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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

and they lived happily ever after!

loved the shoot out to tim hortons! it is like legalized crack heehee! us albertans are very into out timmie's coffee!

thank you for sharing your story.

suzie :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 23

celebrate good times, come on! sorry i'm a geek! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

yay they won! time to celebrate!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

wow orgies at 14! that is kinda fucked up. but eddie stood up for her honor and took jake down. looks like emotions will be high going into the coming games.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 20

the later it gets in the season the more intence it gets. nothing like knowing everything hangs on this game....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

funny how life in high school bounced from perfect to horrible and back again so quickly.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

yay they are back together and it should be time to go home soon!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

eddie came to her in pheonix!? wow boy has it bad.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

being a bitch does not win the guy!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

sports always have the element of danger and the risk of being hurt. bella knows this but she is seeing it as someone involved now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

well she sure took him back quickly, i hope she still makes him work for it!

darling i love your an, wish i could help but alas i fall in the same boat as you with my computer skills! wanted to let you in on my favorite saying! not sure who it came from but it was on thhis site. 'techtarded' i use it whenever i can to explain my abilities with technology.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow that was so not a good talk! bella was acting out at 14! oh that's bad. and eddie is a jerk.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

yeah dumb fuck you can't be a total asshole and not think she'll start to wonder what the hell is going on!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

uhoh does that mean the shit is about to hit the fan?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 10

happy little couple but they still have to deal with the regular bullshit.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

ok so the issue has been solved. they are gonna give it a go and see where this takes them.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

whoo hooo! time to get lucky!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

and so it begins...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

eddie got a little look at the goods and so did she!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh you gotta love passing out at a party!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4

ithing is cool and i so see old fogies like my mom calling it that! as it is she told me she is gonna get my kids 'cd3 music players' for chirstmas. thank god i understand that means 'mp3 player' in mom speak! heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

oh i like this bella she can definately give as good as she gets. if not better!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

never read a story along these lines before, it looks like it will be good!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

gotta agree here momma e cussing would make me giggle too!

Reviewer: mandy52799 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 24

this story was really good..i know nothing about hockey but i found myself totally enthralled. The ending seemed a little rushed in comparison to the rest of the story, but still i loved it...i was on the edge of my damn seat for those finals. sweet and sexy :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

that was amazing. :) is there going to be a sequel? if not that's okay. it ended great. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

There might be a sequel in Garrett's PoV, but I'm not sure yet. It'd be a huge project which I don't have time for at the moment.

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!  THEY WON!!!!!!!!!!!!  GREAT CHAPTER AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jenn6231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 22

how come now i feel like something bad is about to happen?

i hope that i'm just being paranoid over here



Author's Response:

You're just being paranoid.

Reviewer: jenn6231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

i fucking love it!

more pretty please



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

oh never say that this will only bring drama

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

sweet loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

oh he was sweet i hope that last but i know it will not lol

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 8

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

that was funny loved it

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

i loved it very funny poor edward lol bella loves to put him in his place

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

i loved it that she gave it right back to him lol

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

loved it i think iam hooked

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

I just found your story i can't wait to read more esme saying fuck is lmaof

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

OHHHH cliffy.  update soon please.



Author's Response:

I'm a cliffy whore. ;)

Reviewer: hlleopard Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

Just found your story and it is so good. I can't wait to read more.

 

Heather



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

OHHH! That was just mean... LOL found the story and am loving it.



Author's Response:

Hah! I'm a pretty mean person. :)

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

uh oh! Edward in Phoenix? this could go a couple of ways, look forward to next update!



Author's Response:

Hehehe.

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

Be yourself, stop doing what others do or u lose your man. I gotta go with Edward on this one. She have stuck with Alice and she drinks way to much. Maybe if she wasn't drunk all the time she could think more clearly



Author's Response:

Hmm. Good point. I mean, I'm with Edward for this one, too, but not because of Bella's drinking habits. In all honesty, she is fucking tame compared to me. There have been weeks where I've been drunk every night. This is nothing. I was more disappointed in the fact that she let Rosalie take charge of her love life when she had absolutely no right to.

