[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2018 11:23 PM Title: Soon
CERTAINLY NOT THE NORM
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2017 2:27 AM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
as writer it is hard to write strong bad situation such as abuse and rape i am struggling too as i am writting story of "hate bella" , i know many readers give you hard time , i dont understand why edward love is so dark and how he can learn not to be dark in love , but i am happy she is free
Date: 03 Jan 2016 12:00 AM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Oh no. You are leaving it like that????????? I am glad that Bella got away. I soon off to your profile to see if the sequel has started. I hope so. If not can you PLEASE Start it.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 11:50 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
She is going to set the place on fire
Date: 02 Jan 2016 11:39 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
II don't blame Bella for wanting to die
Date: 02 Jan 2016 11:21 PM Title: Devil in the Flesh
On hope Shawn lives.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 11:15 PM Title: Crap!
I am thinking the guy in the ski mask worked for Edward. And Edward has been spying in Bella. I am scared for Shawn and his little girl.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 11:09 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
OMGosh! Has Edward showed back up?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 11:04 PM Title: Confidant
I am afraid for Shawn and his little girl if he is not working for Edward.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:24 PM Title: Happiness
I hope Shawn is working for Edward. I don't want anyone else to die.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:20 PM Title: Edward's evil plan
What does Edward have in mind? I am kind of scared
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chance Encounter?
I am thinking he was sent by Edward. How did Shawn know where to find Bella?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:11 PM Title: The Diary
Oh no. Did she write down her plan?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:06 PM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
II understand Bella wanting to get away from him after everything he has done. Edward has been trying to change and now she has left him again. I am afraid he will be cruel to her again when. He finds her.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:57 PM Title: Heartbeat
Well!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:53 PM Title: The DVD
So glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am off to read the next chapter. Can't wait to find out 2 is on the DVD.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:46 PM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
Can this Edward change???
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:41 PM Title: Soon
This Edward is cruel cruel one. No remorse.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 9:01 PM Title: Countdown
Is she pregnant? Is her belly going to expand quickly like it did in Twilight?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 8:57 PM Title: Forever is just the beginning
If he turns her will she remember what he did to her? Will she carry that anger into her vampire life?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 7:05 PM Title: Two Pacts
He is truly evil
Date: 02 Jan 2016 6:52 PM Title: Lying
I still can't believe how cold Edward is to her. I thought he loved her.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 6:44 PM Title: NO! part 2
I can't believe he did that. I just knew deep down that he had some redeeming qualities but I guess not.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 6:38 PM Title: NO!
Is he really going to rape his wife? Edward could do better than that.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 6:15 PM Title: Under His Control
Ok, if Bella is Edward's mate should she not care that he is a vampire. I am also assuming the Edward and the Cullens are not like our Twilight Cullens. Edward is definitely harsher. What about the others?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:30 PM Title: Exigency
Poor Bella.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:20 PM Title: Saved Innocence
Why does he not talk to her and then take his time with her and have her begging for him. He is very skilled I am sure he could do it.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:15 PM Title: Quandary
Edward needs to talk to Bella. He can't drop a bombshell of her is x a vampire and just except her to be ok with it. What is Edward's normal diet, animals or humans?
Date: 02 Jan 2016 3:28 PM Title: Suffering
I know she is scared. Why did Edward have to kill the elderly couple? They believed him. I don't think they would have caused them any problems.
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:50 AM Title: Rejected
So she has ran again!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:44 AM Title: Truth
Ooookkkk!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 4:39 AM Title: Flee & Pursue
Interesting
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2015 8:06 AM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Oh my God! I loooooooved the end!! This story was really unique. loved it. waiting for sequel.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2015 11:50 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
I really love this story!! It's very unique and honestly, I love how possessive Edward is. I just wish he'd be a little more compassionate. It seems a tad bit unrealistic that he could be so in love with Bella and treating her so well to just doing a complete 360 to where he's torturing her without an ounce of remorse. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:22 AM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Loved it 😍
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2015 11:22 PM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Great ending & beginning to the sequal. I hadn't been getting update notices about this. I'm so glad I got to read this ending. I am looking forward to the next one!
Date: 17 Jun 2015 8:40 PM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Absolutely marvelous! You've managed to keep the readers guessing this long on what Edward had planned next, now you just pulled it off again! Loved the shark business! What happens to Bella next should be interesting. Pregnant or not, Edward feels their destinies parting. That could mean 2 or 3 different things. Kudos on a high tension, emotion packed piece of work! I look forward to what comes next! Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2015 4:09 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
I'm sorry but there's a lot that I don't remember so I'm going to start over. I received the update notice for chapter 30. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2015 1:25 AM Title: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown
Love your story, but you take to long to update.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:31 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
OMG. What an evil Edward... The worst. I hope he turns Bella and then she exacts her revenge somehow.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2015 8:10 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
Ah, this story is so evil & painful but I can't stop reading it because I wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:43 PM Title: Under His Control
So the rich even match their car to their attire! Haha. So is it my understanding that Alice doesn't see Edward for the same reason that Edward can't hear Bella. It isn't very clear. If that is true then that means Bella doesn't ever get away from Edward....
