Date: 02 Jul 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
And you're done...bummer.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
I don't know whats next...will she really let him sleep on the couch? Will she be out of her place for a few days...ohh that would be good! Please keep Maria back at home...
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm going to read this chapter on FF because there it is very difficult!
Must put spaces between paragraphs!
Thank you.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Ahh shes so up to something!
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
C'est un bon chapitre ! Je n'ai pas confiance en Maria, elle va faire un sale coup à Edward.
Est ce que Jasper est sûr ?
Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope that Maria don't try and stop the divorce proceedings... and hopefully Bella will take this to be good news not a betrayal.. I want to read all the gooey ooey mush from them not angst..
Author's Response:
Thanks for R&R. Maria... hmmm she is certainly fun to write for :-) I can promise that there will be gooey ooey mush from E&B and maybe a sprinkling of smut along the way :-)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
This isn't going too well for Edward
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope he really gets to divorce maria without too much trouble.. I don't want to see bella get hurt in the process. I hope he is able to tell her soon
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
I agree, no way she s giving up that easily. I think she is having him followed. Great update.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know about my mess up! All fixed now x
Date: 07 Sep 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Yep still married wait for that bomb to drop. No going back there. He can say sorry until hell freezes over.
Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
Prince Charming? More like a flandering King. He is still married. Wait until she learns that little piece of information. Or has she already? I would have to reread this to remember.
Hoep to see you soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, there is more to come ont he whole 'he's married thing' although it might not be in the next chatpter, things will start to happen around that. He is married, and no Bella does not know this yet.
Date: 21 May 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for reading and reviewing x
Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing x
Date: 12 Apr 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
You see he thinks she has another man and is with him. He is married and about to cheat on his wife. Ahh guilty dog went to that thought first.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing and yup, his first thought went to that.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
The thing is he seems wishy washy about Maria. he is married and he should try, if he does not love her then get out of it. Check and see if she is cheating. Get a real PI not your buddy.
I hope Bella does not fall for a line.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
All this is fine and good...but he is still married to Maria!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Maria.. the wonderful sex partner. Not the good wife.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love it. Great update.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really like your story...can't come fast enough!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I really like your story so far! Is Maria gonna go all phsyco & boil Edwards bunny??? :)
Date: 16 Jan 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
He should buy her a dress to make up for it.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am intrigued by the concept here but a little leary of Edward being a deceiver with Bella. He really seems to be a player and Maria was/is a golddigger, so I can't wait to see what happens when he meets Bella...will it be intense right away or will she sneak up on him?
Looking forward to more!
Date: 30 Dec 2011 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm guessing soon he will be meeting Bella.
In case you haven't already noticed, you have no chapter 4. Chapter 3 is listed twice.
Author's Response:
Hey there! Thanks for reading and reviewing, and glad that you are liking this. I give in! I actually hadn't noticed but I only posted it once... promise! Bella will be coming along soon - promise.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Be careful what you wish for.
Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like an interesting story! Poor Edward stuck with Maria!
Author's Response:
Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together. Yes, poor Edward - I feel sorry for him but he doesn't see a way out of this at the moment. Things are going to get interesting. Hope you continue to read and review!
Date: 02 Dec 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
it will take some time before I have an opinion. Is Maria, Bella? Edward seems like a jerk. PERIOD
Author's Response:
Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together. Maria isn't Bella, they are two different people, he hasn't met Bella yet. Edward migh be coming across that way as he is desperately unhappy in his marriage and doesn't see a way out.
Date: 02 Dec 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks good!
Author's Response:
Hey there, thank you for reviewing this new story. It is a new thing for me to write someone elses ideas, which of course I we are working on together. Things are going to get interesting. Hope you continue to read and review!