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Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

i think they are going to fight a bit more before things are going to get better arent they 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:45 AM Title: Blondie

well shit 

that shits off the hook 

and crazy ! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:25 AM Title: Too Many Movies

ohhh shit 

ESME !!!??? she is MArcus's daughter isnt she

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:12 AM Title: A Tight Fit

well heck 

3 mill? dang i wish i had that amount of money lol 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:49 AM Title: Eclipse

awwww im so damn glad that he didnt kill aro 

but that was one insane chapter dunno even where to begin 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:21 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

well shit on a stick everything was going to blow out of proportion no 

dang 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:43 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part Two

please dont kill aro please edward dont kill aro 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:01 AM Title: Bitter Fruit Part One

well shit 

things are going to be intense i hope he doesnt off aro please dont off aro eddie 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 7:01 PM Title: Bucked Up

well shit 

that was freaking nutzo! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chasing Regret

well shit fbi on there ass eh 

that just makes it even more insane! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 6:15 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep

hot damn looks like jersey is going down 

 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 5:26 PM Title: Thou Mayest

hea for edward and bella is all i care about lol 

im mean i know but i love aro; i hope he doesnt cheat with esme 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 4:56 PM Title: Misery Loves Company

giggles 

oved this chapter 

ahahha :D bella told em all off 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:10 PM Title: This Time Around

ohhhh carlisle is in trouble! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 4:11 AM Title: Wag the Dog

oh shit on a stick that was insane!

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:34 AM Title: And Once More for Luck

awww they kissed and made up :D 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:18 AM Title: Knee-Jerk Reaction

oh dear those two bicker too much 

lol 

 

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:44 PM Title: In Like Flynn

I am in LOVE with that damn kid. So naughty.

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:45 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

well frick looks like a war is on the horizon! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 7:00 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water Part One

wel damn sonny is too smart for his own good time to man up eddie boy! 

Reviewer: trojanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 6:42 PM Title: In Like Flynn

I love your turn with this chapter in the cullen lives.I am really interested in what they do. I have been following weather the storm since it was the storm, and I was at the point where i was just trying to get through to the end, But you have brought new life into this story.

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 6:09 PM Title: Conformity

loveed it that was definitely awesome sauce 

that roger looks like trouble! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 5:30 PM Title: In Like Flynn

loved it 

good chat daddymafiaward lol 

Reviewer: TREAVAEMAITLY Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 12:38 PM Title: And Once More for Luck

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Reviewer: louanne61 Signed star [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:24 PM Title: Long Day

I found this chapter heavy going I really couldn't get into it sorry xx

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 1:57 PM Title: Well Enough

I'm glad she hit Lauren she had that coming for ages. I'm also glad she stood up to her mother to. xx

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 22

I am LOVING THIS!!!!   Fantastic chapter hon!  Keeping fingers crossed that Aro will pull his head out soon as I'd hate to see him get clipped ;o)

 

 

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:29 PM Title: That Thing You Do

I think Edward is right about Alex. She wants to be the centre of everything. I don't like her .x

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 8:48 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

Girl, I had heart failure reading this! lol

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 11:56 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep

Eeeee, I'm on the edge of my seat!  Oh No's!

Reviewer: shirleypositive72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 5:38 AM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

My father is Italian-American, and Sonny with the freakin wine bottle killed me! My dad started slipping me whine when I was 9 to "help me sleep." He convinced my very Southern, Irish-American mother to allow watered down wine with meals. We build up a tolerance, us Italian kids. LOL!!

Reviewer: hiii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:58 AM Title: Riders of the Storm Part One

Hey, I noticed you mention Israel a lot in this story and I was juuuuust wondering... Are you Pro-Israel or Pro-Palestine? : ) I looooove the story btw. Your wirting is magnificent and I read like 15 chapters at a time :D

Reviewer: Turanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:53 AM Title: The Twilight Zone

SexiLexi here's my two cents. This is your story so write it the way you want to. Don't apologize to anyone for how the story goes. Each one of us readers will take bits and pieces of the story and either like it or hate it but it's NOT our choice to decide the outcome. I'm enjoying the ride and can't stop reading to the point of neglecting all others. 

Reviewer: Turanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:19 AM Title: Eclipse

I'll say it again. Aro is my fav!!!!

