Date: 01 Mar 2013 7:47 PM Title: Confidant
please tell us, what Edward is doing.
another great chapter.
I tried responding to your review but the site is still trippy so it didn't work, it annoys the hell out of me. I tried responding again but since I had already responded (even tho the text didn't show) I had to choose a different review.Thank you for reviewing, I actually updated a few days before June 6 but the site still has the error even though you update it doesn't change the update date on the story. I forgot to email TWCS to update the date and when I did it was two days later, I don't know if you guys still get the update email notification or not and if you don't you should always check for a new chapter even though it may still have the old update date. I'm so happy u like my story so much, I couldn't quite find a story with a dark enough edward/darkward so I wrote my own :) As for why I chose to name the character, it's just I've read too many fics with James or Laurent as the bad guys, I get sick of it. Fics like that become redundant and predictable to me. I'm not a Jacob lover and I doubt I will ever write a fic with him in it unless requested lol. In my fic 555-Talk, there is also no James, Jacob, Jessica etc.... The only main Characters I keep in my story are Edward & Bella (of course), her parents Charlie and Renee, Esme, Carlisle, Emmet, Jasper, Rosalie and Alice. Besides the Cullen crew (I do change the last name and haven't used the name Cullen in my fics either because that too becomes tideous) I tend to make up my own Characters. Shawn looks exactly like how Bella described him when she met him. Thanks for being so patient and updates will come faster. Also, you say Shawn is working for Edward? I doubt he was ever working for Edward because of that gruesome thing that happens to him, I hope he recovers and that his daughter stays safe.... Also, if Shawn isn't working for Edward then who's the person that's really stalking Bella? Well, we'll see ;)
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:53 PM Title: Edward's evil plan
OH-MY-GOD! OH MY GOD! OHMYGOD! NOOOOO! God, please help Bella!
WOW! That was a great chapter. I checked everyday to see a new update notification. It was worth waiting for. Please don't take so long to post a new chapter. *puppy eyes*
Date: 15 Nov 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chance Encounter?
Hey, first of all, belated happy birthday. I am glad you continued this story, I thought you had abandoned it because of school or work. It is a great story. I love how dark and evil Edward is. please update soon.
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chance Encounter?
Happy Birthday! Don't let the bumps in the road get you down - trust me, they're usually not worth it! Now, let's see, Shawn.... Hmmm.... Count me among undecided. The hard cheats part makes me want to scream, "Sent by Edward!!!!!". But I'm the glass full sort, so I want to give him the benefit of the doubt.. So yeah, undecided. I loved watching Edward get into Bella's head though by reading her diary. Clever move on your part. Not only will he assumably find out how she feels, but also he just might discover her fears. God help her then! Loved the chapter!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 6:57 PM Title: The Diary
Why in the world would Bella leave her diary behind where it could be found so easily? Especially if it contains clues to her whereabouts. I know she was in a hurry but...! Maybe she subconsciously wants to be found.
Thanks for reviewing. She genuinely forgot it.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 7:00 AM Title: Changed Edward & The wrong Bella
I'd say that she chose New Zealand simply nausea it is probably the last place Edward would look. There are a decent amount of remote areas there that could work in her favor as well. One thing is for sure, if Edward found me and dragged me back at this point I'd wait for my chance, ask to read in the yard, and when I thought I had a chance, I'd use the electric fencing he installed to put an end to the pain. Amazing work, by the way. You bring us in Bella's head and bring home the message that the grass is NOT always greener!
Thanks so much, you made me blush. :D
Date: 31 Aug 2012 3:16 AM Title: Heartbeat
So saying sorry is suppose to fix everything ..oh sorry I should have kept them out of your sight better?? Oh Edward. Was ur heart beating because urging a kick her . Great job seriously amazing writing i really dispise him
Date: 30 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: This is how Love is suppose to be
I know he is controlling but I think Edward is the oh one that could do that and I would put up with it!! Will this story have a hea I wonder?
They will definitely have a hea :D
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:33 AM Title: Countdown
I will be honest and say I'm not sure how I feel about the relationship between Bella and Edward. I keep waiting for them to miraculously fall in love. Is it going to happen because I'm so into the HEA between these two. I definitely don't mind Darkward but having Bella hate him sucks. I keep reading to see where the story goes.
Thanks for reviewing. I won't ever have a reader reading in vain. If you've mentioned that u like happily ever afters and my story isn't I would tell you so you wouldn't waste your time and wont be disappointed. When I say Bella and Edward will end up together happily ever after...they're gonna end up together happily ever after, k? :) Hope that helps, so don't give up on reading the story cause we're already half way through.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:08 AM Title: Countdown
Uh oh! Something tells me Bella has a new nightmare. Interestingly, Edward here thinks he's being every girl's dream. He has no inner moral balance. Yet that very thing is what makes him so fascinating in this story! The civil war that's brewing ought to be a real doozy!
Wait til the sequel, the tables will definitely turn ;)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:47 AM Title: Lying
I don't even know why i keep reading this. I guess its because I want to always finish things. When i thought i was readin this i kept thinking that Edward & Bella will work things out. Yhu know, either he turns good or Bella turns dark. But I guess that's not happening. yhu cant really turn back from rape. I'm goingto have to stop reading but I have a question. Where is this story leading? Is it just a horror story? And this story needs more Warning then " read at your own risk". It needs in capital bold letters "Rape". Yhu might accidentally cause a rape victim to have a set back. Which is good for therapists pocket but not for them. Please add a little more warning. And please tell me where this story is leading!!!!!
Actuallyyyyy, there will be a sequel and it ends perfectly and romantically. Everyone else thought the same thing as u and I did my job...I put up a warning. I didn't put rape in the summary because I didn't want to give anything away like how you're doing in your review. :)
Date: 22 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Flee & Pursue
I 'm sorry people leave abouse!
I have a few questions.. your story does look interesting.. and the first chapter I read, your writing is excellent..
But I need to know before I continue does this end bad or do live a samy happy life.. I have read stories that Edward is mean has hell to bella and by the end he has changed.. But I can not read the stories that he does not and one dies or goes to jail and she off with somone else or die herself.
So my question is where is your story going? I would love to finish reading it.
And I hate people that read people story and rip them apart because of the nature of the story.. To me why read it.. You have to like stories like this to enjoy it. Which I do, I am just a happy ever after person.. and don't read a story that does'nt. If I can help it.. It my own personal reasons why..
But Like I said your writing looks excellent.. and the first chapter has me hooked.. But I really need to know to go on ..
Ps.. Never stop writing what you feel..
Thanks :) I hate stories that turn out darkward and automatically turns into sweetward...what the hell? Such a cliche and so over used! You can't just turn a darkward into sweetward so Bella can accept him...have to make him work for it ;) The story is going in a direction you would want it, the ending is fitting and there will be a sequel! :)
Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:23 AM Title: Under His Control
Que coisa, um vampiro rico e perverso e apaixonado, certo? ou ele não está apaixonado. Vai ver ele só que levar ela na cama e mais nada. Aí então se for só isso, pode ser que depois da cama ele queira matar ela então....aí não gostei,não quero que ele mate ela. Vamos ver o que você vai fazer com esse vampiro malvado rsrsrs
Thanks for reviewing, would you mind reviewing in english next time? :)