[Report This]Date: 18 May 2019 9:23 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
I loved it thank you
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2019 9:23 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
I loved it thank you
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2015 6:08 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
amazing story!!! ;) i'm not an alice fan so i thought she was perfect in this 'haha' thanks for sharing in here with us ;D
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2014 3:21 AM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
I love it! Will there be more?
Date: 05 Jul 2013 5:20 PM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for an enjoyable story.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:35 AM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
I really enjoyed this story! :-)
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:06 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story...I read it in two days, couldn't put it down... :-)
Date: 08 Oct 2012 5:40 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
Thank you so much for this story ~ it was sweet and funny and I couldn't stop reading it!! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:14 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
Awesome story. I really loved reading this.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 31
I've been reading a lot of anti-Alice storys lately and now I dont like her.
Date: 30 May 2012 8:31 AM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
I have to admit, the first time I came across this story, I really wanted to read it but the amount of chapters coupled with the fact that it wasn't finished and it sounded like it had lots of angst in it, which I'm so glad i didn't, kind of freaked me out. For some reason, my mind didn't think to check the word count. *facepalm*
Now that I've read it, I'm so glad that I did. I love how cute and fluffy it was when Edward and Bella were building their relationship, as well as the last few chapters, but I also loved how you had suspense and drama in there in order to keep us interested. I'm so sick of stories that have a non stop ride of fluff with absolutely no plot whatsoever besides their happy go luck relationship. It's nice to read something with drama every once and a while.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us all!
Date: 10 Apr 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
You know I am kind of annoyed with Bella's attitude towards standing up to renee but I guess thats the way you have written your story. She can blame renee as much as she wants but she's the one who is not doing what she wants and not letting renee walk all over her. I guess your story would be finished if she stood up to her hehehe
Date: 12 Feb 2012 1:14 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
This was such a touching and cute story. The level of humor was perfect. Please keep the outtakes and futuretakes coming. Thanks!!! I think it was THE BEST Bella and Edward that I've read about in fanfiction.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 12:05 PM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
:)
Date: 12 Jan 2012 8:54 AM Title: Fandom 4 Texas futuretake
That was so sweet and Emmett is just a riot. I am glad Alice is not such a bitch anymore that makes family get togethers better.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oooh! Cute. They have their own secret phrase and everything.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
A sneak peak into Edwards mind. Nice. veeery nice.And I still dont`t know his age. He`s a bil older then Alice,yes? So .. thirty? Thirty one?. I wa sallway allured with SUCH age difference. I personally think it`s perfect with a man in his thirties, and woman in twenties - he is mature and expirienced for her.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
"Landlords usually cornerd you..."
Oh, don`t you just like this funny boy - fool blooded man combination. I never could resist such a charm.
Isn`t he a full refreshment in this overflow od "dark Edwards". Just... normal ..and deleteriously attractive.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2011 1:30 PM Title: Epilogue
you must write more. loved this story.
Date: 07 Oct 2011 6:59 PM Title: Epilogue
thanks for the story it was great! loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 5:29 PM Title: Epilogue
awwwe! so sweet and thank you for making her stand up to the crazy renee!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
I thought is was funny that SM said something about Mexican restaurants in Washington and such in TW. When we first moved to WA when I was 15, we moved to a town that was 85% Mexican. So I laugh when I see people scoff at how good can a Mexican Restaurant be here. LOL!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:36 PM Title: Epilogue
I am so happy for them.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I really enjoyed your writing style. Their dialogues were not forced at all and the tone together with the dry humor was clever and refreshing.
Looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:57 AM Title: Epilogue
Brilliant story!
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:24 AM Title: Epilogue
such a good story and one I understand. When I was growing up my mom had a lot of problems and would sometimes leave us alone for days. I didn't understand at the time and used to think that she hated us. But she was sick, years later she was told she was bipolor along with other problems. I'm 42 and it took me until I was 39 to understand I could not fix her. It's a hard thing to handle and have to walk away from. Thanks for the story, it could help someone you never know..
Date: 04 Oct 2011 2:46 AM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing. Sad to see it over.
Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:01 AM Title: Epilogue
Good Job! Enjoyed the story! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 9:01 PM Title: Epilogue
hammock sex is doable!!!!
great job
Date: 03 Oct 2011 8:17 PM Title: Epilogue
hi really love this story. even though it's angsty, there's somehting so refreshing about it. I like the writing and the short chapters leaving me eager for the next installment. i really appreciated the quick updates as well-so thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Hahaha! And the award for best public service announcement regarding hammock sex safety goes to: Iambeagle for First of the Month!
Author's Response:
LOL! Well, thanks. Just trying to do my part.
