[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 70
AWESOME!!!! there were quite a few chapters where i just laughed out loud ;) thanks so much for posting this on here for us ;D
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 70
Great story. Loved your characters especially Jasper. The proposal was perfect for B & E. :-)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
GOOD FOR BELLA!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 70
LOVED THIS!!! :) Such a great story!
-Kate
Date: 20 Mar 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 54
Snort! That Peter is a funny guy! Love that she went to him!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
I already came...
To my senses that is.
I can't do this anymore.
Love that!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
How many women think this from time to time. Or all the time lol
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 70
Great job, thanks for sharing with us! Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 66
YEAH! A+++++
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 52
I can totally relate to Bella's letter to God. I often write those in my head, sometimes just say all that out loud, like a prayer. I know that what Edward did wasn't that bad, but in the bigger picture he broke Bella's trust and faith in him and in their relationship, and after everything she's been through in her past that is a big deal.
Thanks for the story recs. Been reading Cullen Companion and Taste of Honey since the beginning but nice to see authors publicize other authors work!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 51
Ugh, Edward is stupid - he should have just said no and that he didn't have to prove anything to Tanya since he loves Bella! Why do men do these stupid things? I hope she makes grovel. And maybe buy her jewelry....diamonds! Ha ha, just kidding...
Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 50
OK, I know this can't possibly be what it seems, right? Edward is not fooling around with Tanya is he? Maybe she's just helping him with his ....something?
Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 47
So, are Edward and Bella living together now or does he stay overnight at her place every night? I wish that she would get out a little more and away from her "friends" a bit.
Also, just have to say that I know this story was nominate/promoted on the Lemonade Stand, but there are no lemons! Is this an edited version or is there a lemony version posted somewhere else? Please don't take that as criticism, I'm just genuinely curious if I've missed something.
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 44
OK, honestly, I have no idea where this chapter came from. You totally screwed us out of their first time - or what we thought was going to be their first time. How did we get here, and why the hell is Jasper walking in on them? If this is NOT a dream or some sort of misunderstanding - like Edward trying to fix Bella's a clog in Bella's drain - then I'm kind of mad.
Not sure what this chapter was about, but I really hope it was just a joke.
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh yeah, forgot about Hawaii? How did they get that footage anyway? Where was it - on his laptop or something? Still confused about that ...was it some kind of surveillance?
Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh, Alice is kind of a bitch, huh? She just had to say something about it, even though it was over. I don't think I like her too much. And I'm mad that those two walked in and interrupted the big reveal by A/E!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 39
You are so lucky you live in L.A...I am so jealous! Do you have pictures? I want to see, I want to see!!!!
So, what does Edward/Eddie/Anthony have to say for himself and his actions?
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 38
Anthony/Eddie is the one behind her? Rosalie let him in? OK, we need some explanations now....I want to know what the hell is going on!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 37
WHAT?!! I know, I said that before, but WTF? Since when did she become his fiance? And, why would she think that's what is going on in the first place? And since I'm asking questions ....what is Carlisle's problem?
OK, I'm gonna keep going...
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, I honestly didn't think you would go there yet - but glad you did! Why was Tanya outside her bathroom door too? That hospital is Grand Central Station! Ha, everyone is there.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh no, why do I get the feeling that he's either going to whip off his lab coat and wrap her up like a gentleman or throw the towel closed and make sure she's not hurt? I doubt he would actually touch her like this on the floor of her hospital bathroom, right?! I can't wait to find out!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 34
OH SHIT! Ha ha, that was really awkward and really funny! I just hope Bella isn't hurt again. I just want to know why Anthony is walking into her bathroom (while she's obviously showering) without knocking?!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
Well, I guess Tanya has no clue what's been going on between Bella and Anthony/Eddie, huh? Was there ever anything going on to begin with or was Bella making it up in her head? Would love to hear his POV at some point...I'm a little confused!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
Poor Bella, she kind of needs a therapist to help her through all of this. I know she doesn't really know what's going on yet, but she is going to drive herself mad if she doesn't talk about this with someone. She needs to get out of her pity party and start living for herself...just like she had originally intended...
Damn, I do have to say that Edward has some 'splainin' to do!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
WHAT?! Oh no, Tanya is her PT?! Ugh, that is just not right. So what's with the name thing? Why would he tell her his name was Anthony if it was Edward? Wasn't Carlisle calling him Anthony too? And why would he act interested in Bella if he really was still involved with Tanya?
I like longer chapters so don't worry about the length...I always want more! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
I really, really, really HOPE it was not a dream...but I guess if Bella is hopped up on meds and maybe not quite conscious that it could possibly be.