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:30 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
I want to guess but all my guesses are wrong. You have my mind trying to figure it out but I never know where you will go with this.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:21 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
Holy cow!!!!! Now the picked fence house makes sense!
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:05 PM Title: Devil in the Flesh
Once again you shock me! Shawn was a good guy! You are so good at keeping the suspense up!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:58 PM Title: Crap!
I'm still guessing that Shawn had a part in the ski mask guy? It is very convenient that he pulls up right as the guy was leaving.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:51 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
Well you have a1000 questions running through my mind! I don't think Edward hired Shawn. But I am wondering if Shawn is as good as he has played himself? I wonder if he trashed her place or did Edward?
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:28 PM Title: Confidant
Shawn is in WAY over his head!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:20 PM Title: Happiness
I agree. So Shawn is supposed to be watching her not trying to date her.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:15 PM Title: Edward's evil plan
So Shawn was sent by Edward. I didn't expect that.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chance Encounter?
I was worried she put in the diary where she was going but she as smarter than I thought.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:05 PM Title: The Diary
She really isn't very smart!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:00 PM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
Crap I think evil Edward will be back in full force!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:52 PM Title: Heartbeat
I don't think this is going to turn out well.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:47 PM Title: The DVD
Is it him with another woman or videos of her?
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:41 PM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
He does have his good points.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:35 PM Title: Soon
Thank goodness she isn't pregnant!!!!!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:28 PM Title: Countdown
Her belly is big I'm guessing.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:23 PM Title: Forever is just the beginning
He is so much darker than I could have even imagined!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:17 PM Title: Two Pacts
I think Edward wins bc she fears others getting hurt.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:02 PM Title: Lying
He does not want her to die that is a small positive?
Date: 02 Jan 2015 4:51 PM Title: NO! part 2
She will never forgive him.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 4:47 PM Title: NO!
She probably should have drank more wine. Alice's favorite wine is funny bc they don't drink wine.
Author's Response:
Lol. Edward was just trying to get her to drink more wine. Hasn't she noticed that he doesn't eat, vampires don't eat or drink. Guess she didn't pick up on the fact and fell for it.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 4:19 PM Title: Exigency
Now we know the whole family is....why doesn't Alice see Bella?
Date: 02 Jan 2015 4:07 PM Title: Saved Innocence
So rape pretty much isn't out of the question.....
Date: 02 Jan 2015 4:01 PM Title: Quandary
Will he rape her if he loves her so much????
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:55 PM Title: Suffering
He is so so deadly.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:45 PM Title: Rejected
And she is off again
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:37 PM Title: Truth
I do remember reading this chapter. It's funny bc she needs to just get used it it. There is no running.
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:32 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
I had this story on my favorite list and somehow I hadn't started reading it. I'm so glad you updated it bc it was at the top of my list to read!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:13 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
thought you should be aware that the rating for this story shows as T on this site and it certainly isn't
Author's Response:
It wasn't rated T before. Idk what's going on with the site but even the update date of my story kept switching to different months. I got the date fixed tho.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:34 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
kill my self and him i wood find away
Date: 02 Jan 2015 7:12 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:08 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
desperately awaiting update after reading Ch. 28.
Author's Response:
I'll be updating soon :)
Date: 25 Jun 2014 10:13 PM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
oh Deus ... Edward, you're so stupid!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:49 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
AH-MAZING! Was waiting for this Evil Edward to return. Looooooved this chapter. :-) Next update please.
Author's Response:
I updated.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:42 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
That was seriously harsh. Does this story have any form of a happy ending? Like, does Bella die taking Edward with her? Do the Cullens know what Edward is doing? Are the okay with it if they do? Would they try to save her if they didn't & found out? I hope she doesn't get pregnant.
Author's Response:
I can't really tell you what happens at the end. The Cullens doesn't know what he's doing and it's already been explained why...I think. There will be a giant revelation if you stick around to find out. As for it being 'harsh' as you said, well I did warn you.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:56 AM Title: Edward's Evil Plan Fulfilled Part 1
glad to see the update...will he treat her the same way if she gets preggers?
Author's Response:
I highly doubt he would treat her like that IF she got pregnant.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:08 AM Title: Devil in the Flesh
i love tis story and all the sudden you stoped updateing i am going crazy!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and I love it that you love my story. Please be advised that I have not stopped updating. My last update was this very same month, it's just that I have an exceedingly demanding life outside of writing fanfiction. I know writers who update their stories only 3-4 times a year, thank God I am not one of them.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:47 PM Title: Devil in the Flesh
OOOOOOOOOH! PLEASE UPDAAAAAATE! LOVED IT!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:05 PM Title: Devil in the Flesh
Poor Bella, she's in for more torture than she experienced before she left. I feel bad for Shawn but at least he's alive, his daughter won't be alone. Bella going to end up killing herself or something, this is going to break her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. :D Is that what you really think, he's going to end up breaking her or she'll kill herself? It's a good thing you aren't right or there would be no more Bella ;)
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:58 AM Title: Devil in the Flesh
Thanks for leaving Shawn alive. Now I am dreading what awaits Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and I would never have killed Shawn :) I am dreading what awaits her as well, it's most....unpleasant.... :(
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2013 4:26 PM Title: Devil in the Flesh
Love your story. Please update more often.