BUT SERIOUSLY OMG. I LOVE YOU. Thank you so, so, so much for taking the time to read and review and rec and just, ahh. I'm being stupid emotional about this right now. I can't let go! *hangs onto door frame as loved ones pull me out of room* Okay. I'm okay. Thanks again :')
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:34 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved it! Wish it didnt have to end!
Author's Response:
Trust me. I didn't want it to end either. Last night was spent with me sobbing like the emotional freak I am. Sigh. Whatever. I'll admit it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :')
Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:32 PM Title: Epilogue
This was a great fic. I indulged my self in this world. Your Edward is sensative with a firm hand to me. I loved him. Thanks again for a terrific fic. I will be looking out for those outtakes.
E/k
Author's Response:
Well thank you for letting me indulge you with this story. This Edward was very...I don't even know. 'Fulfilling to write' sounds odd, but maybe thats the best way to put it. Well-rounded. I don't know. Now I'm just speaking nonsense because I'm sitting here wondering what the hell I'm going to do with my time now lol Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :') Truly appreciate it.
Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:32 PM Title: Epilogue
You are to funny I loved this story and look forward to all outtakes. I know it is silly but did they move into the house he rented to her in the first place???
Author's Response:
Lol! No, not silly! They didn't move into that house, no. Uh. they moved to Seattle & the house was located in Forks so... ;) and no, before they moved to Seattle they stayed in his apartment. Or so I'm assuming. They like to keep things like that to themselves. Sigh. Thanks for reading & reviewing. I truly appreciate it more than you know :')
Date: 03 Oct 2011 7:28 PM Title: Epilogue
lovely, loved their HEA....
Author's Response:
AND I AM SO GLAD YOU LOVED THEIR HEA! It was bittersweet, but honestly, there is no other way it could have ended. Unfortunately people cannot be helped unless they are willing to help themselves! Anyway. Ignore me, I'm just the ugly crier sitting in the corner with a pint of ice cream.
Date: 03 Oct 2011 6:50 PM Title: Epilogue
AH CONTRAIR-- I have personally had hammock sex, and not only did we not fall out, it was a totally 'ROCKING' experience!!!! Anyway, thanks for a great story!! Hope to see you come up with something else in the future- you have a great writing style, and your ability to update so quickly yet not lose quality is greatly appreciated!
Author's Response:
Kudos to you and your successful hammock time! So jealous lol! Sigh, thank you so much for taking the time to read & review. You make me smile with your compliments :') off to go cry some more like the little bitch I am.
Date: 03 Oct 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 75
Life is good when you give it a chance and any kind of sex with him has to be good lol
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 75
Awesome!! Minnie Mouse and Hammock sex all in one chapter! You're too good to us!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 74
Awwwww, what a perfect present. (Also, lol at the paper cut reference and appreciation of the party from the last chapter)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 73
a solid 10
Date: 02 Oct 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 74
Amazing how much a cup can mean I love it
Date: 02 Oct 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 73
That was cool I would like to know what they said to get the money back.
Date: 02 Oct 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 72
Stay strong Bella
Date: 02 Oct 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 71
That was sweet and hot
Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 70
No wonder she doesnt like suprises lol
Date: 01 Oct 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 69
Alice has a tough time being nice but at least she is trying. where did Edward go???
Date: 01 Oct 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 68
Alice has a heart lol
Date: 30 Sep 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 69
Please go on, I really love your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lol - Tiina
Date: 29 Sep 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 67
See, this is why I believe every kitchen needs good amount of counter space...
:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 67
don't care don't ask, dont tell why do people worry about tha in fiction but in real life too many don't care to worry about it
I am caught up now!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 66
be careful especially if you are on a network where you are employed there are programs that can track what everyone has done
I speak from experience
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 63
it would be cold before it arrived
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 61
love shower sex
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 60
the Cullens are so cool
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 59
no non glten bars for me thanks anyways
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 58
hopefully this will help
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 57
yeay emmie
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 56
here he comes on a white stallion
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 54
not she se is really a creeper
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 51
definately some valley giirl in you
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 50
wtf is up with Charlie
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 47
why is Bella writing bAD checks
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 45
recipe sound good but lemin was better
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 67
LOL I kinda like your creepy stuff you come up with....
Date: 28 Sep 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 67
Kitchen sex is a good thing. Alice is coming oh no I hope she is not riding her broom.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 66
Your funny lol. So glad Charlie has a conscence and is doing the right thing.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 65
I love how the family is taking care of her something she is not use to.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 64
What happened to Phil and the money? Will he get arrested for swindling Renee? The money was Bella's too....
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 39
just a towel...yum
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
poor them
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 34
haha more like booze
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 33
Em is always cute
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
your welcome
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
he is so sweet
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
what a biatch
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella would not destroy him
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
yes, more please