Trying to figure out if Anthony (Edward?) is interested in Bella or not? If it wasn't a dream, I want to know all the answers to the questions Bella is asking too!
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yes, GREEN! I want more! What will he say?
Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
OH MY GOD! What the hell is wrong with Alice for hanging out with this creeper guy? Somebody save her!
I know they will, right? Ha ha, they have to!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 70
thanks loved it!! you kept it new and intersting throughout!! thanks :)
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 69
oh wow head and a proposal there is one i haven't read yet!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 68
yeah you got rid of Alice!! YEAH!!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 67
wow those were strong words...
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 66
HOT.... still what changed his mind?
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 65
okay what is his change of heart.. meddling friends!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 64
that would suck that your friends interfered with your love life so much.. i don't like that
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 61
oh no trouble in paradise what is up with ed?
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 60
oh peter you are something else!!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 59
haaa! i love peter. you should put him and jas together so much better than alice!!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 58
awwwwww i love ed!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 57
okay i guess they are going to try... hummm
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 56
i really like peter.. poor bella!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 55
LOVE LOVE LOVE peter... please let jas go gay and get him... that would be GREAT!!!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 54
cool not carlisle peter!! love it !!!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 53
please don't tell me she is going back to carlisle after all of this crap!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 52
oh boy... poor bella she can never be happy would you just let her be happy?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 51
oh yeah well at least you are in a hospital.. damn ed why can't you ever man up and just tell the bitch to go away... dumb ass
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 50
no you did not you did not!!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 49
darn.... peter kinda sexy
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 48
oh boy.. oh boy not good.... unless he ditches alice and we get a bella/ed/jas going on i could go for that!! lucky bitch!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 47
oh boy.... i kinda knew this was going to happen
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 46
put your Ipad on mute and he won't hear it!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
thanks for the clarification... bella you don't need the ring
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 44
WTF... no f-ing way
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 43
humm.... i am not even going to try and guess because i will just be wrong
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 42
jas you are a good friend except for that damn creeper thing!!! you should have bagged him more than once and held on to him..
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 40
again oh no nothing can be easy nothing at all
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
oh sneaky... you are sooo soooo sneaky
Date: 08 Dec 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
WTF! he didn't say fiancee and she is not f-ing anyone right now
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
interesting you always keep it fresh!! always
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 35
bella don't do this....
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 34
what the hell is he doing there?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
poor bella i am soo sad for her girl you need a different therapist and in a hurry, it kinda sucks that you made everyone happy but her
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
yuk!!!! that chapter just made me feel really really sad!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 31
oh man that just sucks ass... really it does...
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 30
okay how could they think that she wanted that? what happened? oh yeah ed would be a dr. forgot he works with carlisle. wipe that look off your face carlisle..
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
okay how did ed get there?!?! i was holding my breath because i thought it would be carlisle
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh boy i hope someone is saving her and yeah you should love jasper that much any more he roped you into this too
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 27
YUK!! is anyone going to save her.. jasper just got on my crap list!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
yuk you would have to have james in there didn't you.... man you should have tapped that when you could have remembered bella.. jas yuk not alice!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
jas you are cute love ya... ed tanya really?!?!?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 24
you tap that girl so ed is with alice?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
oh man you need to tap jasper i would.... just once minus the cameras!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
okay does that mean she went to the hospital? well that is at rest now it is time to move on
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Go bella go bella you are aswesome!!!! except for the drunk sex thing
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
okay again you sure know how to confuse the reader... i can't even catch up!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
okay so you slept with rose, jasper, and em!! interesting everyone gets around in this story now ed how lovely
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
knew it!! oh please tell me not alice and carlisle too?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
okay.. i think alice was doing him before maybe not.. jas man WTF!!! are we going to have a three way.. the way this is going i wouldn't be surprised at all
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
WOWOWOWOWO!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
I knew it I f-ing knew it... you would twist the crap out of it wouldn't you!!!!!! so he can f other people but not his wife!!!! OMG!!!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh yea it is going to be jas and al isn't it but hey you have twisted the hell out of things so i might not be
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh celebrate and with ed?!?!?!?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
yeah that is always the next question ,,, Now what?
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
okay carlisle get a pair... you are playing not nice...
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow bella i am amazed at your strength!!! good girl!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
okay bella wake up!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
okay one time does not make it right...
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh boy... like he can't see it what a selfish man
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
WOW it is carlisle... no way...love it!!!! oh yeah so alice is hitting it with jasper behind rose's back? girl you got tons of twists!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
you are tricky you knew people would think she was self loving!!!
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
crazy.... get out girl
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
get out please don't live like this i hope we are talking jacob and not ed
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
okay... that stinks! poor girl needs something