Reviewer: iamcarrieok Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 16

what? oh no, i can't take it any more

they are together now and break up later just about 1 minute?

the plots should be built up gradually, not so suddenly....



Author's Response:

It's The Twilight Twenty-Five. I only had 25 chapters to work with, so it had to be squished sort of.

Reviewer: iamcarrieok Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

oh no~ bella you should give edward a long and hard time

he is too emotional and completely out of the liine

you can't take him back just that easily

he isn't a decent boy at all, how could he ask you to be "nice" or "pure"?

oh i'm so mad at edward .... what an ass!

 



Author's Response:

This will allll be explained later, I promise. :)

Reviewer: Tarbecca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow! B is pretty forgiving.  I think E got out of that a bit too easily...



Author's Response:

Karma, my friend. Karma.

Reviewer: mirLy91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

isn't that the same as the last chapter?

Author's Response:

Dammit. Sorry.

Reviewer: smartcandies103 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

aaaah how could u do that to me???

plz update before this next weekend!



Author's Response:

I'm going to update tonight! :)

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

Jacob is a jerk! Hope E can redeem hisself, he's being an ass too. Great chapter, I love me some drama :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 10

yay their officially together!!!!



Author's Response:

:) :)

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! progressing beautifully :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! Glad Edward stepped up and treated Bella well post drunk sexins. He's a stand up guy...so far.   ;)   Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Me too. Thanks!

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE IT!!!!  Great story so far.  I am a HUGE hockey fan so it makes this story even greater.  Keep up the good work!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: feebee70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is really fun, but is a chapter missing? i couldn't get the reference to them talking when he ref'd?



Author's Response:

That was my fault. I accidentally skipped a chapter. Chapter 7 of this story is the part where Edward ref'd while Bella watched. Very sorry!

Reviewer: misswhiting14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

chapter 7 & 8 are the same



Author's Response:

Well, aren't I just a jerk! Sorry about that!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

I liked ch 7 better than. 8. It was a duplicat chapter. Wondering now thier night went? Meg

Author's Response:

Very, very sorry!

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm loving this story! Excellent!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: aggy73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

CHapter 7 & chapter 8 are exactly the same.



Author's Response:

So sorry about that! Didn't even notice! D:

Reviewer: Mizz Volturi Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

love your story and topic but why did you repost chapter 7, or did you do it by accident??? love to hear more!



Author's Response:

Sorry! Accidental!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love Edward he make me chuckle. Hope to see them togethr soon. Meg

Author's Response:

Same here. :)

Reviewer: soundsofmusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

This story is AMAZING!!! You've combined two of my favorite things:Twilight and Hockey! The development of the characters is so good, and I absolutely love the plot so far! I can't wait to see what comes next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it as much as I do! I'm such a hockey freak! I couldn't not include it in one of my stories.

 

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Lisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

You need to re-post it 'cause there's no chapter... TWCS has some problems with a new server.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I saw that, hah. I'll repost today.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved iThing... Oh Bella you can't resist IceDucheward for long... Update soon It is a great story. Looking forward to the party. So many things could happen.. Mike can be a dumbass... James can be an ass, Edward could go one of many ways... Post soon so we will know what direction you took it.
Meg

Author's Response:

I was so impressed with the iThing. One of my great moments as a writer for sure, hah.

 

Thank you! I'll post ASAP!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love this line

"I knew my way around sexual innuendos better than I knew how to apply makeup."

Awe they like each other... like kids on a playground... Can't wait to see how / if they get together. I hope they do the spark will be fun these two. Meg

Author's Response:

Thanks! I like that line, too. :)

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it... I like how you have given Charlie something other than "fishing". Hockey will much more fun to read and write.
I look forward to learning more about your Bella is she shy is she OOC? I hope there is some snark and strength.
reading on... meg

Author's Response:

Bella is definitely OOC in this, for the most part.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the start... Hockey Mom's are a breed apart! meg

Author's Response:

Hockey mom's are hilarious. I love them. :)

Reviewer: XxlorraineXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

haha thats great,esme swearing like that! cant wait for next wednesday



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! :)

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