Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:13 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
Oh god!!! Continue!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2013 10:11 PM Title: Surprise, Surprise!
I think this is the 1st story I've read that I'd like to see E meet his final end.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 7:46 PM Title: Soon
Loving this story so far.. Love Darkward!
Date: 19 Mar 2013 2:44 PM Title: Confidant
So, yes I am curious what Edward has been up to...
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:56 AM Title: Confidant
Gotta say I'm worried about what he's up to. This "normal" life Bella's living can't last.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:45 AM Title: Confidant
I'm glad the bastard is MIA. Please, don't let anything happen to Shawn or his daughter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:15 AM Title: Soon
Out of all the stories I've read, this one is the most disturbing. If I were Bella, I'd off myself.
Why doesn't Alice see what's going on, or are they all so sadistic?
Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:47 PM Title: Confidant
please tell us, what Edward is doing.
another great chapter.
Author's Response:
I tried responding to your review but the site is still trippy so it didn't work, it annoys the hell out of me. I tried responding again but since I had already responded (even tho the text didn't show) I had to choose a different review.
Thank you for reviewing, I actually updated a few days before June 6 but the site still has the error even though you update it doesn't change the update date on the story. I forgot to email TWCS to update the date and when I did it was two days later, I don't know if you guys still get the update email notification or not and if you don't you should always check for a new chapter even though it may still have the old update date. I'm so happy u like my story so much, I couldn't quite find a story with a dark enough edward/darkward so I wrote my own :) As for why I chose to name the character, it's just I've read too many fics with James or Laurent as the bad guys, I get sick of it. Fics like that become redundant and predictable to me. I'm not a Jacob lover and I doubt I will ever write a fic with him in it unless requested lol. In my fic 555-Talk, there is also no James, Jacob, Jessica etc.... The only main Characters I keep in my story are Edward & Bella (of course), her parents Charlie and Renee, Esme, Carlisle, Emmet, Jasper, Rosalie and Alice. Besides the Cullen crew (I do change the last name and haven't used the name Cullen in my fics either because that too becomes tideous) I tend to make up my own Characters. Shawn looks exactly like how Bella described him when she met him. Thanks for being so patient and updates will come faster. Also, you say Shawn is working for Edward? I doubt he was ever working for Edward because of that gruesome thing that happens to him, I hope he recovers and that his daughter stays safe.... Also, if Shawn isn't working for Edward then who's the person that's really stalking Bella? Well, we'll see ;)Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:22 PM Title: Confidant
yes please update soon
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 5:44 AM Title: Happiness
Small bit of happiness, too bad it won't last.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2012 8:45 PM Title: Happiness
It must be some glitch. Glad you can update w/o any problem now. :-)
Oh my God! I'm so excited! and a lil bit scared! Edward is gonna make her pay for running away from her. OMG!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 10:57 PM Title: Happiness
I was just thinking that... Poor Shawn. Poor Bella! Se have that on her conscience too.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 5:21 AM Title: Edward's evil plan
Uh oh, I wonder what he's got planned.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:53 PM Title: Edward's evil plan
OH-MY-GOD! OH MY GOD! OHMYGOD! NOOOOO! God, please help Bella!
WOW! That was a great chapter. I checked everyday to see a new update notification. It was worth waiting for. Please don't take so long to post a new chapter. *puppy eyes*
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chance Encounter?
Hey, first of all, belated happy birthday. I am glad you continued this story, I thought you had abandoned it because of school or work. It is a great story. I love how dark and evil Edward is. please update soon.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chance Encounter?
More please
Date: 16 Sep 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chance Encounter?
Hmm... is Shawn a good guy or a friend of Edwards or worse. I look forward to more.
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chance Encounter?
Happy Birthday! Don't let the bumps in the road get you down - trust me, they're usually not worth it! Now, let's see, Shawn.... Hmmm.... Count me among undecided. The hard cheats part makes me want to scream, "Sent by Edward!!!!!". But I'm the glass full sort, so I want to give him the benefit of the doubt.. So yeah, undecided. I loved watching Edward get into Bella's head though by reading her diary. Clever move on your part. Not only will he assumably find out how she feels, but also he just might discover her fears. God help her then! Loved the chapter!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chance Encounter?
So sorry about your birthday being ruined,,,but really glad about the update! Maybe Shawn was sent by Edward, maybe not. Is his hand cold? I'm happy to wait (but not too long, I hope) and see!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 6:57 PM Title: The Diary
Why in the world would Bella leave her diary behind where it could be found so easily? Especially if it contains clues to her whereabouts. I know she was in a hurry but...! Maybe she subconsciously wants to be found.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. She genuinely forgot it.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:17 PM Title: The Diary
Hey i like ur story, im still going 2 complain cuz i want an update quicker! Lol im just kidding, great story.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 3:03 PM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
Wow she is daring isn't she ?! Who is he going to kill now? I think his temper is going to hit the roof! I do wonder what is in NZ.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:59 PM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
Omg and he was trying so hard. What are you up to Bella!