Reviewer: Turanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:11 AM Title: Two Weeks Later

Dear God Girl!!  That was messed up but I couldn't stop reading......

Reviewer: Turanga Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:51 AM Title: Thou Mayest

Chapter just made me like Aro more and want to join in on a blanket party for Carlisle!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapel Bells

How did I miss this chapter? Don't know but I'm glad I found it. Edward & Aro up to their badass & lovin ways, I'm gonna miss that.

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Two Weeks Later

Man....I was so pissed off at you.  When I read that Edward killed Aro....I was fucking freaking out and was talking to myself and my husband thought that I  was nuts.  I am so glad that you didn't do because I LOVE ARO!!!!   I always love Edward and I  understand that he isthe mafia boss, but he loves Aro too.  His day was just fucked up too.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapel Bells

So great...

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapel Bells

wow, j<adore!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapel Bells

great chapter lexi.  I love the family life that they have right now.  Sonny - such the little man.  sad about alex,but it's nice the see Carlisle so supportive.

Reviewer: malleigh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapel Bells

You have a talent for writing dialogue that is tremendous. The sex isn't bad either. This chapter like the many before is just perfect. I wonder what M.'s reaction is.

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapel Bells

I love this Bella and Edward! I hate knowing that this story is finishing up but I can't wait to see how Edward is going to be when Kylie is older :)

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapel Bells

Oh Damn, this was a long ass chapter. :) But so good...I loved it and it ended perfectly...

I don't know why you put in the AN at the beginning regarding E/B and no cheating. I know that won't happen, but other people still might think the skip will...*shakes head*

I'm looking forward to the next journey for them.

Will we seeing your new story soon-Copward?

Reviewer: Erica Neese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapel Bells

I am so sad for this to be ending!  I mean 16 years into the future is he even gonna be our Skip anymore and we know our Bebella cant really still be a badass I am depressed LOL  I guess it couldnt last forever. I am gonna have to reread all over again from the beginning!  I love this story great chapter

Reviewer: marysway Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapel Bells

Looking forward to the future. Sad about Alex. At first I thought maybe she aborted. I hope that's not the case. Since she went through with the wedding. I assume she didn't. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapel Bells

Nope.... it never gets old reading about them. I love your Edward and Bella and will miss them so much when this story ends.

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapel Bells

Such a fabulous story!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapel Bells

I loved the chapter! so sad for Alex, but she is young and Carlisle does love her. They'll make it.

One of the things that I loved abotu this whole story is the flows on the characters, so many stories start with them, only to turn them perfect at the end. But you, you kept them flawed and REAL even in a surreal world.

Be proud of what you've written, I'm honestly proud to hav shared this journey with you.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: poppyseed43 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapel Bells

Hello Lexi, Thnaks for the chapter. Iam going to miss this family as I miss all your families. Fortunately you always come up with a new story which grabs my attention right away. You are definitely at the top of my fav authors' list as your stories are always absorbing and you finish them in a timely fashion. Thanks again for the great stories.

Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapel Bells

<3 I just love this story! I feel like I actually know these people, it's so well written!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapel Bells

Great chapter as always, though I'm kind of sad for this time period to end.  I do look forward to the time jump though.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapel Bells

wow. that was interesting for a last chapter....kind of like, just another day in the life of the Cullens....and I guess that would be exactly a fitting ending to this tale. It's like we don't need a dramatic ending to close out their lives because life goes on just like this for them each and every day.  I really really really love these 2 stories, QS and this one. From the first chapter of QS to the last in this time frame, I have enjoyed every minute, every word. it feels like real life with it's messes, its ups and downs, instead of some tied up in a neat package story.  Thanks for the ride. I look forward to the future takes...

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapel Bells

good chapter. it will be interesting to see an older e/b and the next generation older :)

Reviewer: bella ami Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapel Bells

*SOB*  Even though there's more to the story, this feels like the end!  BooHOO!!!!!

I swear I dream Mob stuff once a week because of this story!

Your lemons are the most real ever...true to life; at least my life! 

xoxox

ba

Reviewer: Ladybear Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapel Bells

Loved the chapter and loved the Playful skip and Bella!

