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Reviewer: EdwardsKitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

And you're done...bummer. 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

I don't know whats next...will she really let him sleep on the couch?  Will she be out of her place for a few days...ohh that would be good!  Please keep Maria back at home...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'm going to read this chapter on FF because there it is very difficult!
Must put spaces between paragraphs!
Thank you.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ahh shes so up to something!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

C'est un bon chapitre ! Je n'ai pas confiance en Maria, elle va faire un sale coup à Edward.

Est ce que Jasper est sûr ? 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hope that Maria don't try and stop the divorce proceedings... and hopefully Bella will take this to be good news not a betrayal.. I want to read all the gooey ooey mush from them not angst.. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for R&R. Maria... hmmm she is certainly fun to write for :-) I can promise that there will be gooey ooey mush from E&B and maybe a sprinkling of smut along the way :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

This isn't going too well for Edward

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope he really gets to divorce maria without too much trouble.. I don't want to see bella get hurt in the process.  I hope he is able to tell her soon

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

I agree, no way she s giving up that easily.  I think she is having him followed.  Great update.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know about my mess up! All fixed now x

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Yep still married wait for that bomb to drop. No going back there. He can say sorry until hell freezes over.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

Prince Charming?  More like a flandering King. He is still married. Wait until she learns that little piece of information. Or has she already?  I would have to reread this to remember.

 

Hoep to see you soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, there is more to come ont he whole 'he's married thing' although it might not be in the next chatpter, things will start to happen around that. He is married, and no Bella does not know this yet.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks as always for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9

You see he thinks she has another man and is with him. He is married and about to cheat on his wife. Ahh guilty dog went to that thought first.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing and yup, his first thought went to that.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

The thing is he seems wishy washy about Maria.  he is married and he should try, if he does not love her then get out of it. Check and see if she is cheating. Get a real PI not your buddy.

 

I hope Bella does not fall for a line.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

All this is fine and good...but he is still married to Maria!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

Maria.. the wonderful sex partner. Not the good wife.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great story!

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love it.  Great update.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

Really like your story...can't come fast enough!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

I really like your story so far! Is Maria gonna go all phsyco & boil Edwards bunny???  :)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

He should buy her a dress to make up for it.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am intrigued by the concept here but a little leary of Edward being a deceiver with Bella.   He really seems to be a player and Maria was/is a golddigger, so I can't wait to see what happens when he meets Bella...will it be intense right away or will she sneak up on him?

Looking forward to more!

 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm guessing soon he will be meeting Bella.
In case you haven't already noticed, you have no chapter 4. Chapter 3 is listed twice.

Author's Response:

Hey there! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and glad that you are liking this. I give in! I actually hadn't noticed but I only posted it once... promise!  Bella will be coming along soon - promise.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Be careful what you wish for.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like an interesting story! Poor Edward stuck with Maria!



Author's Response:

Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together.  Yes, poor Edward - I feel sorry for him but he doesn't see a way out of this at the moment. Things are going to get interesting. Hope you continue to read and review!

Reviewer: Mary Mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

it will take some time before I have an opinion. Is Maria, Bella?   Edward seems like a jerk. PERIOD



Author's Response:

Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together. Maria isn't Bella, they are two different people, he hasn't met Bella yet. Edward migh be coming across that way as he is desperately unhappy in his marriage and doesn't see a way out. 

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks good!



Author's Response:

Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together. Things are going to get interesting. Hope you continue to read and review!

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