Date: 09 Sep 2012 10:21 AM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
Uh oh edwards not gona be happy loved the chap cant wait 4 more xx
Author's Response:
THANKS! :D
Date: 09 Sep 2012 7:00 AM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
I'd say that she chose New Zealand simply nausea it is probably the last place Edward would look. There are a decent amount of remote areas there that could work in her favor as well. One thing is for sure, if Edward found me and dragged me back at this point I'd wait for my chance, ask to read in the yard, and when I thought I had a chance, I'd use the electric fencing he installed to put an end to the pain. Amazing work, by the way. You bring us in Bella's head and bring home the message that the grass is NOT always greener!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, you made me blush. :D
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:16 AM Title: Heartbeat
So saying sorry is suppose to fix everything ..oh sorry I should have kept them out of your sight better?? Oh Edward. Was ur heart beating because urging a kick her . Great job seriously amazing writing i really dispise him
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 31 Aug 2012 12:21 AM Title: Under His Control
Does Edward love love esme ??
Author's Response:
Of course he does. :)
Date: 12 Aug 2012 4:56 PM Title: Heartbeat
Is this the start of sweetward? Please tell me NO!
Author's Response:
Relax, just read and see ;)
Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:52 PM Title: Suffering
I LOVE darkward ;)
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:12 AM Title: Heartbeat
He has a long way to go to make her care about him but I hope he can do it!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 10:11 AM Title: Heartbeat
Sooooo....? I loved it xx
Author's Response:
THANKS :D
Date: 10 Aug 2012 2:42 AM Title: Heartbeat
My I'm not sure how he will take all that... I look forward to finding out.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:54 PM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
When Edward is good I adore him, and when he is bad, I hate him. It is a well written story. I just hope Edward can redeem himself.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 12:55 PM Title: The DVD
At least they are talking... Edward is a smart if nothing else, he should be able figure out how to keep Bella without breaking her. He just needs patience.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 7:58 AM Title: The DVD
Is it a dvd of her when he has been watching her ohhhh can't wait to find out xx
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: The DVD
WHAT'S ON THE DVD!?!???????
Author's Response:
Lol, since you asked so nicely I'll give u a clue. Chap 5....for what's on the rest of the DVD...you'll have to wait and see ;)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:39 PM Title: The DVD
Hmmm...recordings from his video monitors, I'm thinking.
Author's Response:
Correct, butttt that's not all. ;)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 11:17 PM Title: The DVD
Omg what's on the DVD??
Author's Response:
Hmm, here's a hint. It has something to do with Chapter 5 ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
I know he is controlling but I think Edward is the oh one that could do that and I would put up with it!! Will this story have a hea I wonder?
Author's Response:
They will definitely have a hea :D
Date: 30 Jun 2012 1:39 PM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
i love this story keep it up with darkward love it xx
Date: 30 Jun 2012 10:36 AM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
A reprieve from violence... perhaps Edward wants to try to play nice for a bit.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 3:36 AM Title: Soon
I can't figure out what he wants from Bella?! He wants her but so cruel... if he does change her... he's going to be in BIG trouble.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:50 AM Title: Soon
OMFG found this story had to read it and i am hooked xx
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Soon
You say this has a hea but I just don't see how. At least not Bella with Edward!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:33 AM Title: Countdown
I will be honest and say I'm not sure how I feel about the relationship between Bella and Edward. I keep waiting for them to miraculously fall in love. Is it going to happen because I'm so into the HEA between these two. I definitely don't mind Darkward but having Bella hate him sucks. I keep reading to see where the story goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I won't ever have a reader reading in vain. If you've mentioned that u like happily ever afters and my story isn't I would tell you so you wouldn't waste your time and wont be disappointed. When I say Bella and Edward will end up together happily ever after...they're gonna end up together happily ever after, k? :) Hope that helps, so don't give up on reading the story cause we're already half way through.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:45 PM Title: Countdown
Well I wonder if there is hea in this story for the two of them
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. There's always heas in my stories :D
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:10 PM Title: Countdown
I great story so far cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:55 AM Title: Countdown
The story is really good, just need more updates.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I promise to update faster as long as u review everytime lol. ;)
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:08 AM Title: Countdown
Uh oh! Something tells me Bella has a new nightmare. Interestingly, Edward here thinks he's being every girl's dream. He has no inner moral balance. Yet that very thing is what makes him so fascinating in this story! The civil war that's brewing ought to be a real doozy!
Author's Response:
Wait til the sequel, the tables will definitely turn ;)
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:54 AM Title: Countdown
So is she or isn't she?
What does Edward think? I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait and see :P
Date: 01 May 2012 11:56 PM Title: Forever is just the beginning
He is all over the place. I wonder what he's going to do next... doesn't he know that old adage ... you get more with honey than vinegar?
I look forward to more... soon please.
