Date: 13 Dec 2011 10:55 AM Title: Hurricane
Welcome back, thank you for writing!
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2011 3:32 AM Title: Hurricane
When I first glanced at this story, I was unsure on whether I would like it. I thought it was about a bloody vampire fic, which could be argued, but I should have known that since it was by you, I was bound to like it. I loved the vigilante angle. It makes me think of Spiderman's "With great power, comes great responsibility."
Date: 08 Dec 2011 10:39 PM Title: Hurricane
Good to have you back! I really liked this story. It's amazing that Bella would be a vigilante, as Edward was years ago. At least he understands exactly how she feels. The ending, with the little girl smiling at Bella, was just right.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:26 AM Title: Hurricane
Nice one. That could be a good long term story. I like the ending and that Edward was with her all the time. At the beginning I thought it was Edward's story so I had a nice suprise that it was Bella. Keep going I love your stories.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:18 AM Title: Hurricane
Sweet. Bella must be feeling guilty taking those lives--though they'd harm more people if they live.