Date: 11 Apr 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it....I think we all have internal dialogue like that!!
Date: 14 Nov 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
this was VERY short and you do have some reviews so i hope you do come back to continue with this on here ;D
Author's Response:
This was an entry in a ficlet contest. All entries had to be under 500 words.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT START! I WOULD DEFINATELY LIKE TO READ MORE, AND SEE HOW MANY TIMES BELLA EMBARESSES HER SELF WITH EDWARD BEFORE SOMETHING DOES HAPPEN BETWEEN THEM.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay I'm liking this so far.
If you continue this it will be good. :)
Please write more.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god! you definately have to post more, i really hope you do because i'm kinda intrigued to see what happens. Even if it's just another chapter, like a two shot.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I was laughing so hard, and wanted to laugh somemore. I love Bella's inner dialog. =) I'd sure love to see what happens next, and see if any of Bella's wishes come true! Maybe someday you'll continue your story. I want more! Thanks for writing! =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey! Where's the rest?! I'm interested in reading more.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it, curious if he is teasing her?
Author's Response:
lol yes..he is fully aware of his effect on her
Date: 11 Dec 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I looooved it please continue.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
hmmmm naughty love it
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
? Is that your way of saying it sucked?
Date: 18 Nov 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol... Bella's inner monologue is hillarious. You should at least make it a novella type story ;) you know for Bella's sake lol
Add BD to the robporn fuzz he can break my headboard any day... Yummmmmm
Date: 30 Oct 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, this does seem like the beginning of a story as opposed to a stand-alone. Just sayin'...
Author's Response:
I have no delusions that this is a full story. This was an entry in the quickie one shot contest. The word limit was 500 words or less. I always intended to expand it to a full length multi chapter fic, but as no one seemed interested in all the time it was on fanfiction.net, I decided not to. However, once I posted it over here it has drummed up some interest so I may continue it after FAGE.
Date: 29 Oct 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think you started very well.You should continue.Bella seems to be a feisty girl and Edward, well, just say that he makes an impression,a big one.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have made a great start. I sincerely hope you will continue. I like stories with lots of spice and sassy plot.i
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! You should continue :D
Date: 26 Oct 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
seems really good, he totally knows what he's doing to her
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would like to see you continue it. I love the start of it. Please keep it going.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
It seems cute... Go ahead :)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think it is great and I wish you continue. I love it when they talk to themselves lol.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well I'm curious. Never read a hair fetish story before. I hope you write more, I chuckled more than once and its so short! I can't wait to see what you do with a multi-chapter fic.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear it made you laugh! That is the whole reason I do this :) I think you can look for this one to be expanding in the future. If you are interested in seeing a multi chappy of mine, come back at the end of the month. My FAGE entry is my first multi chappy. Its (hopefully) funny, and the chapters are all short like this one.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Follow through, it seems like it could be hilarious.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, I like it please continue.
But write because you enjoy it and want to write the story.
Not everyone reviews but that doesn't mean your story is bad or not worth writing. You have a great idea started. I think it starting of very hot and bothered.
Author's Response:
I write because the voices in my head tell me too. Or was it the words on facebook...I can't remember. In truth, I am NOT a writer. I read, I review, I hoard porn, and I have a twisted sense of humor. I know people don't always review and I'm cool with that. This story has actually been posted for a while on ff. It has zero reviews over there. That led me to believe no one liked it. In truth, the only reason I even posted it over here was because I had took the time to make the banner way back when so I figured I'd use it :P Out of all the quickies I wrote, this was my favorite and the one I wanted to turn into a multi chappy fic.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhhh, he really needs to be put in his place! She needs to set him up at their next meeting to get him back!
Author's Response:
Awww he was teasing her in a flirty way. Wonder what would happen if he called her to his office after the meeting??
Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
well what there is of it, I really like. but it is so short its tough to have much of an opinion :)
Author's Response:
The one shot contest it was written for had the rules of 500 words or less. This was pushing the limit :)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
good start I can't wait to see where you take it from here!!
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This looks and sounds like it could be something, maybe even a drabble fic?
Author's Response:
When I originally started this, I meant it to be a full milti chapter fic. No one ever seemed interested in it so I just let it go. I might consider adding to it after FAGE. I guess readers on TWCS like it better than on FF.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, don't stop, please...it's funny! Hornella and Teaseward!
Author's Response:
wow nicknames! I like!
Date: 25 Oct 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like to see you continue this.