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapel Bells

Loved this chapter! I just absolutely adore this crazy family!

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:00 PM Title: The Twilight Zone

I remember those days well when the kids just came into the bedroom. I hope Bella and Edward work things out. I know everything can't be all a rose garden but they should get some happiness xx

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 22

It did actualy read that Edward wanted to be with other women sorry Lexi. But the more I read about Edward in this story the more I think Bella would be better with out him

It does come across as he only see's her as a trophy. Does he still love her like he use to ?

I wonder if she left him would he go looking for her or would he go for her just to make a point. He seemss to like to be cruel to her. It makes me so sad xx

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapel Bells

Great Chapter. I read the warning & it didn't find anything 2 emotional or bad, so I was a little confused. But, I guess u mean the Alex/pregnancy situation. Still didn't anything of it. Hope she doesn't lose the baby tho & I am glad her & Carlisle is still going thru the wedding.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapel Bells

 i loved it, lol, u know my kids have asked several times why when they cry i call them my mush monsters. lol i have no idea what to tell them lmao. love all ur storys i just wanted you to know.......

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:20 AM Title: Chapel Bells

Ahhhhhh.... I know we still have. Inch of chapter left but I really felt the sense of wrapping it up in this one. So cute their little family down the aisle. It's alma of like theyre renewing heir vows with kids involved. Love seeing a grown up mafiaward... Soooo smexy!!!

Reviewer: scmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapel Bells

so sweet =)

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:57 AM Title: Blondie

I  know you said that Bella and Edward would not have an affair or split , but the way Edward is it seems like he doesn't care any more about Bella. He doesn't seem to be making an effort with her any more maybe I'm wrong but that's how it is coming across. It makes me sad xx

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:36 AM Title: Eclipse

I hate that any author receives messages that are hate filled!!  You are a WONDERFUL writer and most of us truly appreciate your talents!!  Please don't let those bully's win and keep doing what you do best and write wonderful stories!!  Thank you!  I know that can't make up for hurt feelings but it comes from the heart!

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 11:12 PM Title: A Tight Fit

This is so sad, Edward is really beating himself up over what happened. If he is not careful he will never be able to have sex with her again. Well written Lexi xx

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:50 PM Title: Eclipse

It's great to see Aro back. I can't help but think that Bella and Edward are still not back to normal xx

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 8:54 PM Title: Two Weeks Later

I know Edward was insanely jealous and possessive but this took it to a new level. I notived that they never made up like they usually do. I don't think there relationship will ever be the same again. I loved the old Edward and Bella please bring them back xx

Reviewer: Ms G Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:07 PM Title: Thou Mayest

I love it. So many different POV's. We got a chance to see that skank azz Lauren for what she really is. Who is the guy she will like to know "better"? I hope it is not Edward, because MC will seriously hurt her azz. I am so glad you keep reminding us that E&B will not cheat and will have a HEA. If E&B cheated on each other i would not be able to continued. You are an amazing, amazing writer but i feel so connected to this Edward and Bella. This is the best E&B i have ever read. I would just be devastated if they cheated on each other. What they have is so special. They are truly soulmates and no one else would put up with their bullshit because they are both nuts. Poor Aro. Edward would never ever let Bella go. Carlisle is such a dog. Esme needs to have herself tested. She may be HIV positive. He sleeps around and has unprotected  sex with any skank that looks his way. Now he has a child outside his marriage. Esme is less than a woman to put up with his shit. He had sex with that skank Jane at his own wedding reception. How many bastard kids of his will pop up. I think he loves Esme but he is not in love with her. If he was he would not have done the shit that he has been doing.

Reviewer: piffle04 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 1:13 PM Title: Long Day

Loved it as always.

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:17 PM Title: Rolling in the Deep

Oh my goodness I can't believe you shot Aro. I hope he does'nt die x

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 7:13 PM Title: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two

I think if you as the parent are in your own home and can supervise then allowing kids to sip wine is ok.  They do it in Europe (France especially) all the time.  I think if we talk with our kids realistically then we can avoid behaviors that might lead to difficult situations.  However, if we say absolutely not to something it makes them want to do it all the more.  Edward might have let Sonny have too much but it wasn't malicious.