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I did say in the A/N that I would update more often from now on. Also I do have a very busy life outside of writing fanfiction. :)
Date: 03 Sep 2013 2:30 AM Title: Devil in the Flesh
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2013 2:04 AM Title: Devil in the Flesh
no you don't what to know
Author's Response:
Lol. Yes I do.
Date: 03 Sep 2013 1:12 AM Title: Devil in the Flesh
I'm hoping you will continue the story this time. I'm loving it.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 11:52 PM Title: Devil in the Flesh
uh oh Bella
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:31 PM Title: Crap!
crap is right please update soon please
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I promise to update very soon. :)
Date: 24 Aug 2013 8:01 PM Title: Crap!
Finally Edward is back in the picture...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, I promise to update soon. :)
Date: 23 Aug 2013 2:18 AM Title: Flee & Pursue
It was a joke... I don't have stong feelings toward him one way or another.
Author's Response:
Lol. I believe you..... I tried to contact you but the site gave some message about the feature being disabled due to abuse? You were the 100th reviewer so you get to choose a sneak peak of the next chapter or the chapter after that. Let me know if you're interested. You can contact me at LegendaryDiamond@live.com :)
Date: 23 Aug 2013 12:34 AM Title: Crap!
Dum da dum dum...oh shi+! How's he going to handle this...and Shawn...? Is Shawn a vampire slayer?
Author's Response:
LOL. Vampire slayer? No one has ever asked that questions. Since you think so highly of Shawn I suggest you skip the next chapter when I update. Thanks for reviewing by the way :)
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:17 PM Title: Crap!
Edward's back! OK this is scary!!!
Author's Response:
Indeed it is, thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:33 PM Title: Crap!
FUCK! Edward is back!!! Continue!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2013 5:11 PM Title: Crap!
I like your story. BUT.... You need to update more often. Your putting me on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing :) In the notes at the top I did say updates will come faster.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2013 4:18 PM Title: Crap!
I'd like to believe that if I were in her position I'd start carrying around a razor or knife & threaten to kill myself everytime Edward came near me.
Author's Response:
Pssh, you know that would never happen. Edward wouldn't allow Bella to kill herself, he would move so fast by the time she positioned her hand to cut he would've stopped her. If this is how you feel I suggest the next chapter you read be your last. It gets quite...Malevolent after that. By the way, thanks for reviewing. You guys really keep me going and I adore you all for that :)
Date: 21 Jul 2013 2:39 AM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
OK I'm seriously ADDICTED to this story...PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!! (BTW, does Edward's family know he's a legit psyco?? I'm just curious how Alice hasn't seen Bella's future, or even just checked in on the two. Even without super powers...family and friends would notice something was up, right?) But FANTASTIC story!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I'm not sure how far along in the story u are yet but it is mentioned why Alice can't see him. Since they've gotten married Bella hasn't seen her parents. She's met with Edward's family once and that was when she fainted. Edward thinks if they're not around they won't be able notice anything and he's a jealous psycho as well lol. The only mention of Bella spending time with a friend in this is a flashback of when she was mobbed by the paparazzi.Edward is controlling so no freedom no friends lol. His family does not know he is a freakish weirdo. I hope I've answered all of your questions :)
Date: 09 Jun 2013 5:12 AM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
Face to face with ?!?! My heart is racing. Looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2013 6:33 PM Title: Truth
(CHAPTER 24 REVIEW. HAD TO POST HERE BECAUSE OF SOME TECH ERRORS)
EDWAAAAAAAAAAAARD! OH MY GOOOOOOD! *shudders* :-/
Eeeeep! I missed my guy so much! Here comes Madward!
At laaasst! I was missing your update! Been waiting for so long. But I knew you might be having trouble posting in. Glad you could now. :-)
Malevolent is one of my favorite. It has My kind of Edward. :-)
I have a question. Why did you choose Shawn to name Shawn's character? I can't visualize his face as there is no character named Shawn in Twilight. Been wondering from the time you introduced him. He seems like a good guy (like Jacob). I know he's working for Edward. But I think his loyalties have changed now. :-)
Nice chapter. Ending was scary(I mean positive). Love love loved it!
Can't wait for the next update.
OMG EDWARD! *runs to hide myself*
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Jun 2013 12:58 AM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
Either Edward us in her shower or its a gruesome sight before her.
I hope you update soon, I'd really like to know what happens next.