Date: 26 Mar 2012 12:43 AM Title: Two Pacts
Does Edward have multiple personalities? One minute he wants to be gentle the next he's being very rough. I can't wait to see how it all plays out.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 5:12 PM Title: NO! part 2
wow that was so intense.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 5:00 PM Title: Under His Control
fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:29 PM Title: Rejected
wow bella was so brave running away.fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:06 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
wow that was intense fab start.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 11 Feb 2012 3:04 AM Title: Lying
WOW!! a really dark Edward, I am enjoying reading it. I wonder if he ever feels regret
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:47 AM Title: Lying
I don't even know why i keep reading this. I guess its because I want to always finish things. When i thought i was readin this i kept thinking that Edward & Bella will work things out. Yhu know, either he turns good or Bella turns dark. But I guess that's not happening. yhu cant really turn back from rape. I'm goingto have to stop reading but I have a question. Where is this story leading? Is it just a horror story? And this story needs more Warning then " read at your own risk". It needs in capital bold letters "Rape". Yhu might accidentally cause a rape victim to have a set back. Which is good for therapists pocket but not for them. Please add a little more warning. And please tell me where this story is leading!!!!!
Author's Response:
Actuallyyyyy, there will be a sequel and it ends perfectly and romantically. Everyone else thought the same thing as u and I did my job...I put up a warning. I didn't put rape in the summary because I didn't want to give anything away like how you're doing in your review. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2012 7:17 AM Title: Lying
Is she not his soul mate> I don't like either of them.. I like the story.. But want to smack bella. and hurt Edward for what he did..
how many people will die before Bella see they belong together..
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 9:17 PM Title: Lying
He is a nasty little bugger , isn't he...
Date: 23 Jan 2012 10:52 PM Title: NO! part 2
This is really good!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:04 PM Title: Saved Innocence
what is going on is the "family" vamps too? oh bella....
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and yes they are :)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:58 PM Title: Quandary
oh ed you are a kinkie guy kinkie kinkie!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:53 PM Title: Suffering
oh boy i don't know what to say...
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:36 PM Title: Truth
okay so this is an occ bella not too accepting
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:06 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
oh boy bella this is not good
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
I 'm sorry people leave abouse!
I have a few questions.. your story does look interesting.. and the first chapter I read, your writing is excellent..
But I need to know before I continue does this end bad or do live a samy happy life.. I have read stories that Edward is mean has hell to bella and by the end he has changed.. But I can not read the stories that he does not and one dies or goes to jail and she off with somone else or die herself.
So my question is where is your story going? I would love to finish reading it.
And I hate people that read people story and rip them apart because of the nature of the story.. To me why read it.. You have to like stories like this to enjoy it. Which I do, I am just a happy ever after person.. and don't read a story that does'nt. If I can help it.. It my own personal reasons why..
But Like I said your writing looks excellent.. and the first chapter has me hooked.. But I really need to know to go on ..
Hugs Leona..
Ps.. Never stop writing what you feel..
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I hate stories that turn out darkward and automatically turns into sweetward...what the hell? Such a cliche and so over used! You can't just turn a darkward into sweetward so Bella can accept him...have to make him work for it ;) The story is going in a direction you would want it, the ending is fitting and there will be a sequel! :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:23 AM Title: Under His Control
Que coisa, um vampiro rico e perverso e apaixonado, certo? ou ele não está apaixonado. Vai ver ele só que levar ela na cama e mais nada. Aí então se for só isso, pode ser que depois da cama ele queira matar ela então....aí não gostei,não quero que ele mate ela. Vamos ver o que você vai fazer com esse vampiro malvado rsrsrs
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, would you mind reviewing in english next time? :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:19 AM Title: Exigency
Quando ela parar de desobedecer ele ele para de matar. Mais ele quer o que? ele assustou ela e agora ela só tem pavor dele. Se ele que que ela goste dele, ele tem que conquistar ela e não ameaçar certo.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:17 AM Title: Saved Innocence
Ele poderia ser mais romantico em vez de ameaçador, a Bella está tão assustada que só tem medo dele e parece que ele gosta dela só não tem tato nenhum rsrs
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:08 AM Title: Quandary
Pocha o Edward está frustrado, ele quer a Bella e não consegue. Acho que quantom mais ela nega pior fica rsrsrs
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:06 AM Title: Suffering
Tadinho dos velinhos, ela ainda não entendeu? não tem saida
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:05 AM Title: Rejected
uuuuufa pensei que ela ia morrer, mais acho que mesmo mau ele a ama rsrsrs
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 5:23 AM Title: Truth
Tem um vampiro que não consegue consumar seu casamento hem rsrsrs estou gostando, bem diferente.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 5:08 AM Title: Flee & Pursue
Uau, este é um vampiro bem vampiro hem, risos rsrsrs
Date: 12 Dec 2011 12:21 AM Title: Under His Control
I'm loving this story... I am hoping the Bella can convince Edward to help her regain her feelings for him ... gently. I can't wait for more!