Reviewer: Satiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 12:45 AM Title: Long Day

OMG! I have to say I love this story I've now finished your first story and am now caught up on the sequel. I've read oth your stories in a week and a half. I've been so invested in this and I love everything about some good ass writing! :)

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 5:31 AM Title: Long Day

Love me some Kylie & Daddy. Too funny.  Pushy... . You got me belly laughing. Such a great story!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:21 AM Title: Long Day

Awww you cut off the lemon lol

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:19 PM Title: Long Day

Producing Porn?  That'll be a hoot!!!  Great chapter.  Love these "day-in-the-life" chapters from E's POV.

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:42 AM Title: Long Day

Sex in the jacuzzi....yummy!!

Investing on porn...well its a living!

Alex, Alex, Alex. Whats a man-whore to do about his justafiably worried fiancee??? C needs to get that shit right, j/s

Awwww, looks like its time for E to take a major step back and be there more. Yea, hes doing good now, but cant keep saying 'I promise' and then breaking that shit. After awhile, it gets kinda annoying.

Loves you hard <3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 8:21 AM Title: Long Day

Theresa Marie?" It shouldn't be long until Bella throws that bitch under a bus.". Haha, loved that line. Actually, I loved the entire chapter.  I'm loving the wind down & can't wait for the wedding. I'm hoping for a much reformed Carlisle.

Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:08 AM Title: Long Day

The phone calls with Bella and then with Alex were funny. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:39 PM Title: Long Day

Bella needs to chill. She needs to tell Alex to grow up and stop calling her about stupid stuff. Bella needs to get a maid to clean her house or at least help her with it. She is going crazy and taking it out on everyone.

Reviewer: Drmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:46 PM Title: Long Day

Hahah nice !

Reviewer: Kimmie41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:23 AM Title: Long Day

I loved this chapter. I don't think it was anything special; just a day at work for Edward. But it was good. Gosh, I hate to see this story end. I love when there is action going on.

 

Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:15 AM Title: Long Day

<3

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:47 PM Title: Long Day

Awesome!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:25 PM Title: Now and Then

I wish Carlisle and Alex well, but I think it is rotton what Alex is doing. She is trying to ruin her marriage befor it even happens. She should not tempt Carlisle with her slutty cousin over and over again. He hasn't done anything yet, but how long is it going to continue. Is it goint to go on until he can't say no any longer? Does she want to be right that bad? Maybe if Alex worked that hard on being the best wife for Carlisle she won't have to worry. Bella and Edward seem to be in a very good place in their relationship. I am glad that they are just going to enjoy living. I am a little worried about this scheme Aro brought up at the bowling alley. I have an a feeling it could rock the boat. A boat that Edward does not want to rock. He is ready for smooth calm waters.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:23 AM Title: Long Day

Well damn whatever bug crawled up Bella's ass. I understand her reluctance but that's what got her in the fuked up situation with E after Sonny got shot. Regular marriage tiffs happen, they will work it out!!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:43 AM Title: Long Day

Best Parts:

 

I was in Manhattan and could actually hear Bella's claws come out in Brooklyn.

"Mommy said the C word!" Damion shouted. "Sonny! Mommy said the C word!" He sounded excited. I bet that nut was dancing around.

"I thought you were dating Lisa?"

"We, uh, uh—" Aro was stuck.

"Exclusivity clause. Exclusivity," Carlisle sang under his breath.

"We never spoke about being exclusive." Aro gave Carlisle a high-five. "We've only gone on a few dates—"


Carlisle chuckled, doing the Sign of the Cross. "In nomine patri et fili et spiritu sancte." He stuck his fingers in his scotch, and then splashed Aro with it.


Don't you dare be mad at her either. When you date and sleep with children, they're bound to do childish things. I have pork chops in the oven—"


"Their bromance is endearing," Caius pursed his lips at them.

"And tomorrow they'll hate each other." I shook my head at them, while I waited for Aro and my brother to start making out.

"I don't like the way you said that." Carlisle frowned.

I smiled. "I'll be on my best behavior." I held up the bird. "Skip's honor."



"You let that little brat talk to you like that?"

"She's your kid. Put her in her place and smack her in the mouth." I nodded.

. "Embrace your power, and teach those kids some fu— manners!" I shouted.

