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Too Many Movies
I am late getting into this story. Absolutley loved Quiet Storm. In reading the authors notes I am shocked that certain readers have been mean. You have a talent that few possess. Your style is gritty, edgy and fierce. I read passages to my husband who thinks this should be made into a movie. As for the others, they have an option. STOP READING. I think they like to flame because they can or are stupid. Your story makes me think; shudder, cry and get very emotional. I am mature. Have read many books; published and on fanfiction. THIS SHOULD BE PUBLISHED> It's vivid and real. Better than the SOPRANOS> I follow you on Facebook. You make my day. Never listen to the few. They don't get it. Write for us; your true readership. And by the way, I don't leave reviews for you to respond. It's just to let you know, I am here and a fan.
Linda from Michigan(formerly Bay Ridge Brooklyn)
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:00 PM Title: Love and Happiness
well shit on a stick
shit just went to hell
didnt it
if sehs flipped whose side is she on and who does she have with her
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:40 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
they are totally going to off esme
eh
isnt he
damn
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:15 PM Title: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One
i wonder if edward will still off esme
if bella were to talk to him about it
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Fight Club Part Two
i had to skip the part where he you know
but heck edward enjoys his torture
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:32 PM Title: Fight Club Part One
i hope aro doesnt try to off him!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:21 PM Title: Requiem for a Dream
well heck
that was insane
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:33 AM Title: Voices Carry Part Two
well that was one heck of a chapter
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:44 AM Title: Voices Carry Part One
wow
that was defintiely an interesting chapter !
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:47 AM Title: Great Adventure
well damn to hell who was bellas father?!?!?
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:05 AM Title: Long Drive
well hell that was intense!
i dunno what to say
i wonder what jasper and edward will plan
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:06 PM Title: Breaking Dawn
well shit that was insane
wonder if esme is really that stupid
Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:43 PM Title: Intricate Dance
other then her threatening esme lol
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:45 PM Title: Aro's Daycare
giggles* aro is awesome
stilla ho but aweome