Since I'd been giving out some stellar relationship advice lately, I thought I might be able to help him.

They're back together, didn't you know?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:26 AM Title: Long Day

I knew Bella would get tired of Alex. Alex is immature and causes some of her own problems.  Bella has coddled her enough. She has 3 kids to take care of and needy absent Edward.  I always count my husband as one of the kids.  He would not understand that, but hey he does not wash clothes, dishes or clean house. He does pick up after himself. That is something.

 

Keep writing and loving us!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:58 AM Title: Long Day

this chapter cracked me up!  i was giggling the whole time:)

i know its gonna end soon, but im going to miss them!  i cant wait to read it every week!  

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Long Day

Ugh...never want this story to end...absolutely love it

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:21 AM Title: Long Day

wow!

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:18 AM Title: Long Day

family time is always good 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:11 AM Title: Long Day

Lexi. I love this story. I really think Edward is making an effort too. Still don't like Lauren and Alex is just so young. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: cbmtmorris Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:30 AM Title: Long Day

Oh Lexi, once again you did not disappoint.  This chapter was damn funny.  You mentioned a few chapters back that things were slowing down; well, gotta say,  I truly enjoy these gimpses of Edward and Bella.  Their little family may not be the poster child for the typical American family, but really not so dissimilar in that they are like other families--just trying to get through the day with as little stress and BS as possible (just with a little larceny thrown in).  Yeah.  Even with the business that Edward is in, you always manage to make Edward and Bella and the family seem normal. 

I laughed uproariously at the exchange Edward, Aro and Carlisle had with Bella on the telephone.  I find it ironic that men often maintain the ridiculous notion that women gossip all the time, when, in fact, men gossip as much, if not more, than women.  Men just try to be more subtle, when in reality they actually have no clue to the fine art of gossiping.  Anyway, love that little exchange.

I also liked the exchange between Bella and Carlisle.  In fact, when you do become involved with a young, immature (who also happens to pregnant) young woman, one often finds themself getting caught up in what one could call "high school drama" . Yeah, just saying........

It is also nice to see that Edward realizes that even though he may not be around for the mundane, day to day happenings, he is still much needed to calm, and wrap the day up for his family.

I have so enjoyed QS and this sequel.  I believe this will always be my favorite portrayal of Edward and Bella.  I have insisted to  several friends (that now seem to be as addicted to FF as I am)  that Quiet Storm, Weather the Storm, and, of course, Eye of the Storm are absolute must reads!! 

So thanks again. 

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:25 AM Title: Long Day

E, C & Aro gossip like old Church ladies. Lol! Plus E is no better at handling his own daughter then C is. Lol! Even tho Hannah & Kylie's age differences are very far apart. Still E couldn't handle her & gah, E really can't lift a finger around the house 2 help B unless it's 2 do w/ the kids. B has 2 wait on him hand & foot, she needs 2 put him in his place & don't get me started abt Sonny's attitude & mouth. Lol! Great Chapter tho, I loved it.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:56 PM Title: Long Day

i'm so glad he turned Pete, Lou and Nunzio down...that just didn't sound good..sometime too good to be true, is just that!

the situation with Alex and C finally coming to a head was great....

loved the family time, and Bella needs a chill pill Edward....seriously!

TY for another revioting chapter!!!  Happy 4th of July!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:47 PM Title: Long Day

Always love it.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:21 PM Title: Long Day

did Aro and Lau really get back together? is that what I read? hmmmm...i love the end-of-the-day family stuff. seems like an ordinary family....and I loved your little vocal thing you gave us as a preview of this chapter. you sound like you're one of them! I mean that in the nicest, most complimentary way! I know this is winding down, almost done until the future jump....these 2, QS and this one, are arguably my favorite fics so far. I mean I love CaraNo's stuff too, and yours just as much. You guys always have a story or 2 on my currently reading list.  Just thanks! I'm an old perv who loves Rob and the best of fan fic. What can I say.....

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 10:10 PM Title: Long Day

I love this story. 

Reviewer: Sleeping_Beauty247 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 9:32 PM Title: Long Day

Another gem of a chapter! I absolutely love when the guys get together and act like lil girls! Laughed my ass off at their antics with putting their girls on speaker phone!

Great update as always!!

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